Reviews For Shi-Hua Shock
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 16/06/12 - 07:32 am · For: The Beginning
Hmm, seems like it could be very interesting. I look forward to reading more :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your thoughts and for reading! I hope you for enjoy this story!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/06/12 - 05:59 am · For: The Beginning
Haha. Sweet. I was mentioned. It feels weird to me when that happens because I am so unused to seeing my name in anything.
Anyway, this was an amazing chapter. Everyone was perfect. It felt as if it actually was Avatar. The made it very enjoyable.
I thought it was sweet seeing Shi and Korra interacting. Her reasoning with finding friends was a very smart idea to me and makes me wonder about her parents. Were they killed by their friends or something? That would be interesting. Anyway, it just made me like Shi more.
This was a great update. It makes me very eager to read more. I seem to be falling in love with both the story and your writing.
Author's Response: Really? I would assumed your make would be in a lot of places. Well you DDTD and silverwolf will definitely be mentioned in the chapters to come. :) Anyways, I'm so glad I didn't make any characters ooc and that it seemed like the show. It makes me proud of myself because usually I mess up at least one character without thinking and it makes the story less realistic. The parent question is interesting and I will say they are very much alive, they just had arguments and such with friends. Alright thanks so much for another review and I can't wait to read your thoughts on the next chapter.
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 13/06/12 - 05:58 am · For: The Beginning
Woo! Honorable mention in the chapter notes!! I feel so special XD Anyway, I'm glad you liked that picture, and thanks for mentioning me :)
But, let's focus on the chapter. This is actually a huge quality jump from the first chapters that I went into culture shock. I was really impressed with your improvements so far, and I really think this story has all the right tributes to be really awesome.
Also, I really liked how you had Korra and Shi (so cute!) interact with each other. I think it had just the right amount of awkwardness to it to make it realistic, but enough comedy to make it purely avatar, so awesome job with that. Oh, and lastly, you nailed Ikki's personality! I love her so much, she and Jinora are just so cute!!
Author's Response: Yes, I absolutely love the picture! I wish I could draw like that. No problem, I'm probably going to continue mentioning reviewers in later chapters because I feel as though they deserve to be thanked in a better way than just from the author's response. :) And plus I feel kind of bad for not doing it in my other story. Anyway, I'm glad you liked the chapter! Honestly, I couldn't tell if I really improved so it's nice to have people tell me. I also loved the interaction I had written. I felt it really flow through me and pictured how it realistically would be. As for Ikki, it was actually pretty easy to nail her personality. You just gotta have her ask a load of questions. Thanks again for the review!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/06/12 - 02:04 pm · For: The Beginning
Aww :3 It's actually quite cute how Shi and Korra became friends. I'm really glad that Shi opened up to her.
I'm surprised Shi actually gave Korra such a deep explanation. Personally I'd never be able to tell someone that, but then again, it must be Shi's many layers that make her open when she wants to be :D
I don't agree with Korra that it's weird that Shi tries to keep people away. I think it's weird that Shi was able to explain it so thoroughly, but that's just because I could never do that :P
Anyway, this was a really interesting chapter. Shi's feelings are foreshadowing something bad, I'm almost afraid to see what happens O.O I look forward to more :D
Oh, and congratulations on finishing sophomore year. Have fun in junior year ;) Oh, and for centering your summary page, you use the html tags. Except instead of using i for italicize or b for bold, you're going to use center.
Author's Response: Honestly, I wouldn't be able to either. I'd probably just be like "I'm sorry for how I acted. That's just the way I am... we good?" haha But as Korra said, Shi really thinks things through, which I can easily relate to. You're afraid? Don't be. Just prepare yourself for a little suprise... :P Oh and thanks for the congratulations (I'm really looking forward to my third year), for letting me know how to center, and your thoughts!