Reviews For Salvation
Name: GrayFOX77 (Anonymous) · Date: 01/12/07 - 07:35 pm · For: Close Yet So Far
I like how Sakura-Chan and Naruto-Kun are so close it reminds me of the old days*Sob,sob,sniffle,sniff*I just loved those old times it makes me cry when I think of the good and bad times that they shared.It just means so much to me that the Sasuke-Kun cared for them that's why he protected them from danger. LOVES AND KISSES, GrayFOX77
Author's Response: yeah, I miss those days too. But, I have full confidence they will return once again, as long as Kishimoto doesn't have Sasuke returning the end, that would really suck because I want to see how much stronger they can be now that their older. Thanks for the review!
Name: Persy321 (Anonymous) · Date: 27/11/07 - 06:40 pm · For: Close Yet So Far
O_O dude! freakin awsomeness! ^-^ i love it! keep going!
Author's Response: thanks again!
Name: FaithfulReviewer (Anonymous) · Date: 14/11/07 - 02:02 pm · For: Close Yet So Far
A little confusion in the beinging. "It is both their strongest yet weakest asset" should be "It WAS both their strongest yet weakest asset". I love your story; the pacing is quite nice and steady. I've read fics that are too fast or too slow, but your's is quite nicely paced. I also love your style. Your charaters are also quite in character. I will try to give you constructive critism as well as compliments. Good luck!
Author's Response: thanks for the review and I always appreciate constructive criticism. I do have to say though, that the line "it is both their strongest yet weakest asset." I purposely put the IS rather than the WAS. It's significant to the fact that both Sakura and Naruto still have these weakness and it's especially strong with Sasuke. It's suppose to be there as a double meaning. Also, this story is on fanfiction.net if it's easier for you to read there. I don't really like reading stories on this site because it sometimes screws up the paragraphs and stuff. Thanks again!
Name: gunslingerninja (Signed) · Date: 03/11/07 - 02:14 am · For: Close Yet So Far
Oh that was good, I like the last 4 paragraphs, Sakura made a good point. I'm starting to ease up a bit on her....but I still hate her.
Author's Response: Hopefully my story will help change your mind about that. Thanks for the review!