Reviews For Crimson Tears
Name: lana lana lana (Anonymous) · Date: 07/03/08 - 05:43 pm · For: Chapter 13: A Test of Strength
YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL Yur crazy cuzzo
Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 05/03/08 - 08:58 pm · For: Chapter 18:She's Truly Learned Nothing...
damn, a lot of emotion in this chapter. hinata slapped sakura!? wow! sakura saying she should be dead, wow again. im glad hinata to see trying to cheer her up, thats good to see, cant wait for the update, I FINALLY SEE THE NOOOOOOOOOOOTE!!!!!!!!^_^
Author's Response: LOL! hilarious and crazy!!! thanks again for your always helpful reviews!!!! YAY you see the note!!!
Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 05/03/08 - 04:56 pm · For: Chapter 17: Itachi, Kisame and...Naruto???
wow, looks like pein is in a bad mood, someone got up at the wrong side of the bed. hmm, i wonder, since he called kisame, kisame sensei does that mean hes starting to get use to being in akatsuki, i wonder^_^ nice addition to the chapter, cant wait for a update on it or a new chapter will be nice to.
Author's Response: I know...perhaps its jealousy.....anywerez yes he's definitely getting used to being in the Akatsuki! ^_^ thank you very much!!! I'll be updating tomorrow since my bastard of a nephew keeps stealing computer time. Damn I HATE sharing...
Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 04/03/08 - 06:35 pm · For: Chapter 17: Itachi, Kisame and...Naruto???
HA, i knew the mother bit was coming in somewhere^_^ i like what you did with oragami that was my fovorite part, and making naruto and konan like connect in a certain way:) hm, i wonder, i think your gonna add one more part to this chapter, are you?
Author's Response: YUR TOO SMART!!! LOL thank you i thought it was cute and Naruto and Konan connect so much....so cute....Yup I'm adding more to this chappie! ^_^
Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 04/03/08 - 05:06 pm · For: Chapter 17: Itachi, Kisame and...Naruto???
easy itachi, clan, murdered, sasuke AVENGER, Naruto friends with sasuke^_^ u hate me O-O(cries)
Author's Response: lol! Damn it! Thought i was being clever! ^_^ I can never hate u!!! ^_^_^^_^_^_^_^_^^_^_^^_^_^_^
Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 04/03/08 - 11:47 am · For: Chapter 17: Itachi, Kisame and...Naruto???
im guessing its not done^_^ but no notes0-0, well, how much of a coincidence is it the same people that took him from the villiage so to speak, now he has to hang out with cool.I feel the name sasuke is going to be involved in this thanks to itachi, anyway cant wait for either the rest of the chapter or the next chapter depending on what your going to do with this chapter^_^
Author's Response: nope its not! I know isnt that funny??? Oh! I hate you! ^_^ How did you know Sasuke was going to be involved!!! LOL! indeed, ill be finishing today!!
Name: mk (Anonymous) · Date: 02/03/08 - 09:10 pm · For: Chapter 16: Pursuit of Sanity
whens next one coming out
Author's Response: later today!!!!
Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 02/03/08 - 08:10 pm · For: Chapter 16: Pursuit of Sanity
man this was a sad chapter its good to read one of these in a while, but your making it sound like she is trying to forget about naruto. please tell me that aint so:( anyway overall this was a nice chapter, even the way you worded it was nice.
Author's Response: LOL! " please say it ain't so" Your crazy. Once again thank you very much for the review and constructive criticism. No Hinata is definitely not trying to forget about Naruto. She simply realized that she was driving herself into depression and she needed to break out of it. For the time being shes simply focusing on taking care of herself and trying to find another way to rescue Naruto. rnP.s Your compliments are so flattering ^_^
Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 01/03/08 - 06:55 pm · For: Chapter 15: Speak To Me
i really liked this chapter, i liked how who didnt make it all serious in this chapter where naruto says what rain, o that rain. i also liked the thing with konan at the end, it was almost like she was looking over him like a mother would, once again great job, i really loved how u wrote this chapter.
Author's Response: thank you^_^ just like with the water fight and Naruto taking Hinata to her room i have to add some fun in it every once in a while to release the tension the readers get from the serious chapters and get them all relaxed and calmed down for some fresh craziness! rnKonan is very much like a maternal shadow for Naruto. Shes watches over him but shes just as distant and dissimilar to him as Pein. rnThank u very much for the compliments on the way the chapter was written! I really appreciate it and it encourages me to write more!rnRemain a devoted fan and I'll remain a devoted writer!!! luv ya bye!
Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 29/02/08 - 09:07 pm · For: Chapter 15: Speak To Me
author notes, like at the end or beginning of the story?
Author's Response: beginning ^_^
Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 28/02/08 - 07:54 pm · For: Chapter 15: Speak To Me
i dont see any end notes O-o
Author's Response: REALLY??? Oh sorry then. @_@......rnI'll start putting them in the authors notes then, you guys should be able to see them there!rn^_^ There!
Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 28/02/08 - 04:39 pm · For: Chapter 15: Speak To Me
to tell you the truth i got a little confused on who was talking around the whole fearing peins wrath part, so who was saying that, kanan? overall this was a good chapter but surprisingly short but at least its a new chapter.
Author's Response: UGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!! tHIS CHAPTER ISN'T OVER!! DON'T YOU GUYS READ THE END NOTES??? I'm finishing it today and Konan was the one saying that, yes. 'at least its a new chapter
Author's Response: UGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!! tHIS CHAPTER ISN'T OVER!! DON'T YOU GUYS READ THE END NOTES??? I'm finishing it today and Konan was the one saying that, yes. LOL 'at least its a new chapter.'
Name: MindlessWanderer (Signed) · Date: 28/02/08 - 02:23 pm · For: Chapter 15: Speak To Me
I'm sorry I love the story and all but you have a bunch of typos which include:
others=others'
women=woman
waist=waste
Sorry i don't mean to be rude or anything but it was getting on my nerves lol.
Author's Response: THANK U! I'll fix them cause typos irritate me too! ^_-
Name: kurisuchin45556 (Anonymous) · Date: 28/02/08 - 09:32 am · For: Chapter 15: Speak To Me
holy, moly, that's some serious awesomeness.
Author's Response: LMAO! Thanks u know you rock!
Name: mk (Anonymous) · Date: 27/02/08 - 11:42 pm · For: Chapter 15: Speak To Me
when next part????
Author's Response: Hmmmmm......probably later on today when I'm done with all my homework. My teachers apparently think slavery is still the latest trend cause they're working me like crazy @_@...
Name: Konoha's Red Flash (Anonymous) · Date: 27/02/08 - 08:01 pm · For: Chapter 14: Two Kunoichi, One Shinobi
Awl come on that wasn't even 10 minutes worth. You write good stories, Come on make them longer.
Author's Response: LOL rnFine, Fine!rnu guys are so spoiled! rn^_^
Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 27/02/08 - 06:57 pm · For: Chapter 14: Two Kunoichi, One Shinobi
i never get tired of reading your story dude I, I love it i can picture this acually happening at some point, please keep going with story, i have to keep reading!
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!!!!!!!! ^_-rnU rock! Irnll keep writing if you keep reading!!!!!rnThat means alot!
Name: Patsuki21 (Signed) · Date: 27/02/08 - 06:30 pm · For: Chapter 14: Two Kunoichi, One Shinobi
cool sakura got told off
Author's Response: LOL! She got so played. Thought she had a love song coming her way...NOT
Name: mk (Anonymous) · Date: 26/02/08 - 06:19 pm · For: Chapter 1: Who I Am...
ahhhh whens next chapter coming out???!??!?!
Author's Response: hmmmm....how about tomorrow? I have too much homework right now and I coach JV softball. AND I HAVE A TEST TOMORROW!!!rnbut yup, ill do it tomorrow ^_- lol
Name: Ndasuunye (Signed) · Date: 24/02/08 - 06:45 pm · For: Chapter 13: A Test of Strength
Hmm overall this is good so far. How will Naruto react to two females who have sudden apparel for the jinchuuriki. I will be waiting to read more
Author's Response: thank u! ^_^
Name: Ndasuunye (Signed) · Date: 24/02/08 - 06:08 pm · For: Chapter 10: Uncivilized Bonding
Hmm I see a showdown commencing between the two kunochi. This shall be interesting.
Author's Response: ah yes..........enjoy
Name: Ndasuunye (Signed) · Date: 24/02/08 - 05:54 pm · For: Chapter 8: A One Sided Deal
Hmm this is odd. That went too fast. That wasn't a very good way for him to just go with the person. But whatever.
Author's Response: ............
Name: Ndasuunye (Signed) · Date: 24/02/08 - 05:25 pm · For: Chapter 4: Naruto's embarrassment
Hmm you lost me there. I thought team kakashi was going on a mission. Then you have them in a water fight what the deal here.
Author's Response: i have a habit with that when it comes to you. You gotta mix fun with seriousness
Name: Ndasuunye (Signed) · Date: 24/02/08 - 05:20 pm · For: Chapter 3: Questions and Answers
Hmm this is going pretty slow. Nothing much is happening. I hope I read something faster.
Author's Response: um...ok
Name: Ndasuunye (Signed) · Date: 24/02/08 - 04:28 pm · For: Chapter 1: Who I Am...
I don't know what to think of it so far since it's kind of short. SO yeah.
Author's Response: um..thanks?