Reviews For Everything Needs Love
Name: vivpiv (Signed) · Date: 01/08/07 - 07:19 am · For: everything needs love
This poem is really touching and emotional.And you're right.Everything needs love.
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-- rasengan_welch : that's right...
Name: _12Lola34_ (Signed) · Date: 26/07/07 - 10:36 am · For: everything needs love
WOW, im impressed this is good!
you have like a natural talent or something ^_^
*Thumbs up*
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-- rasengan_welch : 'preciate it
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-- rasengan_welch : 'preciate it
Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 23/07/07 - 12:19 pm · For: everything needs love
That was really good. I's sweet and all nice and stuff! ^_^ Everything needs love...kind of reminds me of Naruto. Him being ignored and he just wants someone to love him and stuff. Maybe it means that you should love everything and be kind, cause if you do than you would be loved back!
Like that bug! It just wanted to be nice and say 'Hey!' and so you don't squish it, you let it move on with it's short life. Right?
Your just basically saying that everyone should be loved.
I'm not that really good at getting the point of poems or riddles. xD
The beginning made me kind of sad. I didn't get that part.
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-- rasengan_welch : you're a smart little fox aren't you? you got the meaning right! and trust me you'll get the beggining soon enough.and yes,bugs should just move on with their short life.
Name: kagekage (Signed) · Date: 23/07/07 - 02:22 am · For: everything needs love
its good and helped my bad night thanks
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-- rasengan_welch : thanks & you're welcome
Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 - 10:58 pm · For: everything needs love
Oh yeah and not every poem needs to rhyme and a couple times it seemed really forced..With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
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-- rasengan_welch : you're ending for reviews seems to be a habit doesn't it? but i never knew you were interested in poems..
Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 - 10:56 pm · For: everything needs love
The point is easily taken. Well to give some criticism, not that I am an expert at poems or anything of the sort at all, I would have to say that you started out a lot better then you ended. Maybe that's just me, but still. And of course there was the no spacing between some words and not enough capitalization or punctuation. Other than that I really loved the first couple paragraphs,the description was beautiful. The message was nice. And I over all enjoyed reading it. With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
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-- rasengan_welch : thank you violet
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 - 10:38 pm · For: everything needs love
Your point is well taken. Sadly, not a lot of people seem to understand it these days. I think there's room for improvement in your style, but then again that's only if you ask me. Everything's really up to you- if you think it's good, then it probably is. Keep up the good work.
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-- rasengan_welch : same review
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 - 10:37 pm · For: everything needs love
Your point is well taken. Sadly, not a lot of people seem to understand it these days. I think there's room for improvement in your style, but then again that's only if you ask me. Everything's really up to you- if you think it's good, then it probably is. Keep up the good work.
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-- rasengan_welch : i'm gonna fix it in the morning..