Reviews For Thunder and Swirls
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 16/07/09 - 08:50 pm · For: A Dangerous Mission: Hiyori's Horror
blood trance....interesting for a sec i thought she was going to hyperventlate...stupid ideaa...
Author's Response: Ha, ha, not really. She could of if Kakashi hadn't stepped in. Thanks 4 the review!
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 24/06/08 - 11:18 am · For: A Dangerous Mission: Hiyori's Horror
Awesome chapter. I hope that Kaminari feels better soon.
Author's Response: Me thinks she will. :] Thanks for the review!
Name: Vixkill (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 - 05:48 pm · For: A Dangerous Mission: Hiyori's Horror
people who are to lazy to watch - too
that their not brats - they're
Had they hear right? - heard
The Hokage briefed us on what the mission was. (papagraph) - you're losing perspective again
animal went pee there. - animal peed there
sweater that’s zipper - "that's" is like saying 'that is'
The puddles alive! - puddle's - puddle is
move do to shock - due
as she seen Naruto
Author's Response: Hey thanks for all your help! I'll post the edited chapters in a moment. Thanks again!
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 - 10:16 am · For: A Dangerous Mission: Hiyori's Horror
SHE NAMED HER SCYTHE? O_o
COOL! Kaminari could not protect
naurot well at lest she cut him eh?
oh oh i think Kaminari when Zabuz
come cratesa a masive Storm and
like help Kakshi i think that could
real!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cuz i was thinking of this story in my very boring English leston to day i and all of them were about her carating a big storm and
making all thins thunder type jusis
and like every like gob samed. i just
think it would be so coulld but at the
end of my idead i think she sould like not beable to walk cuz like she
never vreasted a storm that big, so she like almost unconsution. but there still all the WHAT ON EARTH JUST HAPPEND and naruto like yup
that my frien you know like with his
head nodding. i think that would be
soo cool and Kakshi like OMG SHE
LIKE WOW and Sasuke like OMG
HOW CAN SHE BE AS GOOD AS ME ME! SAUKE UCHIHA! I MEAN THERE NOT WAY IN HELL SHE
BETTER THAN ME! BUT IT WAS STILL IMPREZSSIVE
and Sakura like BITCH IT WAS MY TIME TO SHOW WHAT I COULD DO TO SASUKE NOT HER. THAT WAS MEANT TO BE ME. LOOK AT HIM
uCHIHA SAURA SOUND BETTER THEN UNCHIHA KAMINARI WAIT IT
DOES DONT IT I LIKE IT UCHIHA
SAKURA. and she could be going on like that. but im going to shut up know befor i talk for way to long
it was amzing as narmal keep it up
Love love AikoMatsuo XxXxX
(you were impressen by that many 0 then watch wiht)
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Author's Response: O.o Remind me never to give you sugar. lol Thanks for the idea, but I've already got the whole Zabuza sega figured out. Go me! ^_^ lol Thanks for the review! @.@ so many zeros...................................they almost go off the review..........................................*faint*