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Penname: Ally_Monrue [Contact]
Real name: Allison Jane Monrue
Membership status: Member
Member since: 18/05/07
Website:
Beta-reader: 1
age-12(i turn 13 on September 12 YIPEE!)
hair-curly orange-red-gold-brown or if you are color blind you'll see it as red

weight-95-100

height-5'3"- 5'5"

eyes-brown around pupil, green around the brown with lines of brown in it, grey outer edge, they change from brown to green, sometimes they are they same color as my hair

personality-loud, obnoxious, stubborn, mean to the people I don't like (I don't hide it like some of my friends), nice to the people I do like, quiet around people that I don't really know, and i am so mentally blond! there should be a law to how blond a non-blond can be! for squerious!

likes-to be alive, my friends, other stuff you have no buisness knowing

dislikes-people and things that I dislike

location- what are you stalkers?

You know... for a twelve year old girl... I read some pretty mature shit... I have a kinda dirty mouth too... What I read I doubt most of my friends would read, well maybe Hannah (eleventh grade ((compared to my eighth...))), Angela (ninth grade), and some other kids that I don't feel like saying...

Are you still reading this? Why? I have ADD (attentional defficite disorder)... Wanna see one of my drawings that I'm kinda proud of? Here ya go-- It's at the top incase you didn't know...

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Stories by Ally_Monrue [7]
Series by Ally_Monrue [0]
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Reviews by Ally_Monrue


Title: Girl or Boy? by Oshiyama
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 32]
Summary: Some weird person appeared to be a new student while the gang were still in the academy and the students can't tell whether or not it's a boy or girl and it appears that all of the Naruto Gang has fallen for them. Can they figure it out?
Category: General Fiction, OC-centric
Characters: Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Action/Adventure, General, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 | Completed: No | Word count: 4622 | Read count: 16847 [Report This]
Published: 08/07/07 | Updated: 26/08/07


Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 21/07/07 Title: Chapter 10: Special Note

'kay. when u say sayonara do you mean goodbye forever cuz thats what it means in jap. u r totally scaring me! i have read a random story, its pretty alright!
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-- Oshiyama : No I\'m not leaving. Thanks!



Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 19/07/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Does Naruto get Aimi? I hope so, he would be lonely without her!
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-- Oshiyama : He sure would. You\'ll see in the next chapter.



Title: **The Naruto-Fic Poll** by prettypup
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 23]
Summary: This is a poll of your opinions on everything Naruto and Fanfiction! There are three questions in each chapter and I will add chapters all the time! Post your answers for the poll in the reviews. Take a look and tell me what you think!
Category: General Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 1567 | Read count: 4277 [Report This]
Published: 09/07/07 | Updated: 16/07/07


Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 10/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

1. of those i would say gaara, he's hot! but my absolute fave is Naruto! part one i love and in part 2 he's uber hot! TEEHEE!

2. i totally agree Teuchi is totally awesome. i would have to say one of the ANBU dudes

3. it's a tie between A B C and E both bunny and squirrel
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-- prettypup : Did you ever wonder what happened to that talking turtle from the episode when you first meet Rock Lee and Guy sensai? I don\'t know where he went? ...anyway Good Choices! thanx for voting!



Title: stars, crescent moons, and shooting stars by KibaxHinaluvr
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 5]
Summary: my five OCs find they have the ability to transform into supernatural creatures, such as elven warriors, ninjas, fairy healers, genies, and even one of them can change into a ghost, who has the history of the world shoved into her brain. Along with these newly developed powers, they find themselves thrust into a new world, which has the stink of war everywhere you turn. Will these five teenaged girls be able to help this massacred existence? will they even have to claim lives to lengthen their own?

You can't have a triumph without tragedy.
Category: Non-Naruto Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, Mystery, Romance, Supernatural, Tragedy
Warnings: AU, Dark, Death, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Word count: 4762 | Read count: 5312 [Report This]
Published: 10/07/07 | Updated: 25/07/07


Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 22/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: OC introductions

ummmm. i like it but why are the first three chaps all the intros of the people.... the same ones....?
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-- KibaxHinaluvr : huh?? what are you talking about? yes im still imtroducting their newly found powers, but in story form... they aren\'t the same ones, i can tell you that much. :)



Title: Paper Wings by xREWIND
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 4]
Summary: In a shop owned by Itachi and Sasuke, equivalent exchange is the currency. An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth, a life for a life. How far would one go to reach what they desire? ItachiNaruto and SasukeNaruto
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Itachi and Naruto, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Jiraiya, Itachi Uchiha, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Fantasy, General, Mystery, Supernatural
Warnings: AU, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 4355 | Read count: 3974 [Report This]
Published: 15/07/07 | Updated: 04/01/08


Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 15/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG!!! I just lurv yer story! Bravo!!



Title: She Was Supposed To Kill Him... by DragonFable
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 20]
Summary: Joruri is eccentric in how she carries out her missions. When Lady Tsunade sends her on a B Ranked mission to locate and spy on the notorius Akatsuki, Joruri goes a step further and joins ranks with them.
Category: OC-centric
Characters: Deidara, Ino Yamanaka, Itachi Uchiha, Kisame Hoshigaki, Sasuke Uchiha, Shikamaru Nara, Tobi
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 | Completed: No | Word count: 12417 | Read count: 21399 [Report This]
Published: 18/07/07 | Updated: 17/10/07


Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 28/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Pachaw!! I totally luuuurrrrrrv it! Please be quick! Does Toson (that'shis name, right?) like Joruri? Is this a TobixOc fic or a ItaxOc fic? I'm just a little confused.... Well anyway i love your story and i hope you continue it for a loooooonnnnngtime!
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-- DragonFable : x33 Domo arigatou. <3 And it\'s not really going to be a TobixOC because, that\'d just be weird. oo;; And the ItaxOC is just a side thing. ^^;;



Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 06/08/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

ZO. M. G. Tobi is like totally Madara now!!! Squee!! Luv it! Keep it comin!
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-- DragonFable : Yes he is... 8( But he\'s not going to lose his personality that easily, nope! >=O Hehehehe, the next chapter shall be fun... >=3



Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 18/07/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

ZOMG! I HEART THIS STORY!!!! hurry with chappie tres!!!!
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-- DragonFable : x33 Arigatou. And all ready finished the third chapter, so I\'ll go publish it now. =3



Title: Ode to an Author by XenaAdamana
Rated: U Round robin Liked [Reviews - 34]
Summary: Ever wanted to shout out which author you like? Ever wanted to give them some appreciation? Now you can!
Category: Non-Naruto Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 | Completed: No | Word count: 7734 | Read count: 24919 [Report This]
Published: 18/07/07 | Updated: 01/10/07


Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 19/07/07 Title: Chapter 7: Satoyuki takes his turn.

oh i totally agree with u on matsuo ryuuki but he hasn't updated in like forever! he better be writing like five chapters.... or else!!



Title: We Messed Up Your World, You Messed Up Our Minds, Call It Even! by Kaito_Erufu
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 13]
Summary: well the girls are back! questions to be answered? get them answered here! a whole new one-shot like thing to come with it! here come Hikari's Book To Life's Questions...




((sequal to 'Worlds Gone Insane'))
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers, OC-centric
Characters: Shino Aburame, Gaara, Sakura Haruno, Kisame Hoshigaki, Kiba Inuzuka, Orochimaru, Sai, Itachi Uchiha, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki, Kabuto Yakushi
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, General, Humor, Mystery, Parody, Romance, Sci-Fi, Spiritual, Supernatural, Tragedy
Warnings: AU, Dark, Death, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: Mixing It All Together
Chapters: 9 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 14189 | Read count: 14458 [Report This]
Published: 18/07/07 | Updated: 26/08/07


Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 27/07/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Dearest Uncle pt1

First, is the Tori thing next chap gonna take up the entire thing? Not that I don't like Tori!! Second, who is Xay-That's his name, right?- and he is dating Kaito, right? Thirdly and finally, is Sasuke gonna get Kaito like he so obviously wants? Luv yer story!! Be quick with the next chap, please!!!!!!
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-- Kaito_Erufu : 1- next chap is extra long and stuff so its gunna take awhile 2- xay is his name and he\'s the mysterious guy 3- i\'m still decideing. i\'m not a sasuke fangrl so i dont know. I\'ll try to get it done!!! i\'m so busy...stupid stuff....



Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 18/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- What's Happening?!

WUNDABA!! thats german for wonderful, in case you didn't know... Anyway, i love it!! i read worlds gone insane, its like totally awesome!!! 'kay this is a really strange question i no but i've been wondering this about everyone... how old are you?
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-- Kaito_Erufu : highschoolish i\'m kinda guessing. its like shipuuden in the naruto world so im making it age realitive.



Title: Naruto has a Sister: Enter Uzumaki Hoshi! by StarUchiha
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 19]
Summary: I'm REALLY bad at summaries!!! Please read and reveiw!!!
Category: OC-centric, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Kakashi and Iruka, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Shino Aburame, Chouji Akimichi, Gaara, Sakura Haruno, Kakashi Hatake, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka, Jiraiya, Maito Gai, Shikamaru Nara, Orochimaru, Rock Lee, Temari, Tenten, Tsunade, Sasuke Uchiha, Iruka Umino, Naruto Uzumaki, Kabuto Yakushi
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General
Warnings: Dark
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Word count: 3304 | Read count: 10506 [Report This]
Published: 18/07/07 | Updated: 26/08/07


Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 18/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

hoshi means star!! i no b/c i have an oc named Hoshi Entii!Last name first of course! i like yer story! the chaps are gonna be longer right?
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-- StarUchiha : Of course the Chapters will be longer ^_^ Thanks for the feed back!



Title: A Narutard by Lamerstu
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 62]
Summary: This is my first fanfic! Yay! It's just a list of things I think a Narutard would do. I tried to do things other people have not done. Please laugh and enjoy. Thanks for everyone's support! ^_^
Category: General Fiction, Non-Naruto Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: General, Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Challenges: You Know You're A Narutard When...,
Challenge: You Know You're A Narutard When...,
Series: None
Chapters: 10 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 2968 | Read count: 15973 [Report This]
Published: 19/07/07 | Updated: 03/08/07


Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 19/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Narutards

'kay when i read this it was all like 'PWA!! SHABAM!!' translation: it made me laugh so much tears came out of my eyes... Do you know Panic! At The Disco? Are they a Christioan band or not... it confuses me... I like the band American Hi-Fi... why am i telling you this?! Sorry i got a little side-tracked there. Ireally like this story!
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-- Lamerstu : Thanks for reading and reviewing and for getting sidetracked... I guess. Glad I made you laugh! \'Pwa! Shabam!\' LOL BISCUITS! *maniacal laughter*



Title: Uzumaki puppet pals-bothering sauske by tobisgurl
Rated: U Round robin Liked [Reviews - 2]
Summary: If you like potter puppet pals (by neil not me) and naruto (also not by me =[ ) then i made them combineded. yay!
Category: General Fiction
Characters: Sakura Haruno, Maito Gai, Orochimaru, Rock Lee, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 358 | Read count: 2233 [Report This]
Published: 19/07/07 | Updated: 20/07/07


Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 19/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i totally adore potter puppet pals! I like the mysterious ticking noise and the cute villain (i think that's what its called...?) and bothering snape. You should watch Fun with Akatsuki by Omnistrife on youtube. Hilarious.
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-- tobisgurl : i have! lolz!! i love \'looking around\' \"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING HMM?!?\" \"looking around.\" (and you know the cute villan is just a copy of the real ppp, but that is cool!) oh! have you seen potter pupet pals \'bananna phone\"? -not by real maker though-



Title: Naruto Maxout by super_jm
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Years after the last battle between Naruto and Sasuke. The village has moved on. No one would forget the two. Why they disappeared afterwards. No one really knows. No one knows if they died or if they just gave up and walked away from their life, their memories, and their promises. But life has to move on even if the world doesn’t like it. Naruto and Sasuke’s friends never gave up hope on Naruto and Sasuke. They all hoped to see Naruto and Sasuke walk back into the village saying. “Sorry got lost. But hey I got Sasuke back right”. But when weeks turn into months and the months turn into years. Hope fades. The youth of that time have grown and started their own family. New teams have started their quest to become the best ninja. And three of them seem to be taking after the last team 7.



Category: General Fiction, OC-centric
Characters: Gaara, Sakura Haruno, Kakashi Hatake, Jiraiya, Orochimaru, Sai, Tobi, Tsunade, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 | Completed: No | Word count: 18629 | Read count: 8787 [Report This]
Published: 19/07/07 | Updated: 24/09/07


Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 03/08/07 Title: Chapter 3: Past revealed

So.... When are you updatin? I totally luv the story but when, when, when, when, WHEN -- are you updating?!



Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 21/07/07 Title: Chapter 2: The Ice Demon

Fweet! (can u guess what combination of words that is? 1 is sweet, whats the other?) well i really like this!! Pachaw! o... do kameko and kyo like each other? tell me!!! luv it totally!



Title: Sorry Sakura Fans.... by Kaito_Erufu
Rated: 12/12A Round robin Liked [Reviews - 14]
Summary: just for those kind of people who hate sakura and such. so add your own part as you can see its a round robin! hehe...goodbye sakura!
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Kiba and Hinata, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Neji and Tenten, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Shikamaru and Temari
Characters: Shino Aburame, Chouji Akimichi, Gaara, Sakura Haruno, Kakashi Hatake, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka, Jiraiya, Maito Gai, Anko Mitarashi, Shikamaru Nara, Orochimaru, Rock Lee, Temari, Tenten, Tsunade, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki, Kabuto Yakushi
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fantasy, General, Horror, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Supernatural, Tragedy
Warnings: Dark, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 | Completed: No | Word count: 3299 | Read count: 13754 [Report This]
Published: 19/07/07 | Updated: 30/10/07


Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 07/08/07 Title: Chapter 3: to the computer!

hahahahahahahahaahahaaaaaaa! that was a laugh by the way... i like it!



Title: Memories Set Free by OnYeen
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Kailyn is sent on a mission to the Hidden Mist. She relives her past and uncovers hints of her future. But when something goes wrong, what will happen to her and her friends?
Category: OC-centric
Characters: Sakura Haruno, Neji Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka, Orochimaru, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Word count: 2175 | Read count: 4987 [Report This]
Published: 21/07/07 | Updated: 25/07/07


Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 22/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: The mission and her past

how can you say that naruto would be dead?! pachaw! he is he best character!!
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-- OnYeen : Some people have different opinions. I\'m just saying that I don\'t like him very much. And also, in the fourth movie, Naruto is supposed to die.



Title: Akatsuki, you've been hired! by crazyfangirl
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Akatsuki are running out of cash to maintain their posh new house. What's the solution?
GET JOBS!
Category: General Fiction > Timeless
Characters: Akatsuki
Genres: Drama, General, Humor, Parody, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: AKATSUKI: the ABRIDGED series
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 1347 | Read count: 4265 [Report This]
Published: 21/07/07 | Updated: 25/07/07


Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 22/07/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: The babysitting service

pachaw!! i heart this!! do the kids like kakuzu then or what?
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-- crazyfangirl : yeah the kids are okay with Kakuzu.. or are they? ;-D wink wink*



Title: Stop Stammering by LittleCrane
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 157]
Summary: Sasuke and Naruto are best friends. Always have been, always will be. Right? What happens when Naruto notices his best friend as something more than he ever thought he would? Will their friendship survive? SasuNaru
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: All
Genres: Angst, General, Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU, Dark, OOC, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 22338 | Read count: 35573 [Report This]
Published: 29/07/07 | Updated: 16/10/07


Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 17/08/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Is Naruto FINALLY catching on? I mean seriously! How stupid can one person get? Is Naruto bi in this? Cause he likes Sakura (or is he delusional?) and he love/likes Sasuke (but he doesn't know of course)... well anyway.... I hope you update as quickly as you can!

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-- LittleCrane : is Naruto catching on? Hmmm... short answer no with a maybe long answer yes with a but.... lol. I dont think people get much stupider than that lol. Hmmm... Naruto thinks he\'s straight... but he\'s damned wrong! I dunno yet... maybe he\'ll turn out bi... maybe gay. Who knows? Probably bi though. Ill update soon! Dante



Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 09/08/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I absolutely love it! You are amazing! Naruto is so oblivious...

Continue as quickly as you can... This makes me yearn for more!

-Allison
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-- LittleCrane : oh thanks so much lol! Your so nice! lol... yeah Naruto is a little on the oblivious side... ok so he\'s very oblivious lol. Ill update asap! Dante



Title: deathly sibling by tobisgurl
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 2]
Summary: "It started 10 years ago when i was 3, i thought he would never come back............but he did."
Category: General Fiction
Characters: Chouji Akimichi, Sakura Haruno, Kakashi Hatake, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka, Jiraiya, Maito Gai, Shikamaru Nara, Rock Lee, Asuma Sarutobi, Tenten, Tsunade, Sasuke Uchiha, Iruka Umino, Naruto Uzumaki, Ino Yamanaka, Kurenai Yuuhi
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Horror, Tragedy
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 390 | Read count: 2664 [Report This]
Published: 30/07/07 | Updated: 04/08/07


Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 04/08/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- 10 years ago

Que demonios?
Que es? Es un ShikaIno? Por que? Habla Espaniol? O no? Me gusta su cuento!!

If you don't know what it means look it up!

Allison

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-- tobisgurl : duh? lolz



Title: Untitled by DragonFable
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 17]
Summary: Kaede has been working on the same story for two months, and still hasn't gotten passed the first paragraph. But she finds insperation after meeting Deidara and his goofy partner, Tobi. Her talking cat, Kuri, hates them both, though, and will stop at nothing to keep them away from Kaede.
Category: OC-centric, Het Romance > Fluff
Characters: Deidara
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 | Completed: No | Word count: 9350 | Read count: 8381 [Report This]
Published: 01/08/07 | Updated: 04/10/07


Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 01/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hyuu! I like your other stories and this one too! Do you REALLY like Akatsuki or what? Okay, i have noticed how you know about all the stuff that has happened in the resent chaps of Naruto so you obviously are reading it! How far are you and do you read it on Spectrum Nexus?
Ciao! Luv the story! Keep it up!
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-- DragonFable : ...Maaaaaaaybe. =P Yes, I luff the Akatsuki, Tobi specifically. x3 And I have been reading the chapters, but from Narutofan.net or something like that. o0;; Thank you for reading and I\'m glad you\'ve enjoyed my stories~! 8D



Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 07/08/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Haha! This made me laff (I do know how to spell it but i just don't much care for that spelling!)! Will she go meet Deidara or will she follow Tobi's advice and stay away? Will Deidara kill her? Will Breisha fix her hair? Continue quickly so I can find the answers to these amazing questions.com (I have no idea why i put that '.com' there...)

-Allison
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-- DragonFable : I\'ve got two stories to update before I can get back to this one again... T-T So it should take a day or two for me to finish the fifth chapter. =o



Reviewer: Ally_Monrue Signed Liked
Date: 03/08/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

ZOMG! I totally love it! Pein is so cool! And have you gotten as far as chapter 364? Well anyway... why can't you do chapter three for a while? Are you writing a new stroy? Are you updating an old one? TELL ME!! Oh! And is this a DedaxOC? A PeinxOC? A TobixOC? Hmmm? Hmmm? TELL ME!!
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-- DragonFable : Pein is cool! =oo And yes I have. ;-; Poor Tobi was robbed of his personality. T-T And I won\'t be able to update for a while because I\'m starting a new story for a friend(She wants an OCxHidan. =P) and then I\'ll be updating \'She Was Supposed To Kill Him...\' as soon as I get over the writer\'s block for it. D= And yes, it is DeidaraxOC. =P I still think TobixAnyone would be too weird... ^^;;