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Penname: xXxTiNkxXx [Contact]
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Beck: Mongolian Chop Squad, Black Lagoon, FLCL, Fullmetal Alchemist: Brotherhood, InuYasha, The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya, Naruto, Ookami Shoujo toKuro Ouji, Samurai Champloo, Sword Art Online, Tonari no Kaibutsu kun.

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Title: Naruto's Truth or Dare show!!! by naomi_sama
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 57]
Summary: truth or dare with your favorite Naruto cast!
Category: MadFic > Parody
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 | Completed: No | Word count: 4469 | Read count: 13963 [Report This]
Published: 02/08/06 | Updated: 16/02/07


Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed
Date: 30/06/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Hahaha I love this show! =3

I'm putting it on my faves! I think it's hilarious that you had the characters sing their feelings. And that you had Orochimaru singing the Ding Dong Song. Lmfao!! Great job!! Please update soon



Title: 'Plans of Hebi' by littleolmee
Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 33]
Summary: Hebi has captured Naruto. What are Sasuke's plans and what part does Naruto play in them? What is the new bond Sasuke wants to create with him?
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Warned (Shonen-ai/Yaoi), Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: All, Pair SasuNaru
Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Graphic lemon, Humor, Romance, WAFF
Warnings: Rape, Sexual Themes, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Word count: 23676 | Read count: 14928 [Report This]
Published: 21/05/07 | Updated: 28/08/08


Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed
Date: 29/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wo0o0o0o0ow!!! i like it! i look foward to reading more =3

Author's Response: Thanks, ch 4 will be posted soon; will be sent to beta today 07-02-08.



Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed
Date: 17/07/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

yaaaayz!! yu updated!!! =3

haha everytime i hear sasuke mention the commemorative robe i laugh.

awwwwh....the end was actually cute when they were having sex and they both smiled. it made me smile heh heh.

update again so0o0o0o0on!!!

Author's Response: Thanks glad you liked the chapter. Got to love that commemorative robe! See I just can\'t keep the angst up forever lol.



Title: Nin Truth or Dare 2 THE EXTREME! by Noleta
Rated: 12/12A Liked [Reviews - 75]
Summary: Did you ever want to see your favorite characters do some crazy stuff? Well come on in and watch Nin Truth or Dare with you Host Noleta. All you have to do his pay the small fine of losing your mind.....

^-^

(Nin Truth or Dare is not held responsible for any fights, migrains or pregnancies that may be produced by reading it. Thank you and have a nice day)
Category: MadFic > Parody, MadFic > Interviews and Talk Shows, MadFic > Other
Characters: All
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 | Completed: No | Word count: 13651 | Read count: 32080 [Report This]
Published: 21/11/07 | Updated: 19/07/08


Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed
Date: 01/07/08 Title: Chapter 18: Special Episode: Ramen Rehab

hahaha this is some funny stuff. keep up the good writing. b.t.w. tanx for the review =3



Title: Thunder and Swirls by Kamisori
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 235]
Summary:
Hello my name is Kaminari Hiyori, but my friends call me Nari. I am from the Hiyori clan, whose members specialize in elemental control and jutsu. My clan believes that depending on the weather conditions on the day that a baby is born, is how we are destined to our element. We are also named to match our element. My name means thunder and I control and use electric based jutsu. I was born during an electrical storm. My Aunt, Kasumi, was born when a heavy mist covered the land. Thus her name means mist, and her element is liquid and poison based. Aunt Kasumi had taken care of me ever since my parents died. I’m graduating from the Ninja Academy soon. Hopefully, I’ll be put with my best friend, Naruto Uzamaki.
Category: OC-centric
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 47 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 65745 | Read count: 81684 [Report This]
Published: 01/06/08 | Updated: 03/05/09


Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed
Date: 12/07/08 Title: Chapter 17: Catching up on the Times

YAY!! IM BACK FROM VACATION!!! Dude I was dying there cuz my uncle doesn't have a computer so I couldn't update *sobs* and then I come back to my house, sit on my computer aaaaaand......WTF!?!?! WHO DOES KAMINARI LIKE!?!? *cries* You evil cliffhanging making person....I must find out or its going to bother me!! >,< anywayz, great chapters!!

Author's Response: I hope you had fun on your vaction! The almighty answer to who Kaminari like will be revealed in two chapters! (i think) Let\'s see if you can use the clues I\'ve put out throught the story to guess who the lucky guy is! (hint: reread chapter 8: Mysterious Boy, for the biggest clue! An \'s\'!) Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed
Date: 29/06/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chakra Training

SHAWEEEET!!!!! SHANNON LIKES IT!!!!

its going on my favorites =3

thanx for reviewing my story too. i really like this one. i love kaminari's attitude. it kinda reminds me of my character in a way (which means i like)

i hope you keep reading my story and that i keep getting reviews miss missy miss!!

~ Shannon

Author's Response: Awsomeness! xD I review what I like and your story is awsome! Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed
Date: 01/07/08 Title: Chapter 10: Daddy's Gone

o0o0o kekkai genkai involving lightning o0o0o0o. Shannon likes lightning lol.

Naruto and Kaminari are such cute friends =3. Update again soon!!

Author's Response: lighting is kickass! xD Yes! The NaruNari duo are da bomb! :) Thanks for the reveiw!



Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed
Date: 14/07/08 Title: Chapter 19: Rejected For Chunin Exam?!

o0o0o0o dum-dee-dum-dum!!! How does every story always seem to have some extra HOTT boy in it? Lol. Shimo sounds kinda hott lol =3 just saying. I wonder why they were summoned there O.o

I can't wait until you update so I can see why!!!1

Author's Response: lol Shimo is japanese for frost! ^_~ You\'ll just have to see why they were summoned there! =^.^=



Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed
Date: 15/07/08 Title: Chapter 20: The Problem With The Hiyori Clan

O.o oh wow. Now I get why Shimo is such a lil bitch. Lol.

AND YOU STILL HAVE TO LET US KNOW WHO KAMINARI LIKES!!!!

Your killing me T^T. Update soon lol

Author's Response: Kaminari\'s crush is revealed in the next chapter! ^o^ So don\'t fret! The answer you seek is close!



Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed
Date: 17/07/08 Title: Chapter 21: The First Exam: Poker

GYAAAAAAH!!! IT'S SHINO!!! why did I have that feeling considering your in love with Shino...?? >.> ,

Author's Response: I don\'t know, but I do know this: Shino is the most awesome character and there are very few stories with him as the main character! It makes me sad. :( But you reviewing makes me happy! :)



Title: Miracles by Kamisori
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Hinata hadn't even realized that she walked into the salon until the lady at the reception desk asked if she could be of any help. With a strong image of Naruto in her head, Hinata shocked herself when the words slipped out of her mouth.

“Yes, I would like a makeover to impress the guy I like.”
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Character-Centric, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters: Hinata Hyuuga
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 716 | Read count: 2160 [Report This]
Published: 29/06/08 | Updated: 29/06/08


Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed Liked
Date: 29/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Miracles

awwwww!! that was so cute!!!! i liked it a lot. i feel like a dork though now cuz after i read the whole thing i said "awwww" and my dad looked at me weird. lol anywayz good job!!

Author's Response: lol that happens to me all the time! My dad thinks I\'m crazy cuz I\'m always \"talking to my self\", but I\'m actually reading out loud. xD Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed Liked
Date: 29/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Miracles

dammit >,< i put the wrong rating!!! lol i wanted to make it 10....i never made a rating before haha whoopsies

Author's Response: Oh, well it\'s rated now! ^_^ Thanks for the awsome rating and the review from earlier!



Title: Truth or Dare With The K-Ks! by Kamisori, kuramasgurl018
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 105]
Summary: It was only a matter of time before Kamisori and kuramasgurl018 got together to make a story! Welcome to Truth or Dare With The K-Ks! Where--Dammit Yusuke! Stop interupting me! Anyways, Welcome to the truth or dare show with, two, that's right TWO different animes can answer your questions or do your dares! What would these almighty animes be? Naruto and Yu Yu Hakusho! So come on in and bring your best questions and dares with you! Because things are going to get wild! Believe it!
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Preview:

Yusuke: Damn you two psychos!
Razor-san: *twitches and waves hand*
Orochimaru: *suddenly falls on Yusuke*
Razor-san: There! That's what you get! Now deal with a gay snake on your ass!
Yusuke: *horrified* EXCUSE ME?!
Orochimaru: *offended* Excuse me?
K-gurl: *chuckles*

Category: Non-Naruto Fiction, MadFic > Parody, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Crossovers, General Fiction > Naruto, Het Romance > Fluff, Non-Naruto Fiction > Yu Yu Hakusho
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Humor, Parody, Supernatural
Warnings: OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 | Completed: No | Word count: 56987 | Read count: 36732 [Report This]
Published: 05/07/08 | Updated: 21/07/09


Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed
Date: 13/07/08 Title: Chapter 4: The Awesome Eyeglass-Wearing-Mafia!

lol this is pretty funny. i sat here laughing to myslef (again ^_^" )

anywayz when my brain works again maybe ill be able to think of a dare or two. so keep updating and ill keep reviewing!! =3

Author's Response: Okies! We\'ll be looking forward to when you send in dares! Thanks for reviewing!



Title: Am I A Narutard? by Kamisori
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 12]
Summary: Well, are you? You just might be! Here's 15 Characteristics of a Narutotard! This is a response to the 'You Know You're a Narutard When...' challenge!
Category: MadFic > Parody
Characters: None
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Challenges: You Know You're A Narutard When...,
Challenge: You Know You're A Narutard When...,
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 210 | Read count: 2323 [Report This]
Published: 08/07/08 | Updated: 08/07/08


Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed
Date: 12/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Such Is a Narutard

Hahaha I love this! I'm glad that you made it.....I'm a narutard. YAY!! And I actually have tried to walk on water...and I have been successful!! I can walk on water!...........as long as it is frozen

Author's Response: lol! You cheater! xP Thanks for teh review.



Title: Secret Love by sheechiibii
Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Sasuke is in Akatsuki and has successfully captured Naruto - who is due to die the next day - when an interesting discovery pushes him to change the course of their lives. After escaping from Akatsuki's clutches, they must retreat to an island far from the Ninja world. It is here that Sasuke must battle the new social norms as well as his own Secret love. NaruSasu. OC characters. Sex.


Category: General Fiction > Character-Centric, General Fiction > Naruto, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Warned (Shonen-ai/Yaoi), Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Angst (Shonen-ai/Yaoi), General Fiction > Timeskip, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: All
Genres: Angst, Dark, Drama, Graphic lemon, Romance
Warnings: Dark, Sexual Themes, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 | Completed: No | Word count: 79016 | Read count: 13054 [Report This]
Published: 30/03/09 | Updated: 27/01/11


Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed Liked
Date: 30/07/10 Title: Chapter 15: Sleep

I've read all that you have posted up here so far...and I must agree, since it has been said before, that you totally capture Sasuke's character. I find the way that your interpret his mind to be amazing; it totally just meshes along with his character design. I'm completely in awe of this story...it makes me feel like my writing is so minute to this; that I have a lot to learn. Your writing pulls the reader in...and just, wow. This is completely amazing, and I'm so happy I stumbled upon it c:

Author's Response:

Aww, thank you Xd that's so nice. This story gets hardly any reviews so I appreciate you saying that you like it. You've just inspired me to get along with writing the next chapter. I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Xx..xX



Title: The Reincarnation of a Legend by silverwolf1213
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 141]
Summary:


Thanks to BattyBigSister for the wonderful banner!

She was running away.

Finally.

Finally, Suki Kurohoshi was running away from her village. The six-year-old was finally able to escape from her terrible life.

She was going to run as far as her legs could carry her. She was going to abandon a home that was never a home to begin with. She was going to leave behind villagers who hated her for a reason that she did not know of.

Yes, run away. That would solve all of her problems. In a perfect world, running away would be the answer to everything.

Unfortunately, this isn't a perfect world. And running away won't solve every problem.

You can run away from home, and you can run away from people you grew up with. But now Suki is going to realize that the one thing that no one can run away from... is destiny.


Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Character-Centric, General Fiction > Naruto, Het Romance > Fluff, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: All, OC, Pair OCNaru
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, General, Humor, Romance, Spiritual
Warnings: AU, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: Destiny is Calling
Chapters: 14 | Completed: No | Word count: 79859 | Read count: 26487 [Report This]
Published: 27/11/10 | Updated: 17/01/12


Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed Liked
Date: 12/07/11 Title: Chapter 10: Stop And Stare

The opinion box beneath the review should have "loved" listed, because liked doesn't cover it. Can you travel cyberly, come through my computer screen, and smack me for not having read your story before? You're such a good reviewer to me, and I hadn't ever scoped out a story of yours...until tonight, and I regret waiting so long. Your writing is wonderful, precise, and I just want to read more. SO UPDATE! I haven't read an OC-based story that has had a child in it before, or that has kept the child at their age as they were introduced rather than throw them into tweenhood after a few chapters. Your originality in your story is very captivating (: Keep up the wonderful woooork~

Author's Response: O_O Wow... That is one of the nicest things anyone has ever said. Loved, huh? Wow, thanks! :D If I could travel cyberly, I wouldn\'t smack you, that would be mean. I would hug you for reading my story in the first place. Aw, just because I review for you doesn\'t mean you have to read my mediocre stories, but I\'m flattered you gave this story a shot anyway. Thank you so much for the compliment about my writing! Hmm, I glad you like that my OC was a child. If this next bit of info makes you sad, I\'m so sorry, but the next chapter is a time skip. I made Suki as a child because she is still innocent, and it seemed like the right time to show her past and describe her future a bit. I\'m so honored that you chose to read my story! Thanks for the amazing compliments! Thanks a lot for deciding to read this and thanks even more for sharing your wonderful feedback! You\'re awesome!



Title: In Death We Love by Mr Black Cat
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 6]
Summary:
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He lost his smile the day she died.
Category: OC-centric
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki, OC, Pair OCNaru
Genres: Angst, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1907 | Read count: 1475 [Report This]
Published: 21/01/11 | Updated: 21/01/11


Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed Liked
Date: 25/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a really sincere story :) I like it a lot. Good way to capture the hearts of all us sappy readers and make our internal organs feel like lovey-dovey mush

Author's Response: Aw. I\'m really glad your organs went to mush! In the good kind of way. Thank you for taking the time to leave a little review. It makes my organs turn to gloop! Thank you, thank you.



Title: Missed You by SarcasmMethod
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 10]
Summary: NaruSaku oneshot for now, deciding whether to continue or not.
Category: Het Romance > Fluff, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Sakura
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki, Sakura Haruno
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Word count: 7342 | Read count: 8054 [Report This]
Published: 25/01/11 | Updated: 04/06/11


Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed
Date: 25/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: Missed You

It's a touching little story that definitely shows the compassion that Sakura, even though she denies it, still has for Naruto, even in the manga/anime, so definitely good job with that :) And you didn't turn her into an OOC by making her throw herself on them, which again, many tend to do.. overall I really like this little one shot c: You're very descriptive with your writing, and I think I'll go stalk you to find anything else you've written :D

Author's Response: Lol, haven\'t written anything else yet really, i did a while back but i kinda erased it cause its bad xD.



Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed Liked
Date: 15/02/11 Title: Chapter 2: What just happened?

"I'm piss poor." That captivated me instantly ;P I think your take on Naruto and Sakura's relationship is a-freaking-dorable. And it doesn't seem rushed in the least, considering you're having this take place when they're at an old enough age where everyone understands the time they've shared together. It all fits perfectly.



In regards to story inspiration...I can't really help there, considering the story that I'm writing now I've developed over about 4 years. I had it written on animespiral.com, if you're familiar with that older site at all, and then it wound up crashing. However, I must say that on a day to day basis, after I think about the characters and where I WANT to go with my story, just not where the actual story of Naruto may lead me, a random act of God happens and I come up with new ideas. I know that for my art I'm often inspired by lyrics of my music when I really listen to each word and disect them, so maybe you could try that? Or just day to day happenings; experiences in life that you could possibly incorporate in the story, or maybe even warp slightly to make it work. Anyway, good luck with your ideas, and I really hope that you continue with your story because I would love nothing more than to continue reading :)



Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed Liked
Date: 25/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: Missed You

Normally when people write One Shots or Romantic Fics, they end up totally ablitherating the personality of the original character(s)...but I was happy to read through this and not find a hint of that :D I'm not a huge fan of NaruSaku romantically, but I think that just this innocent fluff reachers further into a readers heart than sex and having them eat each others faces



Title: NO CONDOM by kaatxx2411
Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 3]
Summary: HA HA
Category: Het Romance > Angst
Characters: All
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 228 | Read count: 552 [Report This]
Published: 17/06/11 | Updated: 17/06/11


Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed Liked
Date: 19/06/11 Title: Chapter 1: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

Win.



Title: Fire Escape by DropDeadThenDance
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 287]
Summary:
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IS NOW COMPLETE!!

Ill tempered Ross Falon is a bitter teenager in a school full of people she doesn't like, but that's okay because they don't like her either. She's wrapped herself tightly in a blanket of self pity and anime and she refuses to come out, until a stranger steps into her life and changes everything forever.

There will be no going back for Ross once she finds herself in a world where self pity just gets you killed, or worse. Ross has to learn the hard way that her life was easy picking, and now it's the hell of the Shinobi world.

Category: OC-centric, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Real World
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Sci-Fi, Supernatural
Warnings: Death, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: From Fire to Ashes
Chapters: 101 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 122472 | Read count: 108585 [Report This]
Published: 27/06/11 | Updated: 01/01/12


Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed Liked
Date: 12/07/11 Title: Chapter 14: Episode 14: The Angel

Prepare yourself for the long paragraph that is about to ensue. I'm fully convinced that TONFA hates me, because it never lets me insert a paragraph in reviews -____- To start off, the originality of your story is very respectable. I have to say, even with my own story, the OC-Centric genre is very cookie-cutteresque, but this breaks the mold. It really makes me think about the quote unquote originality of my story. Honestly, your creativity intimidates me. I admire the fact that each chapter begins with a quote that pertains to the chapter in which it begins. I'm also loving that Ross doesn't instantly make her way into Konoha, but there's a whole prelude to that as well. Again, your originality is overwhelming, and I'm very happy that I decided to scope this story out (: Added to the favorite list, fer sure. Another thing, the fact that you update so often is aweeesooome. I've noticed that in the Most Recent feed I see the same story pop up over and over. A lot of people don't write on here as often as other authors as dedicated to their story as you are. It's refreshing to see an author that maintains their great story frequently (:

Author's Response: You know you might want to try the (br) tags between sentences? They work just like the other tags so it might help with your paragraph problem :D
Aside from that of course, I feel extremely fortunate to have people reviewing this story so frequently and I am really happy, and surprised, by how much good freed back I\'ve been getting. I\'ve gotten some really nice comments about the Originality of this story that make me really want to stick to this story!

I really like your \"cookie cutter\" reference and I\'ve noticed it a lot in my own stories lately; and where it is easier to color inside the lines, it\'s always more fun to just scribble all over the page with every color in the box. However, a random scribble is still just a scribble, so adding some sense and order to the mix makes for a very interesting picture.

Intimidate is a first I must say, I don\'t know if anyone has ever told me that before and I honestly don\'t know how to reply to that statement... Regardless, I\'m grateful for your time :) The quotes are a lot of fun to find, and copy down, and add to episodes. A lot of the quotes I use lately are from people I know personally, which makes them more personal and it means more to me.

Thank you so much for your review, you make a lot of points that I really appreciate. I pride myself on quick updates, updates that I\'m sorry to say I haven\'t been able to keep up with in my first fanfic... Very tragic, but I\'m trying to get back into fanfiction; I am an entertainer, after all XD

Thanks so much for your time, yours thoughts, and your review!!



Title: The Girl Who Fell From The Sky by DestinyGirl
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

One day on Destiny Islands, Sora and Riku saw a girl fall from the sky, Kairi. Little did they know, that they were befriending a Princess of Heart... Short One-Shot

Kairi&Sora


Category: Non-Naruto Fiction > Kingdom Hearts
Characters: None
Genres: Fantasy, General, Mystery
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 595 | Read count: 1298 [Report This]
Published: 20/01/12 | Updated: 20/01/12


Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed Liked
Date: 20/01/12 Title: Chapter 1: Princess of Heart

Absolutely adorable

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing!



Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed Liked
Date: 20/01/12 Title: Chapter 1: Princess of Heart

And it cuts off my review.. ugh .__. Innocently well written! I love their coupling; they're so damn adorable! Put a large grin on my face (:

Author's Response: Don't you just hate it when that happens? Thx! I know, too cute for words!:D That's good, it was actually what I was aiming for ^_^ Thx so much for reviewing!!!



Title: Braces by sasuke_n_naruto
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Sasuke and Naruto get their braces stuck together... Again.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Fluff (Shonen-ai/Yaoi)
Characters: Pair SasuNaru
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 810 | Read count: 1679 [Report This]
Published: 05/07/12 | Updated: 05/07/12


Reviewer: xXxTiNkxXx Signed Liked
Date: 07/07/12 Title: Chapter 1: Braces

Naruto and Sasuke always have interesting ways of getting stuck together :P This was a nice spin on that. A very cute situation you set up, I enjoyed reading it (:

Author's Response: Arigato! :D