Reviews For Another Survivor: Uchiha Love Blossoms
Name: milliexchan (Signed) · Date: 08/04/09 - 05:55 pm · For: Chapter 28: Path of the Avenger
I'm so glad you updated again. Poor Katsumi.. poor Sakura! I never thought I'd actually feel sorry for her!
I'm enjoying the story, as always =)
Author's Response: haha thats how i felt too! i feel like im going insane sometimes...actually feeling bad for the characters....when I'm the one writing the story! I mean, if i really wanted to, i could've saved Naruto's father and the Uchiha, and everything would be perfect. But life isnt perfect, so their lives cant be perfect either. thanks for reviewing!
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 08/04/09 - 03:08 pm · For: Chapter 28: Path of the Avenger
AWESOME!!! I think I say that, what? Every chapter? Or at least nearly? Anyway, as I said before, this chapter was AWESOME! It had all the right stuff thrown in there to make it a perfect balance for me to enjoy! Fear the Drama, right?
Anyway, again, great chapter and I can NOT wait for the next one!!
Author's Response: :D haha ya i think you do say that every chapter, but dont stop!! It helps me so much knowing that some people are jumping with joy every time I update! Oh yes, the drama is the worst, so watch out! thanks, and I'll see u next chapter!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 07/04/09 - 05:54 pm · For: Chapter 28: Path of the Avenger
DUN DUND DUN!!!
XD
He snapped his arms... that's cruel, but necessary.
Great chapter!!!
Go Katsumi!!
Author's Response: haha nice. (and its dun DUN dun!!! by the way. haha jk, just teasing u!)rnyes, but there just isnt a story without violcence and cruelty. rnthanks, and hope you like the chapters to come!
Name: milliexchan (Signed) · Date: 02/04/09 - 08:35 pm · For: Chapter 27: Choices
OMG! I just read the whole story, because I can't sleep. Pleeease, you have to update soon! It's so good =)
x
Name: milliexchan (Signed) · Date: 02/04/09 - 06:30 pm · For: Chapter 3: Five Years Later
She reads Twilight >.<
I love her already, hehe.
Great work, I'm really enjoying reading this. I can't wait to see what happens next!
x
Author's Response: haha ya I made her kinda like me personality-wise. rnshe loves twilight: I love twilightrnshe really enjoys necterines: I love necterines. rnu get the picture. rnthanks for reviewing!
Name: milliexchan (Signed) · Date: 02/04/09 - 04:43 pm · For: Chapter 1: Beautiful Innocence
I really like the way this story is going. I would continue to read more, but it's almost 1am, so I've favourited and will read the rest tomorrow =)
I haven't been on this site for aaaages, it's good to see people are still writing good fics =D
x
Author's Response: thanks so much! rn:P
Name: ItachiUchihaLover (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 - 06:08 pm · For: Chapter 27: Choices
Geeze You almost gave me a heart attack. I thought they were going to kill each other.
I think my heart stopped half way through it.
Glad you updated! Are you going to update your other story soon?
Great Chapter!
Hurry Hurry Hurry with the next one!!!
Author's Response: haha i havent sunk that low yet...rnwell, im not going to update of The Bridge of Fate until this story is finished, so sorry!rnthanks for reviewing, and i hope u like the rest!
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 - 02:16 pm · For: Chapter 27: Choices
Ororchimaru is seriously beginning to p*** me off... Grr... How dare he use Katsumi like that! It makes me sick... Anyway, enough of my drama!
This chapter was totally AMAZING!! I loved it! It was so sad, so bitter yet totally beautiful. As I said before, the bitter sweet sting lingers! You continue to amaze me!!
*Cough Cough*
Okay, I'm done now. Sorry to act all crazy on you XD
Can't wait to see the next chapter!! I'll being looking forward to it!!!!
Author's Response: ya, orochimaru ticks me off too...rnthanks so much! bitter sweet is definitely one of the main themes here!rn:P see you next chapter!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 29/03/09 - 08:10 pm · For: Chapter 27: Choices
Aww..... sad.
Evil Orochimaru.... satan man!!
lol
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 24/03/09 - 06:06 pm · For: Chapter 26: Eyes of the Snake
Awww.... she loves him!!!
hahaha
Author's Response: O.Ornuhhhh...u just realized that??rnokay...rn:P thanks for reviewing!
Name: ItachiUchihaLover (Signed) · Date: 24/03/09 - 01:25 pm · For: Chapter 26: Eyes of the Snake
NNNOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU EVIL CRUEL PERSON!!! TO END IT RIGHT THERE!!!! -crys-
I take back what I said THIS is my favorite chapter now.
BEST CHAPTER EEVVEERR!!!!
Pllleeeaaassseee hurry with the next chapter or I and all of ur other reviewers who feel the same way will start a mob!
lol hurry hurry hurry! xD
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: *shrinks back into the shadows* I'M SORRY! i just had to make it like that! its all a part of the drama! seriously, you dont know how happy it makes me to hear that you actually take this story seriously, and it makes me even HAPPIER to hear that you even have favorite chapters within the story! thank you sooooooo much, and I'll see you next chapter! ^___________^
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 24/03/09 - 11:42 am · For: Chapter 26: Eyes of the Snake
For some reason this part made me laugh. "Blood. Death. Misery. More blood."
I don't know I'm just odd like that! Anyway though, this chapter was awesome, fantastic, epic, brilliant and just all around cool!!! I'm having a hard time sitting still!! It was just so exciting and the way you left the cliff hanger had this bitter sweet sting to both Sasuke and Katsumi. It had this very eering chill for chunks of the chapter but then so much excitement!!
By the way that part with Orochimaru and Katsumi, you know when Orochimaru threatens Sasuke, was creepy and some what disturbing but still it only added to the amazing effect of the chapter! Honestly, where can I get some of your talent?
P.S: One line reviews aren't nearly as fun to write XD
Excuse the length please!!
Author's Response: um...okay, i didnt write that to be funny, but whatever floats your boat..(huh, i've been saying that for a while now, in school and in reviews...) awwwwwwww thanks so much! "bitter sweet"...that describes sasuke and katsumi PERFECTLY! haha i just kinda gave something away, but watever. i'll let you make of that what you will. And you need absolutely no talent at all...BECAUSE YOU ALREADY HAVE IT! i seriously love your stories! they make me laugh every time i read them! rnrnPs. I agree, and secretly love it when reviewers take the time to write a detailed, extensive review for me to enjoy! So dont feel bad at all! :P :D
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 24/03/09 - 04:03 am · For: Chapter 26: Eyes of the Snake
DUDE! This chapter was pretty fucking gnarly!
I mean... It was very well-written and had perfect balance between action and deep-ness.
LOL, deep-ness? I'm stupid.
Author's Response: haha thanks so much! i think it was pretty knarly too...if i may say so myself...rnYOU'RE AMAZING! THANKS FOR REVIEWING!rnhaha ignore me please...
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 16/03/09 - 09:11 pm · For: Chapter 25: Forest of Death
Hmmmm..... I love Anko.
She's one of my favorite characters.
haha.
That's so cute.
If Sasuke loved her, he wouldn't leave, or he would take her with him.... this is going to be very interesting... I can't wait to see how you do this.
Keep going!!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 16/03/09 - 09:11 pm · For: Chapter 25: Forest of Death
Hmmmm..... I love Anko.
She's one of my favorite characters.
haha.
That's so cute.
If Sasuke loved her, he wouldn't leave, or he would take her with him.... this is going to be very interesting... I can't wait to see how you do this.
Keep going!!
Author's Response: ya i like her too. Anko is very cool, kinda scary, but cool all the same. well, sometimes you love someone so much that you have to make decisions that may tear you apart, but its for the sake of one you love. haha ya you'll just have to find out...Thanks for reviewing!
Name: ItachiUchihaLover (Signed) · Date: 16/03/09 - 01:22 pm · For: Chapter 25: Forest of Death
AMAZING CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!
hurry hurry with teh next one.
I'm dieing to know what happens to Sasuke and everyone in the Forest!
How will Katsumi react? What will Sasuke do? Will it ruin there relationship? THE QUESTIONS ARE ENDLESS!!!
I dieing with supence!!!!
Author's Response: haha thanks!rnhehehe...u'll just have to find out in the next chapter, and hold onto those questions!!!!!!!!!!!!!rn:P
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 15/03/09 - 05:27 pm · For: Chapter 25: Forest of Death
I'm having a hard time picking between:
And yes, Naruto actually went through the motions of informing Sasuke and I who told
who to tell each other when we were supposed to meet.
Or
Before Sasuke had been forced to tutor me in the ways of edible food preparation.
I really just can't pick which one I think is funnier :3 Oh well! Great chapter!! Man...
I can NOT WAIT for the action! I love blood and gore! People say I have a dark sense of humor XD
Though that might have something to do with the evil Sap Suckers...... Anyway. Again, great chapter!!
I rally do wonder what will happen though when the Snake shows up :)
Author's Response: ^_^rnrnThanks so much!!rnya sorry i didnt get to that this chapter (the violence i mean) but i guarentee that it will come next chapter! rnya...pretty dark vibe there... 0.0rnhaha thanks so much for reviewing!!rn:P
Name: Tetsuryuumaru (Signed) · Date: 04/03/09 - 04:02 pm · For: Chapter 1: Beautiful Innocence
Ooh... Neji got rejected. I expected more reactions, but then again, he IS cold and emotionless.
By the way, I understand your point about ninjas being more mature, but... um, honestly, when it comes to women, guys need to have experience before they begin to get over the awkwardness. In other words, ninja training doesn't help us at all. I remember being sixteen and having beaten the crap out of this guy twice my size and then stuttering the next day when a girl I used to like talked to me. But anyways, I liked the fact that Sasuke was nervous in Chapter 24.
Oh and also, when is there going to be more action?
Author's Response: haha totally. rnhehe...kinda odd...but i just realized that you're a guy. WOW WAS THAT WEIRD!!! i was reading your review and im like "hey...how does this person know so much from the guy point of view, but then i read it all, and lightbulbs flashed and so on! rnanyway, thanks so much for your advice (like seriously...thanks! Sorry if it seems a little unnatural in that respect, but im still finding it a bit difficult to include guys emotions and feelings of romantic nature!)rnand about the action, DONT WORRY! the ball sequence is officially over, and the Forest of Death is next! time to whip out the bad-ass fighting skills and kick some booty! rn*sigh* im so immature...please bear with me. rnThanks for reviewing, and i hope you like the rest!rn:P
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 28/02/09 - 05:34 pm · For: Chapter 24: The Ball
Land of Whirlpool?! Kushina?!!
KAKASHI CHANGING THE SUBJECT AT ALARMING SPEED?!!!
No... Wait minute...
Well now you should be putting spolier warnings on this XD
Anyway, I guess it only makes sense that you would bring her up...
You know, sooner or later right?
Anyway, great GREAT chapter! The romance, the comdey,
the drama, THE PERVERTED BOOK!!!
I did it again...... I'll just shut up now X3
Author's Response: haha kakashi is just weird like that! (BUT WE ALL STILL LOVE HIM! for weird and slightly unstable reasons...)rnya i should've, but its too late now! ya i was going to have Katsumi train with maybe Anko or someone, but i have to get someone who'll affect the story, like Ren! and Katsumi is going to learn some super amazing water jutus so watch out!rnthanks so much! (i just love making fun of that book! its like Kakashi's soul on paper!)rnhope you like the rest, and please keep reviewing!rn:P
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 28/02/09 - 08:31 am · For: Chapter 24: The Ball
Wow!!!
This is great!!
Another awesome chapter!!!
YAY!
Author's Response: thank you for reviewing!rni like this chapter the best out of all of them! rn:Prnhope you keep reading and reviewing!rn
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 27/02/09 - 10:23 pm · For: Chapter 1: Beautiful Innocence
Well, think of it this way: As ninja, Sasuke and Katsumi are both a lot more emotionally mature than people our age. Not to mention the traumatic experience that led them to be close in the first place.
So, no, I don't think you're writing the relationship too quickly. I think that it's dragged out a lot more than other stories... AND I LOVE IT!
Author's Response: thanks so much!!!!rnu r amazing with your positive comments! they really keep me going!rn(oh, and thank you very much for putting me as your favorite author, I'm touched. also, im a girl, which i put in my bio, but only after i read that you didnt know! its pretty awkward that its not obvious in my style of writing....)rn:D
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 27/02/09 - 10:19 pm · For: Chapter 24: The Ball
That's.... *sniff*... so romantic!!!! I love the dancing on the dock under the stars bit!!!!
HAHA, Neji got rejected! Mwahahahahah!
And Uzumaki Ren's appearance... dun dun dahhhh!
Author's Response: thank you so much!rnya, but neji took it pretty well (which also means that he wasnt that attatched to her in the first place, he just liked her at first glance, whereas Sasuke actually KNOWS her. rndun dun daaahhh indeed...
Name: ItachiUchihaLover (Signed) · Date: 27/02/09 - 08:42 pm · For: Chapter 24: The Ball
that was AAWWEESSOOMMEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =D =D
BEST CHAPTER EVER!!!
Poor Neji. but sasuke and katsumi are soooooooooo cute together! =D
Love it! Hurry with the next chapter!
=D =D =D
1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10
Author's Response: haha thanks so much!rni definitely have to agree with you that this was by far my best chapter!!! :Drnya they are, thats why they're together!!!rnoh, have you read the newest naruto manga chapter????? please tell me you have! i'd luv to talk about it, cuz i have NO idea what happened!rn:)
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 26/02/09 - 06:50 pm · For: Chapter 23: Getting Ready
Woot!!!
I'm having a field day reading all of these random stories!!!
But, yours is one of the best!!!
^_^
Author's Response: thank you so much! i hope u keep reading and reviewing!rn:P
Name: Tetsuryuumaru (Signed) · Date: 26/02/09 - 02:18 pm · For: Chapter 22: Red, Blue, and Silver
To answer your question, yes you are taking the relationship too fast. Remember, Sasuke is still a twelve-year-old (emotionally stunted) boy who only three or so hours before realized his feelings for Katsumi. Right now he should be in the 'terrified, awkward, she's-gonna-laugh-at-me-when-I-tell-her phase', (never mind that it's obvious that Katsumi obviously feels the same way towards him. At that age, we're always insecure) NOT acting like a fifteen-year-old Casanova. Katsumi is sort of acting her age, but Sasuke... nope. Sorry if I was rude.
Author's Response: no not at all! its great to hear some dirt from someone! (you weren't rude at all, u just were honest, and i appreciate that you are willing to state your opinion!)rn Hmm, u do have a good point, but i also have to argue that Sasuke isn't the same boy he is in the manga. in the manga, i agree, he is a emotionally stunted boy who is very awkward when it comes to relating to others. but in my version story, he has his best friend katsumi, who is also dealing with the same experience, to help him handle the fear and pain of being alone. yes i agree that we are all insecure at twelve, but think about them not as children, but the tasks and responsibilities as ninja they are given. a ninja rule is to lock away all your feelings and not to cry, because that is their duty to their village. do you really think that after seeing as much as team 7 has seen that they are still so young and innocent anymore? i mean, they were trained to act like adults, and that training starts when they enter the academy at eight years old. and seeing as Sasuke and Katsumi are a bit mature for their age, do you really think its so strange for them to take advantage of their attraction towards one another? and i also agree that im making them a little older, but i also (i think i put this in earlier chapters, not sure. if i havent i will do so from now on) think that i have added a inexperienced light to Sasuke's character. He has no idea what to do when it comes to love. He knows he loves Katsumi, but he's still awkward in his own silent way. rnbut i really appreciate your input, and i hope that you read this and understand my point of view a little better than before. I hope that you still enjoy the manga, and hope to get more of ur reviews!rn~crimson lily