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Thunder and Swirls by Kamisori

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Chapter notes: Hi, Razor-san here with my first story posted on this site! Hi hope you enjoy Thunder and Swirls! Death was chosen for the characters who originally die through out the series. Like Zabuza and so on. Oh, yeah, and I don't own Naruto. Just my OCs and ideas.

Key:
"This" = Talking
This = Thoughts
~*~*~ = Scene Change

Read on.
A girl with gold eyes was pulling her shoulder length blue hair into a ponytail. She was wearing a purple tank top with a navy blue sweater over it, which had the clan symbol on the sleeve. The clan’s symbol was a sun, half covered by a cloud. Her jean shorts went an inch below her knees. When she was satisfied with how her hair looked, she struck a pose in the full body mirror she was facing. “Damn, I’m a sexy beast.” She said.

Laughter came from the girls door way. There, a woman, with blue hair and violet eyes was standing. Her blue hair went down to the middle of her back. She wore a blue tank top, which had the clan’s symbol on the front, under her Jonin vest, which was open. Her Kohana ninja headband was on her forehead. The rest of her clothing was the traditional Jonin uniform.

“What’s so funny, aunt Kasumi? Even you have to admit, I’m sexy.” Said the girl by the mirror playfully, while striking a pose at her aunt.

“Oh yes,” started her aunt, “you’re drop dead hot, Kaminari.” Said her aunt, playing along. “But not as hot as me!” Her aunt said striking a pose back. “I’m the queen of the hotness!” The two females started laughing. “You better get going, kid. Or you’ll be late for class. Tomorrow’s graduation, right?”

“Yes, tomorrow’s the day I become a ninja! Bow down before my greatness!” Kaminari said acting high and mighty. Kasumi bowed mockingly.

“Well, Miss Greatness better hurry up or she’ll be late.” Said Kasumi reminding her again playfully. “Oh, yeah, I also have a mission tomorrow. So don’t be surprised if I’m gone.” Kaminari simply nodded while slipping on her ninja sandals.

“Bye Kasumi!” Said Kaminari leaving the house.

“Bye kid! Good luck!”

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Kaminari walked into her classroom with a slight bounce in her step. I’m graduating tomorrow! I’m not going to blow it now! She thought with confidence. She looked around the classroom and frowned ever so slightly. Naruto wasn’t here yet.

Sighing, she sat by the guy from the Abruame clan, Shino. Kaminari didn’t know why all the kids in her class were creped out by this guy. So what if he uses and has insects living in his body? They’re all just jealous they don’t have kick-ass clan jutsus like he does!

“Morning Shino.” She told the living ant farm. He acknowledged her presence simply by nodding. She gained a bored look as she leaned back in her seat. Where on earth is Iruka-sensei and Naruto!? She thought irritated.

Just as she thought that, Iruka came barging in the classroom dragging a tied up Naruto. Kaminari couldn’t help the laugh that escaped her throat. “Damn Naruto! What on earth did you do? Graffiti the Hokage’s house?!” She said laughing.

Naruto grinned mischievously, “Even better Nari! Look out the window!” She looked out the window that had a clear shot to the Hokage Monuments. Her eye’s widened slightly as she seen the graffiti on the past Hokage’s faces. Kaminari grinned.

“Damn! I was so close, but no cigar! Nice painting, Naruto!” She said now grinning at Naruto. Naruto grinned back, but Iruka got an anime vein when he realized he was being ignored.

“Fine! Since you like Naruto’s artwork so much, Hiyori-san, you can help him clean it up after school!” Kaminari winced slightly. “And the rest of the class will review the transformation jutsu, because of Naruto’s little prank! Now line up!” The class groaned as they lined up.

Kaminari’s eyes narrowed when she heard the class blaming Naruto. Sure, he made them have a review, but aren’t they supposed to be ninja’s?! They’ll be doing a lot more harder missions then proving to do a simple transformation! A voice brought Kaminari out of her thoughts.

“Sakura here! Transform!” In a puff of smoke the pink haired girl was transformed into a perfect vision of Iruka-sensei. In another puff of smoke she was Sakura again. “Did you see that Sasuke?” Sakura said battering her eyelashes at the Uchiha.

Kaminari couldn’t help the small smirk that appeared on her face when Sasuke ignored the pink haired bitch. She hated fan girls. They all should burn in hell. Sasuke did the transformation jutsu without saying a word. Then it was Naruto’s turn. “Knock them dead Naruto!” Kaminari cheered him on.

Naruto smirked at his friend before doing the transformation jutsu. “Transform!” Naruto had said, and in a puff of smoke there stood…a naked girl?! Kaminari laughed so hard she had to hold her stomach. Iruka’s eye’s popped out of his head as he got a major nose bleed.

Naruto transformed back into himself while laughing. “Ha, ha! You fell for my Sexy Jutsu!” Iruka didn’t find it so funny.

“CUT THE STUPID TRICKS! THIS IS YOUR LAST WARNING!” Iruka-sensei yelled at Naruto. Someone, has some anger management issues! Kaminari thought with a sweat drop.

As Naruto walked by Kaminari whispered at him. “Hey Naruto! Great Jutsu! I bet I can top that and get most of the class off your back!”

“No way!” Naruto whispered back.

“Watch me!” She whispered with a smirk. Iruka had called Kaminari to do her transformation. She walked up in front of Iruka, did the correct hand sign and shouted “transform!” A puff of smoke encased her body.

When the smoke cleared, the class looked shocked. There stood a naked Sasuke! Fan girls fainted, Sasuke seethed, Iruka was too shocked at that moment, and the guys in the class laughed hard! In a puff of smoke Kaminari was back in her original form and was smirking. “Did I pass?”

“THAT DOES IT! I’M CALLING YOUR GUARDIAN, HIYORI!” Iruka yelled at her. The class laughed at her misfortune (Fan girls had woken up and Sasuke was smirking), except Naruto and Iruka. Kaminari was smiling?

Iruka called her aunt in front of the class. His face went to a smirking, I-told-you-so face to a pale, oh-crap look. He looked at Kaminari in a please-save-me motion. She mouthed, “No graffiti cleaning?” and he nodded vigorously.

She nodded, stood up and walked down to the pale teacher. He told the person on the other end that Kaminari wanted to talk. She grabbed the phone and put it to her ear. “Hi aunt Kasumi, what’s up?” the class fell out of their seats, but listened intently. To be funny, Kaminari flipped on speaker phone.

“So I heard you transformed into a nude version of that Uchiha boy, is this correct?” Kasumi’s voice came through the phone.

“That would be correct, aunt Kasumi.” Kaminari said. She smirked slightly when she noticed the class staring and listening intently. Sasuke was smirking in a ‘revenge’ like motion.

“I am so proud of you!!” She shouted. The whole class fell out of their seats and Sasuke‘s eyes went wide. “I am so happy that I taught you so well! Way to go kid!”

Kaminari grinned as she looked at Iruka-sensei, who had a look of horror on his face! “Thanks aunt Kasumi!” Kaminari looked at her class. All where wide-eyed, except Naruto, who was laughing out loud. He knew what her aunt was like.

“Was that you Naruto? I hope you’re having fun too, kid! I’m on speaker phone, right?” Kaminari told her aunt “yes”, as Naruto shouted at the phone from his desk saying, he was having fun.

“Well I have to go little niece! I have a mission! Bye everyone!” The sound of Kasumi hanging up her side of the phone rang through the classroom. Kaminari took the phone off speaker phone, and put the phone in it’s rightful place. The whole class was silent as Kaminari walked back to her spot by Shino.

So THAT’S where Hiyori gets it from! The whole class thought. Except Naruto, he was thinking of what kind of ramen he wanted to eat, but what else is new?

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

The big day was finally here! The graduation exam! Kaminari walked into the building with an even bigger spring in her step then yesterday! Oh my god! The day is finally here! Graduation Exam! Kaminari thought excitedly. She saw Naruto and sat by him. They were soon chatting away.

Iruka-sensei had walked up to the front of the class. “We’ll now start the final part of the exam. The final test will be on, the clone jutsu.” Kaminari’s attention snapped towards Naruto. Crap! Naruto sucks at that jutsu! She thought worriedly.

Naruto started to silently freak out. Kaminari put a comforting hand on Naruto’s shoulder. When he looked at her she gave him the ‘nice guy’ pose. “You’ll do great Naruto, believe it!” She told him. He gave a weak smile, neither of them truly believed it.

Iruka had called up Naruto for the jutsu and Kaminari gave him thumbs up. He walked into the room and she sighed when he was out of the room. “I hope he passes…”

“Don’t worry, he always finds a way to do something.” Kaminari’s eyes looked at the speaker. Slight surprise entered her eyes, but she looked back at the door. A sad smile was on her face.

“I hope you’re right Shino-kun. I really hope you are.” At that moment Kaminari’s name was called. She stood up and quietly told Shino to wish her luck. She entered the small room and saw a guy with white hair.

“Ok Hiyori-san, this is Mizuki. All you have to do is make 2 clones of yourself to pass.” Said Iruka. Kaminari nodded as she saw the table with forehead protectors on it. She took a deep breath as she put her hands in the correct hand sign. Ok Kaminari, you can do this! She told herself.

“Clone Jutsu!” She shouted and soon there was a puff of smoke. When the smoke cleared there was 2 perfect clones, and 1 that looked like it needed to be hospitalized immediately.

Iruka gave a weak smile as he told her, “Congratulations, you pass!” The white haired guy, Mizuki, gave Kaminari her headband. She grabbed it with an emotionless face, and walked out. When she was out of the building she grinned really wide and shouted, “I graduated!”

“That’s great, kid!” Said a voice. She turned to the speaker.

“Kasumi! You came!” She said excitedly.

“Of course I did! I even finished the mission extra early to come see you! Come on, let’s head home!” Kasumi said wrapping an arm around her niece’s shoulders. Kaminari grinned and followed her. She looked back at the crowd. Naruto, I hope you passed too.
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