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Eternity's Dismaying Heart. by KiloniChatty

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Chapter notes: Omgosh! Im so sorrie it took forever. BTW MIKI, I DID NOT DITCH! I just lost my flashdrive with this chapter IN it. >>; Im sorrie for teh lateness though, I just found my flashdrive....on the counter right infront of my nose after school right nao. Wow, I needa' get that checked. Anyway....ENJOY!!! (Btw, Im already close to finishing my third chapter. ;D)
Eternity’s Dismaying Heart –Moving in…..again-

The ageless creation of time and the turns, rotations, and revolutions of the earth around the sun soon blend together from the last time our characters moved into new surroundings. And with the beauty of a girl came fame, and lots of it. So we join our people in another adventure of their lives that will change it dramatically with the support of a few, or a lot, of friends by their sides.

Around this time though, many things have happened already, like the graduation of Kamichi and Liwai; and Akito and Kion becoming official ninja’s and Akito and Kion becoming Chunnin like the others his age. This place has kept their spirits high with their pride for being the first outsiders of Village Hidden in the Lightning to become graduates of their academy, causing quite a stir as Kamichi still finds a way to pull herself into all this trouble. Which all of you know will pull Akito into it to save his sister yet again and again over the years.

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An older version of Kamichi smiled at all her friends weakly, hugging each one of the large group gathered outside her house. Her skin had a light porcelain glow, that no matter how much she tanned, never got golden. Her hair was down to her shoulders and was a dark chocolate shade, but at the tips of the curly hair was shockingly white. But different from last time, her features matured more, slimming up into fine points with pouted pink lips and high cheek bones. She was more beautiful than practically any other girl in the village, and got a lot of guy admirers for that too, but the flowers and chocolates never got far too this only 12 year old that looked 16, as her brother would threaten any boy who dared touched her. But Kamichi would just smile at this; knowing that her brother only cared for her.

Kamichi lifted up her shirt’s sleeve to her eyes and dabbed the welling tears away. “I’ll miss you guys so much!” Her voice was cracking up from the emotion of this state. All of her friends…everyone so kind to her over the past 7 years of her life were surrounded around her. Of course, she saved her two best friends, Belia and Niko, for last, hugging them extra tight. “You guys need to PROMISE me that we’ll always stay together!” Kamichi cheered sadly, still hugging them both in a group hug. They were her teammates after all too.

“Ohhh….drama queen! Of course we will!” Replied Niko. Belia just stood quietly, nodding. This caused a true smile to grace the 12 year old Kamichi’s face as she looked at her best friends. And of course, there was Liwai there too, sitting right behind Kamichi the whole time, wagging her tail cheerfully. Liwai has gotten older too like Kamichi, her full height, a staggering 4 if you count her fur, and her coat gleaming white with brown AND black patches now.

It was so ironic today too….the sun was shining immensely bright and not a cloud in sight just like the day they moved in, the day that changed their lives. The older villagers though, seemed a little less tense and relieved now that they were moving out because all the mayhem that usually went on with them here. Things sure will get a lot peaceful around here now.

Akito just drabbled to a few guy friends. His looks have changed too; a once childish face was not sharp and handsome. His black hair straightened out and clung to his face, but one bang sweeping over his eye in an emo-like fashion you could say. Gold piercing eyes seemed cold, but melted if you could get to know him and the res arrow marks on his cheeks still remained as mort Inuzuka received them. Though as his mother wasn’t an Inuzuka, that was probably the explanation for his sister not having the marks, but his father was Inuzuka. The strange thing though was that he never met his father…and every time he brought it up with mom she would find a way to divert the subject. After a while of talking, Kion, the black lab, barked and turned in a circle, getting Akito’s attention.

“What’s up, Ki?” He questioned in a monotone.

Kion bark again and started walking to the moving van. ‘It’s time to go.’ HE would bark and Akito understood him, turning to his friends and saying goodbye for the last time before heading to his Sister and putting a large hand on her should. “Eh, Kami-chan, time to move it.” Akito stated emotionless.

She bobbed her Brown and white head, waving to all her friends, a huge group, before taking Liwai with her into the moving van. Akito and Kion followed, and then their mother entered the drivers’ seat, pulling out of the driveway and pulling to her curb. All of Kamichi’s friends were cheering and waving. Kamichi smiled widely at everyone, waving one last time, as her vision grew blurry. Then her mother pulled away from the curb, descending farther and farther out of town. But Kamichi stared out of the passenger seat window the whole time, a tear or two winding down her high cheeks as memories of all the times her friends and her got into so much trouble and fun and how she was all leaving that now, probably not to return. Liwai on the other hand noted the smell of the salty tears and sat up from the floor, laying her head in Kamichi’s lap.

Kamichi looked down, smiling softly at her Akita companion while she lifted her hand onto her head and stroking it softly. “Heya baby Li, I’m okay.” She cooed gently while Liwai gave her the stink eye for calling her baby. This earned a smile and a laugh from Kamichi.

The whole rest of the ride it was silent, mostly because Kamichi was asleep and Akito was drugged into his iPod, but we all probably know that he was half asleep. But stopping at those Village gates Kion and Liwai shot up fromt their sleeping state, barking their heads off and thus waking the teen and preteen.

“Huh? We there yet?” Droned a sleepy, brunette and ivory haired preteen.

Her mother on the other hand was busy signing a few papers that were handed to her through the window of the moving van by a few shinobi guards at the gate. Her brows seemed furrowed as she read them over and scribbled her initials here and there.

Akito on the other hand just rubbed his eyes and turned off his iPod, which he found out was still on, and yawned, stretching out his arms. “Whoopee, can’t wait.” He said in an utmost bored manner. Like he didn’t want to be back here.

Their mother shot Akito a ‘don’t get me started’ look while handing all the signed papers back to one of the Shinobi and waiting for them to open the gate and let her drive through, in which they did.

Cruising the village streets, they got many curious stares from people around in their shops of in the markets. Who were these people? Why were they coming here? These are the questions Kamichi actually asked herself. Her mother though stared straight head as they passed the main downtown and was heading outwards to the country, shifting to a bumpy dirt road.

It was almost 5 more minutes before they pulled up to a nice sized farmhouse. People and dogs poured out that Kamichi has never once seen in her life, all having the red marks on their cheeks like her brother. Liwai and Kion were STILL barking their heads off.

The first one to open the door was their mother, Kiak her name was, swiftly walking over to one of the woman there, hugging them tightly. And sighing heavily, Akito swung open his door, Kion and Liwai zooming out before him to all the dogs, waving their tails furiously. Cousins swarmed him after he stepped out while they said their hellos and greeted each other Kamichi just sat there, her eyes closed and taking a deep breath. She ran her slim digits through her hair as she tried not to have a mini panic attack.

Reaching slowly to the handle, Kamichi gripped it loosely, but froze there for a second before opening it and stepping out to the fresh air. Closing the door she stood a second, her eyes closed again and inhaling the fresh air. It’s been a long while since she’s been here…all those memories flashed back from earlier younger years.

Opening her silver eyes she scanned the scene, Liwai and Kion were barking and having fun with all the other dogs and pups, her mother was talking to a bunch of other adults while heading up to the porch, her brother was talking to every kid and teen there with a smile. That only left her. Sighing softly she looked to the house. She remember it….it was her own house that she grew up in her younger years. It was a pale yellow with white trim and shutters. To the side of the house leaned a boy her age with messy brown hair and red marks too. He was holding a dog treat in his hand, giving it to a rather smallish dog with brown ears. Her face exploded to a smile as she sped up to him at intimidating speeds before shooting and tackling him to the ground in a hug.

“Cousin Kiba!” She screeched.

Kiba on the other hand, was taken by surprise and was pumbled to the ground before he could protest. He made an ‘oomph’ noise by getting the air knocked out of his lungs. Kamichi just stood up, brushing off her jeans with a crazy smile.

Kiba rubbed his head, pulling himself up and giving her a smirk. “Hyperactive still, K?” He queried, giving her a good look up and down. “And DAMN! How old are you girl?” He questioned with a perverted smile, deserving a good thwap over the head. The small dog though barked up at her and she crouched down, scooping him up into her arms.

“Don’t do that Akamaru –“ Kiba started, but cut his sentence off as he saw his cousin petting Akamaru on the head and Akamaru didn’t bite her hand off. He just shook his head side to side having a chuckle escaping his mouth.

“I’m only 12, just like you Kiblets.” Kamichi replied to his perverted question earlier and smirked at the old nickname.

“Damn, I would of never guessed.” He smart-assed back.

Kamichi and Kiba both laughed. Liwai then trotted into the area just as Akamaru was set down, trotting up to the pup and tilting her head slightly as if to say ‘if that Akamaru?’ before wagging her tail. Kiba just looked at Liwai the same way as she did to Akamaru.

“Yes, she did grow too.” Kamichi replied to the question he was thinking and Akamaru barked up to the large dog peering down at him before Liwai seemed to glomp the poor dog, nibbling on his ears. Kiba and Kamichi laughed again.

“Seriously, I can’t wait to show my hot cousin off to the gang after all these years.” Another sick smirk appearing on his mouth again, being thwapped again by that so called hot cousin. Rubbing his head he cursed…. and being hit again.

“Watch your mouth.” She winked at him before saving before pulling Liwai off the poor Akamaru and heading inside with Liwai following in pursuit.

Kiba closed his eyes, chuckling again. “They haven’t changed a bit eh, Akamaru?” He’d question the dog as Akamaru let out a sharp bark in reply.
Chapter end notes: Eh, Its short. Just shy of 5 pages, so I broke my minimum. >>; But, OH WELL. REVEIW PLEASE!!!!! Unlike SOME of you lazt *&#@#'s. . - . -Sends evil glare at them- You know who you are.
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