This is such a great story! Please update, I wanna no whats going to happen! By the way, the english words of the clan name is Akuma no shirushi. Please update!

Author's Response: Thanks, I\'m glad to see someone new likes my story. Unfortunately I\'ve been up to my ears in school work and haven\'t been able to right anything for any my stories. I\'ve been thinking about them yes, and been writing down ideas but, I\'m not sure when I\'ll be getting to them to be frank. I\'m trying to focus on my school grades, but I promise that I will at least release a new chapter to this story and my extremely popular one, Seeing Beauty sometime during spring break in April. I know that is away but, my grades are more import to me now. \r\n\r\nThank you by the way for translating that, I was in need of that for in the future chapters. I will say this now so I don\'t confuse you or past readers, i have been remodeling my stories, making them, for at least to me, a eight or higher out of ten then what they are now to me is which four to seven depending on the story and the chapter. I know I\'m being harsh on myself, but as the saying goes, you are your worst critic. \r\n\r\nSo what I\'m saying is that when I update, there will be changes in story, the basic outline and major events will still be there, just now, I will add more minor events to steady and reinforce the foundation I planned the story on. It wont be as random and akward, it will be frankly I hope, witty and serious, still playful but, in a cool manner. I hope I\'m making sense to you. I just right want to look back on the story and figure out what can I improve or fix? The story will go on, just at a later date. Sorry, i have just had like an awakening that has made me see errors and trimmings I could fix to make my stories more pleasurable and desirable to read and sense.\r\n\r\nCKL

first..thx for posting a sequel. I do not think you should do a thanksgiving chapter just because i am one of those people who thinks you should just stick to the plotline. (dont you hate us?) I do think you should do another alternate universe fanfic, but i tink you should finish this first. Please if you actually read this read my other reveiw on Truthspeaker because what i said still holds true. Please also read my fanfic One Little Girl and comment, it would be greatly appreciated. DOing a great job i know sequels are tougher than the original. Keep posting!

Ok i like the theme but slow down. You dont have to rush your plot line. Use adjectives. Describe scenes. Describe characters points of view. Slow down. It almost looks like your story was rushed. You want to have a nice natural feel to it. You have a huge plot laid out. Take your time getting to it. People will love it if you slow down. But, it was still good. Not a very original plot line, but still good. Sorry if this is a sort of negative reveiw. I do not intend to be mean. On another note, please read my story one little girl. I want reviews and reads despretly so constructive criticism is appreciated. Bye!

Overall good story. I normally don't read highschool fanfics (i dont know why...i guess the idea doesn't really intrigue me..) but this one ties character relations and personalities together very well. You took the same personalities from the anime/manga, and then added you're own flare to them. Now that you have gotten rid of the bully, i have yet to wonder what new challenges you will throw at them (though hopefully not the biggest challenge...algebra!) I smiled when I read that you included Sirious and Zuko, mainly because it was like you read my mind. (I love those two characters so much in their book and show. Thank you though for not following their exact personalities. I think overall you did a nice job coming up with new names. (mainly because i think it is almost impossible to come up with original names...) One last comment, thank you so much for having one main character like school. (Power to the Nerds!) All things considered you did a great job on this story, considering it takes place in an unfamiliar territory. Keep up the great work! =)

Author's Response: Wow, considering you don\'t normally read high school fics, I am truly honored that you chose to read mine. And I\'m super flattered that it actually caught your eye! As for challenges, I have 179 more days to throw at them, so we\'ll just have to see. Although, that algebra thing might be a good idea ;) Sirius and Zuko are so amazing, I just had to include them! But since I think it would be hard to follow their personalities, I changed them around a bit. I have so much trouble with names. I\'m just not that creative when it comes to making new names. Also, I just HAD to put in a character who likes school. I consider myself a nerd, so I needed someone like that in this story. Thanks so much for the positive review. And thanks a bunch for all the support you show my stories! You\'re awesome! Thanks again for reading and reviewing :D

At my anonymous reviewer:

Thank you for taking the time to review. I would like to ask if you could write a better story, and if so please do. I would love to see the author's work if mine is horrid.

If you don't like it, don't read it. I try my best, and give me a break! I am 12 for crying out loud!

So, please stop bashing my work. Thank you.

PS: I'm 12 and I have better spelling and grammar. Seriously, stop bashing stories and study.

Yea, pretty awesome OCs.

They were believable, which I liked. It's sort of like team seven. You have a quiet, broody one. You have a loud, hyper one. You have a smart, quiet one. Though everyone likes Suki more then Sakura. I sort of hope that when the chunin exams come along, she will have to fight Sakura in the preliminaries. That would be fun. But not as much fun as her fighting Naruto. That would be awesome....

Back on track, I thought you did a nice job on these. Nice job on the test, original yet following the teamwork trend. Everything was believable, and fun, so thanks! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Cool! I\'m glad you like the OCs. And thank goodness they were realistic, I was kind of worried about that aspect. Yeah, they\'re meant to be like Team 7 in respect to the makeup of personalities. Haha, I\'ll take that as a wonderful compliment, that you like Suki more than Sakura. That\'s so nice to hear. Oh, we\'ll have to see about the Chuunin Exams; I\'m debating between different fights, though I may put it up to a vote ;) I\'m so happy you liked these chapters! Especially the test, I was highly worried about that. Thanks so much for the awesome review, Fantasy Madeline! I always love hearing from you! Thanks for reading and reviewing, you\'re wonderful!

Nooooooooooooo! The end of ANBU kakashi!!!....oh well. YAY! JOUNIN KAKASHI! You had to throw Kiba in there didn't you? Good for you! Good chapter over all. Can't wait 'till they all graduate the academy. That will be fun. Thanks for posting! =)

Author's Response: Well, I\'m sorry. We all knew Kakashi wouldn\'t be in ANBU forever. But don\'t you worry. Jounin Kakashi will be just as awesome as he was in his ANBU days. And yes, Kiba had to be in this chapter. I was just waiting for the opportune moment to bring him in :) Eh... graduation could be a while. I sort of have all the chapters planned, but we\'ll see what happens. Thanks for reading this chapter, and thanks for reviewing! You\'re an awesome fan, you know that, right? Well, I\'ll tell you anyway. Fantasy Madeline, you\'re an incredible fan, and thank you for showing me so much support for all of my stories!

Yea i threw my computer at the wall in hatred....but then again if i did how am i writing this...? I liked it. You have a very realistic plotline to follow. You mix fantasy with family problems well. You blend comedy and drama well. Good job,I look forward to your next update.

Author's Response: Yes! I\'m glad you liked. And I\'m glad that your computer isn\'t broken. I would feel really bad if it was. Thanks for your nice words. I\'m super excited that people are enjoying my story. So thanks for reviewing, and I\'ll try to update soon :)

Great chapter!!! I can not wait till the next one!

Suki's character did a great job in all of this, as usual, yet you also captured all of the character's personalities well. Props to you. Fantastic job, and i hope that you update soon. Thanks!

Author's Response: Yay! I\'m glad you liked this! I\'m happy that I did not only well with Suki but the other characters as well. That\'s so encouraging :D I\'m super happy that you liked this so much, you\'ve been with me for this story since its beginning, so I\'m really glad that you still enjoy it. I\'ll try to get the update out soon, thanks for reading and thanks so much for reviewing! You\'re an awesome reader!

Hello. I am also very new to this sight. You did a nice job on the theme and plotline on the story. It is moving a bit fast though. You would prosper greatly if you slowed down a bit and just used adjectives =) What did the hospital look like to her? How big was Akamaru at the time? Is this pre-shippuden? Just answer some of these questions in your writing. Other than that i think your good. You have potential as a fanfic writer on NarutoFanFic.org Now if i could just get some people to read my fanfic....lol. Please update and keep with the plot. And don't touch Kakashi! He's mine. Well this reveiwing stuff is such a drag. I wish i was a cloud...

Author's Response: Haha, thanks for the review. I keep telling myself I need to add in more description, but I think I\'m limited in adjective-vocabulary, because I find myself using the same words and I feel that makes it worse because it\'s so repetitive. I need a thesaurus XD And yes, this is pre-shippuden; this is supposed to be somewhere in the time skip. A little on the early side of the time skip, because Akamaru\'s still small :) Haha, I\'ll read your story sometime; I\'m gonna be slow on this site for the next couple weeks because it\'s almost time for finals XP And don\'t worry about your Kakashi; I actually have thought about a story for him though, but I haven\'t gotten around to it XD

Good chapter...though a bit rushed. Slow down a bit. Very....short. But anyway good job..update soon.

Author's Response: Shortness and rushing seem to be a reoccuring problem for me. I\'ll try to make longer.

I love fanfics were people come from the real world and know way more than they should. I also love when Nagoto (pein's real name) gets mad at people. I love action, torture, and suspense. And i love it when people freak out and go all 'i'm going to destroy you now' when people know their secrets. In summary...i love you're story.