TONFA
The Original Naruto Fanfic Archive

Main Categories

Het Romance [1092]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around different sex couples.
Alternate Universe & Crossovers [651]
Where cast of the Naruto Universe are inserted into an alternate universe.
Essays & Tutorials [17]
An area to submit intelligent essays debating topics about the Naruto Universe and writing tutorial submissions.
 
General Fiction [1739]
Any Naruto fanfiction focused without romantic orientation, on a canon character in the current Naruto Universe.
OC-centric [865]
Any Naruto fanfic that has the major inclusion of a fan-made character.
Non-Naruto Fiction [291]
Self-evident
 
Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance [1576]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around male same sex couples.
MadFic [194]
Any fic with no real plot and humor based. Doesn't require correct spelling, paragraphing or punctuation but it's a very good idea.
 
Shojo-ai/Yuri Romance [106]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around female same sex couples.
Fan Ninja Bingo Book [125]
An area to store fanfic information, such as bios, maps, political histories. No stories.
 
 

Site Info

Members: 11907
Series: 261
Stories: 5885
Chapters: 25419
Word count: 47699022
Authors: 2163
Reviews: 40831
Reviewers: 1751
Newest Member: fanofeverything25
Challenges: 255
Challengers: 193
 


Reviews For Okashii

Name: Dag (Signed) · Date: 29/08/08 - 12:14 pm · For: Saisho
Hi, I just had a look at the first chapter, and although I appreciate what you are trying to do (and you're obviously skilled with language), I feel that this story is too... wordy. I know that descriptions are an integral part of writing, but it is possible to OVER describe, which is what I think you've done here. I find myself having to read a sentence over again because there was too much detail to take in the first time around. Words should add meaning, not obscure it. Still, your writing is beautiful and you should definitely continue. I hope I don't sound like I'm being mean or over-critical. Afterall, I wouldn't bother reviewing if your story was pants :p lol. Tis just my opinion. But you have my utmost respect. We need more writers like you who really make the effort.

Author's Response: XD Yes, people have told me that my stories are too "wordy" and I'm trying to tone it down a bit. I hope it's getting better. =.= rnI understand what you mean, I'll try my best!! :] I accept your comment for what you're trying to say, because as a reviewer and reader, I can understand better as to what the community wants. X) Thank you for taking the time to review!!


Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 14/08/08 - 01:11 am · For: Merodi
Hay greatm, keep it up, im really getting into this.
love AikoMatsuo xoxoxo
1000000000000000000000/10

Author's Response: ^.^ Thanks for taking the time to review!! It's good to know someone's getting into the story.


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