Real name: ? Then what's the point of pennames?
Membership status: Member
Member since: 01/11/10
Website: http://themoonspack.webs.com/
Beta-reader: Yes
A lovely banner by my sister!
Hey, guys! What’s up? Somehow, you have managed to stumble upon my profile. I don’t know how you got here, but take a look around if you like!
Hmm, I guess this is the part where I start saying some stuff about myself, huh? Well, alright then, let’s get to it!
Penname: My official penname is silverwolf1213. However, I have acquired a plethora of names while on this fabulous site: SW1213, SilverWolf, Wolf-chan, Urufu-chan, Gin-cha, Silver, Silvy, Wolfy… There are probably some others, but you get the idea. You could honestly probably create any nickname for me and I would reply, so long as it is appropriate.
Birthday: December 13, haha, get it? The 1213 from my penname? Haha.
Age: 18, yikes…
Height: Exactly 5 ft, though 5 ft. 1 in. on a good day :)
Weight: Why did I even add this part?
Appearance: Eh... no, I don't want any stalkers, thank you very much.
Likes:
Swimming, in both a competitively and a leisurely sense. Running, since it’s a good way to think and relieve stress. Talking to friends, Sasaui Uchiha, DestinyGirl, and BattyBigSister being the main people from this site that I talk to. Reading novels, though I’m not exactly picky about what I’ll read, but that doesn’t mean I’ll like everything either. Writing, and I mean just in general because it helps me to release my emotions.
Dislikes:
People who are annoying / selfish / mean.
Personality:
I’m actually a pretty nice person. I’m always willing to make friends, so please don’t be afraid to talk to me. In real life, I’m relatively shy and quiet on the outside. On the inside, I’m one of the strangest people ever, and I’m not joking. I can be pretty defensive on some things; if you want to bash my work, my personality, my friends or family, or my way of life, then be prepared for some intense lashing from me. You’ve been warned.
Favorite Things:
Color: Red
Animal: Wolf
Food: Chinese
Sport: Swimming
Movies:
Pirates of the Caribbean
Avatar
And basically, anything Disney or anything sappy-romantic
Books:
The Hunger Games (series) by Suzanne Collins
The Mortal Instruments (series) by Cassandra Clare
The Infernal Devices (series) by Cassandra Clare
Twilight (series) by Stephenie Meyer
Harry Potter (series) by J.K. Rowling
Bands/Artists:
Lady GaGa
P!nk
Selena Gomez
The Script
The Fray
Bruno Mars
Beyoncé
Katy Perry
One Direction
Manga:
Naruto
One Piece
InuYasha
Yu-Gi-Oh!
Things about Naruto:
I'm a sucker for romance. My favorite Naruto couples are: NaruHina, ShikaTema, NejiTen, and SasuSaku.
I dislike Sasuke in Shippuden because he's just a jerk. Seriously, he needs to realize that Itachi wouldn't be dead if he didn't kill him (sorry if I spoiled the manga/anime for anyone). Stop being emo, do not kill Naruto, fall in love with Sakura already, and realize you have issues, man!
Kiba is my husband. Anyone who tries to steal him will feel the wrath of my fangs and claws! However, if you can write a good romance story, then all is forgiven… Not really. Kiba will still be mine, I just won't inflict physical damage.
As I'm sure many people do, I have my own theory on the ending of the Naruto series. I think the ending of the series will be how Naruto, still wanting peace and to save his friend, goes up against Sasuke, who refuses to accept such a happy world after what his brother went through. They will fight, and after a long battle (probably about ten chapters, I wouldn't be surprised), Naruto and Sasuke will summon the last of their chakra to use their signature moves, Rasengan and Chidori, and the last page of the last chapter of the series will be a clash and a bright light, so we will never know what happened....
Fanfiction:
I’ll read just about anything, though if the story doesn’t initially catch my eye, I’m sorry to say that I may just pass over it. However, if you ask me to read your story, I am always willing to give it a shot.
If you didn’t know, I am a fanfic writer. Look below to see my stories ;) I really appreciate it when people read my works, and I appreciate it even more so when people leave comments. Not because it boosts the read or review counts but because it lets me know whether people find my stories compelling to read. Feedback also lets me know what I’m doing right or wrong. I always accept constructive criticism. But I don’t like bashing or flaming because those methods of reviewing are not helpful whatsoever.
I will review anything I read, and I usually review each individual chapter, though that’s not always a promise. I review the stories I read because, as a writer, I know what it feels like to appreciate feedback from readers. When I leave comments, I always try to be considerate of the person writing the stories, which means that I try not to bash anyone. If a review I give comes out sounding nasty, please forgive me. I just try to review honestly so that I can help the writer.
I am a beta-reader, meaning that if you ever need an editor or someone to help with your story, I am willing to help. I have experience with editing people's works and sharing ideas to help progress the story. So if you ever need help, please feel free to ask!
My TONFA Story
Well, I honestly didn't know what fanfiction was until 2009. My friend had introduced me to Harry Potter fanfiction on harrpotterfanfiction.com, and I fell in love with the entire concept of original ideas incorporated into the normal plotline of an already-existing universe. I was hooked on Harry Potter fanfics for nearly a year. During this time, I began writing alternate universes of my own that followed the Naruto plotline. Only when I look back on it now do I realize how unoriginal and immature my ideas actually were back then, but that's a story for another day. Anyway, one fine summer's day in 2010, I realized that if there were sites for Harry Potter fanfics, then there had to be something for Naruto.
Lo and behold, I was correct. After using the wonderful Google, I found a website of Naruto fanfics that I liked: TONFA The Original Naruto Fanfic Archive.
I remember reading several stories from the Top Tens, and since this was before the Anonymous reviews were brought back, I never left any comments. I only joined in November 2010 after my mom and sister encouraged me to publish my ideas here to see if anyone liked them or could give me advice on how to improve in my writing.
My first publication on the Internet ever was Their Stories, a series of background stories for original characters that I had planned to center my entire fanfic writing career on. Only after reading other stories by other people and new ideas blossoming in my head did I realize how bad my original universe actually was. I always think about taking Their Stories down, but then I always decide to leave it up as a comparison between how I once used to write and how I write now. It's such an improvement, and I really hope I continue to get better.
Since then, I have made several friends on this site, and there are even some people from here who I talk to on other sites as well. Overall, I'm really glad I joined this site.
Links:
FanFiction.Net: http://www.fanfiction.net/~silverwolf1213
Blogger: http://silverwolf1213.blogspot.com
DeviantArt: http://silverwolf1213.deviantart.com
Website: http://themoonspack.webs.com/
COMPLETED STORIES:
Three Days
He spent three days in the hospital, dying a slow and painful death. It wasn't merciful, and it wasn't kind. All anyone could do was watch him wither away until someone pulled the plug.
*Based on true events, a tribute to my deceased grandfather*
CURRENTLY WORKING ON:
A Tale Best Told Dead
The Suiheisen are a crew of rogues who plunder the land and seas. The Blue Tiger of the Mist, the captain of these bandits, is about to show the unsuspecting Leaf ninja that no one should ever underestimate a deadly pirate with a deep vendetta and a dark past.
*Hoist the Colors series*
The Reincarnation of a Legend
Suki Kurohoshi is the next Guardian, the legendary sacred protector. Her duty is to keep the world at peace. But how is she supposed to do that when people are constantly revealing their hatred towards her for something that she did not do?
*Destiny is Calling series, NaruOC*
The White Rose
Kiba Inuzuka has just been sent to the real world, where the world of Naruto is only a manga. Adrianna Sun has just stumbled upon the fictional character, and now she must find a way to keep her life in order while also trying to get Kiba back home.
*Response to challenge, 'Let's Be Original', KibaOC*
Rekindle the Lost Flame
Madara Uchiha has ruled the world for 100 years after he defeated the Five Great Shinobi Nations in the Fourth Great Ninja War. Now a new band of heroes must somehow defeat the last remaining ninja and break the tsukuyomi that has brainwashed the world for a century.
*Response to challenge, 'Joint Stories!'*
Mission of Matrimony
Shikamaru and Temari, who have been friends for eleven years now, are ordered by Tsunade and Gaara to be married to keep the Leaf-Sand treaty alive. How will the two be able to stand being married to one another?
*ShikaTema*
CURRENTLY REVISING:
Freshman Year
The Naruto gang and an original character of mine head to Konoha High for their first year of high school. And they realize that high school is not all that it is cracked up to be. Sirius of Harry Potter and Zuko of Avatar are included in this because I like them :D
*Due to lack of inspiration and possible dysfunctional ideas, I need to revise this*
Their Stories
In a dangerous world filled with shinobi, everyone has a story, and all of them are connected in some way, whether they realize it or not.
*I am hoping to make a series out of this*
ABANDONED:
Pirates of the Mist
*Due to lack of motivation, this will no longer be updated - check out the rewrite A Tale Best Told Dead*
Rated: PG
[Reviews - 10]Category: Het Romance > Fluff, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Sakura
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki, Sakura Haruno
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Word count: 7342 | Read count: 8066 [Report This]
Published: 25/01/11 | Updated: 04/06/11
Date: 10/02/11 Title: Chapter 2: What just happened?
Aw! So cute! I'm really glad you decided to add more to this. This is really good, and I'm happy that there will be more to read. Don't worry, I think Naruto and Sakura are very in character. You did well with keeping their personalities in check.
As for inspiration... I would just say maybe glance at other fics. Not to copy! That would be totally wrong! But I mean, maybe read other NaruSaku stories just to get a feel of how they would act around each other in a relationship. But for actual plots, please don't copy off of others. That is something that you'll have to think of on your own.
For this particular story, try putting in the other characters to help move the plot along. That might help. Personally, it's easier for me to have more people to work with in sticky situations. But that's just me.
Great job on this chapter, and I hope there is more to come! Keep up the good work!
Date: 25/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: Missed You
Awwwwwww! That was so cute! I normally don't care for NaruSaku fics, but I really enjoyed this one! This was so adorable, and your writing is really good. At the end of this chapter, I was looking for the 'next' button, but I couldn't find it, which was very upsetting. I think you could turn this into a longer fic, but if you don't want to, I totally understand. This was an awesome one-shot, and I'm very glad I read this. Thank you for posting this!
Author's Response: np ^^ glad you enjoyed it, i might continue it depending on whether or not i can figure out what would follow this xD
Date: 04/06/11 Title: Chapter 5: Its Stuck!
Very funny. I'd like to know what it is that Sasuke found. And it was very awkward for Ino to suddenly be standing outside the door, hearing a conversation like that. But it was hilarious nonetheless. Great work, definitely can't wait for more updates!
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 3]
She was found dying in an alleyway by Uchiha Sasuke. Taking home to Konoha, the only thing discovered about her through her jumbled memories is she was abused in some way by unknown people and there's an unknown demon concealed within her. Sasuke gave the lost girl a name and took her in. Umiyo finally given a chance at a real life with humanity, will do anything to make sure she never loses it again. Follow her as she struggles for acceptance, making friends, recovering her memories, and gaining acceptance in Konoha. Will she prosper or will she become ensnarled by the demon and dark forces that wish to destroy her?
Category: OC-centric, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Shikamaru and Temari
Characters: Chouji Akimichi, Clan Aburame, Clan Akimichi, Clan Hyuuga, Clan Inuzuka, Clan Nara, Clan Uchiha, Clan Uzumaki, Hidden Leaf Ninja, Itachi Uchiha, Kiba Inuzuka, Rock Lee, Naruto Uzumaki, Neji Hyuuga, OC, Pair ChojIno, Pair LeeSaku, Pair NaruHina, Pair OCKiba, Pair OCNeji, Pair OCSasu, Pair ShikaTema, Sai, Sasuke Uchiha, Shikamaru Nara
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Word count: 18707 | Read count: 6696 [Report This]
Published: 26/01/11 | Updated: 14/02/11
Date: 14/02/11 Title: Chapter 4: Sokuru vs Sayomi
Hurray! Such a good chapter! I'm glad you updated. As for the fight scenes, you did really well! I don't understand why you thought it was bad. I wish my fight scenes were that good! You did an excellent job. And I love Sayomi hanging with the Uchiha family! It's just so fun to read about her and them together! And I laughed at Sasuke's last line. It's so Sasuke-ish, and I can only imagine him spanking one of his children.
Just a heads up, somewhere after the fight, you called Sayomi the wrong name. You called her Kiyomi. Just thought you should know so you can change it.
Thanks so much for updating! I love this story so much, and it really makes me happy to keep reading this! Keep up the awesome work!
Date: 10/02/11 Title: Chapter 3: Hidden Leaf Village
Yay! Update! I'm very pleased with this chapter. You described Sayomi's reactions to the village really well. Your writing really showed how Sayomi is socially-deficient, and this chapter was very good with showing Sayomi's attempts at adjusting to society. I love the new characters! Everyone's kids are so cool! And that way to end it was hilarious! Overall, good job! I look forward to the next chapter. Hooray for battle scenes!
Author's Response: Lol thanks a lot i tried to make her seem as out there as possible... im glad you liked the ending i wasnt sure about it but i was like wth why not XD
Date: 27/01/11 Title: Chapter 2: What's in a Name?
Aww... I really wanted those cookies.
But this story is so good that I just had to review!
I really love this. Like full on, love this! It's so awesome that I don't even know what I want to say. I just love the whole thing. It might be the plot... it might be Sayomi... it might be the storyline... it might be the fact that this story is based on wolves (I love wolves ;D) but I don't know! I just love everything. Please please pretty please update this soon! I really really like this!
Author's Response: Aww thanks I much appreciate it. I\'ll update as soon as I finish up the next chapter. :)
Rated: U
[Reviews - 1]Category: General Fiction > Character-Centric, General Fiction > Naruto, General Fiction > Timeskip
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Dark
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 573 | Read count: 1842 [Report This]
Published: 01/02/11 | Updated: 01/02/11
Date: 01/02/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Start of Something New
I like! It's different to see what is going on in Neji's world. And your writing is really good for a first fanfic. That's a real accomplishment! Just a little advice: spacing. My eyes totally crossed when I was reading it. Just space your paragraphs/sentences, and all will be good! Please continue with this because you have just earned yourself an interested fan!
Author's Response: Thanks for the positive review! I should have more chapters coming out very soon so just watch for them. And I originally spaced it in the program when I first typed it but it didn\'t translate well for some reason. Though I will try and improve on formatting in the future.
Rated: 12/12A
[Reviews - 4]Vampires can't be real...right?
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto
Characters: All
Genres: Fantasy
Warnings: Dark
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 695 | Read count: 1966 [Report This]
Published: 04/02/11 | Updated: 04/02/11
Date: 04/02/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Holy flying monkeys! Vampires?! Yippee! It was kinda short, but I like the new character. And I can't believe you killed off Iruka in the first chapter! That's terrible! Now I wanna know what's up with Tsukurou! Please continue because I wanna learn more about this vampire!
Author's Response: ...I can not believe you just gave me five stars....YOU ROCK! I am so glad you liked it. Sorry it was short, I was just anxious to see if people would like the idea. Sorry I killed off Iruka... but i have my reasons. I am going to take this as a positive review and keep writing! Thanks so much!
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 1]
A girl named Yuki meets Gaara one day, then six years later finds to see if he remembers a promise they had made. Rated for some violence, and mild bad language. OCXGaara
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto
Characters: Gaara, Kankurou, Naruto Uzumaki, OC, Pair OCGaa, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha, Temari
Genres: Action/Adventure, General, Romance
Warnings: OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 2557 | Read count: 2177 [Report This]
Published: 05/02/11 | Updated: 05/02/11
Date: 05/02/11 Title: Chapter 1: The First Meet, and a Promise
Oooh! I really liked this! Gaara and OC are so cute! I love fluff! Your character was very original. And I think it's cute that he calls her princess.
Oh, just thought that I'd say this. You used a lot of Japanese words and didn't give translations. You know, like during the duel. It might just be me considering I'm so language-deficient and can't memorize any of the simple words. But it could be helpful to the reader to provide translations for certain words at the end of the chapter.
But your writing is really good! It really flows, and your description is amazing! I loved this whole story in general! And actually, an entire novel could have been made from this. I've never read a good Gaara X OC novel, and I think this could be really good if you decided to extend it. But I understand if you want to leave this as a one-shot. It's still incredible with one chapter anyway. Again, great job on this and I can't wait to read more of your writing! Keep up the amazing work! I wish I could give you a 1,000 but sadly the rating box only goes up to ten.... darn.
Author's Response: Thank-you^^ And I didn't? I thought I had...better go fix that^^; Thanks for pointing that out. And thanks. My sister has also told me that I should make it into a couple chapters, at least. And I've been thinking of doing so lately. And thanks for the rating^^
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 1]
Category: General Fiction > Naruto
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki, Sai, Sakura Haruno
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Drabble
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 213 | Read count: 1624 [Report This]
Published: 05/02/11 | Updated: 05/02/11
Date: 06/02/11 Title: Chapter 1: Opposite Meaning
Aww, I wish there was more. It was so short, but I quite enjoyed it. For such a small one-shot, your writing was very good. And that's actually an accomplishment. Sometimes, it's hard to understand what is going on when there isn't a lot there. But you described the scene very well. I just wish there was more fluff! Good job! I hope to see more of your writing.
Author's Response: thank you so much for reviewing! That was my first naruto fanfic that i wrote and i was very nervous on how it would turn out. sorry i wanst able to reply sooner i kind of forgot i had an account here :P and maybe in the later future i will write more =)
Rated: U
[Reviews - 4]Category: OC-centric, Fan Ninja Bingo Book > OC-Bios
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Word count: 2218 | Read count: 8106 [Report This]
Published: 08/02/11 | Updated: 21/05/11
Date: 21/05/11 Title: Chapter 4: Ivy
Aw, reading about her past all in one place like it is was very heartbreaking. Of course, now this gets me really interested in seeing how she is actually doing in the Leaf Village. As I said before, I really think that would be interesting to read about. And a crush on Shino? Aw, that's so cute XD Anyways, nice description on Ivy. She really does have an interesting past. Should I expect another chapter to Poison and the Scorpion? *hopeful voice*
Date: 25/02/11 Title: Chapter 3: Hikari Takeo
Cool OC's! But I have a question: Are Takeo and Tsukino blood-related? I know they were adopted by the Hikari's, but were the two kids blood-related before the adoption? If so, I'm sorry, but the whole 'Takeo has a crush on Tsukino' thing is going to creep me out.
Author's Response: No they are not. Only Tsukino see's him as a full older brother. He however, doesn't. He is a blood Hikari, she is just adopted.
Date: 08/02/11 Title: Chapter 1: Fuyu no Yuki
I'm glad you wrote this. It adds depth to the characters when you write put up information about them. And some of it isn't mentioned in the story, which adds even more character. Well done. Will you be placing Yuki in other stories of yours as well or was she just for that one-shot?
Author's Response: Thanks, I always make back stories to my characters, so as to help me understand them more...if that makes sense^^; And I might. I\'m still not sure yet. I might make a prequel about during the time between after meeting Gaara, to when they meet up again. She might also become a side character in later stories. But it\'s still undecided for the moment. Thanks for your review^^
Rated: PG
[Reviews - 6]Category: OC-centric, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Real World
Characters: Hinata Hyuuga, Kakashi Hatake, Kankurou, Kiba Inuzuka, Naruto Uzumaki, OC, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha, Shikamaru Nara, Team Kakashi
Genres: Action/Adventure, Dark
Warnings: AU, Dark
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 | Completed: No | Word count: 8120 | Read count: 7631 [Report This]
Published: 14/02/11 | Updated: 23/03/11
Date: 24/03/11 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Yay! New chapter! This was good, all the romantic drama. I love it! And I hope you feel better soon. Keep up the good work with this story. It's getting really good now!
Date: 27/02/11 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Yeah, I was a little confused. But it was good confusion.... if that makes sense. I like it when the plot thickens so much that you don't know what's going to happen, and that's exactly what you've done. You added a major plot twist that makes it confusing, yet so suspenseful that the reader can't help but want to read more. Another great chapter, and I hope you get better soon!
Date: 12/03/11 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Haha, the dream was kind of funny. Yeah, like Sasuke would ever say 'baby'. I do like the little fluff that is emerging though. Can't wait to see what happens next time, so I hope you update soon!
Date: 23/02/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Yeah, this was short. But it was good too, so I forgive you! Great work. You really create suspense with this story, it's very exciting! Update soon please!
Date: 20/02/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Hmm... interesting. I can't wait to hear more about her life. She seems to have gone through a lot, and I hope you include more background stuff so we, as the readers, can get to know more about her. I like how you make everyone a doctor in this story. Sasuke is the type of guy who I wouldn't want as my doctor, so seeing him written as one is very different yet strangely captivating. Good job on this, and I can't wait for the next one!
Date: 14/02/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I like it. You have an interesting plot to follow. A few grammar mistakes here and there, but overall, nice job. I'll definitely keep reading. Hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Im really glad you like it. I thought it might be a bit too messy ^^\' English isnt my mother tongue so sorry for the mistakes.
Rated: 18
[Reviews - 10]
"The greatest will be reborn. The Wind and Cat follow's the Sand. The Fox and Snake are seceret. The Tigress is gentle with the Cage. The Fang howls to the Moon. The Lion never hurts The Boar. All must coroperate with the Dawn. And defeat the one known as, Hebi. For if they don't, then the furture will be nothing but destruction."
It's been over a decade since Shinobi's were known. When the Ninja had died off with the last great Shinobi, Uzumaki Naruto. But the clans and other family lived on. A prophecy entered the picture not long after. All the Ninja from old are reborn. But there is a newcomer in their midst. So, where does Tsuki come in all this?
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Character-Centric, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Fluff (Shonen-ai/Yaoi), Alternate Universe & Crossovers > High School Fics, General Fiction > Timeless, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Neji and Tenten, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Shikamaru and Temari
Characters: Akatsuki, Kiba Inuzuka, Naruto Uzumaki, OC, Sasuke Uchiha, Shikamaru Nara, Temari, Tenten
Genres: Action/Adventure, Dark, Drama, General, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: AU, Death, OOC, Sexual Themes, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 | Completed: No | Word count: 12264 | Read count: 2601 [Report This]
Published: 24/02/11 | Updated: 27/05/11
Date: 02/05/11 Title: Chapter 5: The Assignment, and the continuing of the Strange day
The whole thing with the scroll was so chilling. It was so thrilling and intense at the same time. And I think it's cute that Kiba was showing hostility to another guy who seemed like a threat. But now I want to know what's going on with Takeo. That should be an interesting story to hear. I'm so excited to see what happens! Keep up the good work with this story, and I really hope you update soon! I don't know if I'll be able to wait too long!
Author's Response: Thanks^^ And the next chapter shall reveal all! Well, not all, just a bit of whats up with TakeoXD
Date: 04/03/11 Title: Chapter 2: Freak out's, And a hammer in... Art?
Yay! Update! I liked how you introduced all the characters. Tsukino fits in so well with the Naruto gang, I love it! Awesome job on this. There were a couple minor errors, but it was still amazing nonetheless! Please continue with your incredible writing, for I will eagerly await an update!
Author's Response: Thanks^^ And thanks for pointing that out. I did some fixing, and saw that something's were missing as well^^; And I'm thinking up the next chapter now^^
Date: 27/05/11 Title: Chapter 6: No Lights? And a not needed Protector?
Well, I was completely and utterly convinced that it was Kabuto... the evil creep. But than in the chapter end notes, you said it might be the brother?! Oh my goodness, now I have no idea! I'm so confused!
Haha, so I'm not the only one who notices that Kabuto's name is like a pokemon! No one else has ever mentioned that, I'm glad that someone else realizes this little fact!
Excellent work! This was a really good chapter, the first part had me so scared but it was still so thrilling. And again, Kabuto is such a creep. And Takeo is back, permanently it seems. What shall he do...? I so cannot wait for more. This story gets more interesting with each chapter! Keep up the great work, I really love this!
Author's Response: I had said that to throw people off, buuut it\'s still obviousXD But there might have been someone else too >.>\r\n\r\nI know! I think I saw like one other story, can\'t remember which one it was >_>\r\n\r\nI\'m still working on the next chapter... I know it\'s been months but I\'ve had no good music, and I haven\'t had internet till now. But I assure you I will keep writing this one, and any other\'s in the near future.
Date: 26/03/11 Title: Chapter 4: A even Stranger day, and the Start of something perhaps?
Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh!
I loved this chapter! Kiba is the best character in the world! He's my husband and I love him so much! I would threaten you to not touch him, but I really like this story.... so I guess I'll have to deal with it.... *grumble grumble*
But the fluff was so adorable in this chapter! I sooooo cannot wait for an update! I wish I could give you 10/10 stars! But sadly, they have changed it. So I'll give you a thumbs up, obviously! Fantastic work on this chappie, and I really really hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Hehe^^; I'm afraid to tell you that I too love him much! And thanks^^ And sorry that I haven't replied till now. And the new chapter will be up, in a few mintues^^
Date: 21/03/11 Title: Chapter 3: Phone calls, Hang-ups, and a Scared Moon
Yay! Update! This chapter had me shivering from the creepiness. I'm in so much suspense now to see who the person who called is. And I hope Kiba will be nice to Tsukino. He's so adorable, I love him XD
Ahem, off topic... anyways, this was a nice chapter. Temari is becoming a very supportive friend, and I like how you display her as such. Great work on this, and please continue with your amazing writing! I cannot wait for the next chapter, so please update soon? For me? Please? *puppy dog eyes*
Author's Response:
Yeah, I even gave myself creeps from writing itXD Kiba is my most fave charrie he be having more face time in the next one though!^^ And I've always wondered what it would be like if Temari was an actual friend. And the person will be in the shadows, waiting for his/her awesome debut!
...Gah! How do you know I can't resist puppy dog eyes! My own dog, and sister, pulls that with me all the time! Cannot.....resiest...gah, kay. I might have chapter 4 up in the next day or so >.>
Date: 25/02/11 Title: Chapter 1: New School, friends, Old enemy.
Oh my gosh! This is fantastic! The summary looks so interesting, and it makes me all suspenseful! And this was a really good first chapter. I can't wait to find out more! This is really good, and I hope you write more soon!
Author's Response: Thanks^^ And I am working on the next chapter as I am replying.