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Reviews For CRIMSON

Name: Dragon (Anonymous) · Date: 24/08/07 - 07:03 am · For: Chapter 10: A Secret Weapon
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.


Name: stylin_crimson (Anonymous) · Date: 24/08/07 - 04:13 am · For: Chapter 10: A Secret Weapon
YAY! You updated! I love the story.

Author's Response: Yeyyy! I know I took my time! but ah welll, im so happy you love it


Name: Dragon (Anonymous) · Date: 23/08/07 - 08:31 am · For: Chapter 9: Falling from grace
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response: lol thanks! well I just updated xD took me a long damn time though!


Name: Bianca_sempai (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 - 09:33 am · For: Chapter 9: Falling from grace
wwwwwwwwwww told you HES A MAN HORE MWAHAHAHAHHAA......10 from me.....im enjoying this its like a drama...tune in next time to see what happens on corenation street..(theme tune)

Author's Response: LOL! weell thankyou :) i'm so happy you read this far! And I just up[dated so so COMMENT MEEE! :)


Name: Bianca_sempai (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 - 08:04 am · For: Chapter 8: Love Hurts
wwwwwwwwwwwwwww......drama or what!!! this is on its way to my favouraits...:D KERPLAUGH! and i diapier hahahahhahah sasuke is still a man hore


Author's Response: yes, I cannot help it. This is really one of the most sex involved mpregs I have ever done!


Name: Bianca_sempai (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 - 07:47 am · For: Chapter 7: Caught Out
heameahahahmwahahah..(evil laugh) as i said before sasuke is a man hore and probably they all have a tree sum...:D (joking) liking the story...:D

Author's Response: haha threesome..hmmm i think I like that idea!


Name: Bianca_sempai (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 - 06:47 am · For: Chapter 5: Unity
hahah told you sasuke was a man hore....read and review my story please...:D (pout face) love this chapter..:D:D:D loads of smiles and a 10 from me..:D

Author's Response: lol yes yes I'll read and reveiw your story, Im sorry I havent been on this...so I havent been able to answer your reviews for ages!


Name: Bianca_sempai (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 - 06:23 am · For: Chapter 4: Lie of Love
awwwww thats soo sweet sasuke is crying...awwwwwww...:D itachi...the sick bastard..mwahahahaha...sasuke is a ma hore...

Author's Response: lol poor sasuchan! I like making him cry and being sad...yes yes he is my emo sasuke! and yeah isnt sasuke being a slut just great!


Name: Bianca_sempai (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 - 06:02 am · For: Chapter 3: Visit from a madman
ooooooooo...this chapter has alot of lemon... :0...:D

Author's Response: hehe...I like lemon :) I like writing sick things *cries*


Name: Bianca_sempai (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 - 05:44 am · For: Chapter 2: The New Life
awwwwww...this story reminds me of i shite imas....honestly...buuuut this is more disterbing and the baby is itachi's...cool! :D

Author's Response: haha :) yeah it is sorta like Ai Shite Imas except warped! ahh I dont know what came ovfer me to write this. But I try to pride myself in the fact that I write intresting good mpreg fanfictions! yes its my specialty.


Name: Bianca_sempai (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 - 05:34 am · For: Chapter 1: Near Death
mwahahahaha......:D

Author's Response: oh I know....hehehe I'm sick


Name: KakshiGirl (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 - 04:05 am · For: Chapter 6: Cheating and forgiving
very intense, lots of homosexual-ness, mildly interesting, TTFN


Name: Lamerstu (Signed) · Date: 21/07/07 - 09:40 pm · For: Chapter 1: Near Death
Wow. I'm not a big fan of ItaSasu but strangely I liked this very much. And I need suggestions for my fanfics... I'm very new at this. Thank you! ^_^

Author's Response: lol well I'm happy you liked it, many people have wrote 'im not into itasasu but i liked your fic' so you know, I'm sorta happy that I can make such a contriversal subject...sorta accepted haha! It is a good fic because it is so out there! I hope I did give you some ideas for your fics


Name: Itachiluvskagome (Signed) · Date: 15/07/07 - 07:33 pm · For: Chapter 9: Falling from grace
keep on writing this story I might add on but I have writers block.


Name: stylin_crimson (Signed) · Date: 06/07/07 - 11:35 am · For: Chapter 9: Falling from grace
Update please. Its been ages, update it! :[


Name: Shishiuri (Signed) · Date: 05/07/07 - 11:20 pm · For: Chapter 9: Falling from grace
...AHH!!*spazz spazz*plz Plz PPLLZZ!!!!Plz and the next chapter soon!!I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!


Name: Alice Nine (Signed) · Date: 05/07/07 - 05:58 am · For: Chapter 1: Near Death
Um ALex my dear, I seriously have to question you, should i be worried that we share a house? hahahahhaha.
ok my lesbian twin, I guess I'm reviewing because you are a fucking great writing, and I dont know if I can describe that in words. arhhh so i had to use th f word, but I'm sorry alex, youknow ididntmeanit hahah/.

Yeah innterbreading can have its advantages, like that article you read me, :S are you trying to tell me somthing alex?? jokes jokes

firslt I found it very funny at the fact that Sasuke had to drink *ahem* that was priceless alex, I do remember you laughing evily about that when you wrote it.

ALso!
“I had fun.” Itachi said before he disappeared in a puff of dirt.

puff of dirt?

hahahhahhahah

shouldnt it be puff of smoke, or dust or somthing but dirt, you crack me up, you funny thing!

Author's Response: lol...Tashyyy! No you shouldnt be worried we share a house, I write about this stuff, dream about this stuff..but actually DOING this stuff....ok maybe in the future AHAHAHA joking!rnlol nice Tash you refer to me as your 'lesbian twin' and as a 'fucking good writer' hahaha, its all true xDrnDont insult my puff of dirt, it involved a whole lot of thinking...its all there for a reason!


Name: SasukeLover1 (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 - 09:58 pm · For: Chapter 3: Visit from a madman
Love it plz continue.^.^


Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 21/06/07 - 12:56 pm · For: Chapter 9: Falling from grace
Aouch! He told him! He actually told him! *is so excited* Gaah, I wonder what Naruto is gonna say. And do... I love this chapter, really love it. The end is marvelous, fantastic!

I'm also glad you're feeling a little bit better. Hope you can go on in a way that feels alright for you.
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-- AllieChan : XD its great isnt it! Im so happy with how it came out, it could have been better though, owell. one of these days I will write something so perfect I wont beleive it. thanks for the concern sweetie! yes i think writing is just such a perfect way for me to feel better!


Name: Nao_angel (Signed) · Date: 21/06/07 - 09:34 am · For: Chapter 9: Falling from grace
Tsk, tsk, i wonder how Naru's gonna react...i hope he will at least believe him! and I feel bad for Sasuke, he looks awful...damn itachi, i hope you torture that bastard...anyway, i hope you're feeling even better and better now Alex;) take care, k^^
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-- AllieChan : mwahahaha you just have to keep reading! ye I feel bad for Sasuke too but I like torturing him. thanks Nikki, yeah Im feeling heaps better. thanks for the review hun!


Name: nejiluver (Signed) · Date: 20/06/07 - 10:04 pm · For: Chapter 1: Near Death
when i read chapter nine i was like OMG when there weren't anymore chapters to read! You've gotta update it as soon as possible! Please? =)
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-- AllieChan : lol im sooo sorry, I try to update fastish, I mean I do like to complete my fan fics! I shall update mondayn -wednesday!


Name: nejiluver (Signed) · Date: 20/06/07 - 10:03 pm · For: Chapter 1: Near Death
when i read chapter nine i was like OMG when there weren't anymore chapters to read! You've gotta update it as soon as possible! Please? =)


Name: SquareBallProduction (Signed) · Date: 20/06/07 - 11:45 am · For: Chapter 9: Falling from grace
I love the story... and the plot... please keep it up and update soon!! ^^ SBP
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-- AllieChan : thanks hun! I will try to update monday to wednessday! so please look forward to it.


Name: Mya (Signed) · Date: 20/06/07 - 03:00 am · For: Chapter 9: Falling from grace
*gasps* Oh god, i hate cliffs! GAH! poor sasu, he's just...aah, screwed up. I loved this chap alex it was full of emotions^^
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-- AllieChan : lol cliffhangers are what I do best mwahahaha! Im sorry about them but I want to keep the reader waiting for the next one. and also it gives me something intresting to start the chapter off with. yes emotions, i love adding emotions!


Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 18/06/07 - 01:24 pm · For: Chapter 8: Love Hurts
*huggles* I know what you're going through darling. Four years ago I asked my dad if I could stay at mum's place for the remaining Christmas holidays, simply because she lived closer to my friends. He said yes and told me to call when I wanted him to pick me up again. I called three weeks later only to be met with an electronic voice telling me the number had been changed and that no further information was given out. Took me three weeks to get a hold of my dad, he wouldn't pick up his cell phone, and then he told me I was gonna live with my mum from now on. The following day all my stuff was neatly packed in boxes placed outside out door, he left them when I was in school. I didn't talk to him once in three years. Now I talk to him occasionally, but I don't love him anymore and I never will again. I definitely hope things turn out better between you an your mum, but don't appologize for something that wasn't your fault. She's the adult and the one who should act like one, you should not have to be the parent of your parent.

The chapter is lovely, yet sad. I love it, naturally. Take care sweetie and write when you feel up to it. As I said, I know what you're going through and you have my full sympathy. *huggles again*
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-- AllieChan : Im really sorry to hear that, but im happy that you understand what im going on abour and not being a drama queen about it. It realln is tough, you feel like you cant count on them anymore. BUt things are differant with my mum she always lets me down and i dont know why i keep putting my heart on the line for her. Yeah Im not going to appologize for what wasnr m faulkt. Im happy you liked the chapter, yes it was sad but sometimes sad chapters can be very beautiful, at least I think so.


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