Reviews For Kokoro Uchiha
Name: 9tailedfoxrox (Signed) · Date: 11/01/11 - 07:39 pm · For: Chapter 33: Fight! Fight!
One word: Amazing
Author's Response: *laughs* I'm glad you like it so much! Thanks for reading (I'm pretty sure you did that part, right?) Reviewing, (helps ALOT) and enjoying (apparently you did so! I'm glad!) !!
Name: xaneresx (Signed) · Date: 10/05/10 - 04:56 pm · For: Chapter 33: Fight! Fight!
This story is excellent; you're a brilliant writer! Keep up the good work! =]
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. ^^ (me happy!) thanks for reviewing! It helps a lot!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/05/10 - 07:16 pm · For: Chapter 33: Fight! Fight!
.........hm... the multiple POVs are annoying and slightly confusing and the entire chapter with all the battle happening seemed rushed. I would length the battle scenes with better not quicker description of what is happening. The POVs... I would trying seeing if those are really nessairy; if all really need to be there. Just some tips.
CKL
Author's Response: Yep, let me re-do that chapter! I thought the POV's would be interesting (seeing things from other people's points of view, and how they delt with their baddies) but i suppose not. Hmm..... thanks for the suggestions CKL! I'll try them out.... I haven't gotten the hang of battle scenes quiet yet... Although i can't wait to put Aiko in a seriously good one!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 04/05/10 - 01:20 pm · For: Chapter 33: Fight! Fight!
Holy friken crapizoial assist (these are my three favorite words in my colorfully weird vocab)! I loved this chapter, Rose - chan, and can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon please!
Author's Response: I will try my best! Thank you! Kitty cat cooties! :)