Reviews For Kokoro Uchiha
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 04/03/12 - 08:09 am · For: Chapter 4: Kokoro's Death
Jeez I was not expecting Orochimaru all of a sudden...Poor Sasuke though...
Author's Response: I'm glad you were surprised! And, as for Sasuke, yeah.. That was a shock.
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 13/05/11 - 07:35 pm · For: Chapter 4: Kokoro's Death
The bad dream was a really nice touch. It added a lot of depth to see they were still effected by their parent's death - as they would have to be. You really seemed into get more involved in the story as we got into the darker scenes, but that was highly beneficial as it helped keep the reader moving with the flow of the story. I really felt for Kokoro during this and for Sasuke. The poor boy - this would have hit him twice as hard - and you did a great job showing his breakdown. Oh - and the talking tigers made me smile. How cute! =0D
Author's Response: Yes, rather, I can be a bit morbid at times, LOL. I really liked reading your reviews; they were encouraging yet constructive and pointed out my flaws while making me think I can fix them. Thanks so much for reviewing my story! Haha, yes i guess Luna's relatives were cute. It just seems and seemed so natural to me (talking tigers) that thinking back I now feel gigglish.
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 03/08/09 - 12:00 pm · For: Chapter 4: Kokoro's Death
wow!I defiantly like this version better.It was great!Okay,now,on to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! The new version better suits what is going to happen later on, and I thought it would be wierd if a ninja in training just drowned.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 31/07/09 - 01:13 pm · For: Chapter 4: Kokoro's Death
wow...i feel sry for the lil girl and poor sasuke....*sniff*
Author's Response: Yeah. :( It'll get a little sadder as it goes along, but don't worry! She'll meet Sasuke again! (Later)
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 27/07/09 - 06:48 pm · For: Chapter 4: Kokoro's Death
Wow!Now that was unexpected.Way to leave me worrying about Kokoro.Now,for the names
girls:Hana,Naomi,Nan,Hokuto,Yui,Luna,Sora,Miyu,Aya,Yumi,Ren,Fuji
Boys:Kino,Hiro,Deno,Ryu,Kyu,Kaisuke,Daisuke,Shun,Kane,Haru,Arashi,Riku,Kenji,Ayashi,Axel,Roxas,Dai,Ray
Author's Response: Thanks! Wow, all these names are great! Thank you! :)