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Reviews For Spiral Falling

Name: MajaYuki (Signed) · Date: 10/08/16 - 12:31 am · For: Chapter 15 - Lulls
Loved it and hope you continue soon. I think I have read this before a few years ago and I rally like how sasuke and Naruto interact with eachother! ^^


Name: Midlightangel (Anonymous) · Date: 09/02/14 - 09:13 pm · For: Chapter 15 - Lulls
loved it cant wait for more :)


Name: loulou (Anonymous) · Date: 04/01/14 - 05:00 pm · For: Chapter 15 - Lulls
mannn I can't wait for the next chapter! please keep this up (: I'm not usually a fan of AU's as I find the characterization is often a bit shitty but this is amazing! truly glad I found this fic


Name: crystal (Anonymous) · Date: 28/02/13 - 07:43 pm · For: Chapter 14 - Blood on the snow
Awwww oh my goodness....I did not expect such a daunting story. It was really creative and well written! I also loved how there was like a mystery throughout entire story where you had us wondering what happened to his parents! Really well done.


Name: crystal (Anonymous) · Date: 28/02/13 - 06:30 pm · For: Chapter 9 - Solace
Awwwwwww I thought their interactions on the bus was soooooooo sweet and cute!!! Oh my goodness, they're like a real couple now! I love fluff soooooooo much!


Name: crystal (Anonymous) · Date: 28/02/13 - 06:23 pm · For: Chapter 8 - When the fox grins
OMG THAT MOMENT WHEN SASUKE SMILED WAS SERIOUSLY ONE OF THE MOST ADORABLE THINGS I'VE EVER READ!!!!!!


Name: crystal (Anonymous) · Date: 28/02/13 - 06:11 pm · For: Chapter 7 - The fear of expectations and resigned loneliness.
Awww I thought it was Sasuke too..this was such a sad chapter


Name: crystal (Anonymous) · Date: 28/02/13 - 06:03 pm · For: Chapter 6 - Intertwined knots
OMGGG This chapter was a turning point in their relationship!!! eeeeeeeeeep me likey!!!


Name: crystal (Anonymous) · Date: 28/02/13 - 05:49 pm · For: Chapter 5b - Interlude – Essential Empathy part two
I love how you juxtaposed both Sasuke and Naruto's views of each other and how they paralleled perfectly!


Name: crystal (Anonymous) · Date: 28/02/13 - 05:45 pm · For: Chapter 5a - Interlude – Essential empathy part one
Wow....I really did not expect this at all. What an interesting discovery...it's amazing how this story has so many mysteries that just draws people in until they can't get enough! I've also never seen Sasuke portrayed this way so it's a very intriguing concept.


Name: crystal (Anonymous) · Date: 28/02/13 - 05:35 pm · For: Winter hot chocolate
OMG this chapter was HOTTT! loved it!


Name: crystal (Anonymous) · Date: 28/02/13 - 04:58 pm · For: Fleeing his castle
Ahhhh! I'm so curious to know why Sasuke has Naruto's necklace!!!!!!!!!!


Name: crystal (Anonymous) · Date: 28/02/13 - 04:47 pm · For: Waking
I love the way the characters interact! It's so genuine


Name: crystal (Anonymous) · Date: 28/02/13 - 04:38 pm · For: Stirrings
I like the character development!


Name: crystal (Anonymous) · Date: 28/02/13 - 04:31 pm · For: Perplexing rivalry
Wow. This was a really great first chapter. It immediately drew me in! Your writing is really great; I can vividly imagine everything that is going on. I cannot wait to read more!


Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 14/11/08 - 12:05 pm · For: Chapter 15 - Lulls
First of all... I'd like to say hi. So, hello there! Although it makes me feel like I'm talking to myself (most reviews do anyway) I absolutely have to review this story. It was both the first SasuNaruSasu story and fanfiction I'd ever read a few years back... and it's actually what made me want to read more and then move on to write my own, eventually. Even though it's the first, it's still the best. There's no other fanfiction out there that has yet to surpass this one in my eyes... I guess that's because it was just special to me, and I'd never seen or read anything like it back then (I feel very old...). Of course I was still dumb and all about the uke/seme relationship and absolute smexy smex in a story, but this had artistic beauty, a unique writing style, character development, climax, and everything I can think that a story must have.

Every time I read Spiral Falling I think of snow, and the quiet of winter. There's just a uniqueness to that that I can't explain... this story is just fantastic. Though some may not agree with me and call it cliche and dumb, I disagree completely. There's never been an AU Naruto Yaoi story like this. There's drama, sure, but there's also something more. You just can't get anything like it nowadays. I'm glad that this was what introduced me to fanfiction... and I'm proud to call it my favorite SasuNaru AND NaruSasu fic.

Thank you so much for making this for all of us. I hope, for the people on here who aren't unfamiliar with snowfaerie dot net and LJ, that you continue to post it on here as well. It's been awhile, but I'm sure you still go on sometimes. Though on THIS small site, I'm not really sure.

There's not enough words and thank yous in the world that can ever repay you for starting and finishing this fic (on your other sites, at least)! I own you my entire writing life for it.

Thank you, truly.


Name: Kyomi (Signed) · Date: 13/11/08 - 02:05 pm · For: Perplexing rivalry
It's a very good first chapter, I've read it before on anothre site, It's my absolut Favorite SasuNaru.


Name: Lauren (Anonymous) · Date: 28/01/08 - 01:55 pm · For: Chapter 15 - Lulls
Awesome story. Is it still ongoing?


Name: . (Anonymous) · Date: 21/12/07 - 02:12 pm · For: Chapter 15 - Lulls
write more plz! if this is the end im going to be very mad >.


Name: MikoKriszty (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 - 10:00 am · For: Chapter 15 - Lulls
HOLY SH*T!! THEY WILL DO IT!!!!!!!!

This is the third thing I've been waiting for (explanations, given names).

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!


Name: MikoKriszty (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 - 09:48 am · For: Chapter 14 - Blood on the snow
Holy SHIT

Dark alright... OMFG soo dark

Loved the fic... One thing left: the oendant. what does it have to do with everything? I'm guessing when Naruto shares that, Sasuke will want to give it back, but naruto will tell him to keep it safe for him. :)

Maybe something about Sasuke's harsh treatment by his parents?


Name: MikoKriszty (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 - 08:31 am · For: Chapter 13 - Uttered sentiments
I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS FOR SOOOOOO LONG!! Them calling each other Sasuke and Naruto. And it finally happened. I love it.

First time reading... Umm, how should I put it? A guy eating another one out, and I don't mean the blowjob. XD I was disgusted at some point (I mean, putting something in there isn't too hygenic either, but one's TONGUE... Eeew), but it was HOT nontheless.


Name: MikoKriszty (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 - 07:37 am · For: Chapter 12 - Twirling flowers, crushed petals
Niice... Poor Sakura, she's totally lost it... it might be a bad idea for Sasuke to announce he's gay, Sakura would commit suicide or something...

I love the whole idea of the class trip. I hope they'll never go home. :3

WHAT'S WITH THE PENDANT?, And the blood on the snow?? WTF??


Name: MikoKriszty (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 - 07:27 am · For: Chapter 11 - Chatting with birds and fishes
Awwwwwwwwww

Poor Sakura... Sasuke should really announce he's gay, so those girls would find someone else to admire...

I soo love this fic :3


Name: MikoKriszty (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 - 06:17 am · For: Chapter 10 - A lovely bunch of coconuts
Aww, lemon!! Amd the end part was so true - especially for Sasuke. I hope both of them will stop keeping that distance.

That food-exchange scene at the table was kinda cute. And yes, I like the fact that they're holding normal conversations not just feeling each other up every time. :P


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