Real name: Charlotte
Membership status: Member
Member since: 30/03/07
Website: www.theninja-rpg.com
Beta-reader: Yes
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My non-naruto fics can be found here and here
Rated: [Reviews - 11]
Pairings:
KakashixOc
NarutoxOc
Category: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 4560 | Read count: 1879 [Report This]
Published: 08/04/07 | Updated: 09/04/07
Date: 13/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Aaight. People rarely leave reviewes on this site though, but ok.
Author's Response: 15...thats allI ask...Is it too much to ask for?
Date: 11/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
are you gonna update this soon? *prays to God you will today* ;)
Author's Response: ...maybe...if I get up to 15 ((FROM OTHER PEOPLE BESIDES YOU AND THE OTHER ONE)) reviews. SOmeone aded me to their fav. authors list and hasnt commented on my story thus far.
Date: 09/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I think she's more or less perfect for Kakashi. She's pretty.
Author's Response: wait a minute...HOW THE HELL DO YOU AD A PICTURE????
Date: 07/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Are you still gonna wait for those 15 reviews to come before you update this story?
Rated: [Reviews - 3]
Category: General Fiction
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Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Word count: 1155 | Read count: 3975 [Report This]
Published: 11/04/07 | Updated: 07/06/07
Date: 12/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: where am i?
I dont know if I like this yet or not. Maybe the next chapter will help me decide. update soon.
Date: 13/04/07 Title: Chapter 2: Can she be trusted?
You have to work on your grammar a bit. Also put capital letters in the beginning of their sayings, not just whenever there's a name.
I personally think the storyline is a bit weak, but I wanna continue reading this. It's interesting. Good job. :)
Author's Response: thx. i know it is kinda weak but it\'s my first story. im not very good at writing stories like this. im am pretty good at writing essays though. hopefully the more i write the better the story will be and the better i\'ll be at writing stories
Rated: [Reviews - 2]
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Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 3892 | Read count: 948 [Report This]
Published: 12/04/07 | Updated: 12/04/07
Date: 21/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I like the choice of words you've used. I can easily picture it all before me which is nice. I'm not really a fan of stories which are happening now, if you get my drift, but it was all good. :)
Rated: [Reviews - 18]
Category: General Fiction
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Chapters: 10 | Completed: No | Word count: 11931 | Read count: 13172 [Report This]
Published: 15/04/07 | Updated: 13/03/08
Date: 15/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: A New Arrival
It's pretty interesting. I'd love to see what happens next. If I were you I would have looked over the grammar before posting the chapters. It's all good though :)
Rated: U [Reviews - 4]
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Characters: Gaara
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Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 560 | Read count: 1027 [Report This]
Published: 10/06/07 | Updated: 10/06/07
Date: 10/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I suggest you put this in the "Bad Fics" category.
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 6]
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs
Characters: Kisame Hoshigaki, Ino Yamanaka
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 236 | Read count: 1346 [Report This]
Published: 12/06/07 | Updated: 12/06/07
Date: 14/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
You, my friend, have a lot to learn about writing. I liked the idea, but you could have made it a little more in detail.
Also, putting "" when somebody says something will help the reader understand what's going on.
I guess your grammar is ok, although you didnt spell one single name with capital first letter thingy. Same with the first word in the new sentences..
However, I actually enjoyed reading it.
Don't take this review as a flame, cause it's not meant as one. Just trying to give you some advice.
I'm looking forward to read more of your stuff in the future.
/Challa
Author's Response: ok dont take this as an insult but ive heard it all before i made another story recently called what have i become it has \"\" and they\'re capatalized so... glad u enjoyed it
Rated: 18 [Reviews - 4]
Category: Orphan
Characters: Sakura Haruno
Genres: Graphic lemon
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1781 | Read count: 649 [Report This]
Published: 01/07/07 | Updated: 01/07/07
Rated: R18 [Reviews - 2]
Category: Het Romance > Warned, OC-centric
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Graphic lemon
Warnings: Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 3692 | Read count: 2249 [Report This]
Published: 14/10/08 | Updated: 14/10/08
Date: 11/05/15 Title: Chapter 1: 4 In Bed, 2 Into You
:D That was hot and awesome! -I loved it