Reviews For blue meets purple
Name: puppetmanipulator (Signed) · Date: 15/06/07 - 02:57 pm · For: Chapter 1
That was crappy. R u like 8 er sumthing?.. not meant to be a flame, but not good at all. Srry. You just kinda suck.
Author's Response: look im 12 and i was trying 2 b stupid with the couple i made more seirious and much better ones you should chek em out
Name: The Cheat (Signed) · Date: 14/06/07 - 11:32 am · For: Chapter 1
This pairing is considered a crack pairing, but I like it ^_^ I won't give any constructive critism because some people already have. I give you credit for having an orignal idea. ^_^
Author's Response: amen brotha/sista crack pairings rock
Name: Challa (Signed) · Date: 14/06/07 - 08:48 am · For: Chapter 1
You, my friend, have a lot to learn about writing. I liked the idea, but you could have made it a little more in detail.
Also, putting "" when somebody says something will help the reader understand what's going on.
I guess your grammar is ok, although you didnt spell one single name with capital first letter thingy. Same with the first word in the new sentences..
However, I actually enjoyed reading it.
Don't take this review as a flame, cause it's not meant as one. Just trying to give you some advice.
I'm looking forward to read more of your stuff in the future.
/Challa
Author's Response: ok dont take this as an insult but ive heard it all before i made another story recently called what have i become it has "" and they're capatalized so... glad u enjoyed it
Name: Shikitoka Proto (Signed) · Date: 12/06/07 - 03:44 pm · For: Chapter 1
Ummmmmmm...
WTF?!?!?!?! Can't say its a bad fic.
But that is still kinda weird. Hes a freaking FISHY-man, mutant-sharky thingymaboberish.
Author's Response: look there are 2 reasons it is kisameXino a) kisame is my fav character b) there has been itachi sakura so i felt like doing the opposite kisame ino
Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 12/06/07 - 11:27 am · For: Chapter 1
...okay that was...odd. I mean Kisame and Ino?....wow...the weirdest crack couple ever. xD It's kind of funny. Your story was too quick though, did you want it to be short?x
Author's Response: yes i did want it to be short its my 1st fic so i didnt want to get to into it yet and even i gotta admit it is a weird couple glad u thought it was funny
Name: Wild_Flower (Signed) · Date: 12/06/07 - 10:57 am · For: Chapter 1
A word of advice, when someone is talking, put these "" around what they're saying. Exaple, Then she said "Who are you?". And don't push the enter key that often, you can see what happened.
Author's Response: yeah thanks for the advise this is my 1st fanfic so im not to good so i hope to get better by what you told me and did u like the story?