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ALIEN STRIKE!! by lunaryu

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Chapter notes: I know it's so stupid to write something like this, but I really want to write it. So if you like it, please review. I will continue if you review it, but if you don't, I'll stop it right away. I have just updated it. Enjoy!
Disclaimer: Naruto or everything here except my original characters isn't mine.
Warning: foul language, implication for Sasu/Naru (for now)
ALIEN STRIKE

ALIEN STRIKE!!

Prologue: A Birthday Gift from Outer Space

Today is July 23, Uchiha’s Sasuke’s birthday. Yep, the beautiful dark haired teen got many presents from his schoolmates, especially from the girls which extremely annoying because they would not leave him alone in peace. He got presents from his brother and his parents too, not many, but he was happy.

Sasuke is ordinary person, except for his outstanding look and his extremely annoying fan girls (and some boys in many ways). He’s a smart ass at every lesson and he’s really good at every sport. Yes, of course he’s really good, but he’s still ordinary person. He favors nothing special and he hates nothing in particular either. He has no obsession because his brother, Itachi, has taken all the jobs their parents expect from him he has no obligation at all. He simply lives in his boring life without any interesting event happening for exactly 14 years.

Yep, today he’s 14 years old. He has believed since long time ago that he will continue to live in ordinary life and nothing special will happen to him. He’s an ordinary person after all. However then…it seems this year his life will turn upside down when the God decide to give him a special gift on his birthday.

--Konoha City; 21:30—

Sasuke walked alone to the way of his home after he finished his lesson in prep school. Yep, he attended one even if he had been smart enough to get in his favorite High School. He gazed at the sky and looked at the sparkling stars.

Hmm…the stars are beautifully shining today…. Maybe God and His saints are celebrating my birthday too.

Sasuke often thinks that way to himself. Sasuke is silent and cool boy. He’s popular among the girls and boys at his school, but he has never had a truly friend up until now. So he often talks to himself silently while gazing at the stars and today is no different.

Sasuke smiled small and sighed long. “Maybe someday I will go to the stars and make some friends there,” Sasuke said lowly without tearing his gaze from the sky.

Yep, he believes at the existence of aliens and outer space creatures. He never tells anyone about that though.

He continued to walk while looking at the sky and at that time something happened. One of the stars suddenly brightened and a flash of blinding light came across, tearing the dark night sky. Sasuke was forced to cover his bare eyes with his hands, but from the space between his fingers, he could see the shooting star?

No, it couldn’t be a shooting star. Sasuke watched carefully at the star which was moving unnaturally and in the end, the star fell to the earth. Suddenly there’s a *BOOOOOOM* very loud sound and the ground was shaken violently in second, making the Uchiha teen fall of losing his balance.

After the shaking had stopped, Sasuke quickly stood and he ran to the place where the star fell, which was quite near. It was in the unused field behind his school. He was in wonder for awhile though, because the road seemed so empty. It was emptier than usual, no; it was totally empty. He thought it was strange because the shaking ground just now was big enough to make an elephant jump out of its skin. There should be more people outside.

However, his thought was slowly drifting away from his mind when he was nearing his school and in second, he stepped the ground on the field.

There’s a huge but not so deep hole on the ground, and the star was plunged on the middle of the hole. He was now focused at the star or whatever it was which was there. The star produced smokes and dust from the ground which were quite thick, and Sasuke coughed slightly when the dust was inhaled.

What’s that…? A Meteor maybe…but don’t you think it’s too huge for a meteor?

Sasuke thought silently while eyeing a huge, not so huge, actually, and dark thing, a rock might be, under his eyes suspiciously. Then…the rock or meteor or whatever, began to shake.

Sasuke was shocked at that and he backed away several steps, still watching the thing warily and carefully. He widened his eyes and sharpened his hearing when he felt that he heard something, not dusting sound, something more…like…a conversation.

“Sialan, ni pesawat bobrok apa!? (1)”

Sasuke caught the voice, a voice in different language.

“Si Kakashi tu brengsek amat sih!? Masa aku dikasih pesawat bobrok kaya’ gini!! Iiiiih, awas kalo aku pulang nanti! Aku gantung dia di atap rumah!! (2)”

Sasuke continued hearing the voice, whatever he said. Wait, where did he know it’s a ‘he’? He even didn’t see the thing which was speaking!

Sasuke’s heart beat faster and faster when the thing, whatever it was began to move and reveal itself in front of Sasuke from behind the dust. Sasuke held his breath. He looked at the thing in wide eyes.

The thing…no, it’s a human, well, Sasuke thought that way; at least he looks like human. A blue eyed blond boy, around his age who was wearing a strange outfit, something like light flaming orange jacket and long pants in same color, but they had ropes on the shoulders and around the waist. The ropes were nine and each of them flowing around in light flaming color too. The blond boy was covered in dust, but Sasuke could clearly see his face.

He has whiskers on his cheeks, three on each side, and his eyes…God…has Sasuke mentioned it before? He has the most beautiful and the bluest azure eyes ever. His eyes are so clear and somewhat innocent.

Sasuke couldn’t help but staring restlessly at the most beautiful feature he had ever met in gaping mouth. Several times after the thing, no; he meant the blond boy, dusted off his self; he lifted his face and met Sasuke’s dark onyx eyes.

…………………………………………………………………………………………

There’s a brief silence before, “Ya ampun!? Manusia!? (3)” the boy shouted suddenly in shocked look, but Sasuke couldn’t understand his language at all. “Uwaaa!! Ini pertama kalinya aku lihat manusia bumi!! Waaah, waaah, waaah!! Nggak jauh beda sama orang-orang di planetku!! (4)”

The boy continued rattling in front of the freezing Sasuke in excited look. He looked at, no; he watched Sasuke from top to bottom in studying gaze.

Wha-what is he watching? Why does he seem studying me? Is he really an alien!? Wait; what is he doing on earth!? Is it some kind of joke!? But what’s about the meteor!? No; maybe it’s his outer space’s vehicle…. Gaaah, it’s not the time to be curious!! What does he want here!? Does he want to make me an experiment object!? What if he comes here to take over the earth!? Blah…blah…blah…!?

Thousands of questions were spinning on Sasuke’s head. He was anxious, he was curious, he was excited and he was scared at the same time!! The feelings were mixed and churned up on his mind and his body became trembling as the effect of his mixed feelings.

“Tapi aneh ya…. Padahal aku sudah memasang sistem penidur waktu aku masuk ke atmosfer Bumi…. Nggak sangka kalau masih ada yang sadar. Gawat juga, padahal harusnya aku merahasiakan identitasku sebagai makhluk luar angkasa…. Gimana nih…? (5)”

The blonde muttered something which of course couldn’t be understood by Sasuke. So the raven haired teen just stared wide eyes at him in still freezing body.

“Repot juga kalau aku harus pake ramuan lupa dan bikin manusia ini tidur…. Gimana kalo aku negosiasi aja sama dia ya...? (6)”

The boy said again, seeming confused about something. However then suddenly he lifted his head and looked at Sasuke straightly on his eyes while smiling widely.

“Hai, manusia bumi!! Perkenalkan, namaku Uzumaki Naruto! Aku makhluk luar angkasa, jangan kaget yah! Aku datang ke Bumi karena ada perlu sedikit, tapi akau nggak berbahaya, kok! Mau nggak jadi teman sekaligus pemanduku di sini? Aku nggak akan ngerepotin deh. Cuma perlu tempat menginap dan dapet makanan! (7)”

The boy said something to Sasuke in friendly wide smile and gesture, but Sasuke really couldn’t understand what this boy saying, so he simply stared at him in stunned look.

“Kenapa sih? Dari tadi kok nggak ngomong apa-apa? Ah, jangan-jangan saking kagetnya sampai nggak bisa ngomong? Atau emang lagi sakit, atau malah bisu? (8)”

The boy asked Sasuke something, but hell, he didn’t understand. “What are you saying? I can’t understand your language!” Sasuke said eventually in rather hesitating tone; worried if he got to alien’s nerve.

………………………………………………………………

There’s a brief silence before, “Pft….AHAHAHAHA!!” suddenly the alien broke in laughter. “OMG, I’m sorry!! I forgot to turn on the auto translator for the languages! No wonder you froze to death! You didn’t get what I was saying, did you?” the blonde at last spoke in Sasuke’s, no, earth’s language.

Sasuke sighed in relief when he looked at the laughing blonde boy. He was laughing and then grinning and smiling to him. He looked cuter when he was smiling though…wait, Sasuke didn’t just think that!! Uchiha didn’t consider a boy, even an alien, a cute being!! However Sasuke could tell that this alien was not bad; he meant not evil or having bad intention. Then he tried to communicate with him. “Uhm…so you’re an alien?” Sasuke asked curiously.

“Yep, I came here from my planet, Konoha! I have something to do in this earth, but I’m not bad, don’t worry,” Naruto said in reassuring smile.

“Konoha? I never heard such planet’s name before…but, the name resembles this city. It’s Konoha City, you know,” Sasuke informed Naruto in surprised look.

“Ooh, that’s a really beautiful coincidence, don’t you think? Well, of course you never heard about my planet. It is outside Bimasakti (Solar System) Galaxy after all,” Naruto informed him back.

“Ooh, I see…,” Sasuke seemed understanding it. “That’s good then…,” he continued and sighed again feeling relieved even more after hearing it straightly from the blonde.

“Ehm…by the way…I’m Uzumaki Naruto, what’s your name?” the blonde suddenly asked and offered a handshake.

“Eh…Uchiha Sasuke,” the dark haired teen blushed a bit and shook Naruto’s hand.

“Let’s be friends, Sasuke!” the cheery blonde said while smiling widely in happiness. God…even an Uchiha couldn’t deny it.

This blonde is indeed so beautiful and reaaaaly-really cute.

Sasuke couldn’t help but blushing when he was staring at the blonde. “Ye-yeah…, nice to meet you,” Sasuke stuttered slowly…GAAAAH!! Uchiha didn’t stutter, damned it!!

Naruto grinned again at him and then he suddenly asked, “Ah, I almost forgot. By the way Sasuke…can I stay at your house for awhile?”

“Eh…?” Sasuke looked at him in stunned face again.

“You know…my plane had been broken, and my supply had been destroyed when I fell just now, so I have nothing to support my life here. So…can I?” the blonde asked Sasuke while clasping his hands in front of his face and in really pleading look.

Staying at my house…and alien stays at my house…!

“EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH!!?” Sasuke couldn’t help but shouting in shock at the sudden request the blond alien, Naruto, asked from him.

Well, indeed his life will turn 180 degrees from now on, since God suddenly give him a gift from outer space. The gift is a cute blond alien-boy in his age, called Naruto. Then maybe…this alien-Naruto will bring some interesting and colorful events into Sasuke’s life….

* * *

End of Prologue

Tbc

Explanation of the alien’s language---:

(1) “Damn it!! What the heck’s wrong with this lousy plane!?”

(2) “That bastard Kakashi!! He dares giving me a lousy plane like this!! Watch out when I come home…I’ll hang him up on the roof of my house!!”

(3) “OMG!? A human!?”

(4) “Woooow!! It’s the first time I see an earth’s human!! Wooow, wooow, wooow!! It has no difference with human in my planet!!

(5) “But it’s a wonder…I thought I had activated the sleeping system when I entered the atmosphere of earth…. I don’t expect that there’s still someone who is still up. It’s a problem…even I have to hide the fact that I’m an alien…. What should I do…?”

(6) “It’s so troublesome if I have to use the forgetting poison on him and put him to sleep. What if I make a negotiation with him instead…?”

(7) “Hi, earth’s human! Let me introduce my self! I’m Uzumaki Naruto, an alien from other planet! Don’t be so shocked! I’m here for some business, but I’m not dangerous, so don’t worry! Would you become my friend and guide in this planet? I won’t cause you any trouble. I just need a place to stay the night and get some food!”

(8) “What’s wrong with you? Why haven’t you said anything since we met? Ah, don’t tell me you’re too shocked to even speak? Or maybe you’re sick, or even you indeed can’t speak from the beginning?”

A/N: Yaaah, I know it sounds so crazy to make a fanfic like this, and hell, I even haven’t finished my three current stories. God, I know it will be a lot of trouble to handle them at the same time, but I reaaaaaaaly wanted to make this one. The idea suddenly came up and stuck in my head until I can’t think of the plot in Love Me, My Brother!! I’m sorry for the fans of that story! Maybe I can’t update that story this week (TT). Sorry, please don’t kill me---. I’m really busy with my college works…so I don’t know if I can update this story regularly…. By the way…the alien’s language I used here is my first language in my nation. Who can guess what language it is? “Grins” Anyway…I need your reviews. It’s just a trial of love comedy drama between earth human and outer-space alien. Of course there will be yaoi, since it’s a Sasu/Naru story. But if there’re not many responds, I will not continue this story because indeed it’s just a trial. I can make it a one shoot only. That’s why, I reaaaaaly need your reviews. Should I make it multiple chapters or leave it this way? Ok, then…I hope you like this story though. Well, I’ll wait for your comment! Thank you and love you all!!

With so much love,

Lunaryu~~~

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