Reviews For Thunder and Swirls
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 16/07/09 - 10:00 pm · For: The Problem With The Hiyori Clan
wow...its not Nari's dad fault! tht other guy was jealous and was a stupid todder in his actions!
Author's Response: Try explaining that to Shimo. =.='
Name: yvorazz3986 (Anonymous) · Date: 16/07/08 - 09:22 am · For: The Problem With The Hiyori Clan
i like this a litte background before you go in deep. good job!
Author's Response: yay me! ^o^ lol Thankies for the review!
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 16/07/08 - 08:32 am · For: The Problem With The Hiyori Clan
I WAS RIGHT YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GO ME GO ME!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg that a weird family story but very coool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Love AikoMatsuo
xoxoxoxoxoxo
100000000000000000000000000000000000000/10
Author's Response: Yeah, isn't it? lol Thanks for the review!
Name: Incarn (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 - 10:25 pm · For: The Problem With The Hiyori Clan
Aha! I was right. I'm just awesome.
Though Shimo hating Nari sounds unreasonable, in story terms, not actual emotional terms (well, that too). It sounds like you just added that in to get some drama and strife for the story. As far as I know, Nari had absolutely nothing to do with Mushi and Shimo should know that.
I'm not trying to be a jerk, it just sounds really unreasonable. I'm thinking you have a good reason, though. n_n
You keep spelling the village name wrong, too... It's Konoha, not Kohana.
I'm sorry if I'm sounding to mean and blunt! Here, I'll give you a plate of cookies! -hands Kamisori a plate of cookies-
Otherwise, that's such a tragic background story! Waah! So sad... I feel sorry for both Shimo and Nari.
Author's Response: Kaminari doesn't quite understand why Shimo's pissed at her either. Ah, oops. ^_^' COOKIES!!! *munches*
Name: Vixkill (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 - 10:04 pm · For: The Problem With The Hiyori Clan
“Who’s are Jonin leader?” - our
"application forum filled out. There, you will turn in your forums " form, forms
"been to much for an unstable six " too
"the real me when to the Hokage’s" went
yayz for update!
Author's Response: thanks for pointing these out! ^_^
Name: xXxTiNkxXx (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 - 08:12 pm · For: The Problem With The Hiyori Clan
O.o oh wow. Now I get why Shimo is such a lil bitch. Lol.
AND YOU STILL HAVE TO LET US KNOW WHO KAMINARI LIKES!!!!
Your killing me T^T. Update soon lol
Author's Response: Kaminari's crush is revealed in the next chapter! ^o^ So don't fret! The answer you seek is close!
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 - 07:14 pm · For: The Problem With The Hiyori Clan
Awesome chapter. You only have one more chapter to go that I already have read. Know I know why Shimo hates Kaminari like that. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: That's right! I'm almost all caught up! ^_^ Thanx 4 review!