I disliked even though I liked. That´s why: you are harsh. I mean, you do not need to be like Naruto's program (or manga) where we got distressed with fillers and so on, but this is something HUGE, right?

Something like a epic can not be depicted like a usual magazine picture. Each of your chapters has material to be developed seven or eight times lenght. Like I said, not like Naruto's usual, but like Illiad way.

Also, Hiashi is a bit strange. This kind of technique can not be taught lightly. As one foresees future, one has to be prepared. The way he talks about Neji's lack of trainment of this future'jutsu is Naruto like! Even Byakugan is not lightly used, so anybody would not expect Hiashi to be as eager to use future'jutsu like sugar in a cake.

Like I said, if you wrote a bit more, perhaps I can believe in your Hiashi.

Author's Response: First of all, Neji didn't use the Future Justsu because when he saw Konoha get destroyed it scared him to death. Also I don't understand much about what you're saying towards my Hiashi. But, thanks for the comment anyway. I have two other fics if you want to read those as well.