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Rated: 15
[Reviews - 32]Category: General Fiction > Naruto, General Fiction > Timeskip
Characters: All, Kakashi Hatake, Naruto Uzumaki, Neji Hyuuga, OC, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha, Team Kakashi
Genres: Drama
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 20846 | Read count: 35059 [Report This]
Published: 26/04/11 | Updated: 12/06/11
Date: 03/05/11 Title: Chapter 9: Mission
Thank you for no lemon! I was worried for a second. Reasonable mission. Realistic and everything! Love it! Please update soon! Go Namikaze! And Sasuke!
Author's Response: No problem! Lemon will mess this story up. Thanks for the review as always! Haha, it\'s nice seeing someone root for my OC.
Date: 03/05/11 Title: Chapter 10: Sarutobi?
Yay! Super speedy update. Ishiko is a very Naruto-like character, i can tell already that Naruto influences him. I am glad you included kids. Please update. =D
Author's Response: I was halfway through with this chapter when I uploaded the one before it. I\'m working on the next one! Thanks for the reviews!!
Date: 04/05/11 Title: Chapter 11: Red Eyes
Loved that chapter! I loved the end where Ishiko asked who was first in the class. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Haha, thank you!
Date: 05/05/11 Title: Chapter 12: Cool Attitude
This was an impressive chapter. I loved it. all in all, i think it was the best chapter so far. Maybe it is only the fact that I love kakashi, but I still loved this. 9/10. =D
Author's Response: Haha, I love Kakashi too! He\'s one of my favorite characters! Thank you!
Date: 06/05/11 Title: Chapter 13: Genjutsu of Peace
...That...was...so...FANTASTIC! i loved that chapter so much. Go Genjutsu Sasuke! nothing else to say, except...Please update!
Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you! I\'ll updata ASAP, but i\'m not home right now so... thanks for the review!!
Date: 18/05/11 Title: Chapter 21: Scrolls
Yay! update! I do love this story! Yay, I hope this next chapter will be dramatic! =D
Author's Response: Thanks! We\'ll see...
Rated: PG
[Reviews - 13]Category: Essays & Tutorials > Characterization Tutorials
Characters: All, Itachi Uchiha, Sakura Haruno
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 6805 | Read count: 14149 [Report This]
Published: 28/04/11 | Updated: 10/07/11
Date: 29/04/11 Title: Chapter 1: Explaining
*sighs* I hate admitting i need help. In almost all of my stories I have OOC characters. It would bring my writing up so much by not having that. I struggle when writing Naruto Uzumaki. A lot of people think that if you just say 'Believe it!' After every sentence you can do it. That is so wrong...
I do Naruto either to serious or too Orange-clad Hyperactive kid. I also struggle with Kakashi Hatake. He is one of my favorite characters, and I tend to mess up his personality.
One of my biggest worries is my main story. It is titled 'One Little Girl.' I would appreciate it so much if you could read all of it, and get back to me about characters.
If you could do Kakashi, Naruto, Itachi, and Orochimaru it would be appreciated. Kabuto also. Thanks. This helps a lot.
Author's Response:
Lol we all need help after all we aren’t the author right…I believe I need some help polishing Itachi’s character a little after all I didn’t create Itachi. And I so agree with you on Naruto just cause he “Believe it” became his trade mark doesn’t mean he says it all the time that is just annoying and most of the time just plain stupid.
Hmmm :\\ I will try to figure out Naruto’s personality and write a guide on him he was already on my list. Kakashi is someone I will have difficulties with too one of stories I’m writing has him in it and now my concern is if gets too OOC but I’m watching Naruto and getting a feel of who is. I think Kakashi has too many different personalities for my liking. XP
Guess what? I’m almost done with Itachi…so that will be coming out soon J
And don’t worry we all struggle as Authors and I will be glad to read your story it’s those who admit their mistakes that become greater =).
Date: 30/04/11 Title: Chapter 2: Itachi
Thank you. This was really informative, and I noticed a lot about my own stories. I totally murdered his character in some of them. Thank you for letting me know this, by making this guide. Can you do Kakashi next? I really love these and they are so helpful. =D
Author's Response:
Glad I could help, I'll be getting to your story soon and give you a review...
Kakashi will be third on my list, I'm already making one for Sakura but I will get to Kakashi next
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 86]
Thanks to BattyBigSister for the wonderful banner!
Now, in the present, Madara Uchiha still lives and spreads a false peace among the world through his genjutsu. This ultimate tsukuyomi was meant to leave everyone in the world under the control of the immortal man.
However, a selected group of people, descendants of respectable shinobi, have been released from the genjutsu due to a twist of fate. Now it is up to this band of chosen people to somehow defeat Madara and break the genjutsu that has lasted for 100 years.
This group of people must somehow work together and rely on the two things they have in common: an unknown destiny and forgotten ancestries.
Category: OC-centric, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU, General Fiction > Post-Naruto
Characters: Madara Uchiha, OC
Genres: Action/Adventure, Dark, Drama, General, Humor, Mystery
Warnings: AU, Dark
Challenges: , Joint Stories!
Challenge: , Joint Stories!
Series: None
Chapters: 8 | Completed: No | Word count: 30715 | Read count: 21100 [Report This]
Published: 18/05/11 | Updated: 20/03/12
Date: 18/05/11 Title: Chapter 1: Will You Join This Story?
Name (first, last): Karasu Shi
Gender: Female
Animal Partner: a very deadly snake named Salyzar
Ancestor: Orochimaru
Village: Sound
Age: 14
Personality: Cold, mean, sadistic, cruel, evil, cynical, barbaric.
Appearance: Skinny. Long black hair. Dark blue pants, cream colored shirt. Modeled around what shippuden Sasuke wore, only in female form. She has a tattoo of black roses, that stretches around her arms, making large black dots in her palms. Later used to focus chakra.
Unlocked Kekkei Genkai: Curse Mark (not a kekkai genkai, but close enough)
Unlocked Special Abilities: Fantastic genjutsu user. She specializes in torture and investigations, being able to torture people in their own minds, sort of like tsuklimomi.
Romance: doesn't matter to me
Weakness: Is bad at hand to hand. Is a good senbon needle user, and uses medical ninjutsu to fight, like kabuto did. Bad at martial art part of taijutsu, and not the best at elemental jutsu, except for lightning type.
Author's Response: Oh, Orochimaru, huh? I thought you would go for your classic \'Kakashi-Anko child\' Nice to see you\'re mixing it up a little. It adds more depth to this story, I can see it already XD Okay, Karasu Itami Shi, aka Raven Pain Death, is officially in the story. Nice character bio, I like it! Thanks for joining the story!
Date: 18/05/11 Title: Chapter 1: Will You Join This Story?
funfact: My name means Raven Pain Death. (my middle name is Itami)
Author's Response: Very cool name, by the way :D
Date: 27/05/11 Title: Chapter 1: Will You Join This Story?
You did a great job with this, and I look forward to seeing how it plays out. So far, it looks like you are really doing personaalities well, and I can not wait for you to try my character's evil sadistic persona. This is great, and I prey to Jashin for a speedy update!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you very much! I am glad to hear that I am keeping close to the personalities given to me about the characters. I always feel nervous when writing about someone else\'s character. Oh, and hey, Fantasy Madeline, guess what? I\'ll let you in on a secret: Karasu is up next ;D I\'m happy to hear that you like this, and I also pray to Jashin for a speedy update.... >_> Yeah, anyways, thank you so much for reading this, and thanks even more for reviewing! You\'re an awesome fan!
Date: 29/05/11 Title: Chapter 4: Time to Embark on Destiny's Journey
Right now I am grinning. A) YOU UPDATED!!! And now, more importantly, B).
You did a great job on my character, and did her perfectly! The snake was perfect, and Karasu's attitude about killing is perfect. I love the hesitation of her own father, and you could actually feel the fear. It excites me to know who else she will scare. You did an awesome job on her, and by the way, love the flying pink fairies. =D
Author's Response: *fist pump* YES!!!! I did a good job! I was honestly terrified that I would mess Karasu up completely. I\'ve never written a character like her, so I\'m glad I got her right. I honestly had a good time writing about her, though. It was a challenge, and I\'m glad you thought I succeeded. And, of course, everybody loves flying pink fairies. Who doesn\'t? ;D I\'m very happy that you liked the way I wrote Karasu. Thanks a lot for reading and thank you even more for reviewing! You\'re awesome! And I\'m glad you enjoyed this!
Date: 23/08/11 Title: Chapter 7: A Meeting That Changes History
Awesomeness. The one thing I can say to review this.
You did a wonderful job on describing Karasu and her temper. I can not wait to see where you take this. It is not my place to judge other people's characters, but I loved Shin in this. keep up the fantastic work. =D
Author's Response: XD Yay! I\'m so happy you thought it was awesome! I was honestly very worried about Karasu\'s personality. I know that she\'s cold and sadistic, but I thought her temper would be unlikeable to you. But I\'m glad you thought it was so good anyway! I also cannot wait to see where I take this ;D Haha, I\'m glad you liked Shin as well. He makes an interesting companion to Karasu, I think. Thanks for the awesome review, Fantasy Madeline! I really appreciate your amazingly kind words! Thanks again for reading and reviewing, you\'re incredible!
Date: 20/03/12 Title: Chapter 8: Discoveries Bring the Truth
Yay!!! I really love this story. What shall I review first?
As always, you are so awesome with my character! Yes! Love the way you portrayed her. Good dialogue, not to talkative, but sardonic when necessary. Wonderful.
Between all of the characters, you had great interactions. All of the personalities melded together beautifully. You have realistic scenes and everything is just perfect.
And the plot never fails to intrigue me. Please, pretty please, update soon. I love this story!
Author's Response: Wow! And I didn't even like this chapter! Cool, your praise always means so much to me, Fantasy Madeline! I really enjoy writing about Karasu. She's a challenge sometimes, but that's why I like her. She's different :D I'm glad you liked how the character interactions took place. That was the hardest part for me. But if you liked it, then I know I have done well. Thank you so much for reading this, Fantasy Madeline! I always love hearing from you! I hope you stick around for when the plot developments really begin ;)
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 13]Sasuke is captured and sent to another dimension by Kakashi... the real world. Best friends, Akira, Takumi, and Midori are the ones to find him. What to do with the guy Midori's all fangirl over?
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > High School Fics, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Real World
Characters: OC, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Drama, General, Humor
Warnings: None
Challenges: , Let's Be Original
Challenge: , Let's Be Original
Series: None
Chapters: 8 | Completed: No | Word count: 7621 | Read count: 11230 [Report This]
Published: 18/05/11 | Updated: 30/05/11
Date: 20/05/11 Title: Chapter 2: Meeting
Great work on this. I really mean it. Love how Sasuke is all confused. Great. Just great. Please update this soon! GO KAKASHI AND SASUKE-San! (as characters, not a couple. I don't do yaoi)
Author's Response: Thanks! And yeah, I don\'t do yaoi either.
Date: 23/05/11 Title: Chapter 5: I just have some questions for my readers...
I think Sasuke should be really pretty evil, but he could influence a OC, especially if one is doing illegal stuff...(hint hint)
This should be during Shippuden, before he kills Orochimaru. That way, Kakashi would have a reason to capture him.
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I think it should be hinata, it adds drama, and we could see how much Sasuke leaving affected Naruto, because Hinata would know that. After Hyuggas, i think Uzumaki, Ino's clan, and Kiba's. Then, definitely Kakashi's, go Hatakes!
Author's Response: Haha, okay thanks. I\'ll probably stick with Silverwolf\'s idea about post-war time, but thanks. I agree. It\'ll probably just be Hinata. Thank you!!
Rated: U
[Reviews - 28]
Why does she hate me? What have I done? Why don't the kids play with me? Have I hurt them? Why do the adults look at me with those eyes?Where is my mom?
Where is my big brother?
Who is Orochimaru? P.S. Can anyone tell me how to fix my picture/banner thing? Or can everyone see it?
Category: OC-centric
Characters: Anko Mitarashi, Hidden Leaf Ninja, Kabuto Yakushi, Kakashi Hatake, Naruto Uzumaki, OC, Orochimaru, Tsunade
Genres: Action/Adventure, Dark, Drama, General
Warnings: Dark, Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 11628 | Read count: 18170 [Report This]
Published: 19/05/11 | Updated: 13/08/11
Date: 22/05/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: First of Tragedies
Once again, very good. this one was so much better than the last one. Have i ever told you that I love Kakashi/Anko? They are my fave pairing. All my stories have them. Go you!
Author's Response: Thanks as always.
Date: 04/08/11 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Yay!!! Can not wait until Anko comes, that will be fun. While reading this, I had a vision Anko coming home to find a mini Kakashi, lol. I can not wait to see what happens, and what you will do with this. Until then...
Author's Response: You probably know this by now, but the new chapter is up.
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 2]But they still end up falling in love? Follow along with Ferra, and watch the romance fall into place!
Category: OC-centric, Het Romance > Fluff, Het Romance > Warned
Characters: Clan Hyuuga, Kakashi Hatake, Neji Hyuuga, OC, Pair OCSasu, Sasuke Uchiha, Team Kakashi
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Graphic lemon, Humor, Romance
Warnings: OOC, Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 763 | Read count: 1686 [Report This]
Published: 22/05/11 | Updated: 22/05/11
Date: 22/05/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Great job! I like where this is headed. Thank you SO much for not making this sasuke/sakura, because those tend to annoy me. I am looking forward to Lee's reaction, because primary lotus was basically his thing. I have an idea, but you do not have to listen to it.
Lee is rivals with Ferra, yet falls in love with her. completely one-sided, for Ferra feels nothing for lee.
Don't have to even respond to it, I just thought it would be fun. Great job overall, and I can not wait for an update. =D
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 42]Category: OC-centric, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: OC
Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Warnings: AU, Death
Challenges: , Joint Stories!
Challenge: , Joint Stories!
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Word count: 8443 | Read count: 5562 [Report This]
Published: 04/06/11 | Updated: 17/08/11
Date: 05/06/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Chosen
Name: Amanda Shi
Gender: Female
Ancestor: Orochimaru
Age: 14
Weakness: Social skills
Romance (optional): Everyone is afraid of her, so no real chance there. I personally am cool with romance though, if they match my personality.
Rank: ANBU
Personality: Cold. She is mean, cold, sadistic. Polite, to people she respects. She doesn't respect you unless you earn her respect. She likes pain, and is really scary. She scares everyone, even her own family.
Appearance: She has white skin. Long black hair, and snake like eyes. She wears what Sasuke wore in Shippuden, only in girl form. She basically looks like a female Orochimaru. She has a small mark on her neck. A birth mark. She has the angel tattoo on her left shoulder.
History: Her parents are terrified of her. She sort of lives on her own, her parents are out to much. I mean, they are at home every few weeks. She loves to meditate. She scares everyone in the town. She has a pet snake named Salyzar, which is deadly.
Chakra Nature: Lightning
Kekkei Genkai: Curse Mark
Special Abilities: She is great at genjutsu, and can do something similar to Tsuklinomi later on.
Author's Response:
Author's Response: I don\'t look at my fanfic for a while, and when I do, BOOM! Three new reviews. That\'s a really nice surprise. I can\'t wait to write about her. I can already see her, and I just hope I write her well (I write some of the chapters and then Sasaui revises and posts them). I just hope I don\'t mess up. I\'ve never been too good with creepy characters.
Date: 10/06/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Chosen
I think you should do this one. I like this idea a bit better, in my opinion.
Date: 13/06/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Chosen
You did a nice job on this chapter. You allude to a future plotline well, and added a fair amount of foreshadowing. You used both at the right time and place too. You did a nice job with the child abuse allusion, and i really look foreward to seeing how you handle my character's evilness. Until your next post, bye!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review. I\'m glad you think I did a good job. I\'ll try to make Amanda as evil as possible, but I can\'t promise I\'ll do as well as Silverwolf did with your evil character. I\'ll try my best, though.
Date: 13/06/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Chosen
Oh, sorry. I did not see the age rule. I will change the age to 16 then.
Author's Response: Okay. Sorry if I seemed pushy.
Date: 15/06/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Chosen
@ Shadow-
You wanted to know if Amanda and your characters could be in a relationship. Here is your answer. It would have to be a progressive relationsihp, taking a while to develop. Would your character's persona match though? You have to understand that Amanda likes death and pain. She likes seeing the blood of others, and screams are like music to her. She loves her super deadly snake, more than anything. She is like a female Orochimaru who specializes in genjutsu and torture. She is basically evil, and would your character want to be with someone like that? Think about that.
Date: 16/06/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Chosen
@ shadow-I give my consent.