Reviews For Lights, Camera, The Eight Are in Action!
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 23/03/11 - 04:15 pm · For: Chapter 1 The Lights, the Camera, the Accident
This is such a great story! Please update, I wanna no whats going to happen! By the way, the english words of the clan name is Akuma no shirushi. Please update!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad to see someone new likes my story. Unfortunately I've been up to my ears in school work and haven't been able to right anything for any my stories. I've been thinking about them yes, and been writing down ideas but, I'm not sure when I'll be getting to them to be frank. I'm trying to focus on my school grades, but I promise that I will at least release a new chapter to this story and my extremely popular one, Seeing Beauty sometime during spring break in April. I know that is away but, my grades are more import to me now. rnrnThank you by the way for translating that, I was in need of that for in the future chapters. I will say this now so I don't confuse you or past readers, i have been remodeling my stories, making them, for at least to me, a eight or higher out of ten then what they are now to me is which four to seven depending on the story and the chapter. I know I'm being harsh on myself, but as the saying goes, you are your worst critic. rnrnSo what I'm saying is that when I update, there will be changes in story, the basic outline and major events will still be there, just now, I will add more minor events to steady and reinforce the foundation I planned the story on. It wont be as random and akward, it will be frankly I hope, witty and serious, still playful but, in a cool manner. I hope I'm making sense to you. I just right want to look back on the story and figure out what can I improve or fix? The story will go on, just at a later date. Sorry, i have just had like an awakening that has made me see errors and trimmings I could fix to make my stories more pleasurable and desirable to read and sense.rnrnCKL
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 03/12/09 - 02:31 pm · For: Chapter 7 Lizzy’s glint...and a clan is born
Um, i can't help u on this story, but if i can i will! Good job on the story, but PLEASE don't add any Yaoi or yuri! *puppy dog eyes* pleeease?
Author's Response: ....well i love ur help tht will be awesome um.....the yuri and yaoi...and stuff...um well im only having small scenes on tht kind of stuff i think...i might change my mind most likly will im like that....but it will be like haha funny i promise!
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 03/12/09 - 02:28 pm · For: Chapter 6 Joining the Leaf
after reading this I really had to struggle to keep my face straight, even though some parts of the chapters are - wierd. Although i'm wondering what'll happen when they meet their original characters- 4 exmple sammy and Gaara. I'm really looking 4ward to that!
Please update soon!
Author's Response: ....hm...ty for the rating....the meeting that will be strange and bizzare...not sure yet
Name: dalaw (Signed) · Date: 29/11/09 - 02:21 pm · For: Chapter 7 Lizzy’s glint...and a clan is born
Yes for clans! seems interesting i cant wait to see where you go with this. I cant even read the part thats before sound of devil. its a rectangle with numbers in it.
Author's Response: im sorry..its japanese kanji...i have no idea what the romaji of the word is .....i would really like to know ....ive defintly got ideas on wat the clan will be thou....*evil laugh of doom** (mad sci.tis laugh)
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 22/07/09 - 06:36 pm · For: Chapter 4 Torpedo Away
Author's Response: i can take it tht u lik the part of naruto being thrown out the window...allot of people lik tht part ^^
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 22/07/09 - 06:34 pm · For: Chapter 3 Round 2 w/ AMBU
Author's Response: i hav no idea to how to respon to this so...ty
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 22/07/09 - 06:32 pm · For: Chapter 2 Kiwi Singing
Author's Response: can i assume here as well u think the song was somewat disburbing or somen of tht manner, no biggys.
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 22/07/09 - 06:29 pm · For: Chapter 1 The Lights, the Camera, the Accident
This is funny, but sometimes i feel like wincing. I mean, poor Ibiki.
Author's Response: i dont really lik ibiki he's a sadist in many ways but...he's a cool one
Name: Kamisori (Signed) · Date: 18/07/09 - 05:27 pm · For: Chapter 6 Joining the Leaf
Complete and utter show-offs. xP lol Awesome chapter!
Will Sasuke try to jump Lizzy when he finds out she's not Itachi in an attempt to restore his clan?
Ah, that doesn't matter, good job! ^_^b
Author's Response: *cant stop laughing* tht...is soo...giv me a sec to...thik...*continues to laugh ass off..................5 mins later***well.. Sasuke...he'll b( unfortunate enough or lucky depends on the person) to see Lizzy in a state of illogic and might do somen with her.......im saying anymor
Name: Kamisori (Signed) · Date: 18/07/09 - 04:59 pm · For: Chapter 4 Torpedo Away
Dude! You just threw Naruto out the window! haha. Me likes. :]
Author's Response: ty i lik Naruto and all but he is so easy to pick on just lik emo kid
Name: Kamisori (Signed) · Date: 18/07/09 - 04:53 pm · For: Chapter 2 Kiwi Singing
That was awesome!
Author's Response: the song part? w/e it was ty, i love good revs
Name: Kamisori (Signed) · Date: 18/07/09 - 04:45 pm · For: Chapter 1 The Lights, the Camera, the Accident
like it! :D
Looking forward to the rest of this story!
Author's Response: ty glad tht my story is liked after all........
Name: dalaw (Signed) · Date: 04/07/09 - 02:58 pm · For: Chapter 4 Torpedo Away
dude the was freakish-ly awsome! i loved how you threw naruto lol. i ike it o far.
Author's Response: ty, i liked the idea as well, it seemed amusing to me
Name: nkbz (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 - 02:07 pm · For: Chapter 2 Kiwi Singing
Way too many characters...I cannot follow what is going on.
Author's Response: .....there are only 8 girls...I can't get rid of any....i try to make it clearer ty 4 the rev
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 - 02:53 pm · For: Chapter 5 Blonde's Encounter
awww cute! i really liked this chapter!!
i definitely think that sammy and james should get together...so cute!
also, sorry if im being weird, but that line: “time for bed! Girls you know the drill!” was probably the corniest line i have ever heard. I suggest that you dont make it seem like an army drill with the clapping and everything. it makes it sound extrememly unrealistic and corny. maybe its just be, because i know that when i sleep over with a lot of people, we dont have a drill for sleeping, even if we're all really good friends!
and please tell me if im being rude, cuz i really am not trying to be. its just my opinion.
Author's Response: sry for the line...i just find the girls dont like beds and...well i guess i thought it would be perfect for the place since Ino's room is tiny! any i like ur op. ty for telling me...ill get rid of the line..now tht i thik about it ..its crap ty!
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 - 02:45 pm · For: Chapter 4 Torpedo Away
okay, seriously, how old are these girls? i know you might've said it earlier, but i dont remember. they are acting WAAAAYYYY to creepy and overconfident for my taste.
ya, but i like the story still, and i hope im not being too mean about it! :D
Author's Response: sry if their creepy..i never saw them tht way...ill reread it to see it ok? and i guess their too overconfident, so ill tone it down. Thx for the heads up, if i didnt have some one tell me this i wouldve screwed up the nxt chptr. rnrnty and i believe the ages would be Lizzy-17 Sammy-17 Tami-15 Amy-16 1/2 Jamie and Leslie are 15 Umi is 14 3/4 and Sissy just a few months behind Umi ( 14 1/2) Im pretty sure i alrdy said James is 21...
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 - 02:42 pm · For: Chapter 3 Round 2 w/ AMBU
oh my god...they are in sooooo much trouble!!!
WHY THE HECK ARE THEY ACTING LIKE THEIR CHARACTERS??? seriously...no offense, but i think that they should act like themselves, because itachi is not team 7's favorite person, and gaara is already another person, so there can be 2 gaaras!!!!! ahhh!!
haha i still love the story, and i cant wait to read the rest!!!
Author's Response: there method actresses...so they go into chara so they dont screw up in battle and crap..they act them selfs out of battle ul'll see the pattern soon.
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 - 02:37 pm · For: Chapter 1 The Lights, the Camera, the Accident
wow....this story is HILARIOUS!!!!
seriously, its really really funny! i love how they're all freaking out and beating up the Anbu guys!!!!
i cant wait to read the rest!
Author's Response: ty im glad u liked it...i feel hapy now someone else likes it too! ^_^
Name: Ayako Haru (Signed) · Date: 08/05/09 - 09:52 pm · For: Chapter 3 Round 2 w/ AMBU
This is hilarious! I couldn't laughing.
Author's Response: ty! im glad someone likes this! i was getn depressed tht no one would review about it ^_^