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Penname: silverwolf1213 [Contact]
Real name: ? Then what's the point of pennames?
Membership status: Member
Member since: 01/11/10
Website: http://themoonspack.webs.com/
Beta-reader: Yes

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A lovely banner by my sister!


Hey, guys! What’s up? Somehow, you have managed to stumble upon my profile. I don’t know how you got here, but take a look around if you like!

Hmm, I guess this is the part where I start saying some stuff about myself, huh? Well, alright then, let’s get to it!

Penname: My official penname is silverwolf1213. However, I have acquired a plethora of names while on this fabulous site: SW1213, SilverWolf, Wolf-chan, Urufu-chan, Gin-cha, Silver, Silvy, Wolfy… There are probably some others, but you get the idea. You could honestly probably create any nickname for me and I would reply, so long as it is appropriate.

Birthday: December 13, haha, get it? The 1213 from my penname? Haha.

Age: 18, yikes…

Height: Exactly 5 ft, though 5 ft. 1 in. on a good day :)

Weight: Why did I even add this part?

Appearance: Eh... no, I don't want any stalkers, thank you very much.

Likes:

Swimming, in both a competitively and a leisurely sense. Running, since it’s a good way to think and relieve stress. Talking to friends, Sasaui Uchiha, DestinyGirl, and BattyBigSister being the main people from this site that I talk to. Reading novels, though I’m not exactly picky about what I’ll read, but that doesn’t mean I’ll like everything either. Writing, and I mean just in general because it helps me to release my emotions.

Dislikes:

People who are annoying / selfish / mean.

Personality:

I’m actually a pretty nice person. I’m always willing to make friends, so please don’t be afraid to talk to me. In real life, I’m relatively shy and quiet on the outside. On the inside, I’m one of the strangest people ever, and I’m not joking. I can be pretty defensive on some things; if you want to bash my work, my personality, my friends or family, or my way of life, then be prepared for some intense lashing from me. You’ve been warned.

Favorite Things:

Color: Red
Animal: Wolf
Food: Chinese
Sport: Swimming

Movies:
Pirates of the Caribbean
Avatar
And basically, anything Disney or anything sappy-romantic

Books:
The Hunger Games (series) by Suzanne Collins
The Mortal Instruments (series) by Cassandra Clare
The Infernal Devices (series) by Cassandra Clare
Twilight (series) by Stephenie Meyer
Harry Potter (series) by J.K. Rowling

Bands/Artists:
Lady GaGa
P!nk
Selena Gomez
The Script
The Fray
Bruno Mars
Beyoncé
Katy Perry
One Direction

Manga:
Naruto
One Piece
InuYasha
Yu-Gi-Oh!

Things about Naruto:

I'm a sucker for romance. My favorite Naruto couples are: NaruHina, ShikaTema, NejiTen, and SasuSaku.

I dislike Sasuke in Shippuden because he's just a jerk. Seriously, he needs to realize that Itachi wouldn't be dead if he didn't kill him (sorry if I spoiled the manga/anime for anyone). Stop being emo, do not kill Naruto, fall in love with Sakura already, and realize you have issues, man!

Kiba is my husband. Anyone who tries to steal him will feel the wrath of my fangs and claws! However, if you can write a good romance story, then all is forgiven… Not really. Kiba will still be mine, I just won't inflict physical damage.

As I'm sure many people do, I have my own theory on the ending of the Naruto series. I think the ending of the series will be how Naruto, still wanting peace and to save his friend, goes up against Sasuke, who refuses to accept such a happy world after what his brother went through. They will fight, and after a long battle (probably about ten chapters, I wouldn't be surprised), Naruto and Sasuke will summon the last of their chakra to use their signature moves, Rasengan and Chidori, and the last page of the last chapter of the series will be a clash and a bright light, so we will never know what happened....


Fanfiction:

I’ll read just about anything, though if the story doesn’t initially catch my eye, I’m sorry to say that I may just pass over it. However, if you ask me to read your story, I am always willing to give it a shot.

If you didn’t know, I am a fanfic writer. Look below to see my stories ;) I really appreciate it when people read my works, and I appreciate it even more so when people leave comments. Not because it boosts the read or review counts but because it lets me know whether people find my stories compelling to read. Feedback also lets me know what I’m doing right or wrong. I always accept constructive criticism. But I don’t like bashing or flaming because those methods of reviewing are not helpful whatsoever.

I will review anything I read, and I usually review each individual chapter, though that’s not always a promise. I review the stories I read because, as a writer, I know what it feels like to appreciate feedback from readers. When I leave comments, I always try to be considerate of the person writing the stories, which means that I try not to bash anyone. If a review I give comes out sounding nasty, please forgive me. I just try to review honestly so that I can help the writer.

I am a beta-reader, meaning that if you ever need an editor or someone to help with your story, I am willing to help. I have experience with editing people's works and sharing ideas to help progress the story. So if you ever need help, please feel free to ask!

My TONFA Story

Well, I honestly didn't know what fanfiction was until 2009. My friend had introduced me to Harry Potter fanfiction on harrpotterfanfiction.com, and I fell in love with the entire concept of original ideas incorporated into the normal plotline of an already-existing universe. I was hooked on Harry Potter fanfics for nearly a year. During this time, I began writing alternate universes of my own that followed the Naruto plotline. Only when I look back on it now do I realize how unoriginal and immature my ideas actually were back then, but that's a story for another day. Anyway, one fine summer's day in 2010, I realized that if there were sites for Harry Potter fanfics, then there had to be something for Naruto.

Lo and behold, I was correct. After using the wonderful Google, I found a website of Naruto fanfics that I liked: TONFA The Original Naruto Fanfic Archive.

I remember reading several stories from the Top Tens, and since this was before the Anonymous reviews were brought back, I never left any comments. I only joined in November 2010 after my mom and sister encouraged me to publish my ideas here to see if anyone liked them or could give me advice on how to improve in my writing.

My first publication on the Internet ever was Their Stories, a series of background stories for original characters that I had planned to center my entire fanfic writing career on. Only after reading other stories by other people and new ideas blossoming in my head did I realize how bad my original universe actually was. I always think about taking Their Stories down, but then I always decide to leave it up as a comparison between how I once used to write and how I write now. It's such an improvement, and I really hope I continue to get better.

Since then, I have made several friends on this site, and there are even some people from here who I talk to on other sites as well. Overall, I'm really glad I joined this site.

Links:

FanFiction.Net: http://www.fanfiction.net/~silverwolf1213

Blogger: http://silverwolf1213.blogspot.com

DeviantArt: http://silverwolf1213.deviantart.com

Website: http://themoonspack.webs.com/


COMPLETED STORIES:

Three Days
He spent three days in the hospital, dying a slow and painful death. It wasn't merciful, and it wasn't kind. All anyone could do was watch him wither away until someone pulled the plug.
*Based on true events, a tribute to my deceased grandfather*


CURRENTLY WORKING ON:

A Tale Best Told Dead
The Suiheisen are a crew of rogues who plunder the land and seas. The Blue Tiger of the Mist, the captain of these bandits, is about to show the unsuspecting Leaf ninja that no one should ever underestimate a deadly pirate with a deep vendetta and a dark past.
*Hoist the Colors series*

The Reincarnation of a Legend
Suki Kurohoshi is the next Guardian, the legendary sacred protector. Her duty is to keep the world at peace. But how is she supposed to do that when people are constantly revealing their hatred towards her for something that she did not do?
*Destiny is Calling series, NaruOC*

The White Rose
Kiba Inuzuka has just been sent to the real world, where the world of Naruto is only a manga. Adrianna Sun has just stumbled upon the fictional character, and now she must find a way to keep her life in order while also trying to get Kiba back home.
*Response to challenge, 'Let's Be Original', KibaOC*

Rekindle the Lost Flame
Madara Uchiha has ruled the world for 100 years after he defeated the Five Great Shinobi Nations in the Fourth Great Ninja War. Now a new band of heroes must somehow defeat the last remaining ninja and break the tsukuyomi that has brainwashed the world for a century.
*Response to challenge, 'Joint Stories!'*

Mission of Matrimony
Shikamaru and Temari, who have been friends for eleven years now, are ordered by Tsunade and Gaara to be married to keep the Leaf-Sand treaty alive. How will the two be able to stand being married to one another?
*ShikaTema*


CURRENTLY REVISING:

Freshman Year
The Naruto gang and an original character of mine head to Konoha High for their first year of high school. And they realize that high school is not all that it is cracked up to be. Sirius of Harry Potter and Zuko of Avatar are included in this because I like them :D
*Due to lack of inspiration and possible dysfunctional ideas, I need to revise this*

Their Stories
In a dangerous world filled with shinobi, everyone has a story, and all of them are connected in some way, whether they realize it or not.
*I am hoping to make a series out of this*


ABANDONED:

Pirates of the Mist
*Due to lack of motivation, this will no longer be updated - check out the rewrite A Tale Best Told Dead*



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Stories by silverwolf1213 [15]
Series by silverwolf1213 [3]
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Title: Beneath the Wings of an Angel by BurnedRose55
Rated: 18 [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Ok well I accidentally deleted my last story after I typed an AMAZING second chapter, so here's what was going to happen: Hiro, Ino and Kiba broke Tama out of prison after she was framed for a child's murder, Tama escaped and went to the Land of Ice, but Kiba died. Tama returns four years later as an assassin and bodyguard to the pregnant Lady Keiko, daughter of the Land of Ice's fuedal lord. She is assisted by her new sensei Miyuki, and they both seemed to have some dark plan for Konoha. This story will be what happens while Lady Keiko is staying in Konoha with Miyuki and Tama, and what happened to Tama.
Category: OC-centric
Characters: None
Genres: Drama, General, Mystery, Tragedy
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 324 | Read count: 596 [Report This]
Published: 27/02/11 | Updated: 27/02/11


Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed
Date: 27/02/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Plan

Well, I read that story you deleted, and I really liked it. Just thought I'd say, in case you didn't see my review. I really like this idea, it sounds like a really interesting plot. But..... I hope you will eventually post the first two chapters before this soon. I read the previous story and the summary for this, and I couldn't follow it. And any future readers will be thoroughly confused. It would have been best to repost the first two chapters before this, but you can still fix it by posting them soon. It's a really good story, and it would be a shame if you received criticism because you didn't post the first two chapters first. Please don't hate me, I feel really bad for being so serious.



Title: Knights, and Castles and Reincarnation, (oh my) -_- by Randomguy
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Just a little story I thought of. I tried to make it funny. Also, if you don't like it, tell me. Explicitly. let me know EXACTLY what you don't like. If you do like it, let me know EXACTLY what you do like. Or leave a happy face, depending on your preference :).
Category: Non-Naruto Fiction > Original stories
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 6493 | Read count: 6245 [Report This]
Published: 02/03/11 | Updated: 03/03/11


Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed Liked
Date: 04/03/11 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! It's over! This was so good! The action was everything I expected and more! You beat my expectations! :D As much as I want a sequel, I think it would be good to end it here. Sequels are hard to write, and to have the characters be reborn again is a little... not original now. But you're the writer, so it is up to you. Fantastic job on this story, I really loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you :) Yes, I feel now is as good a place to stop as any, mainly because my creativity needs to take a breather. I\'m glad the action was suitably active. :) Yeah, I\'ve always wanted to do \"The horribly tragedy, what it\'s effects are in the next life.\" But if I do that\'ll be a long way down the road. To quote idioms \"enough is enough\" and \"time to quiet while I\'m ahead\". I\'m glad you enjoyed my little story :)



Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed Liked
Date: 03/03/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ugh... making me wait for the action *grumble grumble*. Good chapter. You put in a lot of development for both the characters and the plot. But with all that is going on, I think it would be a good idea to have someone take the time to thoroughly explain what the plan is. It was only a little hard to follow because so much is happening at the same time. Slow down a bit, please. But it was still a good chapter, so I hope an update comes soon!

Author's Response: Hmm good advice. I think I\'ll have the purple robed sorcerer do a monologue. He knows the most of whats really going on, so it should organize the main points and ideas. I\'m thinking I should use chapter 4 to clarify things, before plunging into the action (yes it\'s not a myth, there will be action) in chapter 5. I\'m a fan of a long build up to a (hopefully) epic confrontation. Thank you for reading and reviewing :)



Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed Liked
Date: 03/03/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yay! This chapter was better than the first one! And now I can say that I do like this story! Your characters are developing well, and the plot, from what is shown, looks really good. I'm so excited to see how this turns out!

Author's Response: Thank you :) I\'m trying to write a story thats fun to read and to write (it has to be both to be a good one) I still haven\'t decided which way to go with the ending, but I can tell you that I\'ll definitely continue the plot into the character\'s next lives.



Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed
Date: 02/03/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmm... well, it does seem interesting. Just the way you wrote it makes the story seem really magical and full of fantasy. I can't say I like it just because nothing has happened quite yet. I do like the characters, just not sure where the plot is headed. Then again, that should just make the story seem even more suspenseful and interesting. I will say I will continue to read this, so please continue!

Author's Response: Thank you :) I have posted another chapter tonight, and I wouldn\'t mind knowing how it stakes up against the first chapter. The first chapter felt easier to write so that\'s why I ask. Also, thank you again for commenting :) I myself am not yet sure where I\'m taking the plot, beyond some very general goals. I have two endings in mind, and I still haven\'t chosen one to go with, so we\'ll see where it ends up :)



Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed Liked
Date: 03/03/11 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hooray! This was very informative! I'm happy now. Good job on this, it actually does take a lot to explain a plot without seeming boring. But it worked for this scene. You did awesome! Now, I will eagerly await the upcoming action!

Author's Response: Thank you :) It felt better to add some element of changeability to the plan. ALso I\'m working on the action now. I hope it doesn\'t disappoint.



Title: Children of Magic by Fantasy Madeline
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Hi! It's Fantasy Madeline's younger prodigy of a sister again!

A girl. 1 girl. Mad-eye Moody. Triwizard tournament with 5 participants. Hermione. Ron. The ANBU. Harry Potter. Not you're usual crossover story.

'Ron stop staring! Don't look up, never make eye contact, and don't say a word. Honestly have you never read Hogwarts a history? You never make conversation with shinobi. Harry stop gaping at it!'
Category: OC-centric, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Crossovers
Characters: OC
Genres: Fantasy
Warnings: AU
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 2340 | Read count: 3980 [Report This]
Published: 04/03/11 | Updated: 04/04/11


Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed Liked
Date: 04/03/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

May I just say.... that was a freaking amazing entrance.

I'm so excited to see more of this! Just the way you introduced the shinobi makes everything seem so much more exciting!

Now, while I'm writing this, I figure I might as well tell you to tell your sister that she is an amazing writer. She should give herself a little more credit than that in terms of her stories. However, she is the writer, so I guess it is up to her what she wants to do with her stories.

Can I also ask.... how much younger are you than Fantasy Madeline? She's twelve... how old could you be that you are still such a good writer?

Anyways, off topic. Again, this is a really good intro. I expect to see an even better second chapter! Great job on this, and I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: OMG i published this two minutes ago, and I have 2 reads. you reviewed in less than 5 minutes. You Rule! Yea, she\'s sort of self concious about her writing, but I have seen her do amazing things with words, so much that she goes to a school for gifted children on a scholarship. Showoff.\r\nI am 11 years old, twelve in October. Thanks for saying I\'m good, my sis has been giving me writing tips everyday after school for a year now. =) i will update super soon, but i think my sis is getting anoyed i\'m using her good writing computer. (seriously. She has a different computer just for writing. Who does that?) Thanks again. Bye!



Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed Liked
Date: 05/04/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Haha, I love everyone's reactions to Amanda. Priceless.... I'm glad you came back to update. This was very good. Can't wait to see what awaits Amanda in the meeting! Keep up the good work, and I hope you update sooner this time! ;)

Author's Response: Thanks.I really love where this is going. Next chapter is the staff meeting, that will be fun to write. =)



Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed Liked
Date: 11/03/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Haha, I should have seen that coming. It figures there would be a Hatake daughter in this story. Nice job on this. I liked how you made all the other students completely and utterly afraid of the Progeny of Chakra. It's so typical of Harry and his friends, yet it's so believable. I'm a little worried about Gaara... in that last line, he smiled... smiled?! Usually, it means something bad. I'm kinda scared. Anyways, good job on this, and I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Me and my sister share similar views on characters. Yea i guesss it\'s always kakashi, but hey. He\'s kakashi. He has...spunk. You are totally right in thinking garra smiling is a bad sign. It usually means he\'s going to enjoy watching someone suffer. I am going to have fun with the students and staff. They will never want to even here the word \'Shinobi\' again... *mutters of into the distance plotting*



Title: High School Never Ends by FireFox
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 10]
Summary: Your typical high school story with Naruto characters.Someone isn't who they say they are, someone ends up pregnant, there's a murderer in Konoha, and another ends up homosexual.What other dramas will be uncovered? Read to see the drama and dark secrets behind each character. My OC included.
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > High School Fics, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: AU
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 5062 | Read count: 4728 [Report This]
Published: 05/03/11 | Updated: 08/03/11


Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed Liked
Date: 07/03/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

It was not boring at all! I love your style of writing! It's so good.

This chapter was full of comedy, and I couldn't stop laughing at some parts. But it was also very informative, which is good as well. Overall, a fantastic chapter!

I think third person is best. At least that way, the writing isn't so much focused on one character. Yes, the main character is obviously important, but it is sometimes hard to write the feelings of other characters in when the story is in first person. That's my opinion though; you are the writer, so it is your decision.

Anyways, incredible chapter, and I look forward to an update!

Author's Response: Yay:) I am very glad you enjoyed it! I was worried that it would be almost too informative, and that some people would have just left the story. This makes me very happy:) I do agree with you about the 3rd person, its probably the style I write best in. I\'m one to like writing other peoples\' feelings haha:) I\'ll work on updating soon! I have to go to school now O: but I shall work on it asap:) thanks again for always reviewing:)



Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed
Date: 06/03/11 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

No no no, please don't misinterpret what I was saying. I really don't mind about this title. I honestly might not have read this story if the title was different. It caught my eye, and I just thought it was a crazy coincidence. Please keep the title the same.

Author's Response: Hahha okay O: I didn\'t think you were mad, I just did not want it to bother you at all:) But I shall keep it the same<3



Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed Liked
Date: 06/03/11 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Woah... that's weird. The title of this story is the same title of my high school series. Crazy... Great minds think alike, I suppose ;D

Now, onto the story.

I love it! The summary makes me all suspenseful because you've said everything that is going to happen. And just by reading the summary, I can tell that this story is going to be good. It brings up real high school drama; I'm talking legitimate high school drama. And you wrote the characters very close to their personalities, which is also important. Overall, I was very pleased with this first chapter. I have great expectations for this story, and I know you'll surpass them easily! Keep up the great work, and I hope to see an update soon!

Author's Response: O: I\'m sorry they are the same O: hahaha, I can change mine if you wish:) I would not want you angry because of this O: hahah:) \r\n\r\nThank you very much:) I figured I should add in some real life high school drama rather than having it just all happy-go-lucky, nothing bad happens, high school O::) I will try to add more details about the characters as well in the next on-coming chapters:) I hope I can met your expectations! Thank you very much for the review and I\'ll be sure to update ASAP:) \r\n



Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed Liked
Date: 09/03/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I loved this chapter! The whole facebook thing was totally realistic! I love how you depict the characters. You write them amazingly accurately, which is a real accomplishment considering the story is not in the same setting as the manga/anime. Everything in this chapter was just awesome! Keep up the great work, and I hope to see another chappie up soon!



Title: Love Circles by Nejisgirl
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 38]
Summary: It took a long time for her to understand that he was not going to come back. Her time alone made her heart cold. It would take someone special to put it back together, but now after all these years could she really let someone in.
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Sasuke and Sakura
Characters: All
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 | Completed: No | Word count: 59421 | Read count: 75016 [Report This]
Published: 06/03/11 | Updated: 18/10/11


Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed Liked
Date: 03/05/11 Title: Love Circles

Wow, what an ending to that battle. Sasuke was very mature when it came to breaking Karin's heart. And who knew Karin had a thing for Jugo? I didn't see that one coming; how very original of you. Poor Suigetsu, perhaps he will never find love. Now I want to know what will happen to Danzo. Sasuke and Itachi still won't let the girls fight! That's so unfair! I hope things work out though. Good job with this chapter. Keep up the amazing work with this story cuz I continue to enjoy every moment of it!

Author's Response: lol Karin and Jugo was a last minute decision!!! Thx for reviewing, im glad you like it, more to come soon.



Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed Liked
Date: 01/05/11 Title: Love Circles

I was so in suspense during the first part, and when I found out it was Team Hawk, I was so shocked. I didn't see that coming. I can't believe you actually brought in the fan-made legendary Karin vs. Sakura. I've never read one, so I'm really interested in seeing how it proceeds. Keep up the good work with this!

Author's Response: thank you!! I am not 100% sure how to write a fight scene but I just hope I\'ll succeed with this one



Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed Liked
Date: 27/04/11 Title: Love Circles

*face-palm* Oh gosh Ino. I can't believe she didn't realize that she was naked.

And OMG! I love Pirates of the Caribbean! Best movies eva! Jack Sparrow's a hottie!

And that was a very good episode of Desperate Housewives, might I add. ;D

I can't wait to see how the babysitting situation goes. That should be mighty interesting. And the cute little fluff going on between the couples is very sweet! I love adorable romances like this! Keep up the good work with this story!

Author's Response: LOL, Ino was in one of her\"whatever\" moments and that caused her not to care about answering the door in the nude. Oh and I loooove Jack Sparrow. He is HOT! lol \"why is the rum always gone?!\" oh yeah and desperate housewives seemed like the perfect show for Ino to get in to, I\'m not sure why I put her in the nude, maybe cos there was no one in her house and she did not care at all and she wanted to relax lol :)\r\n\r\nanyways thank you so much for reveiwing!!! I\'ll update more soon!!



Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed Liked
Date: 18/04/11 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Surprising Sakura

OMG!!! Sasuke was dancing in a leopard thong?! WHAT?! I didn't actually think he would put it on!

That little scene that Sakura and Sasuke had of understanding was very touching, may I say. It was so cute how they understand each other.

And then Sasuke's thong fell off... O_O

Author's Response: thank you for reviewing!!



Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed Liked
Date: 17/04/11 Title: Chapter 23: chapter 23 all smiles

Haha, omg, that was funny. Poor Tobi. I'm glad you dedicated a chapter to him. He deserves to be noticed. I hope things work out for him, I really do.

Haha, Snickers *chuckles to self* I should have known Tobi would have a puppy named Snickers. It's just so fitting!



Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed Liked
Date: 15/04/11 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Preparing

Haha, gosh, you make me love Ino in this. The entire thing was hilarious. I love the end where Itachi wants the leopard print thong. :D I totally knew it! Ahem... yeah, anyways, another excellent job well done. Keep up the good work with this story! I hope you get the chance to update soon cuz I love this story!



Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed Liked
Date: 12/04/11 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 making plans

Haha, this chapter was so very very awkward for the Uchiha men, and it made me laugh so much. The thought of Tsunade doing toturous things to the Uchiha was very realistic, but you wrote it so humorously that the idea was even more genius!

Awww! Sasuke and Sakura finally kissed! It's about time, my goodness. And the whole thing with the dancing was very funny and very cute. And then of course Sasuke's perverted mind. Kinda didn't see that coming, but I loved it anyway.

Excellent job with this chapter! I can't wait to see what you come up with for the next chappie! Keep up the good work with everything!



Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed Liked
Date: 30/03/11 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Misunderstanding

Wow. Just... hilarious. Ino as Deidara. Should've seen that one coming. And I'm so happy everyone is together now and not all separated and whatnot. Now I can't wait to see what happens with Itachi. Good job on this! I love every minute of this story, so please update soon and keep up the phenomenal work with this!

Author's Response: thank you so much again for reviewing!!!



Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed Liked
Date: 31/03/11 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Getting the plan in to action

I like the fact that Konan has monkey outfits in her closet :) And the action continues! Whoo! Can't wait for the next one! I love your speedy updates, they make me so happy! I continue to love this story so much, you always beat my expectations! Continue on with your greatness!

Author's Response: thank you! Tomorrow I will have chapter 18 done and I will try to write chapter 19 as well!



Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed Liked
Date: 27/03/11 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 in the closet

Yay! This was awesome! Sakura's plan to make Itachi uncomfortable was the best idea yet! Another awesome chapter to add to the collection! Keep up the good work because I am in love with this story!

Author's Response: thank you so much!!!!



Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed Liked
Date: 25/03/11 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 wondering

Omg! This was so funny! Poor poor Deidara. Bunny boxers! :D And Pein kind of has a dirty mind....

The whole scene with Kisame and his girl was so adorable! Who would have thought that Shark Man could love? So cute!

And I hope Ino finds Sakura soon. The poor girl's gone through so much just to locate her friend.

This was an awesome chapter! I loved every bit of it! Great job, and I hope you update another amazing chapter really really soon!



Reviewer: silverwolf1213 Signed Liked
Date: 21/03/11 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 crazy plan, stupid dope and the bold blonde

Whoo! Disney Channel references! Gotta love 'em. Anyways, this was a very good chapter. Ino was very brave and very snippy. I loved it! And then Naruto and his randomness... oh, what a silly goose. And I can't wait to see how Konan and Sakura are going to deal with all of this. I'm very excited to see what happens with Itachi. Update soon, because now I'm all in suspense and what not! Keep up the great work, and thanks for posting and making my day so much better!

Author's Response: thank you!!!!!!