Reviews For For the love of pain
Name: jay_chan (Signed) · Date: 26/04/08 - 08:56 pm · For: New place, same thing
yes another ellecent edition to a excellent story
Name: xlovexsikamarux (Anonymous) · Date: 24/03/08 - 06:06 pm · For: New place, same thing
damnit! noooooooooo!!!!!!!! why did you stop writing!!!!!! i wanna know what happens next!!!! if they get caught, im gonna laugh so hard!!!! hurry up and post the next chapter!!!!!!!
Name: sasunaru (Anonymous) · Date: 16/03/08 - 04:10 am · For: Just trying to convince...
that is hot
Name: OmgVikiRawr (Signed) · Date: 14/03/08 - 02:13 pm · For: New place, same thing
LOL
What a predicament..
Name: saisasi (Anonymous) · Date: 14/03/08 - 01:28 pm · For: New place, same thing
Awesome, i couldnt stop giggling when i read it ^_^
Name: OmgVikiRawr (Signed) · Date: 14/03/08 - 12:44 pm · For: Full Speed
AHHH
I LOVE ITT
Yay for car sex
I wanna do that now xD
Awesome story, I really love it xx
Name: sheechiibii (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 - 05:17 pm · For: New place, same thing
Ahhh! This story rocks so much! Cant wait for the next chapie
You have a fan yays for SasuNaru xx hehe
Name: crazymomo (Anonymous) · Date: 20/02/08 - 04:52 pm · For: New place, same thing
Lol, this storyy is really good I cnt wait to see what happens next! That's really funny and especially the ending, it leaves me wanting more, content, and luaghing at an undetermind outcome.
Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 19/02/08 - 07:23 pm · For: New place, same thing
o-m-g...I've only left one review here? gomengomengomen!! I feel terrible! I have enjoyed every chapter and I'm ashamed to have been one of your 3000+ silent readers! (that's still an accomplishment you know) But anyway, this chapter was par excellence as usual :D Very hawtt! You manipulate them all so well :D
If you care, when someone is talking, the 'he said' part is part of the sentence, so you don't put a period in front (unless it is a new sentence)
ei: "I want you now," I whispered silently...
"You're not the only one turned on," he smirked.
You would put a period for something like this:
"You're not the only one turned on." He grabbed my ass.
Because "He grabbed my ass" is a separate thought and sentence. Anyway, that's my little grammar lesson if you care at all. I assume you do because I definitely see effort to make your story look good.
Luff you thnx for writing! (hopefully the comment box won't cut me off again)
Author's Response: *laughs* well that was a mistake I do soemtimes when I talk on msn or Y messenger too, I don't write that because I think it's right. I do it because of the loss of attention *laughs*rnThank you for the nice review and for the high rate. I appreciate it very much!
Name: jay_chan (Signed) · Date: 31/01/08 - 04:36 pm · For: Just trying to convince...
wow i love this story its like one of the beest ones i ve read and i ve read alott!!!
Name: Miss (Anonymous) · Date: 04/01/08 - 10:36 pm · For: Full Speed
LOOOOL ! I didn't expect THAT ! But it's a great chapter !!!
Can't wait to find out how do they know each other though ! xD
Keep it on !!!!!!!
Name: misa (Anonymous) · Date: 02/01/08 - 12:27 am · For: Misunderstanding
what?? how did that kiba know whose sasuke are???? are u saying that he was sasuke oh god!!!! no hell way!! poor naru chan!!!
Name: Poison (Anonymous) · Date: 29/12/07 - 09:47 pm · For: Misunderstanding
Great Fic! I love all the twist and turns in it please keep adding to it!
Name: electrictoaster (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 07:09 pm · For: Office Style
That was hottt
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Hmmm...I likey where this is going.
I can't wait to read more!
Name: Miss (Anonymous) · Date: 19/12/07 - 04:26 am · For: His Story
Great chapter !!!! ^^ I really liked it !! Keep it on !! xD
Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 - 05:54 pm · For: His Story
Interesting life story for sasuke! Very original, I'm glad he's not a cheating bastard. I thought maybe you'd make his wife dead, but this is pretty intriguing.
PS- minus points for dry lemon! update soon
Author's Response: Awww, but I said sorry for it! *cries* Anyway you shall see in the later chapters my artilery of lemons *snickers*, thanks for the review ^.^
Author's Response: Awww, but I said sorry for it! *cries* Anyway you shall see in the later chapters my artillery of lemons *snickers*, thanks for the review ^.^
Name: Tara (Anonymous) · Date: 18/12/07 - 05:03 pm · For: His Story
Aw.
Poor Sasu-kun.
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Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad that you liked this chapter ^.^
Name: Tara (Anonymous) · Date: 15/12/07 - 06:03 pm · For: The Game
Uh oh.
Married Sasu-kun.
Splendid chapter.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you for the nice review!
Name: Arukasandora (Anonymous) · Date: 15/12/07 - 05:03 pm · For: The Game
hahahaha he slept with a deathly sexy married man this story is getting better and better
Cant wait for the next one to be posted i give you a ten out of five haha
Name: saisasi (Anonymous) · Date: 15/12/07 - 04:41 pm · For: The Game
Awesome! hehe I learned about Michelangelo in my classes this week too, but sadly we didnt get to spend much time on David... The story is awesome, please update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, David is pretty damn good *slaps herself* stop thinking about statues!LOLrnThank you for the comment and oh yes I shall continue it!
Name: Tara (Anonymous) · Date: 05/12/07 - 02:49 pm · For: Encounter
Yepp!
I just thought you should know. I hope I didn't come off too rude. I'm looking forward to the next installment of your story.
Author's Response: No, not at all, help when it's needed, is greatly appreciated ^^ and also I'm glad that I caught your attention with this story
Name: Tara (Anonymous) · Date: 02/12/07 - 03:23 pm · For: Search
According to webster's dictionary lackadaisical means to lack spirit, spirt, or zest an adjective is languid.
Obviously not affectionate or loving.
I like your story, but please make sure you know what you're saying in a definition at least.
www.m-w.com (website I used)
Other than that, your definitions are correct.
Your story is very interesting though!
Keep up the good work!
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Author's Response: um... I used my home dictionary and I found this meaning, oh well I'll search on this website from now on. Thanks! ^^
Name: jay_chan (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 - 06:12 pm · For: Search
i love your for the love of pain story please write more
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and yeah... of course I will ^^
Name: Nicola258 (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 - 04:12 pm · For: Search
Man...whoa lol. Ew how cud naruto do that???!!! lol But loving this!! Can't wait for next chapter Xxx
Author's Response: Well it's because... HE has lost his mind!!! lol. Thanks for the review, very appreciated.
Name: Daisuke (Anonymous) · Date: 27/11/07 - 04:01 pm · For: Encounter
Pretty Good;
Author's Response: Thank you for the review ^^