Real name: doodle/Nykolle
Membership status: Member
Member since: 03/05/07
Website: http://www.youtube.com/user/CobaltOnyx
Beta-reader: No
サスケxナルト
Unfortunately, I don't use this account anymore. I may return to it one day, but that seems highly unlikely as of now. I'm most active posting videos on YouTube or being among my fellow dorks on Tumblr. For my fanfiction, check some of the links below.
Thanks to anyone who's ever reviewed my horrible fanfiction on here! My only regrets are my bad grammar and my odd fascination with weepy!almost-girl!Naruto. I hope to never go back.
I don't regret the M-preg. ಠ_ಠ If people can spout fire, raise the dead and enlarge their bodies to heights of skyscrapers, building an artificial womb doesn't seem all that unlikely.
FanFiction!
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And finally, LJ!
Rated: R18
[Reviews - 56]Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: AU, Death, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 87418 | Read count: 16856 [Report This]
Published: 22/09/07 | Updated: 18/02/08
Date: 12/12/07 Title: Chapter 10: To Be Needed
le gasp! will naruto die! i hope not! i like how you sorta followed the original story line but you spiced it up a little with your own style! that just makes it all the better! this fic is definitely unique! it has its own rythm and seems to have a melody all its own! and i didnt feel lost once during the battle scenes! usually i do but you kept me interested AND kept me along with it! it also had me in the edge of my seat the whole time! there are no words that can possible explain the extreme joy that i have each time that i read one of your chapters! the whole time i have this stupid expression on my face that my friends keep trying to find a particular name to define it ^^; well i cant wait to read another great chapter to this wonderful fic! arigatou and goodbye for now! ~lemon
Author's Response: I\'d hate to disappoint you, but after chapter 12, the plot drastically changes and goes downhill. The reason behind that is because I got a lovely beta-reader to help me out and we discovered that my original plot wasn\'t going to be all that great. The style of writing and the overall flow of the story gets quite rushed after that. I hope that you won\'t hate it afterwards!\r\n\r\nI don\'t even remember this chapter anymore, but I\'m glad that you liked it! I really suck at fight scenes though, so I\'m a bit amazed that you were able to even understand it at all! XD\r\n\r\nAlrighty then, until the next chapter, huh? Thanks again!
Date: 28/12/07 Title: Chapter 11: Trapped in Hell and Memories
heh heh I kinda found your other site ^-^ and I'm happy to say I'm glad I did! and I loved reading this chapter again! It also makes me respect you even more because you don't make the whole story centered around the smut! (even though I love the smut) but Its just so creative! and I love how you build on their relationship so much! I think my favorite part of this chapter would have to be how Sasuke fed Naruto by forcing the food down his throat using his own mouth! That was so sweet! (and kinda sexy) and it's so sad that no one can truly accept the fact that they love each other for who they are and not WHAT they are. This story is definitely an example of what love truly means! it doesn't matter who you are as long as you love that person and are willing to do anything to be with that person! This story so says that! And its such a heart breaking tale too! T-T I wont even begin to mention the feelings I had when I read the ending! but I will as soon as you update that chapter on this site! But again I love the emotion that is expressed in this fic! Have you ever considered becoming a writer? because this story is a lot better written than some books that I've read. Way more detailed and has one heck of a plot! Well, love it and can't wait to read and review the next chapter! bye-byes for now! ~lemon
Author's Response: Hahah, you\'re so enthusiastic! You\'ve told me before that you\'ve found my other sites. I\'m STILL surprised at why people don\'t just go there to find the ending, but meh. XD\r\n\r\nI\'m glad that you liked this story\'s ending, even though I thought that this story is basically a FAILURE. It sucks SO much that I couldn\'t care less of what people say about it. Strangely enough, many people liked it! Weird. I can only hope that my future works won\'t be as cruddy as this one though! Hahaha.\r\n\r\nAgain and again, thanks for being so patient and reading my stories (Sometimes twice!)! I really appreciate your support!\r\n\r\nBy the way, I think I want to be more of a mangaka than a writer right now. Though I am considering both options! Too early for me to decide still!
Date: 06/01/08 Title: Chapter 12: Information Overload
*choke* Omg! i loved that! mhhh...in this chapter my favorite part was when sakura remembered the little kiss sauke planted on naruto's cheek! that part was soooo cute! and again kudos to you for making the story fit into the manga! i loved all the little memories they had! well im pretty much brain dead right now so thats all i can write for now but i cant wait to read and review on the next chapter! love it! ♥ ~lemon
Author's Response: Nyanyanya, my beta-reader actually didn\'t like how much I stuck to the plot, so, as you can see, the chapters deviate a lot after this. I STILL hate this story very much! XD\r\n\r\nThanks for taking so much time to read this (and re-read it) then reviewing! I really appreciate your support!
Date: 18/01/08 Title: Chapter 14: Because I Need to Protect You
YAAAY!!! i get to review again!!! YOSH! i love reviewing XP especially if its a story i absolutely ADORE! and this one is special to me! it will always hold a special place in my heart! even if you deny it brilliance! but since its your story i will be more than willing to bash it XD but i will do it with a heavy heart if i ever do! hmmmm...still love narutos foxiness! i loved the part where jaraiya knocked him out of bed! i laughed so hard....but mentally....i ALMOST laughed out loud...but i had to keep quiet because someone was still in bed at this time of day! it was hard to keep it in though! i had tears at the corners of my eyes! and....and.....Naruto-kuns leaving!!! and the moment he and with sasuke was simply adorable! that little bell collar will be with them until the end wont it? and that just makes it even more heart wrenching! its like a symbol of what they have been through together! its always been there since the beginning! and it will be there till the very end! *sob* sorry got caught up in the moment...but yes its all to sweet and emotional. and it leaves me craving more! more i say! ^__^ i luvs this so much! and i agree with you totally on the updating system you worked out! if you posted it all at once you wouldn't get many reviews! mostly because they would go on and read the rest of it instead! and then just review on the last chapter! so this works out better doesn't it? so I'll cut this review right now and wish you luck on future fics! and hopefully you'll like those more yourself! can't wait to read more! and review! *loves*
~lemon
Author's Response: :D Still so enthusiastic! I\'m glad! But I\'m still really hoping that you\'ll find another one of my fics to keep in a special place! You make me feel so embarrassed whenever you say such good things about this! And not in the most particularly good way either! T__T I really do hate this story!\r\n\r\nOops, I do hate it when I burst out laughing randomly. Especially when there are people in the room. I always get the weirdest looks from them! X__x But I\'m pleased that it was funny enough to make you that happy!\r\n\r\nWaah, so much foreshadowing! But be careful not to give out too many spoilers! That wouldn\'t make the story fun for the other people!\r\n\r\nOkay then, thanks again and again for reviewing each of my stories!
Date: 10/02/08 Title: Chapter 15: Ah! The Domino Effect!
May i just say...i loved the fox part! it was just so adorable!! one of the cutest things i have ever read! and a very interesting way to introduce the new naruto! i wish that little fox was mine...the way you described that little moment was incredible! it had me wanting to hug my screen! i was awwing the whole time! and i probable looked like an insane sasuke fangirl ^_^ that's just the way i am with foxes! and you just made me love them even more! and i always suspected that kabuto was giving him some sort of drugs to forget about his past! sakura already said that sasuke was probably given drugs to make him stronger in the series! so this fits pretty well. sasuke kills oro, yay! and now he can continue with his insanity! poor naruto...figures he has to fall for a psychopath...oh well! things will get better! or possibly worse...and then better! either way i love the detail! it's so hard to find a greatly detailed story these days! and yours is very fluffy and angsty as well! thats perfect for me! i love angst! ...i wish i could go into more detail...but sadly...I'm a moron who doesn't know a lot of vocabulary...so i guess you'll just have to settle for my mediocre reviews! hope you have an awesome day!
~lemon
Author's Response: Whaa, you\'ll even settle for the fox even though its obviously not very tame and a bit violent? XD Man, you must be really brave. I don\'t know if I could get along with such a feisty little creature!\r\n\r\nMmn, for me, I never ever thought that Orochimaru and Co. would give Sasuke drugs to forget about his past. Obviously, Sasuke just lacks emotions anymore (Yeah, right. He sure seems pretty full of emotion these past few manga chapters...). I\'m pretty sure he\'s drug-free (Who am I kidding?)!\r\n\r\nOh, goodness, don\'t berate yourself like that. My vocabulary is pretty limited too, so no worries!\r\n\r\nThanks for your awesome enthusiasm! I really love you for that!
Date: 19/02/08 Title: Chapter 17: The Battle We've Won
O.O.........................................WAAAAAAHHH!!
'kay I'm done now ^^' when I first read this. I had to read and re-read it several times to check if my brain was functioning properly. I took a few moments and then I practically fell to the ground sobbing. BUT! I did restrain from doing so! (I did, however, shed a tear) And I can't believe you thought this story was horrible! maybe it just seemed that way because it was longer than your other fics? But either way I loved it! In so many other stories they have the most happy ending you could imagine! and having such a seemingly sad ending like this was a big, but not entirely unwelcome, change! In fact, I usually despise angst to the ends of the world! But how could I ever despise something that was written so wonderfully?! and thankfully the whole village didn't magically accept them right away! That would seem very cliche. but this ending...Definitely not what I expected! and still you force us to think! That's what a writer should do! ^^ and you absolutely have given us something big to think about...The ending could go in so many different ways...and the bell...*sigh* there are so many different meanings for that bell! and I don't think I could name a single one in words! (not the right words anyway) sometimes is doesn't pay to be a novice...your beta-reader must be very intelligent. I congratulate her as well! It must have been very hard to stick with this story for so long! and to help with it too! and even thought this is the end of a very great story I do hope that it's not the last I hear from you! Thank you so much for sticking with it and not giving up even though you hated it! Arigato gozaimasu! ♥
~lemon
Author's Response: No, I don\'t dislike this story because it is longer than most of my stories (lol, they\'re all oneshots for crying out loud. XD) but the fact that the ending was very badly written and the overall plot as well as the writing style was quite terrible too. As you find out, after chapter 12, everything was changed on a last-minute plan, so I wasn\'t prepared for that.\r\n\r\nBut I\'m glad that you liked the angsty ending. I hate it when it\'s all like, \"AND THEY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER--even though they just went through a bajillion things that could have made them mortally depressed for the rest of their lives. :dorky laugh:\" So I went off on a darker tangent. Though some didn\'t like it so well.\r\n\r\nMy beta-reader is the BOMB. She is so much awesomer than me, it\'s insane! That\'s why I love her though, crazy Nadra. We work together as a good team.\r\n\r\nThanks so much for reading this more than once and taking the time to review each and every chapter! I really appreciate that, and I will be looking forward to get more reviews from you! And of course, I\'ll be working slowly but surely to bring you guys the best stories I can crank out at the moment.
Rated: 18
[Reviews - 8]ONE-SHOT!!!
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Graphic lemon
Warnings: OOC, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 2783 | Read count: 1460 [Report This]
Published: 26/09/07 | Updated: 26/09/07
Date: 21/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Where Will You Go Sasuke?
~awwww!!! that was such a sweet and sappy ending and i love it!!! XD im such a sucker for a happy ending ^-^ angsty endings are good but they just make you feel so rotten! i love the story and the plot was really good! i hope to read more of your fics!!
~lemon
Author's Response: Yay another sweet review! I know what you mean about happy endings, they make me all warm and fuzzy. Can\'t wait to see what you think of the other stories I\'ve written :-)
Rated: U
[Reviews - 2]Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Poetry, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1007 | Read count: 1920 [Report This]
Published: 26/09/07 | Updated: 26/09/07
Date: 10/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Bittersweet Memory
that was so sad! i loved the whole poem thing! the ending was soooooo saaaaaad!!! *sob* i hope not all of your stories end so sadly! but nonetheless i loved it BECAUSE it was so sad! thank you!
~lemon
Author's Response: Unfortunately, I am not good with fluff, so most of my stories are quite sad. Of course, if you don\'t like the darkness or all the angst, I won\'t force you to read it. I just can\'t write anything too fluffy (especially since it\'s SasuNaruSasu) without feeling awkward.\r\n\r\nBut thanks for reading and reviewing this poem! I appreciate your support!
Rated: PG
[Reviews - 6]Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 3605 | Read count: 2449 [Report This]
Published: 04/10/07 | Updated: 04/10/07
Date: 23/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Anonymous Strangers
well that was really unique! i love stories like these! the ones that are just one shots but have all of those hidden meanings you just cant pinpoint no matter how hard you try! it makes me think harder and i love it! (since im just usually dazed when i read and then i snap back into reality only for a moment when i have to click the next button) but not this story i was completely awake! but this story is true that no one really cares about strangers and they are just people with a name and a face. oh so true..but this story is so awesome! this is why i love ur stories they are just so completely infatuating! well im rambling so ill just stop now so jaa ne!!
~lemon
Author's Response: Eeh, no, that\'s not quite true. Sometimes if you try hard enough you can find all the subliminal messages in a story. I\'ve had a few people already analyze this story a bit and find some hints by themselves.\r\n\r\nBut I\'m glad that my stories actually invoke thinking. I usually think that people kind of just sit there and read before moving onto the next story and forget about mine a second later. :shrugs:\r\n\r\nSo I\'m pleased that you liked this and thanks for all the reviews!
Rated: 18
[Reviews - 24]Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Angst, Graphic lemon, Romance
Warnings: Dark, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 18288 | Read count: 8101 [Report This]
Published: 05/10/07 | Updated: 02/11/07
Date: 21/11/07 Title: Chapter 10: A note to my loyal fans!
hi sorry that i didnt review for every chappy but i just found this story so ill just tell you that this was such an awesome story and i love the last chapter especially! im going to read all of your stories now and ill check everyday to see if you update! thank you for making such an awesome story for us to enjoy!!!
~lemon
Author's Response: Aww, you are so sweet! Don\'t worry about not reviewing for every chapter, I know how troublesome that can be when you start reading a finished story. I am going to put up another SasuNaru one-shot soon...it\'s sad though and there is no lemon -sigh- I really need to write more smut! Anyway, thanks again for the review it made me smile ^_^\r\n\r\n
Rated: U
[Reviews - 7]Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: AU, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 5744 | Read count: 2355 [Report This]
Published: 10/10/07 | Updated: 10/10/07
Date: 27/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Irrelevancy
*horrified look* no....NO!!! omg that was so sad! so painful to read too! but i loved it! i love it when i read something so emotional! and the way it was written...so original and creative! i would have never of thought of something like this! and pulled it off too! why would they do that to him?! and it made me so happy ad yet sad when i realized that he was human! well was once human. society is messed up! to heck with them! they dont have the right to do that to someone! T^T and yet they can! i feel so depressed right now....but in a good way. i think i would feel even more depressed if i never read it in the first place! such an amazing story deserves much more credit than this! i wish i could bake! because if i could i would make you the BEST cherry pie in the world! considering i dont eat it all before i give it to you XD but yes the angst and the detail are simply wonderful! i dont think anyone could have made it better! i really dont know what to say....im at a loss for words! i wish there were such things as digital cookies!.....the ending...so sad...it makes it so very very sad that sasuke had to lose him twice...he had to feel that pain again. BRAVO!! excellent one shot! *standing ovation* THANK YOU SOOOO VERY MUCH!!! ♥ *loves*
~lemon
Author's Response: Oya, but there are such things as digital cookies! *takes out cookies and eats them* Ugh, but they don\'t taste all that great though... *clears cookies* There you go. XD By the way, I think I\'ll prefer an apple pie, actually.... Not that I\'m being picky or something. Hahaha.\r\n\r\nI wonder if you\'re feeling that wonderful, bitter sadness that I frequently feel when I read a particularly well-written and sad SasuNaru story? It\'s a terrible and beautiful feeling, don\'t you think? That\'s why I love SasuNaru so much... :sighs: Well!\r\n\r\nThanks very much! I feel lame for running out of things to saaaay!
Rated: 18
[Reviews - 6]Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sakura Haruno, Shikamaru Nara, Tsunade, Ino Yamanaka
Genres: Graphic lemon, Romance
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 4369 | Read count: 1219 [Report This]
Published: 16/10/07 | Updated: 16/10/07
Date: 13/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Baby For His Brithday
aw that was a sweet ending! ^-^ it was sentimental and crap and i love stories like that! thank you for writing such an awsome fic such as this one!
~lemon
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 13]Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Romance
Warnings: AU, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1616 | Read count: 2685 [Report This]
Published: 16/10/07 | Updated: 16/10/07
Date: 07/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Out of the Closet
WOOOT!! go naruto tell that b*tch off! heh heh i love this story! it was really funny! and for some odd reason i find myself giggling at the thought of a broody sasuke sulking in the corner of a supply closet ^-^ but ya this story has its own charm and i love that! thanks for making up such a lovely story for us to enjoy! bye for now! ~lemon
Author's Response: aw and thanks for giving it such a lurvly review! =DD i found i just had to write this so i\'m glad people, other than me, enjoyed it! ^^
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 11]Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Naruto and Gaara, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto, General Fiction
Characters: Gaara, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Angst, General, Humor, WAFF
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1477 | Read count: 3339 [Report This]
Published: 29/10/07 | Updated: 29/10/07
Date: 19/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Adventures in Angst
omg that was hilarious!!! roflmao i did NOT expect that to happen!!! i was all confused and stuff but then the last sentence cleared that all up! yep! i was going to cry at the ending but then naruto said all that and now im laughing and my roommate is looking at me funny!!! sorry...sugar gets to ya you know ^-^; well bye!
Rated: R18
[Reviews - 103]In a world where slavery is abound and the rich control the poor, one boy tries to change the world. As a slave to the unkind master Uchiha Sasuke, Naruto never thought he would see his family or his home again and his numerous escapades only bring him more pain. Even though the determined hard-headed boy is taught the ‘lessons’ time and time again, he is not someone who is easily broken or tamed. And even though Sasuke is having a great time ‘teaching’ his pet, there’s still the question of whether the Ice Prince can fall in love... and whether Naruto will ever be able to forgive him enough to let him in.
One little blond slave can’t change the world and stop slavery, but if the younger brother of the Dictator of the entire country falls in love with him, he sure can make a big difference.
Naruto Uzumaki never dreamed that when his little village was plundered and he was kidnapped, he'd end up in Caithe, the biggest city in the Fire Country - and a personal slave to THE Sasuke Uchiha, the number one biggest asshole and the second biggest boss. He never dreamed he'd have to barter to keep his friends alive, make new friends out of strangers, and discover an entire Underground Railroad. He didn't count on all his escape attempts failing, and he certainly didn't count on Sasuke's punishments for them...
And things only continue to get worse as his guardian gets tangled up in it, people begin to hate him for his direct relationship to the Uchiha, and he is a suspect in the underground railroad movement. He can't even stay out of trouble long enough not to keep Sasuke's suspicions, Iruka's anger, and his own innocence and determination in check for a single day. But when push comes to shove, and everything's in an uproar, Naruto most certainly never counted on falling in love with the one person he'd sworn to hate for as long as he lived.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Kakashi and Iruka, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Shino Aburame, Chouji Akimichi, Deidara, Gaara, Haku, Sakura Haruno, Kakashi Hatake, Hidan, Kisame Hoshigaki, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka, Jiraiya, Konohamaru Sarutobi, Maito Gai, Anko Mitarashi, Zabuza, Shikamaru Nara, Orochimaru, Rin, Rock Lee, Sai, Sarutobi Hiruzen (Sandaime Hokage), Asuma Sarutobi, Temari, Tenten, Tobi, Tsunade, Itachi Uchiha, Obito Uchiha, Sasuke Uchiha, Iruka Umino, Naruto Uzumaki, Kabuto Yakushi, Ino Yamanaka, Minato Namikaze (Yondaime Hokage)
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Humor, Romance, WAFF
Warnings: Death, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 | Completed: No | Word count: 48380 | Read count: 15304
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Published: 01/11/07 | Updated: 04/03/08
Date: 17/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three: Listen and Obey
OMFG NO!!! SASUKE YOU BASTARD!! that was such a dramatic way of ending this chapter! it was so awesome!! but the dreaded cliffhanger, nooo!!! i need the other chapter!! please update soon!!! i love the other chappies too!
~lemon
Date: 25/12/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Secret Meeting
well i have one thing to say to you. I LOVE YOU! *girlish fangirl scream* uh...sorry bout that ^^' well i have to say this is a definite fav of mine. Its very creative and very original. And despite the fact that you have then in a very different time and place they fit into their characters perfectly! they aren't completely the same though. which has me intrigued that you retain their original personalities and tweak them to fit into the story. ^-^ and through all that they still seem like themselves! It has one of the best story plots ever too! and all the suspense! what will happen to naruto? will they save iruka in time? can naruto learn to love sasuke? and what does sasuke have planned for naruto!? all of these and more are spinning in my head right now. and it can only be solved one way! and how?! well of course I must wait for your next update! and to tell ya I cant wait either! all the waiting is killing me! and i love the little evil sauke *snicker* but sometimes hes too mean...T-T poor naruto! but it can't be helped. and i absolutely love the detail in this story too! this fic is so great words cant describe it! well cant wait till you continue! loves it! ~lemon
Date: 27/01/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: He's My Son, Dammit
woah.....*blank stare* that was awesome! i loved the little scene with sasuke and naruto! sasuke actually laughed! its the apocalypse! but i think i would be rolling on the ground if was there in the room with them! it was just too funny...and when i was reading the part after the lemon...i almost cried...it was sad...oh so sad...and it had me wanting to bawl on the floor and scream 'WHYYY!!!' yeah thats how crazy i am..XP it was filled with so much emotion! i could feel my heart breaking with them! T^T it was sweet too...that sasuke actually regretted doing that to him and he wanted to make him feel better...SO SAD! i hope that they can be happy! and that naruto realizes that sasuke DOES care. yep thats my only wish. and i think i will read this chapter again. that how much i loved it! i want to read it again! it was filled with everything that a story should have! angst, lemons, romance, and comedy! love that combination! and you managed to fit it all into one chapter! *le gasp* you are so talented! >.< and such a long chapter too! it was worth the wait! and as long as you continue to write with such vigor and detail i dont care how long you take to update! just as long as you do ^-^ i cant wait to read more!!! i hope that the next chapters just as excellent! if not more! i curse anyone who doesnt give you a perfect ten for this chapter! *loves* *squeal* ♥
~lemon
Date: 07/03/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: A Determined Father
Kyaaa! That was so adorable! And that's something rare to happen in this story! So I'm more than happy to read it! I really loved this chappy because it focuses more on Iruka then on Sasuke and Naruto. And ya still managed to put a little something in it for all of us yaoi obsessed fangirls! Bravo! I very much liked the part where Iruka was saying it was like a little family! Because it kinda just described how they were all there for each other! This story is just so thought out and has so much effort put into it! I just love the heck out of it! I can just tell how hard your working! And it's very much appreciated! Thank you for such an awesome chappy and story! I really loved it and it brought a smile to my face! ♥
~lemon
Rated: 18
[Reviews - 132]SasuNaruSaku; our poor blonde stuck in the middle! I appologize to Sakura haters now; there will be NaruSaku. This story has a plot, lemon in later chapters.
Will update when I feel loved, hehehe
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Sakura, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sakura Haruno, Kiba Inuzuka, Jiraiya, Konohamaru Sarutobi, Shikamaru Nara, Temari, Tsunade, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki, Ino Yamanaka
Genres: Graphic lemon, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: Tereshi's Chance Series
Chapters: 24 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 48290 | Read count: 32104 [Report This]
Published: 08/11/07 | Updated: 07/03/08
Date: 22/01/08 Title: Chapter 17: Break
GO NARUTO! tell those old people off! but i do have one thing to say...-ahem- doesn't the council control the hokage? i mean all the hokage is there for is military command and protection of the village. and the council controls the rest of the village. just like the daimyou controls the land of fire. its kind of like the president is to us, but the congress pretty much controls the US. ??? i think i was smart for a second....HEY! do you want to know what the wrapper of my dove chocolate says?! hmmm...it says.....'go to your special place.'....O.O why the heck would they put that on a 'DOVE' wrapper?! hmmm... caramel filled chocolate....i wonder what naruto and sasuke would do with that....*drools* you didn't hear that! yes i am aware of my pervertedness....and i love it! >.< i love this chappy! and sasuke was sooo...sensitive... O.O creepy....XD and naru-chan would look so cute in the hokages outfit! and i still find it funny that sasuke still claims naruto as his when hes the uke. isn't that supposed to go the other way around? oh well, let sasuke live in doubt. it just makes it all the more funny ^-^ sasuke makes a cute uke! but hes still a possessive bastard! i love this to much! please update soon! thanks so much for another chapter! *loves* CHOCOLATE!
~lemon
Author's Response: Mostly true. But the president does hold the veto card and could be a real pain in the ass to congress if he wanted to be.
\r\nYou are in your special place, your on Tonfa reading \'Last Chance\'!
Bye for now,
Tereshi
Date: 03/02/08 Title: Chapter 19: Reports
KYAAA!! another wonderful chapter! and it has me wondering whats gonna happen when sakura finds out! *sniff* what will happen! will the council make him marry her?! nope. naruto wouldn't let that happen! and..and...you keep them so well in character! how do you do that?! most every time i read a sasunaru story they're so out of character that you dont even know them! but here i get the whole 'naruto' vibe! i love it!! ^^ sad that some people have stopped reading just for one little scene! they should have kept up hope! and *le gasp* theres a part TWO!!? and sasuke gets pregnant?! WOOT! well i hope you do make him pregnant! because it would be so funny! and adorable! you dont see many sasu pregs out there! and im sure that you would write it beautifully! so i shall await ur next update then! *salutes* Ja!
~lemon
Author's Response: Thank you for another wonderful review. You and Sakuranzu are keeping me going right now as no one else even reviewed this chapter. And yes this story is coming to an end but I promised Sakuranzu a part two. Hope a continue to please you guys as I wrap this one up. And remember your own words, Keep up hope, and don\'t get too tramatized over the het. ;P\r\n-Tereshi
Date: 05/12/07 Title: Chapter 5: Hysterical Woman
woooot! go sasuke! tell that bitch off! im not really a sakura hater or lover but when the occasion calls for it i can be rather violent ^^; well i love how this story is turning out and i love all the chappies so far so please continue to update on this great fic! thanx much! ~lemon
Date: 29/01/08 Title: Chapter 18: Chiinu
i have fallen so much in love with this! its so well written and the plot is very creative! XD and it just makes it that much better when sasuke's an ANBU! and i loved the little scene with them in the office! >.< BLOOD DOG!! or what naruto called him....yeah that was very funny! ^-^ i cant wait to read more!!! so i will await ur next update!!! thanks so much for another chappy! *loves*
~lemon
Author's Response: Hey lemon,
I\'m glad your enjoying this story still. Remember though that Sakura is not out of the picture. I\'ll try to keep your truma to a min. I\'ve seen a couple of people stop reading because they didn\'t like one chapter, but if they would have waited they would have seen things turned out the way they wanted the very next chapter.
Thanks for the review,
Tereshi
Date: 16/01/08 Title: Chapter 15: Sucessions & Confessions
DAMN! >.< narusasu is fine but...DAMMIT! *sigh* but you are the almighty writer and i have no say in it...and sasuke does have uke in his name...but naruto is so ukeish! i am caught between things...but i love this story!!! love love love! and the only reason i didn't review for the others was because i was sooo busy!! im so sorry! *bows* i should have! but im glad to say that i still love this story! even if sasuke is the uke...but hes a good uke! hes not all submissive! a lot in stories people make him all girly and i hate that....YOU at least keep him in character like things should be! hes a bastard and always will be! uke or not uke! and i love the song 'Low' its so awesome....its on right now! >.< yays! anyways! i hope that you dont keep us hanging too long! and i have a lot more to say than this! like......HET! O.O that had me twitching for so long....i was staring at the screen....and twitching....and twitching....and then my eyes started to burn so i looked away. its so weird...im a girl yet Het scares me....it has me cowering in the corner and hissing at my screen...it affects me like garlic does a vampire! but i really hope that sakura doesn't get preggers! because that would be so horrible! and then they would have to get married! but maybe.....sasuke cold get married to naruto in canada, and naruto could get married to sakura in japan! or wherever they are...and then they could live happily ever after! and live together...and do other stuff.....O.O this is how my mind works when it is deprived of both pocky AND ramen! T^T no ramen!!! but i still love you and your story fills that void! thank you so much fro a fic so awesome! i would say something like magnificent but that word reminds me of purple unicorns right now...but THANK YOU! thank you from the deepest depths of my heart! and i hope to read more soon! and dont forget! >.< and i would like a happy ending...for me? please? thats all i wish for! and maybe sakura could find someone else....or they could do the three way marrying thing! but yes goodbye for now! *love* ♥
~lemon
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and I\'m sorry if I caused you any undue trama with the HET. If I do anymore I will try to keep it lime.
P.S. Some of your suggestions scared me! Just remember this story is already complete on paper and I\'m not stealing anyone\'s ideas or suggestions.
Hehe- Tereshi
Date: 18/01/08 Title: Chapter 16: Kunai
*dramatic anime nosebleed* OMFG! you have officially turned me into a narusasu lover! i used to hate it so bad, but now....I LOVE IT!!! thank you so much for making me see the light! i worship you! and this fic *snicker* well i love it and i can't wait to read more! and whats naruto thinking NOW!? i must know! till next time!
~lemon
Author's Response: *Tereshi, the priestess of NaruSasu, glomps the convert*
Welcome! But worship the boys, not me.
Maybe I\'ve had too much sugar today. Yaaaaaayyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 10/02/08 Title: Chapter 20: Cheating
bwaaahahahahahaha!!! i laughed so hard during this chapter! sakura...and her...bitch comment...that was kinda an inside joke to me ^__^ everyone refers to sasuke as a bitch dont they? hahaha yeah this chapter was definitely one of the funniest! but then again...all your chapters have humor in them! (except for the lemons of course) i just love all of sasuke's and naruto's little scenes! i was in such a bad mood! but now I'm grinning ear to ear! thank you for picking such a great time to update!! love it and cant wait for the next update!!
~lemon
Author's Response: Well Sasuke is such a moody little thing. If he was a girl, I think he would be getting called a bitch on a regular basis. So I thought it a fitting title for the testy little Uchiha. And yes, I did mean it as an inside joke. Glad I brightened your day a bit. See you on the next update.\r\n\r\n-Tereshi