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Penname: Randomguy [Contact]
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Membership status: Member
Member since: 27/08/06
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Begin 2011
{ Hello, I'm back. My two old stories about Ninja's and random comedy got deleted somewhere back when I wasn't here. My new story is "Knights, and Castles, and Reincarnation (Oh My) -_-" It's something I'm really enjoying writing, so I hope you enjoy reading.

My new info:

Human: Yes
Sane: yes, clinically sane -_-
Age: 19

Thats pretty much all you need to know.

My views on Naruto somewhat modified when Characters started dying in Shippuden. I still go for Naruto on occasion, but I take it with a grain of salt now.

Anything before the death of Asuma Is awesome IMO.

My favorite couples are still

Hinata x Naruto
Tameri x Shikamaru
Neji x TenTen

with the additions of

Kurenai x Asuma (only in fanfiction does he live on.)

Kakashi x Sakura (pedo perhaps, but none the less...)

Sasuke x Karin (Lets face it, even Sasuke gets lonely.)

I'm back. It's like,

*takes off sunglasses*

I never left.

YEAAAAHHHH!!!!!

(kudos if you get the reference.)

Ah, my Yahoo messenger is knightsilv@yahoo.com.}
End 2011



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Stories by Randomguy [2]
Series by Randomguy [0]
Challenges by Randomguy [0]
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Reviews by Randomguy


Title: Out of the Mist by DancerOfShadows
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Konoha has been attacked by the Village of Mist. The battle leaves both sides severely weakened, though one ninja from each village seem to be the most changed...
Category: General Fiction > Character-Centric
Characters: Kakashi Hatake
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: Of Fire and Water
Chapters: 6 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 3971 | Read count: 10425 [Report This]
Published: 12/04/06 | Updated: 27/05/06


Reviewer: Randomguy Signed Liked
Date: 31/08/06 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

*tears are seen in Randomguys eyes* I loved the ending... finally a not uber uber cherecter very rare...... gona go read the seqel now :)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. Yeah, I try my hardest to have as much faults as strengths, like real people. I \"hate\" godmodling. Thanks for the review!



Title: Sounds of a New Destiny by Jareth Dallis
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 39]
Summary: Naruto is taken away from Konohagakure at age eight, he grows up to be a talented ninja under the guidence of the Snake Sannin. He begins to doubt whether he should stay loyal to Orochimaru while on a mission to acquire a kunoichi named Haku.





Naruto Harem, NaruHarem, Naruto x harem, NarutoxHarem simply Naruto is lucky!
Category: General Fiction, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Sakura, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 | Completed: No | Word count: 85591 | Read count: 24523 [Report This]
Published: 19/02/07 | Updated: 19/04/07


Reviewer: Randomguy Signed Liked
Date: 18/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: A new destiny offered

nice story, with the whole naruto x every girl near his age, ah the comeddy :)



Reviewer: Randomguy Signed Liked
Date: 20/03/07 Title: Chapter 10: A change to the Kekkei Genkai

Nice, keep going :)



Title: Pirates of the Mist by silverwolf1213
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 102]
Summary:
ABANDONED: DUE TO LACK OF MOTIVATION, THIS WILL NO LONGER BE UPDATED - LOOK AT THE REWRITE A TALE BEST TOLD DEAD.




Thanks to BattyBigSister for the wonderful banner, and thanks to Sasaui Uchiha for help with the summary!


"When you try to escape the past, it always finds a way to come back to haunt you."

The Blue Tiger of the Mist has always tried to escape that awful history. Now suddenly, things that were meant to be left behind keep on reappearing.

Instead of being surrounded by the pirates of The Midnight Thief, shinobi of Konohagakure have taken their place. Memories and secrets from the past are returning, pushing for the heart. The snake man is once again on the hunt, searching for his prey. Leaving the crew to go to Konoha is suddenly bringing everything forward.

Will it be enough to crack the legendary captain of the renowned Blue Pirates?


Category: OC-centric, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Crossovers, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters: OC, Orochimaru, Sasuke Uchiha, Team Asuma, Team Gai, Team Kakashi, Team Kuranai, Tsunade
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: Hoist the Colors
Chapters: 13 | Completed: No | Word count: 77958 | Read count: 32639 [Report This]
Published: 18/12/10 | Updated: 14/04/12


Reviewer: Randomguy Signed Liked
Date: 21/07/11 Title: Chapter 8: Secrets

I like it! Very well done, and Kasumi demonstrates, despite her cruel exterior, has the impulse to help others. I think this chapter was very good, and I like how it sets up then ext (coming) chapter very well. I look forward to your next update! :)

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you so much for the kind words! Yup, Kasumi does show the ability to help others, and I\'m glad you noticed that. I\'m so glad you liked this chapter, it means a lot! Thank you so much for reading and thanks even more for reviewing. I really appreciate your feedback and insight!



Reviewer: Randomguy Signed Liked
Date: 28/03/11 Title: Chapter 7: Pirates Will Be Pirates

Hmmm, I'd say Kasumi has a past that needs to be unraveled, and thats something I want to see! Also, I think, based on the characters' past histories and their personalities, and the general Narutoness of it all, a happy ending where Kasumi gets transformed is in order, after suitable Naruto corniness of course. Just my two cents. All in all an awesome chapter :) the plot moves along, and I see several possible destinations for it!

Author's Response: Oh yes, Kasumi has a very complicated past. And it shall be discovered in due time, my faithful reader. Hmm... okay, so there is one vote for a happy ending. Yeah, I guess that would be considered Naruto corniness. I see your point, and I understand your perspective. Thanks for taking the time to share how you feel the story is doing and where it should go. I really appreciate readers\' feedback. And as the plot moves along.... even I can\'t wait to see what happens next! ;D Anyways, thank you so much for reading, it means a lot! And thanks again for telling me your thoughts, it really inspires me to write!



Reviewer: Randomguy Signed Liked
Date: 25/03/11 Title: Chapter 6: Reformation Begins Now!

Interesting! Hmmm, I see a few possible endings..... very enjoyable plot development. And of course Guy sensei is hilarious in any case :)

Author's Response: Yay! The plot development was noticeable! Woohoo! And Guy sensei... what an interesting character :) Thanks for still reading! And thanks a lot for still reviewing!



Reviewer: Randomguy Signed Liked
Date: 25/03/11 Title: Chapter 5: Waking Up In Vegas

Interesting. I liked it. I have no idea were it goes from here.... I have theories, but Ill just have to read the next chapter right away to find out for sure. She feels like a character that a lot of work went into. WHatever happens, I hope there's still some Naruto corniness in store ;)

Author's Response: Yeah, I\'m unpredictable like that. Then again, I\'ve been told that I am pretty predictable, so who knows? I can\'t release any information to you on what could possibly happen next, so you\'ll just have to read to find out! Kasumi really did take a lot of work. There\'s a lot to her that is slowly being uncovered to the readers. As for Naruto corniness... eh, read to find out ;D Thanks for reading and thanks a bunch for reviewing!



Reviewer: Randomguy Signed Liked
Date: 25/03/11 Title: Chapter 4: Rematch! Pirates versus Ninjas!

Now THAT was an unexpected plot twist! A girl....v ery interesting! And I loved the battle, with the Kekkei Genkai and the intelligently conducted finale attack by Kakashi. I wonder what happens next :)

Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I\'m a very big fan of feminine power. And you never ever see a female captain, so I figured why not? I had always planned for the captain to be a girl. I\'m glad that you enjoyed the battle scene, I always have trouble with them. I hope you continue to enjoy this story! Thanks for continuing to read and thanks a lot for reviewing!



Reviewer: Randomguy Signed Liked
Date: 24/03/11 Title: Chapter 3: Two Totally Different Plans

Awesome! Naruto corniness found! Also, I like how these pirates are developed. They feel like a band of organized outlaws. I'm looking forward to seeing how things work out :)

Author's Response: Told you there was Naruto corniness! I\'m glad the pirates seem organized to you. That\'s what I was going for, so I\'m glad I nailed it! I hope you continue to enjoy the rest of this story. Thanks for reading and thanks even more for reviewing!



Reviewer: Randomguy Signed Liked
Date: 23/03/11 Title: Chapter 2: New Mission! Teams Kakashi and Kurenai Deployed!

Alright, Action, Jutsu... a plot, probably some Naruto corniness on the way... I like it :)

Author's Response: Action, check. Jutsu, check. Plot, check. Naruto corniness... well, you haven\'t seen anything yet! But I\'m glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and thanks even more for reviewing!



Reviewer: Randomguy Signed Liked
Date: 23/03/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Blue Pirates

You review my stories all the time, so I figure I should check out your stories, and wow, this is a good introduction, I like it. It feels.... How Naruto is supposed to feel. Onward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Aw, that is so kind of you to review my stories! And I\'m glad you thought it was a good intro. I can\'t think of a good adjective for how Naruto is supposed to feel, but I\'m gonna take it as a compliment! Thanks a lot, and I\'m so glad you decided to read this!



Title: The Truth of War by Swrestler12
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 29]
Summary: The Enemy of my Enemy is my Friend... for now. The European nations are pitted against each other in a battle of not only power, but of a chance of gaining freedom from a power unlike any other. War has a way of making even the strongest of men simply fall.

Basically this is a World War 2 story with most of the well known characters of Naruto. I Would like some suggestions of what the characters should be concerning race and other things such as title. I have some ideas but would like some others.
Category: General Fiction > Character-Centric, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Real World, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Other
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Horror, Humor
Warnings: AU, Death, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 | Completed: No | Word count: 12731 | Read count: 18605 [Report This]
Published: 07/03/11 | Updated: 21/08/12


Reviewer: Randomguy Signed Liked
Date: 02/05/11 Title: Chapter 5: Remembering Debt

This was very good, I especially liked how vividly you described what was happening ,it gave a real sense of the feelings of the moment.

Author's Response: Thanks for the update. Yeah, i wanted to give the reader a sense of what was going on. ^_^



Reviewer: Randomguy Signed Liked
Date: 02/05/11 Title: Chapter 6: Always the innocent ones....

Wow, Neji is very scary here. He fits well as the elite german General in charge of such a program. The Nurse is described well, and its good to know a bit about her character. all in all a very good chapter.



Reviewer: Randomguy Signed Liked
Date: 28/03/11 Title: Chapter 1: Red Death

Wow, his is a unique Idea that I've never encountered before! This is an interesting first chapter, and I like it, Especially the WWII theme. It somehow.... makes sense to have Naruto in this setting.

Author's Response: Well thank you, and well i do love a good WWII story and i thought, \"What would it be like if the characters of Naruto were in this setting?\" I got a pretty good picture in my head and thought some other people would like this story as well. Thanks for the Review.



Reviewer: Randomguy Signed Liked
Date: 28/03/11 Title: Chapter 2: Keeps the Doctor Away

Very creepy. Extremely so. Shino fits right in as the sadistic insane doctor performing experiments on live humans though. Good job capturing the setting.Now the question is, who is the nurse?

Author's Response: Yes i always did picture Shino as the quiet crazy type and what better place to put him then as a German Doctor. The Nurse..... well i don\'t know to much about that, I was thinking of Ino as the nurse but then thought that it could be some random nurse. I don\'t know help me out here. ^_^.\r\n\r\nIf you would like to offer up any suggestions i would be glad to see what you have to say. Any and all help is welcomed and thanks again for the review



Reviewer: Randomguy Signed Liked
Date: 28/03/11 Title: Chapter 3: Planning and Contreversies

Interesting, Plot development, introduction of the General staff...... And Shikamaru on the battlefield, plus Kiba probably in that family home..... awesome! Keep writing.

Author's Response: Yes the plot continues to thicken. Well I thought that Shikamaru would make a good soldier.... a LAZY one, but still good. Yes you guessed it, next comes the introduction of the Inuzuka clan just because i want to bring dogs into the war and well Kiba and Akamaru fighting in world war 2, what could be better?



Reviewer: Randomguy Signed Liked
Date: 11/04/11 Title: Chapter 4: Mobolize

This is very good, I'm liking Shikamaru in his leadership role, and Choji is great as a solider under his command. This captures the mood of sneaking behind enemy lines very well, and is a good transitional scene. I like it :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review ^_^ yeah, I thought Shikamaru would make a good leader and Chouji would definetely be great under his command



Reviewer: Randomguy Signed Liked
Date: 02/05/11 Title: Chapter 7: Damned

The introduction of Kiba, and more of Anko's past. I must say Orochimaru works well in this roll, and again the vivid description really enhance the story, it immerses me in the story. Keep writing, and I cant wait to see what happens as things come together.



Title: 50 Narutastic Notes of a Narutard by SincereGlomp
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 4]
Summary: What is love? Baby, don't hurt me, don't hurt me no more!

I SAID DON'T!!

A simple list of key warnings signs that you or someone close to you may be a Narutard. Common symptoms include unnecessary flash backs, a repetitive nature, and blatant disregard for sharp objects lodged through you skin, bone, or vertebra.

If symptoms persist be sure to not bother your doctor because this is to be expected from the number one knuckle head anime.

The following should help aide you in your diagnosis.
Category: MadFic > Parody, Essays & Tutorials > Characterization Tutorials, MadFic > Other, General Fiction > Timeless
Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Challenges: You Know You're A Narutard When...,
Challenge: You Know You're A Narutard When...,
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 737 | Read count: 2210 [Report This]
Published: 19/03/11 | Updated: 19/03/11


Reviewer: Randomguy Signed Liked
Date: 20/03/11 Title: Chapter 1: The List of Narandom

Oh no! I've done 1/5 to 1/6 of these things! Nooooooo! Will I ever stay Naruto-sober!?

Author's Response: Why would you want to? ^-^