Reviews For Kokoro Uchiha
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 02/04/10 - 06:09 pm · For: Chapter 29: Only the Weak die
hmmmmm........the action sounds can be changed from using "bleh" to *bleh* it wouldnt be as confusing in my mind. just an opinion and also...i know most of it was all back ground info but...can u mayb zazz it up a bit? its just dry to me thats all.
Author's Response: I know. i was having a hard time writing that chapter, so i seriously don't expect it to be good.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 30/03/10 - 03:07 pm · For: Chapter 29: Only the Weak die
0_0.... *parents raise an eyebrow when they see brown headed girl staring blankly at the computer*......How do you right so good, Rose-chan?! I absolutely love this story, and I can't wait for the next chapter! Update as quickly as possible!
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Author's Response: yay! I'm glad you like it so much, you're boosting my confidence up for my (hopeful) future writing career! ^^rnI'll update tonight, just need to do some last minute things.... Thanks for the review!