Real name: ? Then what's the point of pennames?
Membership status: Member
Member since: 01/11/10
Website: http://themoonspack.webs.com/
Beta-reader: Yes
A lovely banner by my sister!
Hey, guys! What’s up? Somehow, you have managed to stumble upon my profile. I don’t know how you got here, but take a look around if you like!
Hmm, I guess this is the part where I start saying some stuff about myself, huh? Well, alright then, let’s get to it!
Penname: My official penname is silverwolf1213. However, I have acquired a plethora of names while on this fabulous site: SW1213, SilverWolf, Wolf-chan, Urufu-chan, Gin-cha, Silver, Silvy, Wolfy… There are probably some others, but you get the idea. You could honestly probably create any nickname for me and I would reply, so long as it is appropriate.
Birthday: December 13, haha, get it? The 1213 from my penname? Haha.
Age: 18, yikes…
Height: Exactly 5 ft, though 5 ft. 1 in. on a good day :)
Weight: Why did I even add this part?
Appearance: Eh... no, I don't want any stalkers, thank you very much.
Likes:
Swimming, in both a competitively and a leisurely sense. Running, since it’s a good way to think and relieve stress. Talking to friends, Sasaui Uchiha, DestinyGirl, and BattyBigSister being the main people from this site that I talk to. Reading novels, though I’m not exactly picky about what I’ll read, but that doesn’t mean I’ll like everything either. Writing, and I mean just in general because it helps me to release my emotions.
Dislikes:
People who are annoying / selfish / mean.
Personality:
I’m actually a pretty nice person. I’m always willing to make friends, so please don’t be afraid to talk to me. In real life, I’m relatively shy and quiet on the outside. On the inside, I’m one of the strangest people ever, and I’m not joking. I can be pretty defensive on some things; if you want to bash my work, my personality, my friends or family, or my way of life, then be prepared for some intense lashing from me. You’ve been warned.
Favorite Things:
Color: Red
Animal: Wolf
Food: Chinese
Sport: Swimming
Movies:
Pirates of the Caribbean
Avatar
And basically, anything Disney or anything sappy-romantic
Books:
The Hunger Games (series) by Suzanne Collins
The Mortal Instruments (series) by Cassandra Clare
The Infernal Devices (series) by Cassandra Clare
Twilight (series) by Stephenie Meyer
Harry Potter (series) by J.K. Rowling
Bands/Artists:
Lady GaGa
P!nk
Selena Gomez
The Script
The Fray
Bruno Mars
Beyoncé
Katy Perry
One Direction
Manga:
Naruto
One Piece
InuYasha
Yu-Gi-Oh!
Things about Naruto:
I'm a sucker for romance. My favorite Naruto couples are: NaruHina, ShikaTema, NejiTen, and SasuSaku.
I dislike Sasuke in Shippuden because he's just a jerk. Seriously, he needs to realize that Itachi wouldn't be dead if he didn't kill him (sorry if I spoiled the manga/anime for anyone). Stop being emo, do not kill Naruto, fall in love with Sakura already, and realize you have issues, man!
Kiba is my husband. Anyone who tries to steal him will feel the wrath of my fangs and claws! However, if you can write a good romance story, then all is forgiven… Not really. Kiba will still be mine, I just won't inflict physical damage.
As I'm sure many people do, I have my own theory on the ending of the Naruto series. I think the ending of the series will be how Naruto, still wanting peace and to save his friend, goes up against Sasuke, who refuses to accept such a happy world after what his brother went through. They will fight, and after a long battle (probably about ten chapters, I wouldn't be surprised), Naruto and Sasuke will summon the last of their chakra to use their signature moves, Rasengan and Chidori, and the last page of the last chapter of the series will be a clash and a bright light, so we will never know what happened....
Fanfiction:
I’ll read just about anything, though if the story doesn’t initially catch my eye, I’m sorry to say that I may just pass over it. However, if you ask me to read your story, I am always willing to give it a shot.
If you didn’t know, I am a fanfic writer. Look below to see my stories ;) I really appreciate it when people read my works, and I appreciate it even more so when people leave comments. Not because it boosts the read or review counts but because it lets me know whether people find my stories compelling to read. Feedback also lets me know what I’m doing right or wrong. I always accept constructive criticism. But I don’t like bashing or flaming because those methods of reviewing are not helpful whatsoever.
I will review anything I read, and I usually review each individual chapter, though that’s not always a promise. I review the stories I read because, as a writer, I know what it feels like to appreciate feedback from readers. When I leave comments, I always try to be considerate of the person writing the stories, which means that I try not to bash anyone. If a review I give comes out sounding nasty, please forgive me. I just try to review honestly so that I can help the writer.
I am a beta-reader, meaning that if you ever need an editor or someone to help with your story, I am willing to help. I have experience with editing people's works and sharing ideas to help progress the story. So if you ever need help, please feel free to ask!
My TONFA Story
Well, I honestly didn't know what fanfiction was until 2009. My friend had introduced me to Harry Potter fanfiction on harrpotterfanfiction.com, and I fell in love with the entire concept of original ideas incorporated into the normal plotline of an already-existing universe. I was hooked on Harry Potter fanfics for nearly a year. During this time, I began writing alternate universes of my own that followed the Naruto plotline. Only when I look back on it now do I realize how unoriginal and immature my ideas actually were back then, but that's a story for another day. Anyway, one fine summer's day in 2010, I realized that if there were sites for Harry Potter fanfics, then there had to be something for Naruto.
Lo and behold, I was correct. After using the wonderful Google, I found a website of Naruto fanfics that I liked: TONFA The Original Naruto Fanfic Archive.
I remember reading several stories from the Top Tens, and since this was before the Anonymous reviews were brought back, I never left any comments. I only joined in November 2010 after my mom and sister encouraged me to publish my ideas here to see if anyone liked them or could give me advice on how to improve in my writing.
My first publication on the Internet ever was Their Stories, a series of background stories for original characters that I had planned to center my entire fanfic writing career on. Only after reading other stories by other people and new ideas blossoming in my head did I realize how bad my original universe actually was. I always think about taking Their Stories down, but then I always decide to leave it up as a comparison between how I once used to write and how I write now. It's such an improvement, and I really hope I continue to get better.
Since then, I have made several friends on this site, and there are even some people from here who I talk to on other sites as well. Overall, I'm really glad I joined this site.
Links:
FanFiction.Net: http://www.fanfiction.net/~silverwolf1213
Blogger: http://silverwolf1213.blogspot.com
DeviantArt: http://silverwolf1213.deviantart.com
Website: http://themoonspack.webs.com/
COMPLETED STORIES:
Three Days
He spent three days in the hospital, dying a slow and painful death. It wasn't merciful, and it wasn't kind. All anyone could do was watch him wither away until someone pulled the plug.
*Based on true events, a tribute to my deceased grandfather*
CURRENTLY WORKING ON:
A Tale Best Told Dead
The Suiheisen are a crew of rogues who plunder the land and seas. The Blue Tiger of the Mist, the captain of these bandits, is about to show the unsuspecting Leaf ninja that no one should ever underestimate a deadly pirate with a deep vendetta and a dark past.
*Hoist the Colors series*
The Reincarnation of a Legend
Suki Kurohoshi is the next Guardian, the legendary sacred protector. Her duty is to keep the world at peace. But how is she supposed to do that when people are constantly revealing their hatred towards her for something that she did not do?
*Destiny is Calling series, NaruOC*
The White Rose
Kiba Inuzuka has just been sent to the real world, where the world of Naruto is only a manga. Adrianna Sun has just stumbled upon the fictional character, and now she must find a way to keep her life in order while also trying to get Kiba back home.
*Response to challenge, 'Let's Be Original', KibaOC*
Rekindle the Lost Flame
Madara Uchiha has ruled the world for 100 years after he defeated the Five Great Shinobi Nations in the Fourth Great Ninja War. Now a new band of heroes must somehow defeat the last remaining ninja and break the tsukuyomi that has brainwashed the world for a century.
*Response to challenge, 'Joint Stories!'*
Mission of Matrimony
Shikamaru and Temari, who have been friends for eleven years now, are ordered by Tsunade and Gaara to be married to keep the Leaf-Sand treaty alive. How will the two be able to stand being married to one another?
*ShikaTema*
CURRENTLY REVISING:
Freshman Year
The Naruto gang and an original character of mine head to Konoha High for their first year of high school. And they realize that high school is not all that it is cracked up to be. Sirius of Harry Potter and Zuko of Avatar are included in this because I like them :D
*Due to lack of inspiration and possible dysfunctional ideas, I need to revise this*
Their Stories
In a dangerous world filled with shinobi, everyone has a story, and all of them are connected in some way, whether they realize it or not.
*I am hoping to make a series out of this*
ABANDONED:
Pirates of the Mist
*Due to lack of motivation, this will no longer be updated - check out the rewrite A Tale Best Told Dead*
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 29]Basically this is a World War 2 story with most of the well known characters of Naruto. I Would like some suggestions of what the characters should be concerning race and other things such as title. I have some ideas but would like some others.
Category: General Fiction > Character-Centric, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Real World, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Other
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Horror, Humor
Warnings: AU, Death, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 | Completed: No | Word count: 12731 | Read count: 18724 [Report This]
Published: 07/03/11 | Updated: 21/08/12
Date: 12/04/11 Title: Chapter 5: Remembering Debt
My praise is not official until I put it into a review.
Again, good job with this chapter. Anko's past is a mystery that needs to be unraveled, and you have already given a nice start as to how her story in the war will go. The flashback gave a lot of insight, and the ending of the chapter shows how she has grown into a strong woman (as we all know her to be).
Just one thing. You forgot to end the italics after the memory, so everything after the flashback is in italics. It makes the rest of the chapter seem as if it is part of the memory. Just change it when you get the chance, that's all.
Another job well done with this story. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Well thanks for the review, and for your help. And yeah i noticed that, i was going to fix it. Thanks again
Date: 03/05/11 Title: Chapter 8: Motherly Love
Wow, I didn't even think of having Naruto's mom in this. That was a really good portrayal of her. That is a good Uzumaki family scene. I liked it. It showed caring as well as comedy. And it was a good opening for a new mission for Naruto, which should really be exciting. Good job on this chapter, I look forward to seeing what you put out next time. Well done.
Date: 09/04/11 Title: Chapter 4: Mobolize
Yeah, it was short. But it was very informative. Well done. You really showed the stress that the soldiers were going through. And that is important during a war story.
If you still need help, you know how to reach me. And if I come up with any other ideas, I'll alert you immediately. Keep up the good work with your writing!
Author's Response: Thanks, yeah i think that the only issue i have right now is what/who i should write about next. thanks for reviewing oh wondeful reader
Date: 28/03/11 Title: Chapter 3: Planning and Contreversies
Yay! Inuzuka introduction! This was an interesting chapter. Seeing a side of Hiruzen that is not shown in the anime/manga, yet, it still makes sense. Showing the stress amongst the soldiers is a nice turn compared to the previous chapters, where there was a lot of angst and action. Showing these meetings are important too, so I'm glad you put in a little conference meeting in there. This was a good chapter, and I cannot wait to see what you have planned next!
Author's Response: Thanks on the review. Yeah i was thinking of putting up a chapter like this because i thought that a dilemma such as this should be brought up at some point in time. I was also thinking about some of the problems that could have happened and decided on the best way to depict the argument
Date: 17/05/11 Title: Chapter 9: Of Nobles and Theives
Yay, I love the intro to the new characters! At first, I thought Hiashi was gonna be OOC, but then when you described how they had changed, I let it slide. It's good to see them getting along so well, especially during this time of war. And the Uchiha vs. Hyuuga rivalry was very well introduced. Very realistic, I liked it. As always, nice job with this. Can't wait for the next one! Keep up the great work with this story!
Author's Response: Well i aim to please. I am glad that you liked this introduction as well. I thought about it and well a nice Hiashi would not have been typical if he had always been like that, so i decided that he would eventually change to become nicer because come on, who can be mean to Hinata. In times of war we should not strain our relationship with those that we need most. I am glad that the U v. H rivalry seems realistic and i am also glad you liked that. Thank you again for being such a faithful reader
Date: 22/03/11 Title: Chapter 2: Keeps the Doctor Away
Oh my gosh, that was so scary! I was shivering in fear that entire time! Shino was so frightening in this, and then he killed the guy! (Um, who was the guy? Sorry, I just thought that description of him was a little vague) But the suspense in this chapter was very good, and your writing portrays that very well. I'm becoming very interested in this story. And by the way, if you still need help on deciding some characters, you can contact me if you wish. I am beginning to really enjoy this story, and if I could help in any way, that would be awesome. Please keep up the good, and thanks for updating! I really like this story, it's getting even better as it continues!
Author's Response: That\'s what i had planned on going for. The reason i wanted to make Shino this way is because i always pictured him not only as a scientist but as a psychotic one. The man is of really no relevance but i\"ll be honest in saying that i had planned on him being a deathrow inmate so no one would really care if he was gone. Um, yes i might contact you soon regarding characters, mainly because i have some ideas, but would like to have another person\'s opinion and input. I\'ll try and update maybe every week or every other week, i just have to find the time to do so but if you can help me with the characters i may be able to get ahead faster. Thanks for the Review ^_^
Date: 25/08/11 Title: Chapter 11: PHase 1: Infiltration
Oh, haven't seen this in a while ;)
Well, this story still continues to intrigue me. There's always something that leaves me in suspense, and this was no exception. I can't wait to see what happens! I really do enjoy this, and I hope to read more soon! Keep up the awesome work!
Oh, if you ever need help, you can still ask :)
And another side note, I hope wrestling went well, considering there was so much traveling for it.
Author's Response: I aim to please and to keep people wondering. Thank you for the positive review, it does not get old to receive them.\r\n\r\nI will ask for your assistance if i ever need it thank you.\r\n\r\nYeah it went well, last year and all it was probably the best summer for wrestling. Although i didnt have much of a summer. ^_^
Date: 31/05/11 Title: Chapter 10: Revelations
YAY INUZUKA!!!!
Ahem, yes, well.....
Great work. The description of the area was good, and Anko's meeting with the leader was thrilling and chilling at the same time. I was scared for the poor woman, honestly. But I think you captured the heat of the moment really well, and it seemed to flow really well.
Awesome job! I continue to really love this story, it seems so good! Can't wait for more, so update soon please! Loving this so far!
Date: 08/03/11 Title: Chapter 1: Red Death
Wow! This is so original, it's mindblowing! I'm really interested in this now! I can't wait to see how this turns out. This has really caught my attention, and I look forward to reading more.
As for characters.... I think Neji would make a good German general. I also think it would be interesting to see Kiba as an animal trainer, meaning that he trains the hounds to kill and such.
Girls, most likely, should be nurses, since women weren't allowed in the army during that time period. However, you could slip in some scenes where the girls show their crazy feminine power and fight anyway.
Those are my opinions though. I really like this story, and I hope to see more soon. Keep up the tremendous work!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the review means alot. Hmm, the suggestions you have put up are interesting and sorta what i was thinking for the characters along the line. I do definetly plan on showing some feminine power, both in combat such as maybe spies or other things like that. I appreciate your insight and will continue working on it. Thank you.
Date: 28/04/11 Title: Chapter 7: Damned
Ooh. Could this possibly be what I have been waiting for? The arrival of the Inuzuka clan, perhaps? Sweet! Can't wait to see Kiba!
This was a nicely done chapter. Anko's flashback was so eerie and creepy, but it worked so well for this. And it kept close to the manga, with some flare of your own, of course. It was sad about Anko's parents, but it does give her that tough personality that we all know her for.
Good work with this chapter. I always enjoy reading this when a new chapter comes out. You're a very good writer, and this is a great story. Keep up the good work with this, and I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Well thank you for those kind words, i really do appreciate it. Yes, this is a small introduction to the Clan we all love and enjoy and i plan on introducing Kiba after the next chapter. I wanted to find the best idea for a flashback, and that whole idea came up and i thought it would fit perfectly, even though i did not want to think about a little girl witnessing that. Thanks again, and i actually might update really soon.
Rated: U
[Reviews - 3]Category: Non-Naruto Fiction > Original stories
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 4283 | Read count: 2974 [Report This]
Published: 07/03/11 | Updated: 18/03/11
Date: 08/03/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wow.... I like it. For a first chapter of a sequel, that was pretty interesting. I'm upset that there is no action, but hey, fluff is nice in its own way too. Keep on writing, and I hope to see an update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you :) I plan to update this story infrequently, perhaps once or twice a week. Definitely at a more sedate pace. I am definitely enjoying writing it, so you can look forward to the continuing fluff :)
Date: 18/03/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I think the tone was pretty good for this. I think it stayed pretty constant. Your writing was very good. Great job on this!
Author's Response: Thanks. And also thanks for reviewing so consistently :) it gives a sort of \"carrot\" to look forward to when I publish a new chapter. :)
Date: 15/03/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
This is getting quite good. You're explaining things really well, and the characters are slowly beginning to realize their previous lives. You're writing is very good and very creative. Keep up the good work :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing :) I indeed plan to continue writing as I am enjoying it very much. Each character is taking their course wherever it leads them. I shall update again sometime soon, perhaps within a week or so :)
Rated: PG
[Reviews - 34]Me and the nin's chillin... GET AWAY FROM MY MOMS NAIL POLISH ITACHI! Random oneshots for your enjoyment. Rated PG because of slight language and the once-in-a-blue-moon suggestive stuffs I will try to upload at least once a week.
OROCHIMARU! GIVE ME THE REMOTE!! NO MORE SOAPS!!!
Gah, what's with that snake and soaps!?!
Category: OC-centric, MadFic > Parody, General Fiction > Naruto, MadFic > Script Fic, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: All
Genres: Parody
Warnings: OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 | Completed: No | Word count: 7131 | Read count: 17412 [Report This]
Published: 11/03/11 | Updated: 09/10/11
Date: 24/04/11 Title: Chapter 7: Pet Gaara
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Uh.... Well, I did like the beginning. Very interesting. Fantasy Madeline's idea was very good, and your writing was extremely fitting for this idea. And then you passed out from exhaustion.... But even through your randomness and exhaustion, you still managed to make me smile with your writing. That's all that matters, in my opinion at least. Great job with this, and I hope you are having a good amount of sleep!
Author's Response: Up and awake now, might do a re-write for awake-ness ^-^\r\nThanks for the review!\r\n\r\nFantasy Madiline had told me she had \'a dream where Gaara went to the chunin exams in a leash\'. It sort of blossomed into a man eating plant from there
Date: 10/04/11 Title: Chapter 6: Ninja Snakes On A Plane
Aww! You didn't have to thank me. I review what I believe is good, and your writing is just awesome. And don't worry about joining my site. I'm flattered that you would want to though :) You'll be a member in spirit!
Anyways, I just really find this story to be hilarious. It always gets my spirits up because it makes me so happy and always brings a smile to my face. Keep up the great work, you're a great author with a lot of talent for comedy.
Author's Response: Awwwww!!!! Your so sweet! (and modest!) GIAGANTIC GLOMP OF GLOMPATUDE!!!! (Me: what does that mean? Me: I don\'t know! Me: Stop talking guys, I\'m trying to focus!! Me: fine! Dad: Why are you yelling in there Glomp!? Is everything all right? Me: -_-\'\'\') Urufu chan, thank you.\r\n\r\nAnd you DEFINITELY deserve the mention. ^-^
Date: 05/04/11 Title: Chapter 5: Carpools.. Groan
Random... funny... some more randomness.
Gosh, I really love your writings. They make me smile, despite the randomness. I love everything you post!
Author's Response: Thankthankthankthankthathathathathankkkkkkkkk-k-k-k--k-kkkkkk y-y-yy-y-y-y-youooooooooo. (Looks at what I just typed... wtf?) Oh! And Urufu-chan, my computer is being glitchy and not allowing me to join your website.... I also can\'t read the words on the site, but the wolf and fan picks are epic!!! (-_-\'\'\' yah, sorry....)
Date: 27/03/11 Title: Chapter 4: Ninjas, Cell Phones, and Homework Interuptions
Haha, the last two chapters were hilarious! The moral in the last chapter was very good and portrayed very well in that chapter. This chapter was very entertaining. You're an awesome writer, and your chapters always make me smile! :) Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! *Stars in eyes* I\'m glad I can make you smile!! I hope you also know that your reviews always have the same effect on me: I can\'t help but smile like a slightly alcoholic fish (wtf? alcoholic fish? My metaphors stopped making sense -_-\'\'\')\r\nMom: Glomp! There are stars in your eyes and purple lines above your head!! Do you have cataracts!!!\r\nMe: No Mom. I\'m just an Anime freak!\r\nMom: O-kay? Carry on then. *Walks away confused*\r\nThanks again for the review!
Date: 03/07/11 Title: Chapter 10: Who ta hate?! >:D
Yeah, why not torture Sasuke? He deserves it, I can't wait to see how that goes :D
I'm still sure I have some more, but I can't think of any right now, so if I remember, I'll get back to you :)
Author's Response: Hee hee..... stupid Sasuke... hm, that could be a lot of fun.... heeeeeeeeeeee\r\n\r\nTobi: YOURRRRRRRR R RAWR TALKING TAKLIONG LION GOES RAWWWR LIKE ME?!?! :)))))))\r\n\r\n^double chin tobi smile?
Date: 17/03/11 Title: Chapter 2: How to Eat an Apple
*scratches head in confusion* Well, this was certainly interesting. I did laugh, and then I was just like 'What?' But your stories are very funny and I can't seem to get enough of them. Very interesting, and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'ll get right on it cap\'in!
Date: 02/07/11 Title: Chapter 10: Who ta hate?! >:D
Well, I have to agree with Fantasy Madeline on the bit about Ino. She's just not very likable during the series, and she just annoys me. I also tend to find Sakura annoying, for a different reason entirely. She's way too nosy, trying to get involved in everything (I wouldn't be surprised if I'm the only one who thinks this). She's also very fickle; I feel like she can't make up her mind when it comes to her love life. And she needs to get some anger management books or something, yeesh. I'm sure you tortured him enough already, but I don't like Sasuke, or at least in Shippuden. He never accepts the blame when it is his fault. Um... I guess that is it for now. I'm sure there are a couple others, but I can't think of anything else right now.
Author's Response: Okay, so 1 for Ino, 1 for Sakura, is there also a vote for Sasuke here? Sorry, I\'m just trying to keep track. If no Sasuke vote, could you give a third pick? Again, it doesn\'t need to have a reason, just someone you would love to see weak, defenseless, and quivering in fear. (MUAHAHA!!!) Kabuto: *Shudders* Please not me again....
Date: 12/03/11 Title: Chapter 1: Sasuke's Birthday
*snickers evilly* That was so mean, yet it was so funny. I love it when people are mean to Sasuke. He deserves it sometimes. Good job on this! I can't wait to read more one-shots! You're a very creative writer, and your stories have a very humorous flare to them. I like it. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Well, what can I say? Marry Sues are SUCH easy targets *rubs hands together and plots future torture*\r\nThank you for the review!
Date: 06/06/11 Title: Chapter 9: Exam Cookies
Oops... I already started crying. *tears streaming down face* Wah!
Okay, I am good now. So normally, when I read this story, I am always left wondering what happened. For this particular chapter however, I... understood what was going on. *Gasp* I have read so much of your work that I have finally learned how to interpret it. *Gasp again* Nah, maybe it was just the fact that I can relate to it. Exams are in three days for me. *Gasps for a third time*
Wonderful chapter, I liked this one. It made me want some cookies. Cookies area always nice to have before exams.
Author's Response: It seems that this chapter took your breath away (in reference to all the gaspinations) Glad that you can semi understand me now (I don\'t even always understand me...)\r\n\r\nI feel like exams are a menace to society. Teachers complain for months about having to write and mark them, students complain, parents get to sit there and laugh.... no one likes them. I feel like we should abolish exams and just have a party or something for that awful week of doom.\r\n\r\nBut alas, I know this to be impossible... thanks for the review Urufu chan
Date: 29/05/11 Title: Chapter 8: Itachi's Salon Takeover
What else can I possibly say except:
=D
Hmm, yeah, that pretty much sums up the humor of your story and how much I enjoy it.
Author's Response: At first I kept reading that as \"equals \'d\' \" and then I realized it was a smiley face. *Smacks head* Lol, fail moment Glomp. Thank you
Date: 05/09/11 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Aww, poor Kabuto.... :(
Haha, funny as always. I love the randomness of it all. I also love the bit about Justin Bieber *chuckles lightly*
Heehee, I really loved this one. I'm sad to hear that you might not continue it, but that's very understandable. It's alright if you don't continue; this was easily one of the funniest fics I've read in a long time.
Well, nice job on this! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: yoyoyo, yeh, \'glomp\', i think that\'s what she\'s called on here, mention you <3 and the madaline\r\nSorry, THE madeline and THE silvery pup of the future (get it Miss 1213?!?!?!:)\r\nXDXDXD i might continue the storie tho, thanks for da review\r\n~~~ STEFF Xd
Rated: PG
[Reviews - 7]^-^
Category: OC-centric, MadFic > Parody
Characters: Akatsuki
Genres: Parody
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 571 | Read count: 7122 [Report This]
Published: 11/03/11 | Updated: 11/03/11
Date: 12/03/11 Title: Chapter 1: Akatsuki Seven Minutes in Heaven Failure
Hahahahaha! Omg, that was so funny! And it's so true! You were right when you said that none of the Akatsuki members would want to deal with any of these types of games. The reactions you wrote for each character were so accurate; I could definitely see them acting exactly as you portrayed them. My favorite would have to be Deidara... and his little display in front of everyone... This was really good, and I look forward to seeing more of your comedic writings.
Author's Response: Thanks. I really enjoyed writing this one!