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Membership status: Member
Member since: 13/12/09
Website: fanfictionwriters.webs.com
Beta-reader: No
Fanfictions
Cursed Saint is one of my main stories. It is my most popular story as well, and I hope you like it. It's about a new addition to Konoha, Ryu Sarutobi, the "adopted "grandson of Hiruzen Sarutobi.
Final Wish is my newest Naruto fanfiction. It is a response to my own Naruto challenge, The Nemuri Promise. A trailer has not been written for it, but will be eventually.
Retribution is a co-written story with me and Itoko-san (Shizake Uchiha). It is alternatively updated by the two of us. It will not have a preview/trailer written for it.
Will of the Dragon is my only non-Naruto story on here. It is a One Piece fanfiction, and it is also a SYOC/Joint story, depending on if it is here or if it is at fanfiction.net. Characters are still being accepted and probably will be throughout much of the story.
Bio Part
Why you are looking here is beyond me. Though since you're here, I may as well let you know who I am (writer wise. I don't feel like getting any stalkers, thank you very much). How about we just start with the basics and slowly build, huh?
Basics
User Name: Sasaui Uchiha. It's probably obvious, but you can just call me Sasaui (pronounced Saw-say-you. Yes, it's weird. That's because I made it up). The only other nickname I've gotten is Kawa-cha from the fabulous Yuumai (JubileeOfPuppies).
Likes: I enjoy walking and thinking. It's a strange hobby, I know, but I love it. I also enjoy reading all the amazing stories on this site. So yeah, a lot of them. I enjoy making new friends and talking to Silverwolf and DestinyGirl on Fanfictionwriters.webs.com, my site. They're the ones who are always on there, so I have fun talking to them. As is probably obvious, I love to write.
Dislikes: Cuss words. I can deal with them in writing since I can change them in my mind, but I hate hearing them out loud because I can't do it the same way. I also don't like either Orochimaru or the Joker. I can't figure out which is creepier. Orochimaru just creeps me out because of a nightmare I had about him and the Joker..... Well, if you need an explanation for him, you obviously have not seen him. I also don't like people who are cruel to others just because of their own selfish desires.
Hobbies: Well, like I said before, I have a strange hobby of walking while thinking. Another couple are reading and typing. One of my hobbies you don't know of but is slowly becoming my favorite is Karate. Since October 23, 2011, I have been a yellow belt. I can't remember when I started except that it was last year while I was in the eighth grade around the end of winter. I only remember it was then because we didn't have to run. Another hobby I have is drawing even if I'm not all that good at it. You'll see some of my drawings on the bios I have for my characters in Tainted Guardian.
Personality: Most importantly, I am a Pentecostal Christian. Most important thing about me. I'm a mostly nice person. The only time I say anything mean is when I'm joking. I'll give anything a chance if it catches my interest or if someone asks me to read it unless it's rated 18 for sexual reasons or if it's yaoi/yuri. Christian, remember? I'm also very protective, something that will be shown in my characters. Another thing that may reflect in my characters is how I hate violence and unnecessary pain. It's strange that I hate it yet I'm in Karate, huh? But that's only because I've more or less been raised fighting my older brother. I also believe it's wrong to hurt someone for hurting you. If you already know what it feels like, why be so cruel as to make them go through the same pain?
Favorites
Now we'll get into some random favorites of mine. Why? Well, because. If you don't want to know this information, nobody said you had to read. The number of favorites will vary and I doubt many of the things will be in order.
Favorite Sport: Karate
Favorite Color(s): White and Black
Favorite Food: Chicken
Favorite type of Food: Asian
Favorite Animal: Wolf
Favorite Quote: For God so loved the world, that He gave His only begotten Son, so whosoever believeth in Him should not perish, but have everlasting life.
Favorite Authors/Books:
1)Richelle Mead: Vampire Academy and Bloodlines series
2)Rick Riordan: Percy Jackson and the Olympians and The Heroes of Olympus series
3)Suzanne Collins: Hunger Games series
4) Kelly Armstrong: Darkest Powers series
5) J.K Rowling: Harry Potter series
Favorite Characters from Favorite Books
1) Rose from VA and Adrian from Bloodlines
2) Pery or Luke in PJatO and either Percy, Jason, or possibly Leo for THoO series
3) Peeta. Sorry, Katniss, but I like him better.
4) Derek, definitely Derek.
5) Sirius Black
Favorite Manga:
1) Naruto
2) Kenichi: The Strongest Disciple
3) Psyren
4) Breaker: New Waves
5) Breaker (the first of the manwha series. Manwha is Korean manga)
6) Dragon Quest Dai no Daiboken
7) Fairy Tail
8) Bleach
9) Rave Master
10) O-Parts Hunter
11) 1/2 Prince
12) Hunter x Hunter
13) Inuyasha
Favorite Characters from Favorite Manga:
1) Naruto, Hinata, Itachi, or Nagato. Yes, I'm stuck on all 4.
2)Kenichi
3)Ageha Yoshina
4) Shioon
5) Still Shioon
6) Dai
7) Natsu
8) Keisuke Urahara
9) Haru
10) Jio
11) Gui
12) Gon
13) Inuyasha
Favorite Anime (including movies):
1) Spirited Away
2) Princess Mononoke
3) Naruto
4) Kenichi: The Mightiest Disciple
5) Claymore
6) Does The Last Airbender count as Anime?
7) Yu-Gi-Oh
8) Dragon Ball (Z, GT)
Favorite Character from Favorite Anime:
1) Haku
2) Ashitaka
3) Again it's between Naruto, Hinata, Itachi, and Nagato
4) Kenichi
5) Rocky
6) Zuko
7) Between Yugi and Yusei
8) Either Goku, Trunks, or Vegeta
Favorite Video Games:
1) Kingdom Hearts
2) Pokemon: Black
3) .Hack
4) Final Fantasy 7
5) Chrono Cross
6) Final Fantasy: Crisis Core
Favorite Character from Favorite Game:
1) It's between Sora, Roxas, Axel, and Riku
2) I think I'd say N for this
3) Haseo
4) Cloud
5) Serge or Glenn
6) Zack
Favorite Bands:
1) Thousand Foot Krutch
2) Red
3) Pillar
4) Skillet
5) Story of the Year
6) Crossfade
7) Breaking Benjamin
8) Three Days Grace
9)Sr-71
10) Simple Plan
Well, I think that's all for bands.......
Favorite Song(s) by Favorite Bands:
1) Between The Part that Hurts the Most (Is You), Faith, Love, and Happiness, and Slow Bleed
2) Between Death of Me and Shadows I think......
3) Not Without A Fight
4) Hero
5) Just Close Your Eyes
6) Colors
7) I Will Not Bow
8) Never Too Late or Break
9) Tomorrow
10) Save You
Now I believe I am done with favorites. Sheesh, that was a long list.......
Writer
As a writer, and by that I do not mean fanfiction writer but an actual writer, I have written one complete story that keeps jumping around in page length for some recent. The first time I checked it was 400+ pages and then it was suddenly 600+ pages next time I checked. I have a million other ideas swirling around in my head, but I haven't written most of them mostly because I've been focusing on this one story. I've been trying to get a literacy agent and before long I may just have one. Fingers crossed and prays being sent.
Fanfiction
I didn't even know what fanfiction was until I was in the fifth grade. That's when I learned about it and it was by complete accident. Some kid I knew was showing around pictures of Naruto. I got a few of the pictures, and there was a link at the bottom - Narutoworld.com. Curious, I went to it.
Sadly, Narutoworld no longer has a part for fanfiction. When I first visited it, though, it did. I checked it out because I wanted to see what it was and that is where I first read fanfiction. I still remember the two that I actually read, too. Well, one title and another one just what it was about. The first one was Colors of Life and Death. It's funny that it's actually here on Tonfa now. The other was about a girl who had known Sasuke as a child returning to Konoha. It showed them bonding again and everything, until the end where Itachi returned and killed her. It was during this time I even found out about fanfiction.
Since the fanfiction part of Narutoworld was taken off, I began to search for a new fanfiction site. Somehow during this search, I found Tonfa. After reading a few of the fanfictions, mostly one done by an author maybe a few of you know known as WolfTeam000. She was a great author and is probably the main reason I stuck with fanfiction rather than got bored. I've recently refound her on Fanfiction.net writing Fairy Tail fanfiction because I got bored and looked at her fanfiction.net account and saw she had updated. Then my friends began to vary and more people began writing wonderful stories such as RowanRose's Kokoro Uchiha fanfic. It started way back when. Sheesh, I feel old yet I'm only 15.
My first ever fanfiction was similar to Never Too Late: a girl came to Konoha to help team 7 with the chuunin exams. The only thing was it was with Naruto and Sakura and Sasuke had actually run off to Orochimaru. The girl's name was still Kina, she had the same kekkei genkai, but she was working for Sasuke and had a demon in her. That's not how it is now. It was called Unknown Secret, which is also the name of Never Too Late's first arc.
After this fanfiction, I began to write a few more, most of which shall never see the light of day again. One that has stuck with me, though, since around when I first began as Bre2k8 is Tainted Guardian. Some may remember it as Sasaui Uchiha. It was inspired after reading a few SasuOc fanfics where the female of the group was another survivor. Primarily this was Crimson Lily's fanfic, Another Survivor: Uchiha Love Blossoms.
Now I am mostly where I am today, still working on stories I came up later on and even reviving a few of my ideas from back when I was Bre2k8. I've made some great friends and am very glad I joined Tonfa.
Fanfictionwriters.webs.com
This is my website. If anyone is just looking for a very weird place to hang out and be strange, this is a place you should go. Though I must warn you, it may be too strange and make you go insane.
YOUR STORY Reward
YOUR STORY is the best compliment I will give a person. If you get out of this world or something similar or weird (such as eight thumbs up), then you're really close to YOUR STORY. Or I just forget to tell you =P. Anyway, it's basically like saying that your story is just so great, it becomes an adjective itself that explains its awesomeness because no adjective can. Does that make sense?
Anyway, here's a list of the stories (that I remember) are on the YOUR STORY list:
Reincarnation of a Legend by Silverwofl213
Rekindle the Lost Flame by Silverwolf1213
Pirates of the Mist by Silverwolf1213
The White Rose by Silverwolf1213
Broken Wings by Destiny Girl
Beneath the Darkness by DestinyGirl
How to Adapt and Overcome by xXxTiNkXxX
Rotes Blut by BattyBigSister
She Was Beautiful by BattyBigSister
Child of Hex by JubileeOfPuppies
Endeavor by JubileeOfPuppies
Space Children by Firestar83
Fire Escape by DropDeadThenDance
The Naruto Games by Konan
Three Days by Silverwolf1213
Stereotype by DropDeadThenDance
Cygnus Olor by RowanRose
Reality Check by UzamakiMasumi
A Tale Best Told Dead by Silverwolf1213
The Path Each Takes series by Shizake Uchiha
Reverse This Curse by xXxTiNkXxX
The Princess and The Freeman by BrontesWorld and DropDeadThenDance
If I have told you that your story is YOUR STORY but forgot to mention it, please let me know.
So, now that my bio is finally ended, those who deemed it worthy enough to read, you can rest your eyes.
Rated: 18
[Reviews - 4]Category: General Fiction > Character-Centric, General Fiction > Timeskip
Characters: Kankurou, Rock Lee, Sakura Haruno, Temari, Tsunade
Genres: General, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 | Completed: No | Word count: 100105 | Read count: 9552 [Report This]
Published: 11/09/10 | Updated: 12/01/12
Date: 11/09/10 Title: Chapter 1: A Seething Heart
Great chapter. I really liked it. I hope you update again soon. You're really good at writing.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it.\r\n\r\nI have more 7 chapters of \"Will of Stone\" up at http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6015119/1/Will_Of_Stone. I encourage you to go there to continue reading the story because TONFA is messing up the formatting of the story (no italics, etc). Not sure how to fix it, though I guess I\'ll still continue to update the fic here. \r\n\r\nHope you continue reading.
Date: 16/09/10 Title: Chapter 2: In the Looking Glass
I really liked the chapter, but I have school and may not be able to review the others for a little while. And I know you just wrote that stuff, but still, Tsunade, in my POV, is a nice person. I can't see her doing that. It may just be me, though. Actually, in my story, Never Too Late, she does something really nice for Kina later on before Shippuden starts. I can't wait to see how Sakura deals. I'll read more as soon as I can.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.\r\n\r\nYeah, my interpretation of Tsunade is a little harsher than maybe the \"official\" cannon version. In my story she\'s kind of a bitch. At the same time, remember you only see Chapter 2 from Sakura\'s POV, not Tsunade\'s. A Tsunade POV might be completely different in terms of her characterization and so on. The relationship between Sakura and Tsunade is a major theme of the novel so you\'ll definitely see Tsunade\'s more human side later onl.
Rated: PG
[Reviews - 28]Why do they treat us like mosters?
We're not monsters.
Just misunderstood.
What if Naruto hadn't been completely friendless during his childhood? What if there was someone there to help him through the pain? When Naruto befriends a girl with hair as white as snow and a light beaming around her, his life changes from then on for the better. But what if Hikari is apart of an ancient prophecy and is indeed the being of light? Will she be able to save Naruto from his demon within? And why is she the "Angel of the Leaf"?
NarutoXOC AU
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto, Het Romance > Fluff, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Sasuke and Sakura
Characters: All, Pair OCNaru
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, General, Spiritual, Tragedy
Warnings: AU
Challenge: None
Series: Destiny's Chosen
Chapters: 8 | Completed: No | Word count: 41063 | Read count: 12900 [Report This]
Published: 07/10/10 | Updated: 13/03/12
Date: 19/03/12 Title: Chapter 8: Rivaled Hearts
Have you ever had a day where you just don't feel like reviewing anything and just being lazy? Well, I feel like that now, so I'm sorry if I forget something or just ramble or something.
I absolutely love Hikari. She's just so great and caring. I loved when she met Kakashi by the KIA stone. It makes me think of something in TG. I won't tell you what, though.
This entire chapter was amazing. There were, admittedly, some mistakes. But there was so much awesomeness in this story it was covered up. I think it was really nice to see how Hikari affected the Narutoverse now and how everyone acts because of her involvement. One of these things includes how Sasuke asked if she wanted to sit.
I love how you seem to show Yami without actually having Yami there. I find that quite interesting. I'm also really interested in the bird. I want to know what it has to do with everything. Everything about this has me intrigued.
I can't wait to see how all Hikari affects the future of team 7. I'm sure it will be an interesting one and I can't wait to see what you have in store.
Date: 10/12/10 Title: Chapter 5: Twist of Fate
T_T I've always hated the part where Sasuke grows cold. I hate it. I wish he was still that happy, energetic kid. And, once again, T_T for Hikari. She's going to have to live for those years blaming herself. I feel bad for the two of them. I can't wait to read part 2, DestinyGirl. Oh, and sorry I haven't replied to your E-mail yet. I will as soon as I get time to, but I haven't had time to check my mail in a while. Please write more soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! Yeah, I didn't really like that part either, but it had to happen in order for this story to progress! But perhaps things will turn out differently for Sasuke in Broken Wings, I hated how he turnd out in Shippuden, I just didn't like it and I'm still hoping he changes back to the good ol' Sasuke that I remember back in Naruto! I don't know, it would be a complete shame and waste if he died evil.:(
And yes, the guilt will eat at Hikari as years pass by, which everyone will soon see in later chapters:) I'm glad you're looking forward to Part 2 of this! I decided it would be easier if I divided the story up into separate "parts" that way it would be easier for readers reading later on to tell which arc their on (sort of like how they done with actual Naruto). Thanks, and don't worry about the e-mail, just respond whenever you can, I was wondering about how you upload things on here...(pictures, songs, etc.) But thanks so much for your support, I'll write sometime probably after the holidays - when I get the computer back lol:P
Date: 22/11/10 Title: Chapter 4: This Little Light of Mine
Wow. Really great chapter, DestinyGirl! I absolutely loved this chapter, and I liked the chapter name. Please get the next chapter up soon! I can't wait to read the next chapter. This story is AMAZING. I wonder what will happen next. I want to know how this light will affect Hikari.
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks so much Sasaui!!! I'm so glad you loved this chapter, I spent a lot of time on it since it would lead up to a LOT of things in the story later on. I'll try and get the next chapter out as soon as I can! And always, thank you so much for your inspiring reviews!:D
Date: 09/10/10 Title: Chapter 2: Friendships Begin!
I reallllllly liked it, DestinyGirl. I can't believe your writing is so freaking good yet you can complement mine. :-) You did a great job at it, and I love how things are going between the two. Please write more soon. I absolutely love it. And why'd you only do Kiba's POV and none of the others? I'm just curious about it.
P.S PLEASE update SOON!!!!!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it Sasaui!:D And hey, your writing is great too!!! And the reason I only did Kiba's POV is because I just wanted to show you how the main shinobi parents think of Hikari... plus I know Tsume's personality better than the other kids' parents, lol. But I'll have more POVs of other kids up in other chapters as the story progresses... Hope that answered your question! Thanks so much for your review, I'll try and update sometime next week when I get the chance!
Lots of love,
DestinyGirl
Date: 07/10/10 Title: Chapter 1: Forever Promises
You said "I write many novels and my first is about to be published". I was just wondering what you're book was about and what it was. If you don't want to tell me on Tonfa, you can email me. I want to be an author in the future and I'm sorry, but I get excited when I see things like this.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for taking the time to read my bio!:D And I'm so happy to hear that you want to be an author!!! I really grin when I see something like that! Stuff like that always gets me excited too:P
And would it be alright if I went on your page and contacted you?
Lots of love,
♦Kayla
Date: 07/10/10 Title: Chapter 1: Forever Promises
*Mouth drops open and hits the floor* WOW!!! That was amazing. I don't get why other people say I'm so good when I look at some of the stories on this site. They're just so creative they blow me away. I LOVE LOVE LOVE the prophecy in the prologue. That's one of the things I look at and think "That could be a book." Please write more soon. And if it's no trouble, could you read my story called Cursed Saint? YOU DO NOT HAVE TO IF YOU DON'T WANT TO. And, if you do, DON'T say you like it if you don't. That's my number one and two rule.
Author's Response:
Wow! I just posted this yesterday and I've already received such a wonderful review!:D
THANKS SO MUCH!!!
Comments like this really help inspire me to never quit on a story so thank you so much for that! And lol, my eyes were as wide as saucers! O.O
" I don't get why other people say I'm so good when I look at some of the stories on this site. They're just so creative they blow me away." --I get like that sometimes too when I'm reading a great fanfic and they write it like a novel! Sometimes envy swells up in me when I see talent like that and they don't even want to use it to write novels or anything but most of the time I just beat the envy back down... And try to improve! So you're not the only one who feels like that:P
Thanks so much for loving the prophecy! I spent a lot of time on that and I'm glad someone's pointing it out and appreciating it! But you know, while writing it I was actually considering using pieces of this fanfic (minus Naruto because it's already owned) and make it into a novel series. Because I fell in love with the prophecy (yes, I fall in love with my own work sometimes because I'm a dork) and I could see the angels' word playing out in my head... But, *wink wink* that'll be our little secret (unless people are reading this - *looks around*) and when I do decide to get that one published and/or completely written - I'll be sure to e-mail you!
I'm going to try and get the next chapter of this posted tomorrow sometime... it just depends what sort of pops up in my life and decides to steal my attention away lol. But I would love to read your story! I admire those who go out there and try to get more people to read - that's a sign of a true and devoted author! ♥ But I'll give my honest opinion about it and let you know as soon as I have it all read!
Lots of Love,
♦Kayla
Date: 11/10/11 Title: Chapter 6: Frightening Revelations
Well, first of all, I need to do this:
I have this story under my list, but I never gave you the reward, so....
First, I have to laugh again. Are we all just going to involve our characters in the Mizuki event? Are we all just mentally linked? If you haven't read Silverwolf's latest update on Reincarnation of a Legend, you'd understand. It was a great chapter. Although I saw the mistake with your and you're in a few places. Other than that, absolute perfection! I am so in love with your story, DestinyGirl. It's breath-taking. You do a fabulous job at molding your own character into the actual plot. Sheesh, you two (you and silverwolf) make me feel so inferior sometimes........ Okay, on the bright side, I am eager to read what comes next! Wait, how's that on the bright side since it means I have to wait.....? Either way I'll wait, because any true fan would. Which I definitely am. Any stories of yours will have me as a person on the #1 Fan list.
Author's Response:
Awesome!!! Again, I feel so honored that I've gotten a YOUR STORY AWARD!!! ^_^ (Makes me feel special)
Lol, I guess so:P Great minds DO think alike, as they say. Yeah, I just got tired of reading and watching the first part of Naruto so I turned it off and just went with it, made up my own.:P Thx so much, I try my best!:D HEY! You're not inferior!!! Ha, yeah, you ARE my #1 Fan!XD Thx so much for reviewing Sasaui!
Date: 07/01/12 Title: Chapter 7: The Connection
Wow. I loved the dream at the beginning. I'm pretty sure I know who it is, though I may be wrong. Either way I really liked it. It was really sweet seeing Naruto's caring nature toward Hikari. It definitely goes both ways since she takes so much care of him. I thought the entire thing with her and Hinata was pretty funny. I never expected Hikari to be the one to be the shopaholic. That was definitely a funny addition.
Even though you had most of it being from the manga, I think it was a lot better since Hikari in it. It was just so amazing and adorable. This chapter was an especially fun to read. I loved the addition of the drunken dude. It was a nice change and helped show more of her light's power. It was also pretty original.
And then you had the parts that we all know and love, yet you added your own little twist. I kinda expected him to change into Hikari after Naruto told him that, but I still shook my head in, well, maybe exasperation (not a bad thing, just me thinking "what is wrong with these boys").
And then we finally found out about her origin to the Leaf. Wow, now that was amazing. It was very original and unique. I thought if was a fabulous thing to add and am glad we finally learned it. Thanks a lot for that, DestinyGirl!
Overall it was a fabulous chapter with a fabulous character. I really liked that last thought. It seemed to make her seem more realistic in my eyes. There were a few mistakes, but the awesomeness totally covered up. I can't wait to read more, DestinyGirl!
Author's Response:
Thx so much Sasaui! I tried to make it obvious, but since Hikari herself didn't know I didn't exactly point it out. Yeah, it's in Hikari's nature to take care of him, since Naruto's been in her life for so long. Haha, it was a nice twist to things:P Just wait till she has ALL the kunoichi girls with her on a shopping trip!
Thank you, I tried my best! I'm glad you enjoyed it:D
Haha, definitely! Boys will be boys I guess:P
Yeah, that was more of a short version since I didn't want to spill anything too quick. Sort of like how Kishimoto-sensei does to us, give a little of the past in the beginning, and then wait till later in Shippuden to finally reveal it all. At just the right time, I just hope I do it as well as he does - probably not, though, since he IS the author of Naruto. Your welcome, Sasaui!
Thx for your words, I really appreciate them! Yes, I will try to correct those mistakes as soon as I am able! (Meaning, when I finally go home and get on my desktop with spelling check) Thank you so so much, Sasaui!:D
Date: 16/10/10 Title: Chapter 3: Bloodlines and Dreams
Great chapter! I absolutely loved it, though it took me two days to read since I was so tired last night. I'm excited every single time I see there's a new chapter because I know I'm going to get to read yet another fabulous chapter written by you. Please update again soon!
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks!:D Thanks for all of your super comments!!! They really help me a LOT:D
And sorry I haven't responded to your last e-mail in God knows how long, my e-mail's been messing up but hopefully I'll get it fixed today! But thanks so much for reviewing!♥
Rated: PG
[Reviews - 4] 
UNDER CONSTRUCTION TO BE MADE INTO AN AWESOME STORY In Konoha there is a team called Team 13. For as long as everyone can remember, this team has had proabably the worst reputation of any team in all of Konoha, because this team is the team that has always been made up of the rejects, the losers, the people with 'disabilities' that need extra help.
Kaidan Fujushima has just moved to Konoha, and has been assigned to Team 13, automatically earning the title of someone with 'problems' and generally being looked down upon as inferior. Kaidan's teammates (and, in lesser terms, Kaidan himself) won't stand for this prejudice and will strive to break free of it to make the whole of Konoha see them as they really are!
Ninjas.
Kaidan must learn to deal with right and wrong, with the glares, the hatred and scorn that folows him round with his new friend, Naruto. He must learn to deal with his little sister and his new teammates, and most of all, Konoha, if he is to survive.
So, does surviving in a new place involve friendship? And what if it's friendship with the wrong people?
"Friendship...is not something you learn in school. But if you haven't learned the meaning of friendship you haven't really learned anything." Muhammad Ali
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, General, Humor
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 5434 | Read count: 2737 [Report This]
Published: 10/11/10 | Updated: 29/11/10
Date: 04/12/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: "You are a Demon."
Karin is a bit too blunt at times, I think. It was a good chapter, and I can't wait to see how everyone reacts to what she said. Please update soon, and sorry for not reviewing before. I was busy since November 24 because I was playing with my birthday presents. Love the story and chapter, Rose-chan!
Author's Response: Thanks Sasui! Haha, birthday presents? I\'m assuming it was your birthday! Happy birthday! ^^ Thanks for reviewing! Seriously Sasui, you\'ve been with me since the beginning and i really appreciate that. Since my first stroy! Thanks for doing so!
Date: 12/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Fitting Out
Great chapter, Rose-chan! It was amazing, and it is a bit hard to do three different stories. It's okay, though. Awesome authors like you can handle it. I think this story is going to be great. I also think the title is really cool. I can't wait for the next chapter. I really want to see what will happen next.
Author's Response: Thanks Sasui! You sure cheered me up lots! (excuse my toddler like language) I was beginning to think no one liked my story. :P Awesome authors like me? Thanks! Highest of compliments, seriously! Right back atcha! Yep, i want to put it up. I\'ll review it and try tomorrow, all that too might not be possible... Thanks for reviewing Sasui, this is my first review!
Rated: 12/12A
[Reviews - 81]A mysterious girl. An unknown past. A dark secret. Who is this bloodthirsty girl and why is Naruto afraid of her? A dark tale full of action and suspense. A must-read. Book Two Coming Shortly
Category: General Fiction > Naruto
Characters: Team Kakashi
Genres: Dark
Warnings: AU
Challenge: None
Series: One Little Girl Trilogy
Chapters: 29 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 38495 | Read count: 39390 [Report This]
Published: 24/11/10 | Updated: 29/07/12
Date: 24/09/11 Title: Chapter 2: A Situation
How'd Orochimaru get his hands on Kakashi's child? Wait, you said that you liked Kakashi X Anko? Could she be..... No, you said that Kakashi x Anko wasn't in this story. Darn it, you've got me stuck with so many questions. It was great, Fantasy Madeline. I loved it. I also liked the little confrontation. It was really interesting. Great job!
Date: 24/09/11 Title: Chapter 1: Introducing Madalyn
Yeah, it's probably a good thing I wasn't reading this when Anonymous was writing because, well, I get kinda mad when people do that. I'm not even going to start about that (even if I'm kinda mad. I seriously need to stop reading previous reviews). Anyway, I FINALLY got around to reading some of this. It was really interesting. I can't wait to see just what will happen when they find out her. I'm especially interested in what Sasuke will do since, well, Orochimaru's effected him the most. I hope that she is accepted, despite what Naruto found out.
Date: 24/09/11 Title: Chapter 3: Parents and Orochimaru...=0
Sakura seriously asked if they were all there....... I'm not sure if you meant for that to be humorous or not, but I thought it was. Well, I thought everything before the flashback was funny. It was amazing, Fantasy Madeline. I'm really glad that Orochimaru didn't kill Madeline. I really liked her. And it looks like it was Anko and Kakashi. Hahaha. Crazy snake lady.
Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much for reviewing! I love when people review, and I am so happy you like it. When people review each individual chapter like this, it is so nice, considerate, and helpful! Thanks so much!\r\n\r\nYep..crazy snake lady.
Rated: 15
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She was running away.
Finally.
Finally, Suki Kurohoshi was running away from her village. The six-year-old was finally able to escape from her terrible life.
She was going to run as far as her legs could carry her. She was going to abandon a home that was never a home to begin with. She was going to leave behind villagers who hated her for a reason that she did not know of.
Yes, run away. That would solve all of her problems. In a perfect world, running away would be the answer to everything.
Unfortunately, this isn't a perfect world. And running away won't solve every problem.
You can run away from home, and you can run away from people you grew up with. But now Suki is going to realize that the one thing that no one can run away from... is destiny.
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Character-Centric, General Fiction > Naruto, Het Romance > Fluff, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: All, OC, Pair OCNaru
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, General, Humor, Romance, Spiritual
Warnings: AU, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: Destiny is Calling
Chapters: 14 | Completed: No | Word count: 79859 | Read count: 26528 [Report This]
Published: 27/11/10 | Updated: 17/01/12
Date: 22/01/11 Title: Chapter 2: The Twelve Animals
After reading these descriptions, I'm eager to see what one Suki is. Man! I can't wait to get to the actual story, but, sadly, I need to get to bed =( Oh well. It will be here tomorrow!
Author's Response: Well, if I remember correctly, I did a bit of foreshadowing on Suki\'s zodiac animal. Not sure though... it\'s late, and my brain is kinda fuzzy right now *snores lightly.... jerks awake quickly to finish review response* Right! Anyway, I need to go to bed to. But no worries, this story isn\'t going anywhere!
Date: 26/11/11 Title: Chapter 12: Apologize
Ah crap. The urge is back - DENO! DENO! DENO! DENO! DENO! DENO! DENO! DENO! DENO! DENO! DENO!
Okay, I think I'm done. Sorry, but I was more or less jumping up and down when I saw - sorry, read about him. It's just so strange seeing my character in another person's story......
Okay, now on to that other person's story. It was amazing, Silverwolf! I absolutely loved it. The beginning was just heartbreaking! I hated seeing the character we all know and love being hurt like that! But then Kakashi comforted her and the part about Kinmaru being ignored made me laugh. I don't know why, but it did. Him comparing that day to the day he'd adopted her just made it all sadder to me.
Then the part where they got their genin team was sad to being with. I can't believe Naruto is being such a butthole. I mean, yeah, he has a reason to be one, but still...... Can I send Sasaui over to whack him in the back of the head? But it slowly got more relaxed and even a bit humorous with the kids' reactions. I knew what was going to happen, yet I still felt sad about her neither being on team seven or team eight. Though the team she is on is amazing! And that opinion is only based 95 percent off the fact Deno is on it =P. But yeah, both Michiko and Haruki are amazing. I love their personalities. Something about Mochiko seems to be a nice contradiction to Haruki. I'm not sure exactly what, though. I loved the almost-genin's reactions to them not being full fledged shinobi yet.
Man, that Kakashi scene at the memorial stone T_T. Dang it, Silverwolf, that just wasn't right. It was too sad! Having the wind be like his voice just made it that much sadder. For something on the spot, it was purely amazing.
The end was good. I like the part with the slight unease of failing her. I'm glad that Kakashi didn't ask if he would pass her. That made me curious for a second if he truly would.
I can't wait to see the survival training, Silverwolf! I'm so excited to see it!
Author's Response: Hahaha, it\'s completely understandable that you like Deno so much. He\'s an amazing character. I\'m really honored to be writing about him, so thanks for lending him to me for this story :) I just wonder if you\'ll ever get used to seeing him in this fic...
\'That other person\'s story?\' Should I tell Suki that you don\'t even remember her name? Ah, yeah, it was a really depressing way to start the chapter. But I figured I should show you guys how I pictured Suki\'s heartbreak. And as always, Kakashi\'s love and Kinmaru\'s humor were there to save the day!
Hmm, yeah, send Sasaui to whack Naruto; he deserves it. Then again, so do I, since I\'m so mean to her all the time... Heh, so only 5 percent of Team 9\'s awesomeness goes to the genin? That\'s messed up, Sasaui ;) Yeah, Michiko and Haruki were designed to have opposing personalities, so everything about them totally clashes against one another.
Yeah, that memorial stone scene was a complete spur of the moment, so I\'m glad you thought it came out nicely. I was afraid it came out stupid, but if you liked it so much, then I know it came out decently.
I personally quite liked the Deno and Kakashi scene. It seemed so natural to make them have a nice conversation and then throw Suki into the mix and talk about whether she might pass or fail.
I really can\'t wait to write the survival training! I\'m excited to finish it! Thank you so much for the lovely review, and as always, thanks for being such an amazing reader! You\'re awesome, Sasaui!
Date: 30/01/11 Title: Chapter 4: The Conference
=D
Author's Response: Oh my gosh! You\'re words are so sweet! Thank you so much for leaving such a wonderful review XD Thanks for reading and reviewing! You\'re incredible!
Date: 23/01/11 Title: Chapter 3: Second Chance
WOW!!!! This chapter was awesome, and the whole Suki and Kakashi thing reminded me of a story I'm planning on writing. My oc will be taken care of by Kakashi (even if the reason's different). I can't wait to read more, and if you did give a sign of what her animal would be, I was too tired to figure it out. I think I have now, though. I can't wait to read another chapter, but right now I'm off to work on Sasaui Uchiha/Tainted Guardian. See ya.
Author's Response: Yay! I\'m so glad you liked this chapter! And I think that\'s crazy about your story with Kakashi taking care of your oc. Great minds think alike ;D And if you did figure out Suki\'s zodiac animal, cool! If you didn\'t, that\'s alright. Hope you continue to enjoy this story! As for me, I\'m going to keep an eye out for an update to Sasaui Uchiha/Tainted Guardian! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 24/07/11 Title: Chapter 10: Stop And Stare
I couldn't help but note we seem to have similar minds because I have Kakashi think of Sasaui being similar to Obito in my story. You seriously need to stop reading my mind! I loved this chapter as much as I love your story. Every second of it was amazing. The interrogation scene was very realistic and you continued with the awesomeness when you had the moments with the children. The part with Suki trying to console Sasuke was amazing. This has me so excited about the thing mentioned in my other review. You have to write more soon or I might die. I am still smiling from the moment with Suki being motivated like she was from the need to protect others. I'd tell you to stop copying me again, but that's just a great trait for any main character to have.
Author's Response: Great minds think alike, I suppose ;) I\'m glad you liked the interrogation scene and the moments with the children. Yeah, I decided to throw Suki in there to try to help Sasuke, but of course, he\'s just a little snob sometimes... I\'m also glad you liked how Suki was motivated to accept her destiny to protect others. Now, patience, Sasaui, patience! That thing is coming in two more chapters or so... Don\'t die on me yet. But hey, at least you\'re all caught up now :D Thanks a lot for reading this! And thanks even more for sharing your valuable feedback! You rock!
Date: 14/12/11 Title: Chapter 13: I'll Make a Man Out of You
Just reading the first part made me hungry. I mean, seriously, how dare that fruit bowl taunt her like that!?! I shall eat it just to make sure it doesn't tempt her again! *five minutes later* Ah.... Those were some good apples! Okay, now to be mostly serious. I really liked Kinmaru's concern, and the fact he didn't tell Suki about knowing she may fail made sense. It would have changed it a lot if Suki had already known. And then Kakashi's worry about his daughter. Man, I was prepared to go knock the crap out of Deno if he failed her. The worry about Suki was just too much. She didn't deserve to be failed since she cares about it so much. And Kakashi was right - rather pass or fail, she would make a great Guardian.
Hahaha. Reading Haruki and Michiko fight was hilarious. I love how their personalities clash so much. And then Suki's calmer, more moderate moderate personality makes the team very balanced. I'm starting to think she's the glue in this team. And the idea for the survival exercise is great. I absolutely love it! It's really creative and a good way to make them fight against each other. They did better than team 7, though, and at least planned on using team work instead of already going against each other. Well, after Suki calmed them down, that is.
Wow. Just wow. Those clues are amazing! I figured out a few, but others I was stumped on. I think I was about half and half there, but I'm not exactly sure. And wow, I love Suki's (I almost put Kikiyo =P)Eye of the Bird technique. It's so cool. I was wondering how the earth had anything to do with the eyes, but now I know the true reason! And yeah, Kinmaru's reason made a lot of sense to why he was teaching her then. And then her way of getting the seal off was really interesting, and I liked how all the ways they did it varied.
Now I have a quick question: Did you get some of your attack ideas from Pokemon? It may just be because I've played Pokemon so long that it's the first thing I thought of, but I had to know. I loved both Haruki and Michiko in this chapter. I love their personalities. I don't think they're as much like Naruto and Sasuke as you say. Haruki can kinda annoy me with how he's so..... selfish..... No, I don't think that's the right word. Arrogant! He's so arrogant, but in the end, he pulls through. Then with Michiko, she is so hyper and happy, yet she has a lot of luck and knows how to use the intellect she has (not that's she's not smart, she's just not Haruki genius smart). Her hyper personality is really quite likable. And strangely, even though he can be a butthole, so is Haruki's personality. You already know I love Suki, which is why I'm not getting into her. But overall, I love both your characters. And you're doing perfect with Deno. I love him (and am having to restrain myself from writing a whole word of DENO! repeated), and you're doing a great job with him!
That last scene with Suki and the other two really was my favorite. Once again Suki showed how she was the glue. Her fighting for what she believes in is one of my favorite things about her. I'm glad that Suki managed to stop the conflict. I was slightly surprised when Michiko (but not when Haruki) decided to go for the third flag. Michiko is just so much more friendly and not so much selfish. So I was happy when she questioned herself for it because that seemed more like the Michiko I expected. I'm hoping some of her conscience. will rub off on Haruki. He seriously needs one.
I had a feeling there was no failure flag when I realized they were about to fight Suki. I was too focused on your amazing story to think of your twists, but then it suddenly hit me just what Deno was doing. I loved their idea for tying the flags together, but when Deno reacted how he did, I was a little afraid he actually hadn't wanted them to do that. But it all turned out good and Team 9 is officially a team =D.
Then the end...... Well, I can tell you I definitely didn't expect it after the seemingly happy ending. Then again, it's you we're talking about. You're almost as mean to me to your characters. Well, at least when it comes to Suki. I can't believe just how quickly her happiness could change to sadness. But she stuck to being the pure, great person she is when she still said she was glad Naruto had passed. That's the Suki I know and love. Then the very end where Kakashi thought the mental pain thing to his dad..... Well, I was about to cry (I don't know why, so don't ask). I didn't though, instead realizing I was at the end of the chapter and instead being sad about that.
The writing itself was very discriptive with only a few mistakes (so really only 1) I really remembered seeing. That's at the end where Kakashi thinks:
Right Dad?
It should be: Right, Dad?
I'm sure you already knew that, but I think I'm too used to helping my sister at English to remember not all people need things told to them =P. But yeah, overall everything was amazing. Everything flows right into the next part, and you have it so it doesn't completely mess up the Naruto plot or draw everything that was supposed to happen to Naruto to their OC (I've seen some stories that do that). I'd give you a 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10 on the option, but sadly, they don't have it.
As you already know, my gift for your birthday has been given to you. I'm glad you seemed to like it so much!
YOU'RE THE BEST, SILVERWOLF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I honestly think I was hungry at the time of writing that scene, so it was easy to put myself in Suki\'s shoes ;D But on the more serious note for that portion of the chapter, I thought it would be helpful to show Kakashi\'s and Kinmaru\'s concern for her, and her insecurities are just a part of who she is, so I had to throw that in there as well.
Hehe, I like Haruki and Michiko at times purely because they\'re such conflicting characters. And you\'re absolutely right in saying that Suki is the glue. As the Guardian, she needs to learn to keep balance, so what better way to do that than to first be the balance to her team? I thought it was nice parallelism. And wow, everyone seems to like the survival training; I\'m surprised, I thought the instructions were complicated. But I\'m glad you liked how it all turned out.
My gosh, those clues were not easy to come up with, let me just say. Then when I was done the first time, I erased them and started over... It was all just a mess. In the end, I tried to make some obvious ones while making a few vague ones, but they had to be somewhat puzzling yet possible to solve. For her advanced technique, I had planned for a while to have her master a jutsu in the midst of the survival exam, so I figured I would make her Eye of the Bird jutsu a bit more... hawk-like ;) This chapter was definitely a time to show off some jutsu and ability, though I had to keep it to a minimum since they are still rookies.
Haha, I knew you would be the one to bring that up. In fact, some of the attacks I am inspired by, but I try to tweak them a bit to make them not exactly the same. But I\'m glad you like the OCs\' personalities so far. Haruki does worry with me with how arrogant he is, but he\'s only like that because he doesn\'t know how to work with a team. I\'m hoping I won\'t portray him as a Sasuke clone throughout the story; but if you say he\'s not exactly like the Uchiha, then I\'m pretty happy! Michiko is fun to write because she\'s so outrageous, but I hope I don\'t turn her into a female Naruto... But I am really happy you like the characters, especially Deno, of course ;D
Of course, I had to give Suki some more fighting spirit. She may be a calm nature, but she will always fight for what she believes in. I\'m surprised that you\'re surprised about Michiko though. In the heat of the moment, she just wants to pass, and she doesn\'t like being underestimated by anyone (and Haruki tends to do that a lot with her), so she wants to prove that she\'s not weak. But she has her morals, of course, which is why she questioned herself and her motives. Haruki needs to learn from both his female teammates, I think. He is pretty stuck-up XD
Haha, wow, you figured out the secret that early, huh? I loved making Deno seem upset, it was one of those suspenseful moments that I love to write. It really helped with this scene I guess, hehe ;D
Pfft, of course! When do I ever put a happy ending in any of my chapters? It\'s like you don\'t know me at all XP I honestly did feel a bit of remorse for taking away her happiness, but it was just not meant to be in this chapter, sadly... But she always proves to be a genuinely kind person, even wishing her former friend the best. It\'s one of her qualities that I want to stand out, to be pure and genuine person. Aww, I\'m sorry I almost made you cry... though I honestly wanted to get a few tears for that last line. That was a last minute idea, and I couldn\'t help but put it in.
Wow... I cannot believe I made a mistake on the LAST LINE! That\'s so ridiculous of me; I must have been eager to finish it. Thanks for pointing it out, I appreciate it.
Aww, thanks for the compliments! I don\'t deserve them, but they\'re still nice to have anyway. I\'m so glad you liked this chapter, thanks so much for reading and reviewng! I love your amazing feedback! Thanks for such a thought out and insightful review, you\'re awesome, Sasaui!
Date: 24/07/11 Title: Chapter 8: Twenty Questions
I don't know what to say. You have left me speechless........ It..... was........ Wow. Just wow..... I was laughing with the twenty questions thing, and then you suddenly throw in a murder attempt. How could you be so cruel to Suki. Then again, I've been pretty mean to Sasaui lately........ I mean, seriously, I put my own ocs on the line......... Although Sasaui thinks its funny. I think it's funny that if anyone but you, demon fox, or possibly BigSis see this review, they'll be completely and totally confused.
I loved the bird thing. What's scary is it's like this Instinct power a character in one of my books has. STOP COPYING ME!! Sheesh. I don't think I should have let your website hype me back up before I reviewed this. Sorry...... This was amazing, though. I couldn't look away. This story is very original. I can't wait until...... Well, I can't say, but I think you know what I mean.
Author's Response: You\'re speechless?! And I did that?! Wow, I feel so accomplished :D Haha, I\'m glad you liked the Twenty Questions, I liked that part myself. I hated the murder attempt on Suki, it broke my heart. But the bird thing made up for it, I think ;) I don\'t meant to copy you! I don\'t even know what you\'re talking about! Hehe, my site is corrupting us all. Ah, I\'m glad you liked it. And yeah, I know what you\'re talking about ;) Thanks for reading this! And thanks, as always, for reviewing! You\'re amazing!
Date: 24/07/11 Title: Chapter 9: The Meeting
You'd be surprised. Peanut can grin, and she does it all the time. Like the previous chapter, this one was amazing. I loved every second of it. The meeting with the bird was awesome. I liked how you did Kakashi's resignation. It was really good, fitting Suki perfectly with what will happen with him quitting. I loved that Kiba and Hinata are now their friends. I wonder how having all these people care for him will affect Naruto. I wonder if the parents will freak when they learn their children have befriended the guardian (funny since this is a term I have for Tainted Guardian. Didn't mean to do that, by the way) and the Kyuubi host.
Author's Response: Aw, that\'s so cute about Peanut :D Yay, I\'m glad you liked this chapter as well. I loved the official introduction with the bird. And I also enjoyed giving Kakashi\'s resignation a little more meaning than what everyone assumes happened in the manga. Yeah, I thought Naruto and Suki deserved more friends, especially after the murder attempt and all. Oh, you\'ll just have to wait and see about Kiba and Hinata and their parents. Oh, and don\'t worry about the whole Guardian term thing. I\'m sure we\'ve got different ideas ;) Thank you so much for reading and giving feedback! I seriously appreciate it. Thanks so much!
Date: 25/01/12 Title: Chapter 14: Her Diamonds
First of all, I must agree with you. I can't believe you have 125 (now, and soon to be 126) reviews. I mean, seriously, you should have 1000 at least! And only 5873 (word count as of now) reads? Sheesh. So many people are missing out on the most awesomest thing out there.
Well, that sucks. You actually had me liking Tetsu. And then you just had to go off and do that. I can't believe you, Silverwolf. I am now hurt deep down in my heart *pouts and turns away before remembering I have to finish the review*. Anyway, it's definitely an unexpected development, and I can't wait to see what it will grow into. As for Chishio taking over, I can't say I'm overly excited about that, but that my just because the only time we really saw him was when he was cruel to Suki. Meanie head *sticks out tongue*
It's probably mean, but I was laughing at team 9's suffering. It was just so funny! I loved seeing the different reactions from all of the genin. And then Deno was just off to the side, waiting for it to end *sigh* Deno, bad! You should have helped! Then again, I did create your personality...... Anyway, I loved their little mission and can't wait to see more of team nine interacting!
Wait wait wait wait! She's returning. Crap, that has to suck. Mentally that is going to really be a heck of a load for her to know she'll be returning to a land where she was abused regularly.... At least she'll have her team. I feel so bad for Kakashi. I can understand why he'd be afraid, seeing as the people he always let closest died. Well, Deno, you had better not die and hurt Kakashi or I'll bring ya back to life and kill you *glares threateningly*. Okay, now that I'm through making threats to my own oc, I also want to say I'm actually glad that you aren't just sending her and Kakashi. This gets us a chance to see just what Team 9 has in them.
Though out of all of this, I must say the part between Deno and Kakashi was my favorite. I have no clue why. Maybe because it seemed like a really touchy moment to see Deno helping guide Kakashi from seeing Suki as the young girl he found to who she is and who she can become. I'm so glad I made them friends, because you write their friendship so freaking well and I love it! You may say you fear messing up Deno sometimes, but if anything, you do him better than I ever could (this Deno, at least. I'm not sure how well - though I'm sure you'd do just as great- with the real Deno). You're making me fall in love with my own oc, Silverwolf. I didn't even know that was possible. I mean, I knew I could fall for your ocs (Like Suki and the rest of team nine), but my own oc. It's kinda strange =P
Oooh! That last part was so unexpected. I really believed Tetsu had died of natural causes. That tricky, tricky Kaminari. Oh, and I like how you had all of their names have something to do with storms and lightning. That was a kinda funny thing to me. And the way they are (two brothers that are kinda under their older sister) makes me think of the siblings in FW. Sheesh, this mind link is starting to freak me out =P. But they do have me curious to what is going to happen next. This was an amazing job, and if I could, I'd tell you where the mistakes were, but I can't remember for the life of me.
Overall it was an amazing chapter. I liked the song, and it really did fit the part where they found out Suki was going to her home village again. If I could, I'd put Loved instead of Liked, but since I can't, I'll just stick with my usual: This so deserves (possibly even passes) YOUR STORY.
Author's Response: 1000?! I don\'t think so! Nowhere even close will I ever have that many reviews :P And actually, 5873 reads is a lot more than I ever thought I\'d get. I love that you think so highly of this story though, it really lifts my spirits right now, especially since I\'m kinda down XP
I know! I was considering keeping him alive for a while longer, but it just didn\'t work out that way, sadly... So I had to kill Tetsu off. I\'m sorry I hurt your heart so deeply though; now you\'re making me feel bad :( As for what this whole thing will grow into... well, you\'ll see ;) And Chishio being the new lord will be very... interesting... Yeah, that sounds like an accurate word, or at least I hope...
Would it be mean if I said I was laughing at Team 9 while I was writing about them? XD I was honestly trying to show what they look like after two months with each other. They\'ve gotten a bit better with each other after training and completing the small missions. So I hope they\'re all acting in accordance to their personalities and their story\'s development.
Yes, she\'s returning O_O It really does suck, big time. There will be a lot of mental trauma, I\'ll tell you that now. She\'ll wish her dad was there for her, but I really wanted to get some action with Team 9 into the story, so that\'s why her teammates will be accompanying her. Haha, don\'t worry, I don\'t think I\'m killing Deno in the upcoming arc, so you can calm relax ^_^
I personally liked that scene as well. Deno and Kakashi together is just such a nice combination. And even though Deno has that carefree personality about him, he also seems like a very good friend, which is why having them be friends makes for a very touching part of the story. Haha, well, if I\'m making you fall in love with your own OC, I should take that as a compliment. I didn\'t know it was possible either, but hey, whatever makes you enjoy reading about him :D
Oh yeah, I just had to throw in a scene with the upcoming bad guys. Not everything is as it seems, and Tetsu obviously did not die of natural causes; oh, if only the Kagayaku people knew that :P Yeah, I figured since they\'re siblings, they should have similar names just to make things interesting. Oh man, the mind link is still at work, huh? Spooky yet highly entertaing :)
Ah, it\'s okay about not remembering where the mistakes were, I\'ll probably find them later on anyway. Oh, I\'m glad you liked the song choice, and you interpreted it just the way I did. I listened to it, thinking of Kakashi who worries for Suki. Thank you so much for the lovely comments, Sasaui! I appreciate each and every one of them! Thanks for reading and reviewing, you\'re awesomely amazing!