Oh, my God! I would give this so many likes if I could. It's great. I freakin' loved it!!!

My only question over these types of couples is why are women so attracted to them? Why are they attracted to the misery? When in real life they wouldn't want nothing like it? Much less a man like that. I think there's a whole issue of wanting a person to change for the better good, but I can't really say.

I hate your character. Your writing is horrific, please be sure to use comas in where they're supposed to go. Your grammar could use some work, too. the plot looks like it has potential but idk... something's missing. I dislike it. Now go read my story.

Something I find strange is how I have yet to read any fanfics where the protagonist is a 'black' or dark-skinned character. Every character out there is either extremely pale, Caucasian or just tanned. And those characters who do have dark skin fall into the likes of having their skin brought up all the damn time. Even worse, I've seen stories (not Naruto ones, btw) that they even have to place on the title the words 'interracial' just because the one of the characters has to fall in love with someone who isn't of their skin color.

This bugs me. It bugs me greatly.

These dark-skinned characters usually fall into complete ignorance or disuse, as they're usually either a side-character or no one wants to read a story with a person of that skin color. I'm not sure why exactly people don't read these stories, or they completely stop right after they've read the character's description of being dark-skinned and not having green/green/blue/grey/colored eyes. In all honestly I love dark-skinned characters. They're the funny ones, the strong ones, the ones with personalities when the protagonist falls into the usual 'I'm too much of badass to be nice, or caring, or even girly', if not just a rip-off of another character from the series.

Sorry for ranting, though. It's just something that I've noticed. Also, if your character is pretty women will quite possibly not like them, unless stated in the story that the character is actually a plane Jane with blue eyes and dark, dark hair. Beautiful traits if you ask me, but as long as someone puts the protagonist as beautiful it might just not have as many reviews as other characters who are always hating on the person who they're supposed to... oh, I don't know, fall in love with? Since when does fall in love with the person that supposedly annoys you to no end and have huge fights with? A love/hate relationship can only go so far until it becomes unrealistic.

And why is it that if the male OC (friend/squad member/SOMETHING) also like the female but the female doesn't like him back, he always becomes angry? Lashing out at both the girl and everyone who stands in his way? What type of friend is this 'supposed best friend'? Oh, well, I guess.

So sorry that I went on to do this xD I just had to get it out of my system.

Those are some pretty good questions I never really asked myself. The Tobi one was kind of subconscious thing I'd ask myself.

As to Zetsu and Kisame - there are actual demons in the series. So they basically could count as demons themselves or just as a lesser kind of demonic being. Though, doesn't explain how Orochimaru looks like a snake...

Oh, and the Jounin thing. There aren't any exams, they just get picked by the Kages due to their skill and also by recommendations.

Sorry if you already knew this, though xD I couldn't help myself.

It's hard to imagine nothing happened xD

Ooh, I hope this continues to update :/

Author's Response: A review! *dances* Thank youuu!! This story is a little harder to write than my others so longer update times should be expected. The plotline has me struggling to keep it from going over to the dark side of cliche fangirl-into-anime world. Don't get me wrong, there are a few EXCELLENT ones but the majority are ridiculous.

I want to know if she'll be able to activate it or not D:

Mai seems like an interesting character. I'd like to see where this story takes her. Also, the man picked my interest. I thought they'd be getting Asuma for sure.

Anyways, the writing felt kind of strange, but I actually liked it. There are a few words that could be capitalized, though.

It was kind of a short start, but it left me curious as to how it'll go. Good luck! I'll be keeping my eyes open for updates :)

Author's Response: You made my day. I'm happy to announce the updates, and surprises for that matter, are barely scratching the surface as to what's to come.