Reviews For Over the Line
Name: emz_rose (Anonymous) · Date: 30/04/08 - 01:17 am · For: Chapter 7
Beautiful, I was afraid coz it looked kinda angsty, but I liked it, actually quite a lot. Well done.
Author's Response: XD thanks. Everyone likes this story. I keep feeling like I don't, but I think I'll have to leave it alone. Maybe I'll write another one, slightly different, and leave this one up too. -shrugs- Ah wells. Thank you for the review! -hugs tightly-
Name: Dkf (Signed) · Date: 19/01/08 - 01:30 pm · For: Chapter 7
Awesome as always; I wish they're were more stories about the 'fall out' of that. I dont think it would've ended as easily as it did in the manga...
Ouchies. Mean Genma.
I like your Asuma. I usually hate him, so...
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you. I think I'm going to rewrite this story though. It's kind of...I dunno. SHallow. I could do so much more with it, I think. n.n I'm glad you liked it though.
Name: Snowcleo (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 - 10:08 pm · For: Chapter 7
O.o That was...I'm not sure I have the words. I'm glad it ended well, but I was a little (lot) worried there. Wow. Powerful.
Author's Response: n.n THank you! This story didn't get a whole lot of attention, so it's nice to see that someone else likes it too! n.n
Name: Hyuuga Akenai (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 - 11:31 am · For: Chapter 7
Heh... cutesie ending.
Author's Response: yah, I HATE the ending. :P S'ok. Since I can't seem to get anything else written, I might as well go back and rewrite this, eh?
Name: Hyuuga Akenai (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 - 11:29 am · For: Chapter 6
O.O
Shit's goin' down!!!
Author's Response: yeah. Again, not really happy with this part. I think I will tear it down and rebuild it....
Name: Hyuuga Akenai (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 - 11:27 am · For: Chapter 5
Heh... silly Naruto...
Author's Response: yah. n.n I think I hate the kid sometimes, interrupting my seirous drama story with his stupid antics. But then i remember that i love him, so it's ok.
Name: Hyuuga Akenai (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 - 11:25 am · For: Chapter 4
Poor Iruka-kun... *sniffle*
Author's Response: *snuggle*
Name: Hyuuga Akenai (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 - 11:23 am · For: Chapter 3
O.O
Author's Response: n.n
Name: Hyuuga Akenai (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 - 11:21 am · For: Chapter 2
*plays the funeral march for her beloved Iruka-kun*
Asuma to the rescue?
Author's Response: no, not really, lol. n.n Poor Iruka.
Name: Hyuuga Akenai (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 - 11:20 am · For: Chapter 1
Ooh.. Genma is such an asshole...
Author's Response: i know. lol. You gotta remember that this was like my first or second fanfiction evah. I wasn't really in touch with the characters yet. I think I feel the urge to rip this down and rewrite it, cause I'm just not happy with it in total.