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A Mission Gone Wrong by dirtdevil76

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Story notes: Characters reduced according to the rules. Please choose the eight most prominent characters/pairs/groups for your fic, Bushtuckapenguin, admin, 24/05/08
Chapter notes: I do not own Naruto but I do own some of the new characters anyway I hope you like this!
(Itachi was walking along a path with two other ninja's who were siblings there names were Yumi Huron who was 14 and there was Bazeki Huron who was 12.Bazeki was'nt like his older sister he's more stubborn and he's a B-Ranked ninja while Yumi is a C-Ranked ninja they are both strong but Yumi has more of a soft side to her other then a stubborn side like her little brother.Anyways Itachi stops right in the path)

Itachi:Yumi,Bazeki.

Yumi:What is it Itachi?

Itachi:You know that Naruto Uzumaki?

Bazeki:You mean that little twerp that has the nine tailed for spirit sealed inside him that you want so badly?

Yumi:Bazeki!You should'nt be the one talking when your younger!

Bazeki:Shut up

Itachi:Anyways I got a mission for you two.Are you in?

(Bazeki crosses his arms and lifts an eyebrow)

Bazeki:Depends....what's in it for us?

Itachi:I'll let you guys free

Bazeki:Whatever, will do it

Itachi:I can count on you two to complete this mission

Bazeki:You don't have to worry don't forget i'm a B-Ranked ninja, you just have to watch out for C-Ranked over there you have to watch

Yumi:What?!?Why do you have to watch me?!?!?!

Bazeki:You fall for every boy you meet on missions!

Yumi:Do not!

Bazeki:Remeber that time at the waterfall village?

Yumi:That was one time!And the boy we had to get was pretty cute....

Bazeki:Whatever...

(Yumi then senses some people coming*she can sense people no she's not part dog or anything she was just born with it*)

Yumi:I sense about 4 people coming and they are pretty strong

Bazeki:Itachi let's pretend were fighting

Yumi:Here i'll cut my arm and let them think Itachi attacked us

Itachi:You guys got some good ideas

Bazeki:Let's get ready

(Yumi cuts her arm all the way down and cuts a little part of her cheek she then lays down on the ground and screams then Itachi and Bazeki start to fight without hurting each other surverly)

*With Naruto*

(Naruto,Tenten,Neji,and Rock Lee were walking along the same path Itachi,Yumi,and Bazeki were when they heard a scream)

Naruto:What was that

Rock Lee:Sounds like someone's introuble

Neji:I'll use bakugan

(Neji uses bakugan to see ahead)

Neji:Seems like there 2people fighting up ahead and one who is hurt the one guy is Itachi

(Naruto starts to run up ahead and the rest follow.They come upon Itachi,Yumi,and Bazeki)

Itachi:Seems like there's company

Bazeki:Shut up you basterd!

(Bazeki then uses his shirken to hit Itachi but Itachi dodges it and runs away)

Bazeki:Ya you better run!

(Bazeki turns around to his sis)

Bazeki:You ok

Yumi:I think so all I got was a couple cuts

Naruto:What's going on

Bazeki:That Itachi ambushed us and tryed to capture us to use are chakera!

Naruto:I see...

Tenten:Who are you two?I'v never seen you guys before

Yumi:My name is Yumi Huron that's my lil bro Bazeki

Rock Lee:How old are you two?

Yumi:I'm 14 and he's 12

Naruto:Hey your not hurt are you since your bleeding a lot

Yumi:I'm just fine

(Yumi then takes out a band aid and puts it on her cheeck then wraps one off the longer tape like band aid around her arm)

Yumi:There we go all beter

Rock Lee*In his mind*:Wow she's pretty cute...

(Bazeki can read minds and he read Rock Lee's)

Bazeki:Did you just say my sisters cute?!?!?!

Rock Lee:No

Bazeki:I can read minds you know

Rock Lee:Damn...

Bazeki:No one compliments my sister

Rock Lee:Why not

Bazeki:Becuase when she's 16 she's suppose to be married off to this prince in a village are parents had arranged it for her intill they had died

Yumi:I'm not getting married to Prince Akai I don't like him!

Bazeki:Your gonna have to mom and dad had arranged it for you ever since you both were 5!

Yumi:Yeah well there dead now and so they can't tell me what to do and what not to do!

Bazeki:That's why they had left me in charge of you

Yumi:Whatever...

Naruto:So Yumi you have to be married off to this prince

Yumi:Mmmmhm but I don't want to he's not at all nice and I don't at all like him!

Bazeki:Sis you could be a princess like you've always dreamed

Yumi:That's when I was 8!I don't care if I become a princess,queen,or hokage it does'nt matter to me

Naruto:So if a village had asked you to become a hokage you would'nt

Yumi:Ya pretty much

Naruto:Why not

Yumi:I don't want to be in charge of any village or anything it's not what I like

Naruto:Well I wanna be a hokage some day

Yumi:Why's that

Naruto:Becuase,I wanna be remembered as a great leader

Yumi:You can be remembered a great leader even if your not a hokage but you worked hard

Naruto:Can we talk

Yumi:Sure

(Naruto and Yumi start to walk down a path.Naruto puts his hands in his pocket and begins to speak)

Naruto:The reason I want to become Hokage is becuase when I was born the forth hokage of my village had sealed this creature called the nine tailed fox inside of me

Yumi:I'v heard of the nine tailed fox

Naruto:You have

Yumi:Ya

Naruto:Cool anyways the forth hokage gave all his power to seal the spirit with in me and then he was killed after that I grew up alone never had no one around no one in the village ever was nice to me I was mostly an outsider intill I had went to the acadamy

Yumi:Why wer'nt you an outsider anymore after that

Naruto:I had proved my point on how good I am and show people i'm not who they think I am

Yumi:I see...I know we just met and all but why are you being so nice?

Naruto:Becuase I feel that I can trust you...

(Yumi blushes and smiles.Bazeki is watching the whole thing from a distance)

Bazeki:Great Yumi keep on looking more and more defensive around him and we'll have him for sure in no time

(Yumi and Naruto start to walk back to the rest of the group)

Naruto:Say Yumi,Bazeki do you wanna come with us back to are village

Yumi:Sure we'd love to

Naruto:Great then say I never got to introduce my name to you two anyways i'm Naruto Uzumaki

Yumi:Well hello Naruto Uzumaki it's nice to be one of your friends

Naruto:Ya it is is'nt it...

(Yumi then starts to develop a crush on Naruto)

Yumi*In her mind*:Damn I can't like Naruto I have orders from Itachi to capture him no matter what I can't fall in love!
Chapter end notes: ok I hope you guys liked that anyways Yumi and that's me anyways i'm actually suppose to be married off to Itachi that's why we were around him but just so Naruto and them don't know we come up with a different name got it good
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