Reviews For Sekai no Uso
Name: tikarina (Signed) · Date: 18/08/08 - 03:24 pm · For: Machi
"Began the man ardently, peeking backwards awkwardly to back out of the narrow, microscopic parking he somehow adroitly coped to squeezing impossibly into"
"The sun was merely a setting, radiant ginger globe outside my genteel, cultured window, sparkling, reflecting proudly off the mirror coated structures."
" A void, unadorned sallow sign was being waved energetically with chaotic, yet decipherable black script carved on it legibly."
*The reason I giving you these examples is because there hard to understand. You need to simply your writing. Not use so many discpritive words.Your writing at a college level where many people here arent even out of High School. Simpfly and you'll get more readers.
I hope that wasnt a flame ):
Author's Response: No, it's nice advice. Vixkill had mentioned it, and I'm trying to tone down on the wording =.= rnThanks for reviewing!! ^.^
Name: tikarina (Signed) · Date: 03/08/08 - 06:27 pm · For: Iwaku
You have alot of stories going around ive noticed.
I think ive read most of them but have been just to lazy to review.
There very good.I admire your writing style.
Im your fan.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm glad to have support!! ^.^