Reviews For Mistakes
Name: Frosty (Signed) · Date: 26/02/08 - 09:54 pm · For: Chapter 2 Attacked
Heh. Tara, you are the female Miroku, only with a bit more restraint!
This is... okay. Not great, but it's deffinately good. You need to signify when people are thinking though. I receomend 'half quotes' or italics for this. It'll make it less confusing.
Good start.
Frosty.
Author's Response: thanks i'll remember that
Name: I_love_kankuro (Signed) · Date: 13/02/08 - 01:57 pm · For: Chapter 1 Falling from the sky
I like this story a lot