Reviews For Thunder and Swirls
Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 11/07/12 - 06:26 am · For: Gathered Here Today
wow. that was a great fic. I don't even know what to say.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 21/05/11 - 02:50 pm · For: Gathered Here Today
Wow. Just... wow.
This was a great story. This is by far, one of the greatest stories I've ever read. It had everything. Humor, drama, love, and so many great twists. I'm not even sure if all the positive things I could say would do this story justice. This was just great, and you're an amazing author. I hope you write more, you're a very talented writer. Now I'll have to go check out this sequel :D Again, this was just utterly phenomenal and amazingly well-written. Good job.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 19/07/09 - 06:44 pm · For: Gathered Here Today
wow....i feel like crap for Jessica...tht the name of one of my friends whos doing stupid crap..*sigh i feel low man it sucks
Author's Response: Sorry to have depressed you. (thanks for all the reviews!)
Name: nkbz (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 - 11:47 am · For: Gathered Here Today
“Not even a year after your death, she is raped by none other then Itachi Uchiha.”
LOL. no please.
"It’s becomes a son that she will name, Shuichi. Shortly before Shuichi is born, Lee proposes to Jessica, who of course says, “yes.”
Oh hell no. Did you just package the biggest Mary-Sue bomb into one big paragraph then basically tell Jessica to lay off her little rape fantasy by reassuring us that a persons choice can alter that future?
Well I sure hope that's what you meant.
I don't want this some angels granting her random powers capable of destroying Orochimaru. It's not my fic but...damn... Sad face for real.
The rest was very sweet and touching and the way you described everyone's feelings for nari's death was great.
Author's Response: Sorry, but this IS Jessica Kamiya. There was a reason why Kaminari felt a pang of jealousy towards her and the need to surpass her when she was alive. Kaminari is to Jessica as Naruto as to Sasuke. Plus, Jessica and Shuichi are not my characters. When I write, I try to keep characters in character as much as possible. Including OCs. Thanks for reviewing and whether you like it or not, you shall now be known to me as "my fan." :3 Also, thanks for being honest.
Name: inuzuka king (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 - 10:08 pm · For: Gathered Here Today
its gay how she died though... gerat strory loved it all the way through.
Author's Response: Double the love. ;3
Name: inuzuka king (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 - 10:06 pm · For: Gathered Here Today
its gay how she died though... gerat strory loved it all the way through.
Author's Response: Sometimes the greatest heros...get the lamest death. -.-' Thanks! And thanks for the review!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 03/05/09 - 06:08 pm · For: Gathered Here Today
WHY!?!?!?!?!
NO!!!
Why did you kill her!?!
*sniffle*
It was an unexpected great ending.... but WHY!?
Author's Response: ^_^' Remember there will be a sequel! So don't be too sad about it! Thanks for the review!
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 03/05/09 - 11:59 am · For: Gathered Here Today
I can't wait for the sequel either. I see you took some of my stuff from my other story for the sequel but it's alright. Keep up the good work for the sequel.
Author's Response: Back in the day when you gave me Jessica's information you included this. :3 Surprised I remembered? I will try my best with the sequel and I've been concidering your idea more and more. Thanks for reviewing!
Name: Carmello_Thief (Signed) · Date: 03/05/09 - 10:46 am · For: Gathered Here Today
WAAAAAH! It just had to end :( too bad we didn't get to see Shino's reaction. Oh well...I can hardly wait for the sequel!
Author's Response: lol thanks!