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Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/05/11 - 06:38 pm · For: Chapter 28: Stay?
Aww, I hope she stays. That would be adorable. And Salacia's little rant made me feel really bad for her, it's so upsetting for her. And it is very cute of Gaara to be protective of her. Can't wait to see if Salacia actually stays, I hope she does! Update soon so I can read what happens next, please!
Author's Response: I like that he has gotton so soft with her, and I have big plans 4 this story. :) LOL. I will update as soon as possible.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/05/11 - 03:52 am · For: Chapter 27: The Morning After
Oh wow, this chapter was amusing. It figures Gaara's siblings would walk in on him right after his great night. And then when Salacia couldn't find her bra.... I couldn't stop laughing! And then that last part at the end was so sweet. Salacia really knows how to make Gaara feel better.
Well done with this, and I look forward to your next update. Keep on writing those great chapters!
Author's Response:
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/05/11 - 04:04 am · For: Chapter 25: Lightning Rod
NOOOOOOO!!!! I can't believe he did that! That's evil, pure evil! But it's about time Megumi put a stop to his... his... I don't even know what else to call his evilness. But at least she can see Gaara now. That's cute! Good job with this, and I hope you update soon! Especially since your computer is fixed :D
Author's Response: Soon, very soon. I had to get rid of Kai somehow. LOL. Plus the story was getting to lighthearted for my mood when I wrote it. Sorry. LOL.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/04/11 - 05:13 pm · For: Chapter 24: Boredom
Whoo! You're back! Yay!
Short chapter, but that's alright. Now I want to know how Megumi will help Salacia see Gaara again. And hopefully, that'll happen soon cuz they are adorable together! Plus, I don't know how long Salacia will last. I liked that little bit at the end, where Salacia says that she is free. It was really sweet and symbolic for this story.
Great job with this chapter. I hope you are able to update soon! I'm wishing for a nice long one next time *hint hint* Keep up the great work with your stories!
Author's Response: I will try to get it out ASAP.rnLife without my comp is Hell. Thank goodness for tecnologically adapted grandmothers.rnLol.rnWait and see what happens.rnI am actually working on 4 new ones in my notebooks. ;)rnWait and see. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/04/11 - 08:10 am · For: Chapter 23: After The Parting
Jeez, sometimes, I can't help but hate Sakura. She's just so ignorant and snotty. Thank goodness Salacia somewhat put her in her place. And I love that little touching moment between Naruto and Salacia. It's cute how they're like siblings. Another great chapter! Can't wait for the next! Keep up the excellent work.
Author's Response: I will. Though, this is a warning, it might b a while. My grandmother (the 1 i live with) will b out of town 4 a week, i will update whenever I can, from my school librery, but if i can't do it as much as I wish...I'm sorry.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 23/04/11 - 08:58 am · For: Chapter 22: Love Returned
Wow! That kiss was so sweet! It's about time! That was adorable! But then he had to leave! So sad! And then those stupid jonin think they know everything. Ha, they know nothing. Great chapter, that was so cute. Now I want to know what's going to happen now that he left. Communication through the mind, perhaps? I don't know, so I'll have to wait for the next chapter. Keep on writing those amazing chappies!
Author's Response: I will. I'm so glad that you like them so much. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 22/04/11 - 05:15 pm · For: Chapter 21: Danger Zone
AH! He finally said it without any insecurities! Yay! Epic scene filled with tension and romance! I loved it! You did a fantastic job with this chapter. You changed the scene from the manga, increasing the love that Salacia and Gaara have for each other while also still showing the tension of the demons. Excellent job with this, I loved it!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. :) I had to change it 2 make it work. :) LOL.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 21/04/11 - 07:49 am · For: Chapter 20: After the Match
Wow! That was a wicked cliffhanger! Salacia's fight was really interesting, that Megumi was practically killing the guy without anyone else seeing what was going on. And now Gaara and Sasuke's fight: so cool! Since Salacia supports Gaara, it's a different point of view, contrary to the normal 'crazy maniac Gaara' scene. And now Salacia and Megumi going to be in trouble. Can't wait to see what happens now! So exciting!
Author's Response: Gald you like it. :) i have big plans for this story. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/04/11 - 08:19 pm · For: Chapter 18: Before the Match
Haha, I liked that little interaction with Temari. Very clever, Salacia is. And then what is up with her sensei? He's such a jerk! Oh my gosh, she should kick his butt before going into her own match!
Another job well done with this chapter! Can't wait to see her fight!
Author's Response: itz gonna b good. LOL. yeah, i had to give more reasonz 4 her 2 hate Juro. LOL. rn
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/04/11 - 08:00 am · For: Chapter 17: Words Spoken
*scoffs a little* Wow, that's not what I expected.
"I guess... I love you too."
Not exactly the standard romantic way to say it, but then again, it is Gaara we're talking about. It did suit him, since he has no idea about emotions. And Salacia was very mature, understanding, and sympathetic towards him. They're relationship is very cute now. Another great chapter to add to the collection. Well done. Keep up the good work on your stories!
Author's Response: Well...gotta give a little reality to it. :) LOL. that just came to me. I was planning on fluffing it up a bit...but then decided against it...there will be time for that in the future. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/04/11 - 06:28 pm · For: Chapter 15: Morning
Haha, a very funny chapter. Poor Salacia and her terrible mornings. At least we can all say we have had bad mornings.... though probably not to that extent. But it did make me laugh. And I'm happy to see that Nori is being even nicer to her. And if Kai does like her... EEEWWW!!!
Anyways, a very humorous and interesting chapter! Keep on writing those great chapters!
Author's Response: I will post another in a little bit. I was with my grandparents this weekend, no internet access. :( But i am nearly complete with a new and amazing chapter. LOL.rnI know EEEEEWWWW! LOL. I had that morining the morning I wrote this...though i fell down the stairs instead of outside of a village. LOL.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/04/11 - 03:25 am · For: Chapter 14: What Can Be Said?
Aww, that's so sad. Poor Salacia. At least she is very understanding of Gaara's predicament. But still, it's sad that he couldn't express his feelings. I wonder how long it will be before he will say it. Good job with this chapter; I'm glad you stuck to Gaara's personality. It made it depressing, but it is still very realistic. Keep on writing your great stories!
Author's Response: I certainly will, it's can be kind of hard to make sure that all characters remain true to form, but i still enjoy breathing a bit of myself into the characters. LOL. :)rn
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/04/11 - 03:54 am · For: Chapter 13: Two Weeks In
Wow! Amazing! Telepathy, didn't even see that coming! Very original, and you wrote it very well. This whole story is developing really well. Good job with this chapter, I was smiling the entire time. Keep up the incredible work with your stories!
Author's Response: As long as there is something to write about i will always write. :) LOL. Another chapter is coming tonight. Late though I have a club meeting after my classes today. LOL. college can be tough.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/04/11 - 03:29 am · For: Chapter 12: Goodbye
Wow. Juro's so mean for doing that to Salacia. I'm disappointed because now I don't get to see the entire fight. Hopefully the next round will make up for that. And Gaara and Salacia's relationship continues to grow in a cute way... adorable! Yay! That was cute at the end where she said that Gaara was the guy of her dreams. Can't wait to see how Salacia goes through a month without him! Keep up the good work. You're an amazing author, and your writing is very impressive!
Author's Response: Thanx. I've got a surprise in store for the month they are separated. LOL. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/04/11 - 03:42 am · For: Chapter 10: Connections
Gwah! Why? Why would you do that? You made this chapter so cute, and then you ended it! Why? I want to read more! Please, please update so I can read more! This relationship just got so much cuter because they are admitting their feelings and stuff! Please add the next one soon. I'm all in suspense and stuff! Keep up the great work with your writing!
Author's Response: I have classes 2day so it will b 2nite when i update. sorry 2 keep you in suspense and stuff. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 11/04/11 - 05:46 pm · For: Chapter 9: The Second Part
Yes! *shouts in a triumphant tone* Finally, more torture to Kai! He deserves everything Salacia dishes out to him!
Now, onto the romance... so adorable! I love it! The whole thing with their darknesses fighting each other was a ver good point to throw in. It's actually very creative for you to do that, and it adds depth to the relationship that Gaara and Salacia have growing now. And I like how you are slowly getting Salacia and Gaara to open up to each other. Their similarities make them all the more cuter together. Can't wait for the next update! Keep up the good work with your stories!
Author's Response: Thanx so much. :) We shall see.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/11 - 03:56 pm · For: Chapter 8: New Friend?
No, Kai does not deserve Salacia's kindness. But yay for Salacia and Gaara! Gaara is so awkward and cute at the same time. It's adorable! I am beginning to enjoy this story very much!
Author's Response: I'm glad, thing with Kai are going to get entertaining, just to let you know. LOL.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/11 - 09:00 am · For: Chapter 7: Exam 2
Whoo! I loved this chapter! It made me smile as Salacia almost made Sasuke poop his pants when he learned more about her. And Nori seems not as scared around her, honestly. In my eyes at least. I mean, it's obvious that he is. But if he was truly scared, I feel as if Nori would be cowering into submission instead of being able to talk to her. I kinda hope Nori becomes a good friend to her, in all honesty. But you are the author. And I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
Author's Response: I think it's going to be good. LOL. The next chap is going to be juicy. LOL.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/04/11 - 09:30 pm · For: Chapter 6: Exam 1
Haha, the Sally thing was funny. And Kai deserves to have his butt kicked. Definitely do not leave any of those moments out because they are so worth it! Excellent job on these chapters. They just make me hate Kai more, but the intro the the manga characters was very well-written and understanding. I like it! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I will. Thank you for all the reviews. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/04/11 - 05:26 pm · For: Chapter 4: Oil and Water
Wow. I like how you portray Salacia and Megumi's relationship. They are both make for a very acceptable team, and your imagination shows that through emotional bonds and now the possessions. Well done. I can't wait for the journey scene now. I wonder how that will go. I imagine bad things for Kai, honestly, but I'll just have to wait and see :D
Author's Response: I was just about to post that chap...you will see soon.
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 08/04/11 - 04:30 am · For: Chapter 3: Bad News
Well. That was sweet of her. It's nice to see you're starting to build some more depth into this story too. Nice work. ;0)
Author's Response: Thanx. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/04/11 - 01:46 pm · For: Chapter 3: Bad News
Dang... We have just discovered that there is more to Salacia than everyone thinks. And I like it. I like the little plot developments and twists and character details you throw in. Very nice job with this. Now I can't wait to see what happens at the Chunin Exams!
Author's Response: Thanx. :) I love writing fanfic and two at once is very stimulating. LOL.
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 07/04/11 - 07:36 am · For: Chapter 2: Welcome to Paradise
Ominous. This was very interesting. A little less lyrical than the last chapter, but a little more in depth for it which was just as pleasant. You seem to have created an interesting band of characters. I'm intrigued to know what you do with them.
Author's Response: Thanx 4 all of your reviews, and i would like to thank you for your feedback, but there is more to the story than meets the eye, do not doubt me. JK. LOL.
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 07/04/11 - 07:32 am · For: Chapter 1: Feelings
How very... dramatic. That said you have an interesting way of writing. Personally I'd like a little more detail here and there, but what you do put down is very good and almost poetic.
Author's Response: the lack of some detail was done purposefully, for effect. thank you for reviewing.
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 07/04/11 - 07:27 am · For: Character Info
Interesting, although I do feel like you've given away a lot of the plot by doing this right at the start of your story.
Author's Response: not all of it though. just a little info. not near as much as when you get deeper into the story.