Dang, has Sasuke met his match in Takumi's father in the glare contest? I think so.

I know it was morally wrong in the real world to have violence, but I laughed so hard when Sasuke instinctly punched that girl. She had it coming. And the small intro to the family was interesting, quite the family scene you had there... until dinnertime came and the parents spooked me out a bit.

Great job! You have really found your way again with this story. I cannot wait for more. Nice work on this!

Author's Response: Awesome! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!