Reviews For Puriti
Name: HAVEN213 (Signed) · Date: 04/02/08 - 08:39 am · For: Puriti Believes in Naruto
Hi There!
I have a suggestion for you. It would be easyier to read your story if you used paragraphs in your chapters.
Its easyier on the eyes and you will get more readers! :D
i think your off to a good start . keep working on it.
HAVEN213/HALLEY