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Thunder and Swirls by Kamisori

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Chapter notes: *puppy eyes* I've never had so many reviews for this story! Cookies for everyone! ^o^ *passes out cookies* No, really, this is awesome! Thank you all so much! =^.^=

There has been a Key change!

KEY:
"This" = Talking
This = Thoughts (mostly)
*New addition to the key!* = Telepathy
~*~*~ = Scene Change

Read on!
Kaminari’s mouth hung open as she looked at the light brown haired girl in front of her. Gathering her wits, Kaminari grinned widely before launching herself at the girl and glomping her. “Jessica! It’s you! It’s really you!” Joyously cried Kaminari.

Jessica returned the hug. “Yeah, it’s me alright! How’ve you been, Nari?” Jessica said while grinning madly. Kaminari couldn’t hold her excitement as she grabbed her friend’s hand and pulled her to the tree in back of her house. The tree over looked a garden that was half full of blossoming herbs, and half full of vegetables.

Kaminari and Jessica sat on one of tree’s sturdy branches as Kaminari told her all that has happened since she seen Jessica last. There was a lot to tell considering Kaminari hasn’t seen her old friend since she was six.

“You transformed into a nude version of the guy?!” Jessica exclaimed before laughing out loudly. Kaminari laughed along with Jessica.

“Yeah! And that’s not the best part! After that, my teacher called Aunt Kasumi to tell her what I’ve done, right?” Kaminari started. Jessica laughed harder.

“Oh god, he called her?! What did she say?” Asked Jessica through a fit of giggles.

“He quickly put me on the phone, and I switched on the speaker phone, right? Everyone in the classroom got to hear Kasumi congratulate on a transformation well made!” The duo laughed out together once again.

“Ah, I needed that laugh.” Jessica said as she swung her legs over the side of the sturdy branch. Kaminari nodded in agreement.

“Yeah…so Jessica.” Kaminari started as she looked at her friend. “How is training with members of my clan going for you?” Jessica winced slightly.

“I never been trained so hard in my life!” Jessica exclaimed with a lazy grin. “But they do know their stuff, back in the cloud village.” Jessica mused mostly to herself. Kaminari chuckled lightheartedly.

“That’s what happens when you’re an honorary member of the Hiyori clan, Jessica. They treat you like every other clan member.” Kaminari looked up at the clouds in the sky. “Yeah, hard to believe most of my clan is in the village hidden in the clouds, huh?” Asked Kaminari to no one in particular. Jessica nodded her agreement. Kaminari turned her attention back to her friend. “Speaking of training, did you ever master it?”

Jessica smirked at that question. *What do you think?* Kaminari’s eyes widened as she nearly fell out of the tree. “I-I heard your voice in my head!” Kaminari exclaimed stupidly. An excited look appeared on Kaminari’s face.

*Does this mean you’ve mastered telepathy and telekinesis?!* Kaminari thought. Jessica winced before smirking again.

*Not so loud! I can hear your thoughts clearly enough without you screaming them. And your answer is yes.* Thought Jessica to Kaminari. “That’s so cool!” Kaminari exclaimed again. Jessica’s lazy grin returned to her face.

“Yeah, I guess.”

“You two having fun up there?” Suddenly asked a voice. The young Hiyori and Kamiya looked down to see who was talking. Kaminari gained and excited grin.

“Mr. and Mrs. Kamiya! And…” Kaminari tilted her head in confusion as she looked at the nine year old boy. “That’s not Kenji, is it?” Chizu nodded. Kaminari’s eyes widened as she fell out of the tree, but landed on her feet. “No way! The last time I saw him he was this big!” Kaminari said as she moved her hands a foot apart.

“Yes,” Started Chizu, “it’s amazing how the time flies.” Chizu said as she put a hand on her son’s head. Jessica jumped out of the tree and landed next to Kaminari. “Well, you two spent no time catching up. Just like the old days.” Chizu said playfully. “I remember when you two would run around in nothing but your diapers.”

Jessica and Kaminari flushed in embarrassment. “Mom!” Jessica whined. Yusuke laughed as his daughter’s embarrassment. Kaminari pouted at the laughing Kamiya.

“It’s not funny!” Whined Kaminari as her blush increased its intensity.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Kaminari rubbed her forehead with her right hand as her left hand clamped firmly on a dog’s leash. Naruto’s been nothing but a pain in the ass today! First when collecting trash of a river; he slips, gets saved by brooding-boy, then acts like a complete ass about it! Then when picking weeds out of a lady’s garden, he picks the lady flowers instead! And now…

With stress mark donning her face, Kaminari watches as a huge dog drags Naruto towards a mine field. he picks the biggest dog that could drag him anywhere…damn pms… Kaminari sighed as she picked up her dog, a little yellow Labrador pup named Sunny, and ran in front of Naruto’s dog.

“SIT!” Shouted Kaminari in an angry and commanding voice. All dogs in the immediate vicinity, sat down quickly. Sunny whimpered in Kaminari’s arms. Kaminari answered his whimper by calmly scratching behind his left ear; making him wag his tail happily. “Naruto,” Calmly started Kaminari, “you have to show him who’s the Alpha if he doesn’t behave. Now here,” She said taking Naruto’s dog as she gave him Sunny. “You take Sunny, and I’ll take Tiny. Come on Tiny.” She said as the big dog followed her eagerly.

They walked there dogs to the park, just like they where suppose to and let them off their leashes for a while. Kaminari found the nearest bench and flopped down on it while sighing. It’s truly, been one hell of a day. She thought as she looked up at the clouds in the sky. She began to understand, on some level, why Shikamaru liked looking at them so much. It was surprisingly relaxing.

Kaminari blinked as she felt some weight in her lap. Looking down, there was Sunny snuggling up in her lap, while Tiny’s head took up most of her right knee. Subconsciously, she began to rub behind Tiny’s left ear; who in return, began wagging her tail vigorously. Kaminari returned her attention to the clouds.

After being in the park for a while, squad seven went back to the old guys house to drop off his dogs. The man thanked the squad as team seven left his house. Kakashi-sensei looked up in the sky before dismissing his team. Despite training being over, Kaminari couldn’t help but feel that the day’s excitement wasn’t over.
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