Very good. I like the nanashi character, because it reminds me of the Odyssey. I am curious as to where the Hajime Saito like Kimura Hideaki character will progress. My issue is Saito was Shinsengumi, who was very much a Tokugawa era special police force, did have a sense of honor that became prevalent later in the series. It seems that he can be a reincarnation of Saito in this universe(to which Haku and Naruto will have to adapt to), or his family can play a significant obstacle to the Himura family. Looking forward to more soon.

Author's Response: Many, many thanks. I liked the whole idea of a character that no ones used all that much- c'mon, how many folks would sing to attack other folk?