Forgive me, but I expected this to be the usual crap that some people put on here about the canon characters having twins.
I actually liked this one!! It's really thought out and the OC is not some badass that can kick everybody's ass.
She's an average grade student, and her situations are real.
It's sad, but I think the fear and apprehension she had towards Naruto after the incident was very well placed.
I love how you are up to date with the anime and manga, and you know what the hell's going on! :D
I read the new manga chapters and watch the anime episodes as they come from Japan, weekly. So, I know what the hell's going on, and it really bothers me when some of these writers come here and write in ignorance!
I also congratulate you on your USUALLY correct grammar. hehe. I'm a bit of a grammar Nazi and I hate it when stories are good, but you can't understand them because the writer is somewhat illiterate!
Well, thank you for getting a good story on here!
I hope you get more reviews and followers!
Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you gave my story a chance. As for spelling, sometimes when I post it one websites, it messes up then but I know what you mean, I usually look out for spelling as best as I can (though I know I do screw up every now and then). But I hope you continue to like my story. :)