Reviews For No Mary-Sue, Make my OC blue ='[
Name: waffleferret (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 - 04:57 pm · For: If I owned Naruto-I'd have Akamaru lick my-
this is really good in a funny way this seems ike something me and my friend would write
Author's Response: I like waffles and ferrets. Is your name waffle and your friend ferret?
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 - 11:46 am · For: Another Uchiha Fic: Operation Uchiha Reproduction
ah...i think Itachi wont b hapy about the crow...*nervous/excited giggle* u no its a bad idea to 'try' and get itachi on ur side w/ the info knowledge hook...he could just torture u or use u just as well....but..it has somen happen! write on!
*mubbles* weirdest fanfict i hav yet to read
Author's Response: Uh oh. Torture the information from him =[. He will have to be extra nice. Itachi really isn't a "mean" person and I don't think he would kill a person without any chakra for eating a crow and saying he has information. Taku will have to play his cards right, but the outcome won't be what is expected anyway.
Name: nkbz (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 - 12:15 am · For: Another Uchiha Fic: Operation Uchiha Reproduction
"arrr no buttsecks with itachi?! u trixx'd me... 1/10 star!" Taku groaned.
Get out of my reviews Taku! You didn't wish for a laptop with wireless internet you dumbass.
Author's Response: Thanks for the constructive criticism. Normally when I see reviews they are all like: ZOMG THAT WAS SO KAWAIII ^_^ I LUBB THAT, etc. But that was new, and pleasing. You desire buttsex, I will take that into consideration and thank you for your review mr. random person on narutofic!
Name: dalaw (Signed) · Date: 06/07/09 - 11:14 pm · For: Another Uchiha Fic: Operation Uchiha Reproduction
lol i think my idea was a good one and i laughed reading it again. i really enjoyed this chapter because it was like Ozzy+bats again lol.
Author's Response: Fastest. Review. Ever.rnrnThe chapters come in different styles depending on the song I am listening to while writing it. Tonight it was 3am by Eminem--lmfao.
Name: ontuva (Signed) · Date: 06/07/09 - 10:02 pm · For: If I owned Naruto-I'd have Akamaru lick my-
I didn't know fics like this existed in TONFA! I have found a treasure! Yay! Oh my dear god, my tummy is hurting because I laughed so hard (and now I'm afraid I have a huge Mary Sue problem myself...). :D
I really don't know what to say, because still, I'm a bit stunned. (And yep, I'm not a native speaker so my skillzor at English are relatively limited). This was...this was...
Gaaaah, I don't know what to say! This was pure win. You heard me right - PURE WIN!
If you write more of this, I'll surely come and read.
And no, I don't have anything constructive, because I'm a shitty reviewer. :< Sorry! =^_^=
Author's Response: Awwww... I think I am in wubb! rnrnWho needs to know english?! spell check for the win!
Name: dalaw (Signed) · Date: 05/07/09 - 01:04 am · For: The Ninja Lost Among the Forest
YES idea for powers! How bout Taku gets raped and that unclogs his main chakra point.oh well if you already have your idea just throwing it out there. I was eating a fudge pop and listening to blood on the dance floor (the band not mj) when this hit me like a freight train.
Name: dalaw (Signed) · Date: 05/07/09 - 12:41 am · For: If I owned Naruto-I'd have Akamaru lick my-
yes! I need to know what he wished for! i hope you update soon.
Author's Response: I r trying to find the will inside of meh to continue.
Name: dalaw (Signed) · Date: 05/07/09 - 12:40 am · For: The Ninja Lost Among the Forest
lol. streaking? nice! Lol i like this story because for once the oc isn't mary-sue and dosen't have abilities and isn't wearing any clothes at the moment lol. Tia and Priscilla FTW!
Name: Kikyaru360 (Signed) · Date: 03/07/09 - 10:03 am · For: If I owned Naruto-I'd have Akamaru lick my-
Ummmm, The Ninja Lost Among the...Forest? Sounds familiar... Anyway this is pretty funny. I hope you continue. By the way, I think it is kind of weird that most OC's are girls. Oh well!
Author's Response: Most ff writers are girls so they are more likely to use female OC's I suppose. rnrn
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 - 01:42 pm · For: If I owned Naruto-I'd have Akamaru lick my-
Lol thts an amusing chapter! nothing i have ever read...i wonder wat he'll wish for...do mind if i take my 2nd idea back? I like to use it a story of mine, but if ur going to use it fine and dandy just make sure to keep the story interesting and fresh for us readers..to me personally i like it to be random still...but thts my opion. Write ON!
crapy joke i no ^_^
Author's Response: Yeah sure you can keep your idea<3 I responded to your email finally btw, sorry it took so long. I knew the 2nd chapter was going to be random, but it should pick up from there hopefully lol.
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 29/06/09 - 03:51 pm · For: The Ninja Lost Among the Forest
Haha!! That was freaking awesome! Very good, I luaghed through most of it... No wait... All of it XD
Anyway, it kind of seems like he's in the Land of Rice paddies which is Sound Country so maybe bump into some Sand Nin, end up in Suna maybe... Hit on Temari... Things like that and he could always sneak along and go to Kohona.
As far as weapons go, the chainsaw thing I read in another review sounds fun but maybe take it to a new level... Maybe summon some killer turkey/squirrel hybrids with cat heads AND chainsaws!!!
Okay, I'll leave you alone now, See ya later dude!!!
Author's Response: I've been working on a more serious fic lately thats why I haven't updated this yet. I'm gonna pull out a new chapter tonight probably.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 29/06/09 - 01:42 pm · For: The Ninja Lost Among the Forest
ok...heres another idea i manage to get while drinking some monsters and eating to many pixie sticks...
how about Taku is wondering around...for a while and it getting dark.he's hungery and sees some poppies. He remembers something a girl said in class about certian flowers being eatable so he eats all lot of them. (reminder certian poppies are grow for the drug opium, some greater in strength than others in this story) He is so fucking high he cant think strait and losses his way in the forest next to him.
its dark and he finds some berries of unsual coloring (white w/ pink, blue, and orange spots) He eats them...30 mins later passes out.
Wakes up w/ killer headache and extreme nausa/dizness/etc. Stays were he is for a few days, (still eating the berries and flower) The 3rd or watever day it is He wakes up to yelling and a huge explosion and is totally still out of it. (the pain is numb by now) In comes Tobi flying in yelling and nails Taku in the chest. Taku doesnt understand a single thing the guys saying and is more confused with the guy trying to hide behind him.
Deidara comes in...
If u dont like this then let me no...i kinda like it for a story....co-story if u want.....let me no...i can try thinking of something different but its hard u no!
Author's Response: Lol your ideas are hilarious. You should create your own crazy fic, it is a lot of fun. Your ideas are too random though, maybe it is the sugar/caffeine. XD
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 - 12:43 am · For: The Ninja Lost Among the Forest
ok im trying to think of an idea for u but right now im having a sugar crash so ill email u wen i hav a plausable idea for u
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 26/06/09 - 05:53 pm · For: The Ninja Lost Among the Forest
@.@
u did wat to ur cat???
besides tht....why dont u have Takuyamo have a near death experience to get some really awesome power in this story??
I have my charas either have the costumes of their charas on wen their transported to the Narutoworld therefore they got their charas ablities
or
u can hav a soul separation thing hapn and the body goes temperaly dead...
or
u can have him get kidnapped by orochimaru, or something that invovles orochimaru and have the snake dude giv him the curse mark or something....
it doesnt really matter what u do, its ur story so make it unquie! im sure w/ this chapter already u can push ur chara further! (im seriously supporting u!!!) hey! y dont u try doing something that no one would ever think of doing!.....like.....ummm.....giv me a sec.....................................hav the guy b4 entering the naruto world nailing his brother's gf then have the bro find out go after his bro w/ a chainsaw and then hav the dumbass tht was stupid enough to nail the girl fall over....and.....get dragged off by wild....turkeys! after wards mayb have the chainsaw wielding bro fall into the naruto world as well after the main chara has befriended some imporant plot ninja....im guessing either the sand siblings, sound ninja dudes, or.....Gai Senei/Rock Lee who were on a mision where the brothers were.....
thats all i can think of from the really bad sugar rush im having from 2 monsters and a sprite. *giggle fit of hysteria****** write on!
Author's Response: lmao thanks for the review and ideas. I'm constantly changing chapter 1 as I write this because I just wrote it so quickly. Thanks for the quick review.rnrnThe chainsaw idea is nice, maybe he could bring or create a weapon found on earth and bring it into the Naruto world. The Orochimaru idea is always cool for an OC, but too easy. rnrnBut right now Taku is basically a peasant with no abilities, something has to happen in order for him to have some "unique" powers. No Jutsu crap or anything unless it is obtained somehow. Maybe he will get lost and find a patch of wild mushrooms that give him unnatural powers for short periods of times. Anything could happen.rnrnI need people to tell me who they want Taku to encounter or have sex with. I don't care if it's gay or straight or with an OC. He will sex someone eventually. Also if someone has an OC that wants to be included/bashed/sexed let me know. rnrnAlso, on the topic of being random, give me sum monster!