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Name: i_lurve_pocky (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 - 12:58 am · For: Love
Totally love it.
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Name: akinohanun (Anonymous) · Date: 31/12/07 - 04:33 pm · For: Past
hey this is a really good story and i can't wait for you to update next and see what happens


Name: KitsuneGirl (Anonymous) · Date: 29/12/07 - 01:26 pm · For: Love
Congratulations- you're the only Yaoi fic on my bookmarks list! I really am enjoying this. Normally I don't ready Yaoi but for some reason this looked really good, and my suspicions have proved true. I've read since Chapter 1, and it keeps getting better and better- keep up the good work!


Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 27/12/07 - 10:21 pm · For: Prologue: Time
I love this story so much, I cant wait for the next update! is there a chane of another update before breakish times are over?


Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 27/12/07 - 03:02 pm · For: Love
I think I almost died when I seen that you updated! The whole time when I was waiting for it to load (and I am cursing the computer I'm using right now) I held my breath and when I started to read I still held it in! and then my roommate told me to breath and that my face was red and slapped my back rather hard....-__-....but I loved this chapter! and when I was reading the part where Naruto died I had tears in my eyes that were threatening to pour out! It was definitely heart wrenching! I can't believe that was how he died! and im also glad that you didn't sugar coat his death either! I think most people would have made him 'die a noble death' and not have him cry or scream or anything! but that was just perfect! screams and everything! I can so picture him dying like that! a perfect painting of death and emotions! beautiful! and I absolutely cannot wait to read all about their past! and how Naruto will react! and I also hope that you keep your promise of updating asap! *ahem* well this chappy was written wonderfully and I hope to read more of BSL soon! loves it to death! ~lemon


Name: chaz (Anonymous) · Date: 25/12/07 - 01:05 pm · For: Feelings
noooo god wen iz the nxt 1 on here i hve 2 find out wot hapends i just hve 2


Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 11:24 pm · For: Feelings
I didn't think much of vamp fics before, but its interesting in that whole, new world thing....like Harry Potter xD
*adds to favs* I hope you update soon.


Name: emz_rose (Anonymous) · Date: 23/12/07 - 05:41 pm · For: Feelings
So many cliff-hangers! I really want to know more about Kakashi and Iruka's relationship, did the pervert 'sire' (as you put it) Iruka with hopes of sex that never actually came. Will they get together? And what was Sasuke's big betrayal? The whole timing thing gets annoying, like when vampires do die and then get reborn sometimes without contact with their past lover. So did Sasuke and Naruto 'bond' or 'blood' in a past life? And why can't naruto remember his past but Sasuke can? All through this there's still the question of who exactly bit Naruto in this lifetime. Gosh, so many questions! I hope there's a happy ending for all the couples in this fic! And Sakura rocks, usually I'm not a huge fan but in this one it's like "wow- you go chick!"
There's your review. Nice and long so Merry Christmas!

Author's Response: I do plan on going further into Kakashi and Iruka's relationship... I am starting to really like that pairing. But you will have to wait and see what will happen with them. rnrnThe 'big' betrayal will be coming up in two chapters time... so you won't have to wait long... you might be able to guess it though... there are hints in the chapters. rnrnYeah it is rather annoying... not being able to see the one you love even though you know they are alive somewhere...rnrnOh and Sasuke and Naruto never bonded... reason being Naruto was a human and humans are unable to bond with vampires... even though Sasuke did feed from him. rnrnNaruto can't remember because he wasn't a vampire at the time... but I will go into this in more detail and explain why he is starting to remember now. rnrnAnd who bit Naruto??? Not going to say. LOL. That will be the last question that will be answered though. rnrnAnd don't worry about all the questions... its my fault for not being clear about them in the fic. Oh and I ain't promising a happy ending... I can end it two ways and I am unsure which I will choose... happy or sad. ^_^rnrnYes I like Sakura in this fic too... I am a Sakura fan so I like to make her character fun... makes me sad when people bash her in fics and turn her into a bitch when it really isn't her character. rnrnThanks for the review, Merry Christmas.rnrn-Akiru-


Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 05:37 pm · For: Feelings
haha i love this chapter! and im glad that Naruto is starting to remember the life he had with Sasuke! maybe he can fall in love with him again! there's always hope right? and im also glad that u updated again! this has got to be my number one favorite fic right now! the writing style is divine! and the little scenes between Iruka and Kakashi always have me giggling ^-^ but im kinda confused at what Sasuke said about Kakashi siring Iruka before the laws weer put in place...do you think you could clear that up for me? oh and the part where Sasuke chocked on his food...i dont know why but i laughed really hard at that part...maybe the sugar? but anyways i find your fic so adorable and intriguing! hope to read more soon! im dying to know about their past! loves it! ~lemon

Author's Response: Wow you know how to boost my ego. LOL. rnrnOh and to answer your question, Sasuke meant that Kakashi bit ((sire, made into a vampire)) Iruka and turned him before the rule against changing humans was put in place... that was a few hundred years ago. rnrnThanks again for reading.rnrn-Akiru-


Name: Sushix (Anonymous) · Date: 19/12/07 - 02:57 pm · For: Family
plz update...great story by the way


Name: Sushix (Anonymous) · Date: 16/12/07 - 10:58 pm · For: Prologue: Time
Wow, I only read the first part, and it already is good as hell! This could be a book! 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 OUT OF 10!!


Name: SasunaruxFan (Anonymous) · Date: 12/12/07 - 06:10 pm · For: Family
I really like the ending:]. Good job! Update soon!


Name: OmgVikiRawr (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 - 11:17 am · For: Family
OMG
CONTINUE
CONTINUE NOW!!
unless you want to suffer a alow and painful death...

:D


Name: MikoKriszty (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 - 09:34 am · For: Family
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UNEXPECTED!!!!!!!!!
ME WANT UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! ME WILLING TO BETA UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH I need more!! I mean, what evil cliffhanger was that?? I kinda felt sorry for Sasuke, when he said Naruto's name, but imagining the whole scene (with Naruto feeling comfort and familiarity) it just seemed right... I'm sure naruto will be confused after this, avoiding sasuke and such, but then he should realise he has some strong feelings for the other boy...
OMG UPDATEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! And I would gladly beta the next chapter (If you want, I could find some time to beta this one around the end of December ;-))
Gah this fic is soooooooo cool ^.^ Have I mentioned UPDATEEEE!!!!!!!!!!


Name: MikoKriszty (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 - 09:12 am · For: Temptation
SUCKY LEMON?? God, it was awesome... My first time reading Naruto pleasuring himself for Sasuke's sake. HOTTTTTTTTT
Then, the scene in the kitchen... I was laughing so hard... I mean, you really DO like to punish Sasuke XD
Kiba knows nothing... Of course Naruto's gay!! LOOL But he was unexpectedly smart with noticing the signs and looking out for Naruto. Hope she can get together with Hinata. ^.^


Name: MikoKriszty (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 - 08:41 am · For: Monster
I find it weird that you call blood sweet - I hear it's supposed to be salty.
Closer friends!! And then something more!!! YIPPIE!!


Name: MikoKriszty (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 - 08:22 am · For: Broken
Sasuke has problems w/ keeping his mouth shut... Well, when it's about Naruto, it's just a tad bit OoC :-P
Sasuke is the damn hardest character in the whole Naruto universe to keep in character, so when you feel you didn't do too well, don't be sad about it. =)
I hope Naruto and Sasuke will make up. ^.^ (Suure they will :-P)


Name: MikoKriszty (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 - 07:54 am · For: Memories
I knew it... But what was that scene, anyway? What had Sasuke done to Naruto? Could it have Itachi involved somehow? Did Itachi bite Naruto simply because he recognised him from before? In this case, was it to torment Sasuke, Naruto, or was there something else in it?


Name: MikoKriszty (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 - 07:34 am · For: New Start
THEY KNEW EACH OTHER FROM A PREVIOUS LIFE, RIGHT??
Sasuke knew his name from somewhere, must have been from their previous lives :) What was that about? And I wander if Akatsuki will be in this, since Itachi already is... :P
Great so far!


Name: MikoKriszty (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 - 07:00 am · For: Prologue: Time
I like the Leben idea ^^


Name: OmgVikiRawr (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 - 01:18 pm · For: Prologue: Time
o wow
this is so cool
so not what i expected
love it!! keep up the good work :] (Y)

Author's Response: Thanks I am glad you like it. I aim to please. XDrnrnThanks for the review.rnrn-Akiru-


Name: tara (Anonymous) · Date: 08/12/07 - 01:04 pm · For: Family
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Yay!
Awesome!
I'm looking forward to the next update for sure!!!!
I can hardly wait for Naruto's reaction. Yayy!

Author's Response: Oh Naruto's reaction? I wonder how he will react... LOL... rnrnI will update soon. rnrnThanks for the the review.rnrn-Akiru-


Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 08/12/07 - 12:05 pm · For: Family
Really good i hope you update soon :)

Author's Response: Oh I will update ASAP.rnrnThanks for the review.rnrn-Akiru-


Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 - 09:55 am · For: Family
omg thank you so much for updating! when i seen this i just stared blankly for a few minutes but then i was like YATTA! it made me so happy to finally read another chapter! i have truely fallen in love with this story. Its really well written and the storyline makes you want to cry! but im really curious as to what happened between sasuke and naruto and how naruto died in the first place....SO i will keep checking everyday to see if you have updated on this beautiful story! thank you so much! ~lemon

Author's Response: Well I am glad I can make you happy by updating this fic... expect to see the next chapter up soon since I am out for the holidays and have nothing better to do. XDrnrnAs for what happened in the past... you will just have to wait and find out... I will say that you will start getting bits and pieces in the next chapter... and soon you will get a whole chapter dedicated to explaining everything that happened way back then.rnrnThanks so much for the review. rnrn-Akiru-


Name: Noleta (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 - 06:09 am · For: Family
Oh Sasuke just made a big mistake that is not the Uchiha way.

Anyway great stoyr please keep going.

Author's Response: Oh don't tell Sasuke... we want him to make mistakes like those. XDrnrnThanks for the review.rnrn-Akiru-


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