Reviews For Pictures
Name: sarawrasaurus (Signed) · Date: 14/03/10 - 06:23 pm · For: Pictures - 0 - Prolouge
i love love love this OC its by far my favorite thats why i gave it a 10. Please update i love the main character and her relationships with people! ur a great writer!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! (:
Name: sarawrasaurus (Signed) · Date: 14/03/10 - 06:23 pm · For: Pictures - 0 - Prolouge
i love love love this OC its by far my favorite thats why i gave it a 10. Please update i love the main character and her relationships with people! ur a great writer!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I know it's been forever since I've updated, but I assure you, I have definitely not given up on the story. I will find my motivation to continue to write it again.
Name: dalaw (Signed) · Date: 19/06/09 - 10:24 pm · For: Pictures - 6 - Here We Go !
lol squee!
Name: dalaw (Signed) · Date: 19/06/09 - 10:02 pm · For: Pictures - 3 - We Passed !
lol yay I liked this chapter a lot. I love the way Sahori acts its so amusing.
Name: dalaw (Signed) · Date: 19/06/09 - 09:42 pm · For: Pictures - 0 - Prolouge
very interesting.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Name: ItachiUchihaLover (Signed) · Date: 29/04/09 - 01:36 pm · For: Pictures - 6 - Here We Go !
lmao LOVE it! xD
It was funny and cute!
I love the little Sasuke part!
Author's Response: Lols . Thanks ^^ Didn't know it was that funny . Hehee .[: I'll update soon ! :D
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 28/04/09 - 08:37 am · For: Pictures - 6 - Here We Go !
Funny FUNNY stuff!
Don't worry about the late update to much, it just gives you a headache and makes it ahrder to write. Trust me I know XD
Again, great chapter! I'll be watching out for the next one!!
Author's Response: Thanks ! I totally agree with you on the headache & harder to write thing .^^ But thanks, though, for the review . I'll update soon ! :D
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 26/04/09 - 11:52 am · For: Pictures - 6 - Here We Go !
Heh... nicee...
Author's Response: Thank Youhh !(:
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 26/04/09 - 11:52 am · For: Pictures - 6 - Here We Go !
Heh... nicee...
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 04/04/09 - 10:11 am · For: Pictures - 5 - Let It Begin !
I like this; Sahori actually reminds me of myself (personality-wise.)
Name: ItachiUchihaLover (Signed) · Date: 05/03/09 - 03:25 pm · For: Pictures - 5 - Let It Begin !
lol funny chapter. love the whole Ino thing! =D
Hurry with the next one!
Author's Response: Yay . ;D I'm glad you found it funny . I often find it surprising - for some reason - when people think some of the parts are funny . I guess I just add random parts when I don't even mean to . XD Hahaas .
Name: ItachiUchihaLover (Signed) · Date: 05/03/09 - 02:43 pm · For: Pictures - 4 - Chunin Exams !
wow that was a long chapter! I LOVE this story but remeber not to make her too powerful. =D
Author's Response: Thanks ! Glad to know you li - no, LOVE this story . Hahaas [x And got it ! Won't make her too powerful . [;
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 05/03/09 - 01:03 pm · For: Pictures - 5 - Let It Begin !
Next to Gaara huh? How ironic!
Can't wait for the next chapter so you better hurry up with it XD
See ya then okay? Bye!
Author's Response: Yush, sooo ironic . Hahaas [x I'll get the next chapter out soon ! ;D
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 05/03/09 - 12:35 pm · For: Pictures - 4 - Chunin Exams !
"Sorry, Lee, but I'm currently with - " I quickly looked around and pulled Naruto to me. " - Naruto! Yup, I'm with this knucklehead."
That's awesome! Kind of odd but still awesome!
The Garra part was a little odd but it was okay. You're right though, you can see the Gaara-Fangirliness in that part XD
Author's Response: Lols . Yush, kind of odd, isn't it ? Lols . [x And yeaaa, definately can notice the Gaara - Fangirlyness there ! Iunno if I might end up one day rewriting the chapter . . ? Iunno . (: Lols . Thanks for the review again though !
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 05/03/09 - 11:42 am · For: Pictures - 2 - I Live Next To Him?!
Okay, this is probably my favorite part!
" - the things I like. I like lightning for sure, ramen's good, too, hugging people is a friendly gesture that I do often, and I like watching people trip and fall. Yea, that's fun." I gave a smile as Sakura gave me a weird look; I ignored it. "The things I hate are now. Well, I don't have a particular liking for taking tests, but that's probably because I never study or anything, and it makes me think. I also hate bunnies - they're just evil. I think that's it - oh! I don't like Sasuke either. Nope, don't like him."
Okay? This is awesome! And Bunnies are evil!! REALLY REALLY EVIL!! I know, trust me on this!
Anyway, I'm gonna keep reading now!
Author's Response: Thanks ! :D Glad you think that part was good . Hahaas [; BUNNIES ARE EVIL ! Rofl . [x To tell the truth, I thought of the bunny thing like when I was in 5th grade - long time ago . O_O Lols . But it's just because I've gotten bitten by a bunny before when I was little - or was I scratch ? Hahaas, never mind . But, just anyways, thanks for the review ! ;P
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 05/03/09 - 11:12 am · For: Pictures - 0 - Prolouge
Okay this is interesting though how she's a Uchiha and not related to Sasuke is a tad confusing... At first I was thinking her family just had the same name, you know? How exactly does that work anyway?
Anyway, I'm going to start reading this now and see if the story is as interesting as the Prolouge XD
Author's Response: Heeey ! ;D Thanks for the reviewwwww ! I know . Confusing, right ? A same person said the same thing a while before . Hahaas [x To tell the truth, I didn't exactly think the WHOLE thing over when I wrote the prolouge, but . . . you know how you can check reviews? Just scroll down until you hit a review that questions the whole last name thing . xD Read my reply to it and maybe it'll help . . ? Hope it does . Lols (:
Name: nkbz (Signed) · Date: 04/03/09 - 04:54 am · For: Pictures - 4 - Chunin Exams !
You were doing really well with the characters until Gaara popped up, I just don't like it when authors portray themselves from their OC's. Just going by what your a/n said anyway. It's better than most of the FFs out and I'm just pointing out stuff I disliked.
7/10
Author's Response: Heey . Thanks for the review . I knooow . >< When Gaara showed up, I felt that I kind of made it badly. To tell the truth, I wasn't 'portraying myself' through Sahori. [x I just felt that the way I wrote it wasn't good . . . in fact, I think it was terrible maybe ? Okay, not terrible . Just bad . I didn't want to change it though . The plot will get better . ;D Anyways, thanks for the review again !
Name: ItachiUchihaLover (Signed) · Date: 02/03/09 - 06:15 pm · For: Pictures - 3 - We Passed !
awwww so cute! =D
I love Sasuke Oc stories that are good!
Through you did kind of make Sahori really powerful for a genin.
Not saying i dislike it! I'm just trying to help! xD
Hurry with the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thaaanks ! ;Drn
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Name: spacekowb0y (Signed) · Date: 27/02/09 - 06:46 am · For: Pictures - 2 - I Live Next To Him?!
Is this going to revolve around the story line? You write well but I've already seen a 4 man team go through taking bells, deciding whether to eat or not, and fighting Zabuza 9001 times.
Please tell mehz something is going to happen! T_T
Author's Response: Hii ;D Thanks for the review . Anyways, though, hahaas, you're right . I've seen many of those 4 - man team thingiies, but nope ! This isn't gonna be like this . I admit it's gonna be like the story line for the Chunin Exams or probably a little bit after ?rn
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rnBut after that it's all different . I'm still deciding . Should Sasuke leave or not to leave ? Because if Sasuke leaves . . . I might make Sahori lea - Oops ! I've said too much already . XD Hahaas . But the main point is, I'm not making it like the story line . That's too boring ! ;D Lols.
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 26/02/09 - 09:38 pm · For: Pictures - 2 - I Live Next To Him?!
YAY!!! this story is SOOOOOO good!!!! haha porcupine hair...creative...
Author's Response: Thanks ! ;D
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 25/02/09 - 02:03 pm · For: Pictures - 2 - I Live Next To Him?!
Great story Donniie-chan!Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks ! ;D
Name: ItachiUchihaLover (Signed) · Date: 24/02/09 - 05:19 pm · For: Pictures - 2 - I Live Next To Him?!
Awesome story! =D
But I have a question. You said that Sasuke and Sahori are going together right? Well if they are both Uchihas then that makes them related. Are you really going to have Sahori date her cousin? 0.0
I think that this is a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter, but the whole cousin thing is weird.
Anywayz hurry with the next chapter! =D
Author's Response: Hahaa . Good point . Btw, thanks for the review . [x Anyways, though . You're right on the cousins thing, but have you ever read like other stories where people put the name 'Uchiha' as well, and they juts somehow MAGICALLY change it so that they aren't cousins ? Well, heh, bear with me because I'm going to do that for 'Pictures' . Let's pretend they aren't cousins . ;Drn
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rnBut yeaa[: I'll update soon !rn
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rn-Donniie(:
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 24/02/09 - 08:09 am · For: Pictures - 1 - Ramen With Naruto ?
amazing you need to keep it up i love it.
i must say i ezspected sahori to be more like sasuke you know cold, but looks likes she not but tis still
amaiing ^^
love Aiko
xoxoxoxo
10000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10
Author's Response: Aw(: Thanks for the review ! ;D In the beginning, I was thinking about making Sahori like Sasuke, kind of, but that get's boring after a while for me . xD Hahaas . Maybe in other future stories I'll make the main character cold and what not. [: But, anyways, thanks for the review again ! rn
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rn-Donniie(:
Name: spacekowb0y (Signed) · Date: 24/02/09 - 03:36 am · For: Pictures - 1 - Ramen With Naruto ?
ooo I lubb it Xd. I think I might have to start a first person story :O
Author's Response: Hahaas rn
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rnThanks for the review ! ;D Writing in first person can be really fuuun(;rn
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