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Can You Hear Me? by broken0dream

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Chapter notes: Just a prologue. Sorry for not writting anything in ages... No killing the author!

Can You Hear Me?

Chapter 1: Prologue

Disclaimer: The manga/anime NARUTO is not my property, it is property of Masashi Kishimoto.

Summary: It was one of those days, when you can’t get that little voice out of your head. It was one of those days when it drove you to the point. And it was the one and last day you where here.

A/N: I’ve been feeling very attached to Rin and Obito lately. Oh well, after this fic I PROMISE I will try to update my others.

)))))Story Start(((((

It had started out as a normal day, Kakashi had went out to be his restricted normal self, Rin went to look for medical herbs and Sensei had gone to the Hokage’s tower. I thought things would never change between us… Had you ever had one of those days when you had a small voice in your head, warning you of future events. Yet, you naively ignore it. Big mistake, unfortunately, the moment I had learned the lesson of always trusting your senses, it had been to late. Too late to return home, too late to say good bye… But more importantly, too late to say your feelings to the one you had loved…

My name is Uchiha Obito, I had always been treated as an outcast in my clan. Not being able to get the sharingan as expected of a possible heir, not being able to learn those fire Jutsus that where so cherished in the family. Things like this make me wonder why people actually complain about not being able to perform a technique right when they where only being expected the minimum…

I remember being 8 years old when I was almost kicked out of my family. And the worst part about it? It was because I couldn’t get a A rank justsu correctly.

The voice in my head has told me many things, many times it tells me how far I am from Kakashi, sometimes, it questions me about why I haven’t admitted my feelings to Rin. But rarely, I find it taking over…

Haa… my family would be very pleased to hear from Sensei when they get back, pleased to hear that the Clans drop out is dead.

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Please tell me what I should improve here. I haven't written a decent fic in months. Hehe...

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