Whoa, intense! Keep going-- I wanna see what happens.

I've had too many people mention that my writing was reminiscent of yours to not check you out, and someone recommended this work in particular.

I hesitate to use the words "grrrl power" and the like; it makes me feel anti-male to even say "grrrl power". But this is something I like. There's a kind of rawness to it and underlying anger and frustration at feelings of inadequacy and not wanting to be what is expected of you but never truly escaping that given title. Sakura has always been a character close to my heart, and this really tugged at aforementioned heart. Thanks for writing it; I enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Oh my. Really? I can\'t believe the lovely people here still remember me. Much less say that my writing is similar to yours! Or recommending my work! I\'m all blushes~<3 Especially for people to think of someone like me when they read your writing. From what I\'ve read (which is very little, for which I apologize profusely) of you, you are a wonderful author! It\'s so good to see that TONFA hasn\'t died in my absence and I do hope you are also posting your work elsewhere, such as fanfiction.net or even livejournal. TONFA is amazing and all, but you can never get too many reviews, right? Or maybe that\'s just me. >w<;; \r\n\r\nBelieve me, hun. You are more than welcome. I thank you for reading it and I thank whoever recommended it. I\'m so glad that the feelings were felt because I wanted to channel that. Especially for Sakura, a character that is shoved into the role of \'Girl\' too often to count. She\'s discounted as the minority and the first thing that anyone thinks is /girl/ with her hair and her teammates and her everything else. I\'m so happy to hear you enjoyed it and I wish you complete and total luck with your future writing and stories. Not that you need it, do you, hun~? With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^

HA HA HA!
"Hyper Air Head Say What?"
"If you could die of an oversized ego, you'd be dead."
"What?! Why am I the uke?!"
I've always been tempted to make Sasuke say, "Why am I the uke?!" Then Naruto would say, "Because your name has 'uke' in it. Duh. You dumbass raven."
I liked it...I really got a chuckle out of this...
Can I use the oversized ego line? And the hyper air head say what line? All credit to you naturally. Hey, are from England by any chance???? (

This is so funny!
I want, as a dare, for Naruto to confess his love to Sakura.

Author's Response: ^_^b Ok. Thanks for the review!

HOLY CRAP! That was so...well, it was so lemony! OMG, that was a horny Sasuke at his best! I loved it-- I hate to say it because I've never been a yaoi person, but that was incredible! Please, please, please write more lemons! That may sound super pervy of me but you're AWESOME!

Author's Response: Wow. It\'s been so long since I\'ve posted anything or gotten a review, so I almost didn\'t believe it when I got two new ones at once! ^-^\' Anyway, thank you so much for reading and reviewing my work- especially one of my new favorite authors! That means a lot! I\'m never too sure of my lemons, so that\'s encouraging. It means even more that I see you\'re turing into a bit of a yaoi fangirl yourself. ^-^ Anyway, I\'m actually writing a one-shot (I\'m waiting for it to be beta-ed), but it\'s sort of fluffy. Maybe I\'ll write another lemon soon after? Hmm...

I like the prologue-- good idea, if possibly one that everyone's heard before. I like the way that the area around Konoha is described-- lush plants and a waterfall. I've always just thought of it as a forest, but this is new and interesting.

Aww, that's so precious! I loved it. I like the way Naruto was waiting with a cherry blossom. How romantic! Kyaah! :D

Author's Response: thanks sooooo much!!! hey, i have this new story out called A Vampire Rose, and it\'d be great if you could check it out! maybe you already have and just didnt like it enough to review, but if you havent it\'d be amazing if you could give me your opinion on it! Thanks!!

!!!!!! Holy krap with a k! That is one scary, hellish cancer! I wouldn't wanna get that.
Who is mystery boy? I'll call him Goldie Porche for now.
So, who is Goldie Porsche? You know, I used to think Porsche was a drink-- I was all like at this one restaurant, "Yeah, could I get a porsche- virgin, perhaps?" and the waiter started laughing at me. And I'd thought I was all sophisticated, but I was just being a fool. Don't you hate moments like that?
So, this terminal cancer-- will it affect Tenten until that time when they mature? Sapping her energy slowly during the six months until she is no longer able to function, too weak to do much?
How will she tell Neji? Will he admit that he's in love with her because he'll never get the chance to again?
OH! Will he and Goldie Porsche be competing for Tenten's affections?! How exciting!!!!!!!
(I probably have this all wrong, but whatever.)

Author's Response: thanks so much for reviewing! Well, the cancer wont physically affect Tenten until 6 months are up (thats how long they take to mature) and after that it will be extremely painful for her and she will die within a month or even less, because when the tumors are mature they are extremely strong and destructive. :D

Aw man, I miss Neji. I miss him as much as Tenten does-- maybe more.
Anyway, Aiden-- interesting guy. He's surprising me. I like how Tenten finally revealed her name to him-- abrupt and reluctant-- and his reaction.
But Tenten, don't fall for him! Even though I'm sorta kinda maybe leaning in his direction...
Don't fall for him! You have Neji! Oh, but maybe she's falling for him because he's like Neji.
Anyway, I wanted to point something out to you-- for italicized words, the quote thing works for me, but it gets confusing. here's what I do (step by step, no spaces between these):
1. <
2. i
3. >
4. word of your choice, no spaces
5. <
6. /
7. i
8. >
Just like that. It's code.
Anyway, great chapter, I'm SO waiting for more!!!!!!!
Kisses,
Sarah-hime

Author's Response: omg thank you thank you thank you!!! i seriously have had like NO reviewers except for a few people!!! thanks so much, haha i read your other reviews and i love them all! Also, Aiden\'s name \'is\' irish, so you got it right! It means little fire. haha anyway, thanks a lot for the italizizing tip, i had no idea how to do it before! I\'ll try it next chapter, but if you see a weird word with those symbols in it, please know that im trying my hardest and its suposed to be italicized!! :D

Author's Response: omg thank you thank you thank you!!! i seriously have had like NO reviewers except for a few people!!! thanks so much, haha i read your other reviews and i love them all! Also, Aiden\'s name \'is\' irish, so you got it right! It means little fire. haha anyway, thanks a lot for the italizizing tip, i had no idea how to do it before! I\'ll try it next chapter, but if you see a weird word with those symbols in it, please know that im trying my hardest and its suposed to be italicized!! :D

Okay, a few things:
1) IT'S BACK!!! IT'S BACK, IT'S BACK, IT'S BACK!
2) I absolutely loved this chapter. Your best to date, I think. I can just imagine every bit of it...

...KYAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!
I loved it, Crimson, I loved it. Once again-- great writing style, awesome description, and the plot's moving along nicely. I missed this story...

EH?!?! Naruto's a werewolf?! This is a crazy mix of Twilight and Naruto and America, all rolled into one, and I love it!
And Tenten, and you can't kiss anyone but Neji! He is your one true love! True love's kiss (let's throw some Enchanted into the mix, ha ha ha)!
Well, the story is progressing nicely, but I am eager to see more of the story behind Goldie Porsche. And what about Neji? How does he react when he finds that his Giselle-- I mean, Tenten-- is gone? (Crap, that's another Enchanted reference, isn't it? We'll call him Prince Neji then, like Prince Edward. OMG, like Edward Cullen! He's like a prince, in various ways, but he is also like Goldie Porsche, who is NOT princely at all).
Anyway, great job-- I can't wait to read more!!!!

Eh?! Aiden kissed Tenten?! Hey, back off, Aiden, she has Neji!!
I wonder when Aiden finds out that Tenten has that illness. I'm really curious about it.
Well, about this chapter: I liked just about everything, from being reunited with her friends, to taking Caitlyn's punishment, to Aiden throwing her over his shoulder, and Aiden's new goal. That kiss... well, much to my surprise, I'm starting to find it okay. I mean, Aiden is kinda awesome. But, despite all that, Tenten has Neji, and she doesn't need an awesome vampire when she has the boy who cried for her! Agh, I'm so confused.
Anyway, awesome job, and I'll be waiting anxiously for your next chapter!
I also noticed-- good job with the italics! You got them just right!
Kisses,
Sarah-hime