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Real name: Keele
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Member since: 08/07/07
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Member since: 08/07/07
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Title: That Uchiha Kid Owns Me. by IDeclareAThumbWar
Rated: R18
[Reviews - 25]
Rated: R18
[Reviews - 25]
Summary: The Uchiha Kid Owns Me.
Stupid bastard.
AND IT WASNT EVEN MY FAULT!
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Gaara and Neji, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: None
Genres: Drama, General, Graphic lemon
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 4422 | Read count: 2312 [Report This]
Published: 25/06/07 | Updated: 30/07/07
Stupid bastard.
AND IT WASNT EVEN MY FAULT!
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Gaara and Neji, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: None
Genres: Drama, General, Graphic lemon
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 4422 | Read count: 2312 [Report This]
Published: 25/06/07 | Updated: 30/07/07
Reviewer: keele_cray Signed
Date: 08/07/07 Title: Chapter 2: Kisses, Dolls, and Oatmeal
Date: 08/07/07 Title: Chapter 2: Kisses, Dolls, and Oatmeal
This chapter gets really confusing at some point because of other chara's point of view. You should have typed in whose POV it is or just make the fic a third person one. Anyway, I still like it, so please update soon!
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-- IDeclareAThumbWar : I really hate writing Soandso\'s POV but I\'ll think of something to make it less confusing.