Reviews For Reality Check
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 25/03/12 - 08:03 pm · For: Chapter 13 - We're All Siblings Here, and That Includes You
Good chapter, I liked the introductions. Can't wait to see more.
Author's Response: As always, thanks for the review and support, Hazzy. XP The next chapter should be Riley's, so look forward to it. ;) Out, Masumi TAT
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/03/12 - 02:34 pm · For: Chapter 13 - We're All Siblings Here, and That Includes You
It's a big and loving family! That's so cute! And none of them seem like brats, which is even more awesome ;D I can't wait to learn more about them all. I think they all already seem really interesting.
Awesome update, Mimi-chan! Keep up the amazing work with this story!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the family. It was originally just a big family cuz they had lots of kids, but I suddenly decided that I wanted it to be a hodgepodge of kids from orphaned families. I also thought that would make Masumi's acceptance into the family more smooth. I'm enjoying writing these kids muchly, and soon I'm thinking about making up profiles for my OC's and creating a bingo book since I have so many. Thanks for the review, Wolfy-chan! Out, Mimi-chan TAT
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 21/03/12 - 01:10 pm · For: Chapter 12 - BANZAI! Why?
great chapter. I'm really want to see how the family interacts with Masumi later on. keep the updates coming!
Author's Response: Well, there will be a better introduction to some of the family members in the next chapter. It is certainly a very interesting family. Thanks for the review and for always reading my story. Out, Masumi TAT
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/03/12 - 08:34 pm · For: Chapter 12 - BANZAI! Why?
Haha, I like Kiriko... At least a little bit, anyways. It seems kinda hard to not like her so far. I wonder how those two will get along. I predict some very interesting adventures ;)
Aww, she misses Zabuza and Haku! How cute, I knew she shouldn't have left! She needs to get back over there soon!
Great work on this, Mimi-chan! I can't wait to see where this development goes. Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: I tend to enjoy putting very happy girls with my OC's because my OC's tend to be more old fashioned and just not real socially active. Girls like Kiriko bring excitement to their lives. They compliment each other well. I hope you continue liking Kiriko as she will be a major character in this story. There will certainly be many adventures because of her. Most including Kabuto... *grins mischievously* You'll just have to wait and find out. Of course Audriana misses Zabuza and Haku! (I say Audriana and not Masumi because she associates them, and especially Zabuza, with her old name and self) How could she not!? But things will be certainly quite complicated when they meet again. She's to go through a lot emotionally and will mature a bit. Thank ya for the steady support and reviews, Wolfy-chan. It's always encouraging to them. X3 Out, Mimi-chan TAT
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 17/03/12 - 05:49 pm · For: Chapter 11 - I'll Go on a Date With You...
Great update, I'm really wanting to see what job she'll get, especially if she does become a ninja for the hidden leaf!
Author's Response: Well, Masumi hates shinobi for allowing themselves to be ruled and become weapons, so that might be a little difficult. But I assure you that you will probably never see what happens next coming! Thank you for the review, Hazzy. It's fun to hear what the readers think. Out, Masumi TAT
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/03/12 - 08:24 pm · For: Chapter 11 - I'll Go on a Date With You...
Well first off, I need to point out that you wrote the first paragraph in third person. Considering this is a story told in first person, I find it strange.
Other than that... I actually assumed Masumi would be of a sadistic nature. It kind of fits.
I really enjoyed this chapter. Every time Konohamaru called Masumi his girlfriend, I cracked up just because I know how much it irks her.
Masumi is also really defensive about her height... Like me! We have that in common!
Awesome job on this chapter, Mimi-chan! Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: I had to think for a moment after reading your first comment, then I went to check the chapter. I had forgotten to put that first chapter in italics like I had wanted! Like a sort of not part of the story story. Yea. reading that last sentence, I realize I don't make much sense. Anywho! So you think sadism suits Masumi? Why does everyone always say that!? They all think it's perfectly natural! Since when is sadism natural!? Anywho again! Let's just ignore my rants for now. O_o Masumi will get used to the girlfriend thing eventually, but it will always annoy her, and her height doesn't actually bother her because she likes being cute and short. It's only the fact that people always feel the need to point that bugs her so much. I mean, isn't that the most annoying part about being short? >__> As always, thank ya for the review! Out, Mimi-chan TAT
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 15/03/12 - 06:11 pm · For: Chapter 1 - You Can Prove Nothing
Every time I hear Adrian, I think of the Adrian from Vampire Academy. He's like the complete opposite of your Adrian, so it's kinda weird.
If this is anything like NEFN, I wish I had read it. This is already very entertaining, going with the overused "girl falling into Narutoverse" thing and making it very humorous and different in your own way. I'm really curious as to how she fell out the window. I guess I'll find out eventually, though. I also liked the little mentions of Riley you had in here. I don't know why, but I found that funny.
Audriana is definitely an interesting character. I can't wait to see how the Naruto world is going to affect her energetic personality. So far I really love this story, Masumi-chan. It really helps me out since I'm writing (or beginning to write) a fanfiction where a character goes to the Narutoverse. I think reading yours and DDTD's stories are really helping me with that.
Author's Response: Oh! Now I'm gonna start thinking of the other Adrian! He's my favorite character from that series. X3 This first chapter is actually a scene from real life, without the falling through the window, of course. And Riley did really say those things at one point. O_o I really love to take the overused "girl falling into Narutoverse" thing and make it something different. A lot of my stories have that kind of base, but there is ALWAYS a link to it and a real reason. Eh. I'm glad to hear that you love this story so far, seeing as I feel like the first chapter is really bad. *sweat drop* I'll be happy if this can help you out in any way with your story. Thank you so much for the review and for reading my story. It always makes me smile to get a new reviewer. Out, Masumi TAT
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 14/03/12 - 01:49 pm · For: Chapter 10 - The Little Engine That Thinks He Can Often Becomes the Little Engine That Can't
Nice chapter! I really like your story so far. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! It's always nice to hear (read? ;D) that we're continuing to entertain the readers. Out, Masumi TAT
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 13/03/12 - 10:21 am · For: Chapter 5 - Lacking Senses
Is it bad that I'm using Reality Check as an excuse to get away from the horrors of (gasp) school? (I bet in some country, school means four).
I laughed at the part where she said she hadn't TOLD Zabuza she couldn't feel her chakra; the poor fellow, using his extensive knowledge of jutsu on this girl, unable to understand WHY IT WON"T WORK, and she can't even feel his chakra.
Instand death. :)
Author's Response: Nah, Peanut. It's totally not bad. I use RC to avoid school as well! We can be in cahoots on this one! X3 I kind of feel bad for Zabuza since he's so set on teaching her and is not able to figure out why it won't work, but then I remember how hilarious it is and just start laughing at him. XP Thank ya thank ya for the review. I'm off to go cook maple syrup! Out, UzuRose-chan TAT
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/03/12 - 03:39 am · For: Chapter 10 - The Little Engine That Thinks He Can Often Becomes the Little Engine That Can't
Masumi is so scary... I didn't know there was a dark side to her. I wonder of we'll ever get to see that side of her. That might actually be rather entertaining.
Haha, she met Konohamaru. That probably figures, he'd stalk anyone he thought was cooler than Ebisu ;)
Nice chapter, Mimi-chan! I'm looking forward to Masumi and Konohamaru's date XD Nah, I'm joking. Anyway, keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thank ya for the review, Wolfy-chan! One must always remember that everyone has a light side and a dark side. Just like the force! And duct tape! That side of Masumi does not come out often as she rarely gets irritated, but when it does it is best to avoid her. And it doesn't take much to be cooler than Ebisu, right? Konohamaru's one of my favorite characters, so you can look forward to seeing him around in the future. I've got to go edit Yuu-chan's next chapter, so I'll be off now. (She just wrote it today! Yay!) Out, Mimi-chan TAT
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 11/03/12 - 05:28 pm · For: Chapter 9 - Most Birds Aren't Meant to Swim
If you want to be a bird, you can't be a fish, too
Jee, ya think Masumi? Ha, anyway, great chapter with a lot of cool twists and turns in it. I really liked how Audriana handled the situation with the trees, but I'm really surprised no one noticed her :P
Although, it is a possibility that they DID notice her, but let her over because she looks like a child XD I think it's funny that even the Hokage thoughts she was a little girl. Hmm, also, isn't it kind of strange that the Hokage is wandering about without some sort of protection? Unless of course that nice lady with him was just that, ha ha.
Well, awesome chapter! I'm going to see about reading another one tonight, then maybe catch a few of Jubilee's before I update Stereotype again :P
See ya!!
Author's Response: True, they may have noticed her. But you've also got to remember that the walls are pretty far away from the regular part of the city. The woman with the hokage will definitely show up again, so you'll just have to wait and see. But, what, you don't think the hokage feels like sneaking out occasionally, too? And there are also always hidden guards as an option. ;) And don't worry. The hokage's eyes will be opened to her true age soon enough. After all, Masumi can't really hide from the authorities forever, right? Read Endeavor! Cuz it is amazing! Thanks so much for the review. They are always fun to read. Out, Masumi-chibi TAT
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 06/03/12 - 12:35 pm · For: Chapter 4 - Eat, Sleep, and, Yes, Go to the Bathroom
"technically a girl" - I love that, augh, I love Audrianna so much! A lot of her character was revealed in just those three words! Awesome!
This chapter was a lot of description, but I believe it was necessary. I do like the action bits, but you wrote this chapter well.
Haha, let me gloat, o snowstormed one- from where I'm sitting now, I can see the clear blue skies and the fluffy clouds. The fruit trees' branches are laden with tiny white blossoms, and at the touch of the wind, they come drifting to the floor.
Also, the banner is really cool! How did you do that?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Peanut! I'm glad to see you were able to find time to read more of RC. I really need to get to some of the fanfics I'm falling behind in reading. It makes me happy to hear that you enjoyed this chapter. I do so enjoy writing the chapters that make it REAL, not just all action and craziness. And you dare to gloat!? Mmmmmrrrrrrrrr ;) The banner is pretty cool, if I do say so myself. Yuu-chan has a photo editing program that she used to make it. It has like a cuzillion special effect options. X3 As always, thanks for the review. Out, UzuRose-chan TAT
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/03/12 - 06:33 am · For: Chapter 9 - Most Birds Aren't Meant to Swim
O_O Sarutobi has seen that pendant before?! Audriana's mom is from the Narutoverse?! I'm making a heck of a lot of assumptions, but I do know that this story just gets more and more interesting.
So she lives after she does, huh? And she can't really get hurt... I was initially wondering if it was because she isn't from that world, but now I'm thinking it has something to do with her heritage or past or something, eh?
This was a great chapter! There were a lot of twists here, and I seriously can't wait to see where they all lead! Oh, and I love the banner! It kinda makes me think that we'll be seeing Kabuto at one point, yeah? Anyway, awesome job on this, Mimi-chan! Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: Yes, the story definitely just got more interesting. I was considering not showing that extra scene until later, as the original plan was to not even let on the the possible twist for a very very long time. But in the end I decided to just post it now. So you agree that this story is getting more and more interesting? Of course I couldn't just do any old girl falls into Narutoverse fic. That would be too boring. And I guess you could say the not dying thing has to do with her heritage or past. You'll just have to wait and find out! X3 Glad you liked the banner. Kabuto will definitely be showing up. Thanks for all the praise and the review. Out, Mimi-chan TAT
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 03/03/12 - 06:42 am · For: Chapter 8 - Don't Look Back
(chapter 8: Don't Look Back)
Okay, so this chapter was both kind of sad but very enlightening. I really liked the foreshadowing Masumi seemed to put into all her thoughts, and the way the characters started to interact after it was decided she was to leave made it very interesting. I liked the realism in it, even if Zabuza did seem sort of OOC for parts of this arch, this really made up for it.
(Extra Chapter: While They're still Young)
This was a nice little bit too, because I was really wondering what she had made for him, though I do remember SOMETHING along these lines in the first draft, although I may be wrong. Really great stuff, though, and you got Zabuza's frustration down to key.
Anyway, I'm onto the next chapter! I'm playing catch-up with you and Riley's stories today because I'm FINALLY not busy :D
Author's Response: Well, your reaction was nothing like Wolfy-chan's, but in her defense, she had no warning at all while you had plenty. I'm a big fan of mysterious foreshadowing, and I do tend to be able to sense when somethings not up, when something bad or drastic is about to happen. If you look, the hints are generally there. It was a little saddening for myself even writing about the interaction between the three after the big announcement. I mean, when I picture this trio, it's all weird banter and constant teasing and just strangely fun, so it just didn't seem right for them to be interacting this way. But it was the realistic response, so I had to write it. *tear* I suddenly want to make Zabuza re-enter the story immediately! But that would mess up the entire plot, so I can't. *sigh* As for the extra chapter, I'm glad I was able to get Zabuza's frustration right. I had a really hard time writing it, but I felt this chapter was necessary to the story. I can't even count the times I went back and edited trying to get his personality right. Audriana is so gonna make him wear the present when they meet up again! XP As always, thanks for the review. Out, Masumi-chibi TAT
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 03/03/12 - 06:25 am · For: Chapter 7 - Why Is Everything I Own Called Obnoxious?
Aw, so cute! I really like this chapter as it was written at a different pace as most of the others I've read so far, and not to mention we have a mention of Team 7!
That can only mean one thing!
And what's this? My sister's name on this story? I feel left out!! XD
Anyway, awesome chapter, great work! Now onto the next one!
*Flies away*
Author's Response: I'd have to agree that this chapter is at a different pace. It's just an all nonsense chapter that appears to serve very little purpose other than maybe to show how close the trio is becoming and how attached Zabuza has become. I had fun writing it, though sadly part of it was saved under a mislabeled file, so I had to rewrite it only to find the original later!!!! Oh, I was so peeved. Yes, peeved. I still use that word because I'm cool like that. Sorry you're not in it this time, but we really just couldn't resist, and the addition of Yuu-chan has already made this so complicated that it would get too messy with any more authors. But you can be involved by leaving us living reviews! X3 And, of course, I've still been giving you little sneak peeks. You should feel very lucky. O_o Anyway, thanks so much for the review! Out, Masumi-chibi TAT
Name: UzamakiMasumi (Signed) · Date: 01/03/12 - 02:59 pm · For: Chapter 8 - Don't Look Back
This is just an experiment if TONFA technically will allow me to review on my own chapters. I will never do this again, promise! So if this review shows up, it means that I can. Yeah. Hahahahahahah!
Out,
Masumi-san TAT
Author's Response: HAH! It worked! But never do this again, Masumi! Never! (Masumi: Awwww. But it was fun!) Too bad! But it is kind of entertaining that this works. Okay. Bubye naughty Masumi. Out, AR Painter TAT
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 29/02/12 - 02:00 pm · For: Chapter 8 - Don't Look Back
decent chapter. I'm wondering where Audriana will end up... Great work!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I love hearing about what the readers think. X3 Audriana will end up... Wait! I can't tell you! That would ruin the surprise! Hahahahahahahhahhah!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/02/12 - 03:41 am · For: Chapter 8 - Don't Look Back
WHAT?!?!?! She just...left? But... I thought there was still so much she had to do! It was so sudden, I can't believe it...
I thought Masumi's gift to Zabuza was really cute. I'd like to see him wear it XD I also liked the bonus chapter, it was a nice spin. We got to see a by of what goes on in his head.
Overall, it was...a very depressing chapter, actually... I am still upset that she had to leave, but I guess it had to be done. I hope things work out... Anyway, good job on this! Keep up the spectacular work on this story!
Author's Response: I know the chapter was depressing, Wolfy-chan. I know it was. But it had to happen. Unless Audriana leaves, she will never realize how much she actually cares about those guys, and she will never get past her refusal to become close to people issue. Also, she needs to get out and meet new people while in her weak state that will really get to her and wake her up to what life really is. I promise that this is not the end of their relationship, though. It really isn't! As always, thanks for the loving support. Really makes me want to continue amazing my readers. I hope I can. Out, Mimi-chan TAT P.S. Zabuza will definitely wear them! Audriana will make sure of it!
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 28/02/12 - 08:11 pm · For: Chapter 3 - Following Zabuza's Schedule, Whether my Body Likes it or Not
"I thought I heard someone whisper, saying that I really sounded quite pathetic, but no one was there other than Zabuza and me! So I must have been imagining it, right?" Love that.
Very well written. Audrianna's character is quite well round and Zabuza is not OOC at all. It's funny and the truth of four truly is terrifying (I hope all cockroaches four!) and I love this story and thanks so much and now I have to breath so *GASPS*
Author's Response: I loved that whispering part, too! I felt very much like Prince (1/2 Prince) when I wrote that. X3 So happy Zabuza isn't OOC! I'm really getting the hang of writing is and loving it. Four has actually become my favorite number. I find myself using it everywhere, whether it's the number of exclamation points I write or how many times I spin in a circle. (Cockroaches only want to be loved, too, just like the rest of us! *sad face*) Thanks for the review. I'm glad I could bring you some entertainment in our sometimes dreary world. (There's been a major snowstorm stopping me from going to the library today *sad face again*) Out, UzuRose-chan TAT
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 28/02/12 - 08:01 pm · For: Chapter 2 - Who's the Girl?
No! It was never sucky, I was seriously in love w/ it! The rp!
I like the name Peanut Butter girl, lol. ^^
Finally got time to read some fics!
Oho I see a bit of the culinary genius in this girl, hmm? I love that, I really do. It's like, a whole bit of yourself in the character.
I liked the end line, it reminds me of the summary. I think it'd be interesting to watch her change personalities. Also, I want to sincerely tell you what a great chapter this is. Well written, concise, a-ma-zing. I just have one thing - Haku's a bit too sweet/naive. Instead of the little brother type, I've kind of thought him to be the older sister type (around Naruto at least). But maybe that' my interpretation of his character, and this Haku, yours. Good chap.
Author's Response: A review! YES! There's definitely a bit of myself in Audriana, as the original character in NEFN was me. And the way a chef's love for cooking affects them is so intense that I just had to use it in RC (Reality Check). All of Audriana's personalities have a bit of hyperness and strangeness to them as she just cannot contain it all, but each is still different. I have a lot of fun writing them all. And just wait until she meets my love Kabuto. Shh! That was a secret! Don't tell anyone! X3 I kind of know what you mean about Haku, and I myself thought I may have gone a little too far, but it was just too cute, and in the end I couldn't resist. Audriana and Haku's relationship actually becomes more like that of a mother and her child, and Haku's the mom. TAT He ends up being involved a great deal in Audriana's training, and he becomes protective and proud of her in an interesting way. I really love these two's strangely good relationship. It's been my favorite to develop so far. Thanks for the review! Out, UzuRose-chan
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 24/02/12 - 11:56 pm · For: Chapter 6 - So Much Goddamn Talent
Alright, so here's what we got in this chapter.
Kazuo is a cute boy who is OBVIOUSLY flirting with out main girl, and is either very brave or very dumb for being so informal XD I mean, Zabuza-san? I would assume sama would be more appropriate!
Next we have Mariko who is our strange and distant apprentice from the past. I love the twist with adding this character! You add a little flare to both Zabuza and Masumi with this because it shows Zabuza is in fact emotional about some of his past experiences, even if it isn't obvious on the surface. On the other side of the room we have Masumi who is confused and annoyed by this, which I find comical. This shows a lot of her dedication to learning and bettering herself, even if it is for selfish reasons! I love it, the whole thing :D
Great job on this one! Can't wait till I have time to read more!!
Author's Response: So you noticed, too? This guy is just very stupidly brave. I mean come on, he also flirting with Audriana! Using san instead of sama is his own little sign of defiance when Zabuza's not around. He would never be brave/stupid enough to do that in Zabuza's presence! XP Glad you like Mariko. Of course Zabuza has emotion! He just doesn't like to admit it! I will show the world the amazingness of the cute and immature sides of him through this story! TAT And you dare to laugh at Audriana? She will haunt you in your dreams for such disrespect! rofl She has dedication, but you are right about her reasons being very selfish. She has far too much pride and refuses to be looked down upon for ungrounded reasons. Come back soon for more. You'll get to see my very special surprise for this story next week. Out, Masumi-san TAT
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 24/02/12 - 11:41 pm · For: Chapter 7 - Why Is Everything I Own Called Obnoxious?
terrific! I'm really into this story, just keep it up!
Author's Response: A new reviewer! That's always exciting for me. I'm so happy you like my story, and I will work hard to keep pleasing you and my other readers in the future. Thanks for the review. It made me very happy to see it.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/02/12 - 06:19 pm · For: Chapter 7 - Why Is Everything I Own Called Obnoxious?
Yeesh, I was so eager to read this second update that I forgot to comment on Zabuza's old apprentice in the other chapter. I really hope to learn more about her, that'd be a great plot twister. I hope her story plays an important role and impacts Masumi just a bit, if anything.
Anyway, this was a very entertaining chapter. Every girl enjoys shopping, and I found it highly amusing that Zabuza and Haku were there as well. It was just too funny a thought XD
Great job with these updates, Masumi-chan! I loved both! Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Don't worry. Mariko will be brought up again. As Audriana struggles to teach herself swordsmanship, the young girl is always on her mind. She wonders what kind of person she must have been to make such an impact on Zabuza and wants to surpass her in all angles of life. Of course, one of my favorite yet unwritten scenes will be when Zabuza finds out the Masumi knows about Mariko. Oh, the drama that will ensue! Very true about shopping. I swear it must be written on the x-chromosome that we must love shopping. XP And, really, I couldn't resist putting Zabuza in there. I almost made it even more embarrassing for him, but I decided to edit that certain scene out in the end. I think the fact that he is willing to put up with this is a sign that he's becoming to Audriana unknowingly. It makes me laugh. Thanks for the review. I will continue to work hard in the future. Masumi-chan TAT
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/02/12 - 06:04 pm · For: Chapter 6 - So Much Goddamn Talent
You did it again: Masumoto. Masashi Kishimoto, Masumi-chan ;)
Anyway, I must say, I really appreciate the fact that you give Audrianna so much background information. Stories that include a girl falling into the Narutoverse rarely ever talk about their views, their background, or their beliefs. It's always just their eccentric personality or something. So I like the effort in putting in her perspectives and what she has gone through.
On another note, there's another chapter! Yes! I'll be back soon with another review!
Author's Response: Ah! I'm not even noticing it! I need to edit better! I have no idea how this keeps happening! Although, sometimes I get the right name in. I think it kind of depends on how much sleep I've gotten when I'm writing. I really like the name Masumoto, so it keeps popping into my head. *sweat drop* But it is now fixed! Anyhow, as always, I am overjoyed to be able to bring something different to the table. I know what you mean by the girls always just having eccentric personalities. I don't actually prefer to read fanfictions about a girl falling into the Narutoverse usually, but I so enjoy writing them! If I can get around to posting others, I hope they can change some peoples' negative view of these kinds of stories. I think a person's background and beliefs are the most important aspects to any story, because it literally shapes the way it will go, so I try to develop a whole life for each character I create. Maybe that's why it always takes me so long to actually get started on a story. Heheh. Thanks for the review, and I look forward to the next one. Masumi-chan TAT
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 23/02/12 - 03:36 pm · For: Chapter 2 - Who's the Girl?
OOOO!!!! I KNOE NOW!!! This was your multi-author story, right? So did you guys stop?
Author's Response: Yes, it was! Ha ha. We took it down because it sucked so much. We were intending to redo it which a better, more serious plot. Unfortunately, that didn't pan out, though. Some of us couldn't even get passed their second chapter before getting sick of it suddenly. (cough, Ingo-chan!) But because I had already fallen in love with the character I had created and the story I had built for her, I decided to continue with only her. It was approved by the others! *thumbs up* But if you were reading NEFN right up until we took it down, you may recognize some of the events and characters. Thank ya for the review! Out, Masumi-san T_T